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    Raphael Muteki

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    Raphael Muteki

    Post by Shojiro on Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:41 pm

    (Second Character)

    ~General Information~

    Name: Raphael Muteki

    Nickname/Alias: Raphael the Invincible (This is mainly a formality)

    Weight: 169 lb (about 200 lbs with armor on)

    Height: 6'3"

    Age: 20

    Gender: Male

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    Clothing: Under his armor, generally wears a fancy man-blouse, and a pair of blue slacks. His armor consists of a complete torso and arm amor, while have long leg armor. The only normal clothing visible would be the upper part of his slacks (upper legs and groin) and a bit of his blouse untucked from the armor.

    Additional Outfits: He could be not wearing his armor!

    Personality: He is respectful and elegant in his behavior. From a young age he was taught the importance of good sportsmanship and etiquette. Of course he is not always this way, during combat, he fights using his abilities to their best. He quite enjoys fighting really. He never goes back on his word, however, sometimes he would let someone live just because he enjoyed fighting them. It is his firm belief that sometimes, a great fight is the greatest reward. He is quite different from most ninjas, but not to be underestimated.

    He is a skilled fencer, and he is also extremely dangerous with generally any weapon he ends up grabbing. He respects all of his opponents, and shows it by never holding back. EVER.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Norimune (Disowned the Name)

    Kekei Genkai: Seion

    Clan Symbol: A wolf clenching a katana in its jaws

    Clan History: Though the origin of the Norimune clan is shrouded in the depths of history, both it's recent history and it's founding are known to all of those who know the history of the Norimune Clan. A man known as Kyato Norimune was the founding member of the clan, born with an incredible power in which he couldn't believe existed, however he saw the potential in the kekkei genkai that had been granted to him. Kyato was able to form a foreign metallic ore from his body into his bloodstream so that he could call upon it at any time. He found that he could control the metal in any which way he wanted to, however there were many mysteries he did not know about it. He created the Norimune Clan for the few who were like him and founded the beliefs of the clan, that to forge a weapon, one must first know the weapon and then know how to use that weapon. You see, Kyato created a new way to create weapons, by taking the foreign metal in his blood and forging it with his chakra. He created many treasured weapons and expanded the clan's influence with the Shodai Mizukage, establishing a base within Kirigakure.

    Under Kyato's leadership, the Clan flourished, and it did so for many more years, however a hundred years after Kyato's reign, things started to change for the worst when the clan's young prodigy Makoto Norimune turned to the side of Otogakure no Sato. She was ordered to slay both Sazaku's father Takashi and himself, and this split the clan in two, one faction siding with Otogakure and one with Kirigakure. The ensuing slaughter by Matoko cause the clan to further shatter, members eventually spreading to all of the great shinobi villages.

    Ability Summary:

    Seion (Serene) The mysterious metal ore that is exclusive to the norimune clan, it is unknown exactly how or why it came to be. The first of the true Norimune, Kyato Norimune named it Seion due to its faint blue colored hue. Its fully capabilities are unknown, but are actively researched and tested by members of the clan. What they do know however is that it naturally absorbs chraka, leading in part to its natural strength and durability, which is slightly greater then that of titanium. It is due to this extremely non magnetic metal that Norimune made weapons are considered to be among the greatest in the world, and the foundation of the Clan's strength.

    Bloodline Limits
    Name: Seion Detection
    Description: An ability common to all Norimune, this allows them to detect all the Seion in a 100 metre area around them. This includes other Norimune, due to the metal being part of their blood and body.

    Name: Kaneseitan Metallic Birth
    Description: The most basic skill of the Norimune bloodline/family, this allows them to gather the Seion in their bodies, before drawing it out of them and using it to create and form the weaponry that the clan is famous for. It is said that nobody in the clan can be considered an adult until they have mastered this ability, and created a weapon that passes the clan's leader's inspection. The size of weapons that can be created depends on the user's rank. The chraka cost of creating the weapon, is equal to the weapons rank, ie making a Kunai would cost as much chraka as an E ranked Weapon, while a Naginata would cost as much as an B ranked jutsu. They cannot create weapons with chraka or elemental effects with this limit, and just because they can make a weapon, doesn't mean they can wield it unless they meet the requirements. Creating a favored weapon reduces the cost by a single rank.

    E: Kunai Sized
    D: Dagger Sized
    C: Wakizashi Sized
    B: Katana Sized
    A: Spear Sized
    S: No Size restraints

    Name: Tensa Seisei Heavenly Variation of Creation
    Description: A more advanced form of training in the bloodline, this allows the Norimune to take advantage of the Chraka absorbing and storage abilities of Seion to create weaponry that harness chraka to create special or elemental effects. Creating an weapon that has an affect based on the element they have increases the chraka cost by a single rank. Creating a weapon that has an effect based on other types of chraka, or an element that they don't have, increases the chraka cost by two ranks.

    Name: Metal Imbuement
    Description: One of the greatest features of Seion is its adaptability, which can prove an advantage in many different situations. While most people focus on the metal's hardness, and the way that it can have chraka channeled through it, fewer people realize that there is more to the Norimune Clan's weaponry then just that. Through a special advanced technique, the Norimune can have the Seion used to create the metal 'mimic' the effects of other kinds of metal, granting an additional ability from below. It can only mimic a single ability, and increases the chraka cost of creating the weapon by one Rank.

    Silver: Grants 20% extra damage against the supernatural (Demons and the like)
    Tainted : Grants 20% extra damage against the non supernatural (Humans...dogs)
    Unobatanium : Nullifies Defensive jutsu and effects that are equal to or less than the rank of the user
    Mithril: Makes the Weapon 20% lighter, so it can be swung quicker. In addition, the blade will always be as shiny and reflective as a mirror.
    Denadorite: Makes the weapon immune to jutsu and effects that break weaponry.
    Ithildin: Makes the weapon unable to be seen by any chraka based means. Meaning it can only be seen by the normal unaugmented human eye.


    Name: Eye for Talent
    Description: The Norimune's life is resolved around weapons, they make, use, and view weapons as art and war. With all this weapon use in the family, and them being a weapon in essence, the Norimune have gained the ability view a weapon's skills and extra talents (if any) as a piece of art and for war purposes. They can determine exactly how a weapon is used and basic secondary functions by a minor glance.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Jounin

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Kirigakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Kenjutsu
    • Sub: Weaponry

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Earth
    • Main: Fire
    • Sub: Metal

    Special Characteristics: He is incredibly respectful. Even though he has his bloodline, he tends to wield but one, his sword. He is incredibly gifted at fencing, and extremely well-trained at it as well.

    ~Jutsu~

    Bloodline:
    Name: Meimei Eda (Invisible Hand)
    Rank: C
    Element: Metal
    Description: Using their chraka and their connection to their blood, the Norimune can move a single thing that they have created with out touching it, as if it is grasped by an unseen arm. This can only be done to a single weapon at a time, and cannot move more then 1 foot away from them.

    Name: Sho Meimei Eda (Many Invisible hands)
    Rank: A
    Element: Metal
    Description: A more advanced version of the Meidemi Eda jutsu, this allows them to move multiple weapons around without touching them, but only if its a weapon that they had created themselves. These weapons cannot move more then 3 feet away from the user, and the number of weapons that can be controlled depends on rank. All of them last for about 5 posts.

    C: 4
    B: 6
    A: 8
    S: 10

    Name: Nexus
    Rank: B
    Element: Metal
    Description: Sending chraka down the connection to their bloodline, the user can 'call' weapons that they have created back to themselves making them appear at their feet, allowing them to retrieve them from where ever that they might have ended up. This can only be used on up to 3 weapons at a time, and they can be called from no further then 100 feet away. This jutsu can also be used to 'pull' a single weapon back to them, in which case it flies towards them instead of merely appearing at their feet. This can pose a threat to the user however, and is less commonly used because of it.

    Name: Seki no Maki (Gates of Hell)
    Rank: A
    Element: Metal
    Description: The more advanced form of Nexus, this allows the user to call up to 10 weapons back to them, or to 'pull' up to 4. Due to the amount of concentration required however, the user can only pull weapons from 50 feet away, without risking distraction (which could lead to impalement)

    Name: Ten Kouken (Heavenly Guardian)
    Rank: S
    Element: Metal
    Description: Perhaps the most advanced Norimune jutsu that isn't restricted to the heads of the families, this builds upon the foundations of weapon control that were established and taught to them by Seki no Makai and Sho Meimei Eda. Calling all weapons that they have created within fifty metres of themselves to their location, the weapons then proceed to hover around the user, forming a barrier to help prevent injury. Once this step is complete, the user can then control the weapons with hand movements, increasing the speed and reaction time in comparison to normal hand usage (since the user can just gesture, rather then swing). While using this jutsu, they cannot use any other, due to their hands being busy. Lasts for 3 posts. Large chakra drain as well.

    Name: Creation
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Metal
    Description: A more frivolous use of the clans talents, this allows the user to make non weapon based objects using the metal in their blood, such as toys, mirrors nuts and bolts and the like.

    Name: Blood Conversion
    Rank: A
    Element: Metal
    Description: One of the darkest techniques known to the clan, this allows them to convert blood that contains Seion, fully and directly into Seion, and is usually used as an emergency measure when the user's own Seion Supplies are running low. When doing this to create something, it costs this amount of jutsu AND the normal amount of chraka used to create what ever they are. Naturally this jutsu can only be used when they are bleeding or similar.

    Kenjutsu:

    Name: Jutte Cutter
    Rank: B
    Element: None
    Description: The user will swing their blade with just a bit of chakra forming a spike to branch from the blade as it is swung. This spike can slice the enemy, though it is small in size, it hurts like a normal blade.

    Name: Double Fang
    Rank: A
    Element: None
    Description: A basic thrusting combo maneuver gone right. The user lunges forward, channeling chakra into their arm, and as they thrust forward, it causes a brief speed burst, which allows them to stab the enemy twice at near invisible speeds.

    Name: Heliotrope
    Rank: A
    Element: None
    Description: He will focus a large amount of chakra into his feet for this maneuver. Using his special sword, he will use chakra to force it to give him a short burst of speed. He will then proceed to run around the opponent slicing at them, and his speed with the focused chakra will cause them both to rise to a height of about 5 meters in the air. From there, he will smack the enemy towards the ground.

    Name: Calamity Drive
    Rank: S
    Element: None
    Description: Similar to Heliotrope, this will force a burst of speed unlike anything that the average ninja has seen before. Using the speed, Raphael will kick the enemy upwards like a taijutsu. Then focusing chakra into his feet, he will jut at the enemy from his position on the ground, and slice through them quickly, and forcing them into the air even higher. Then following by using the chakra in his feet to kick off the air and slash them again sending them higher. This is repeated about 6 times before he smashes the enemy into the ground, from 100 feet in the air.

    This causes almost all of his chakra to deplete, and it is also dangerous, because on the 100 foot drop to land. It will cause him some damage as well just because of the fall. This is a last resort.

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:

    Birth/Childhood Arc:
    He was born into his clan, at a very highly prestigious position. He was son of the Clan leader. Of course this could only mean years of nothing but learning about happy fancy stuff so he wouldn't embarrass guests of high prestige. He didn't really complain as he knew no other life other than "respect your superiors" and "the napkin goes on your lap". Among his favorite gentleman practices however, was fencing. He loved fencing. It was what made his life exciting, never knowing where the next strike would land, acting on pure instinct and working his reflexes. He was also very proficient at it as well.

    Through all of this nobleman stuff, he learned two things. How to speak with a noble accent when around average people he doesn't even know, and how to fence.

    Academy Arc:
    Now then, of course he went to the Ninja Academy. He wasn't well liked, simply because of his 'high standards'. As son of the clan leader he was considered a Marquee of sorts, a representative of his clan. The downside was, he didn't care for all the ninja stuff. His mind was set on becoming one of the greatest swordsmen alive. Then, there was always the discovering of his Kekkei Genkai. This was always a fun experience, because he had never learned that his clan and family could actually do what he can.

    He thought he was a freak the first time he expelled Seion from his sweat glands on his arm. He thought it was unnatural. As unnatural as it seemed, it wasn't for him. Eventually learning to use this to his advantage he went back to his studies. He enjoyed the concept of chakra and stuff like that, but having to work for peasants and track down lowlifes...seemed beneath him. So before graduation he dropped out. Taking his chakra with him.

    Dropout Arc:
    His dropping out of Ninja Academy, infuriated his father. It soon became a fact that the only member of his family that would talk to him was his mother. He knew he had probably done something wrong right around that time. Because of this he knew he had to do something, even more honorable than becoming a ninja. He had to become the best at what he knew best. Fencing was the only way out of his dishonorable situation. With this he learned etiquette to the highest extend and placed it into his everyday life, talking like a noble on every occasion, until it was his natural voice.

    While he did this, he rigorously practiced fencing, knowing exactly what to do whenever he did it. He became one with the rapier. Soon though, something happened, and it warped his entire concept of reality.

    Serene Demon Arc:
    He was about 14 at this point in time. He walking around for fresh air, when he happed upon a sword. Upon picking it up to examine it, he felt as if his whole body became...lighter. Surprised, he simply had to show it to his father. His father looked at the weapon. And applauded the craftsmanship of it. Suddenly Raphael's existence was all about smithing weapons. Raphael took this challenge and endured this horrid lifestyle for another year, learning everything there was to learn about his clan and making weapons. His power and chakra levels increased five-fold that year, due to his training of his bloodline techniques in making weapons, controlling weapons, using them to fight with. He even sold them at times for money.

    However he eventually couldn't stand it any longer. His father would always nag him about how well he did with the sword he showed him. It was horrible. One day, his father was looking over Raphael's greatest work that he actually made. After denying that it was any good, Raphael flipped out in a demon-like rage and murdered his father. Assassinating him.

    Because of the metal he used to do it, he was called the Serene Demon.

    Redemption Arc:
    After this, he knew he had to pay for the sin he committed against his family. However he was denied this, being called a demon. Raphael knew that he was never going to sway their thoughts, because the murder was so random and not-planned-out, that he was not able to come up with a proper alibi. So he disowned his family and left. He was considered a missing ninja for several years, though he was never really a ninja in the first place.

    He soon returned, wearing shining armor like a true nobleman. He fought his way to the Mizukage and let the man know that he only killed the guards because they were becoming demons and attacking an innocent passerby. Unable to argue that he had done anything to provoke them, the Mizukage at the time accepted him back into the village as a citizen.

    "I Am But a Swordsman" Arc:
    He became famous throughout Mizugakure. His life was redeemed as worth something. He was able to relax a while and live like a normal person. He was given the title "Raphael the Invincible" because of his feat to defeat half of Mizugakure's guard without enough effort to make him too tired to face the Mizukage, who would've killed him on the spot if he were any other Mizukage. As it turned out, at the time, the Mizukage was actually an old friend of his. Raphael was glad that he didn't have to fight the kage, as he was sure that he would have been in trouble there in any other circumstance.

    However, this title given to him was too high and might for his taste. When he is addressed as 'Raphael the Invincible', he merely chuckles and says, "I Am But a Swordsman."

    Roleplay Sample:

    Spoiler:
    Kody awoke early the next day, he looked up a bit and discovered that he was about to be late. His muscles ached, but he had to move now. He shot up, pain spiking through his body with each step. He ran as fast as he could, making it to the front of the Restaurant, and he walked inside. It was closed today, but the doors were open, and the Head Chef was waiting. "Good, you barely made it, but at least you made it," he said.

    Kody was tired, he was aching all around and worst of all he had to train... and the weights made it worse. "Alright old man, what do I need to do to get better now?" he asked in a raspy tone, signalling badly hidden pain. He looked around and knew that he was probably about ready to have leg-lifts or something as an exercise.

    The head chef smiled and said, "Even in agony you're willing to better yourself to fulfill a promise, eh? Good!" The old man turned around and reached inside the kitchen door. "Here, take this, a healing chakra pill of my own recipe, it'll fix you up better than ever!"

    Kody took the spherical object and looked at it a little, he was confused and didn't know how a single pill would rid his pain. He smelled it, it smelled like a normal pill. He shrugged and took it, crunching down on it. His eye shot wide open once more, amazement filled his expression. That was the most delicious pill he'd ever eaten. After a few moments his bones and muscles felt fine, actually...they felt great!

    "Wow! That was some pill, how'd you... never mind. I'm ready to get some more practice!" he said happily. He stretched out his legs and kicked the air. It felt like a normal leg without the weight on it. He walked outside with the head chef. He was made to do leg-lifts and made to practice a few basic kicks to perfection though none that had a name, just...kicks. Either way he was feeling great, and wasn't even tired after a few hours of vigorous training.

    ~~~~~~~~~

    "Now then young one, your next exercise is a spar. You must not take a single hit from me, and you must land one hit on me to end it," the old man said. Kody looked back at him, still exercising though it wasn't required, and said, "I could take on all of the Kage's feeling like this! I'll land that kick before you can even move."

    Suddenly, the old man's fingers looked to be counting down. Kody stopped and looked at the man. 3...2...1... Suddenly Kody felt the same agony as before he took the pill. He let out a yelp and got down to massage his legs.

    "Now there's the real challenge, do it, while under massive pressure," the Head Chef said, laughing heartily. Kody rubbed his legs a little more and said, "Geez, and I though this was going to be easy..."

    The Head Chef shouted, "Get ready!" Kody looked down and stood up the best he could.

    ~~~~~~~~

    The old man smirked and shot forward, sending a bone shattering kick towards Kody. Kody sidestepped, trying to use as little motion as possibly while he had his hands in his pockets, massaging his upped legs. He was waiting for the right moment to attack. The Head Chef whipped a leg around which Kody ducked under and bounced back from the quickly following stabbing kick.

    Kody was using his mind over attacking like usual. He dodged a quickly executed combo of kicking fury, using small movements to make sure he wouldn't waste the energy he was saving. Suddenly the Head Chef let loose an advanced kick attack. He stood on his hands and spun around rapidly. Kody saw the opening and charged forward. He skidded under the spinning flurry and let loose a sweeping kick to the old man's torso while he couldn't move his legs to block. It knocked the man off balance and he fell over. It probably hurt Kody more than it hurt the old man too. Kody fell to a knee and massaged his legs furiously. "Match over, old man now I need a break," he said

    The Head Chef lay there, and laughed loudly. "Not bad kid! You actually landed a kick without taking a kick from me while injured at you were. It was weak, but at least you got skill and determination!" he shouted loudly, seeming to shake the air, making passersby lose balance.

    Kody got up and move over to sit on a bench, rubbing his aching leg muscles. He looked over to the old man who was rolling around and laughing, rambling on about knowing Kody had it in him and stuff like that.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~

    A few minutes later the Head Chef wiped away the last tear from his tremendous laughter. "Good job Kody, you get the rest of the day off for excellence in the spar," he said more calmly probably out of loud fuel or whatever old men used to laugh so hard. Kody nodded gratefully unable to talk due to sheer pain.

    Instead of walking home like normal, he went to the hospital to get his muscles treated for whatever was to come later. Hopefully the style he learned from this whole experience was worth it. He spent all the money he earned that day, getting medical treatments and massages for his legs until they were like normal, which was even harder because of Kody's loyalty, and he refused to take off the leg weights.


    Weapon

    Spoiler:
    Name: Heliotrope Sword

    Rank: A-S

    Owner: Raphael Muteki

    Appearance:

    Length: 5 Feet long blade, 1 foot long handle.

    Width: 1.5 Inches

    Material: Extremely Rare Ore called Heliotrope.

    Weight: 2 lbs

    Abilities: The blade is made of Heliotrope. This metal reacts with blood and chakra. When this cuts an enemy and draws blood, the blade will use the life energy in the blood and transform it into a strange energy. This energy can be tapped into with its activation phrase.

    When this energy is tapped into, it causes energy to leak into its wielder and boost their reflexes and perception, as well as their movement and attack speed by a certain amount. The bonuses can stack with each time the blade draws blood, and duration of the bonus depends on rank...though it resets each time, during activation that it manages to cut the enemy again.

    Activation Phrase: "May the True Path Shine Forth in Justice! Heliotrope Blade"

    As this is said, an aura will burst from him. This will cause a bunch of fire sphere-like aura spritz to revolve around him. This is where the blade will start to activate the bonuses.

    A: +40% to Reflexes and Perception, +45% to Movement and Attack Speed (Each time blood is drawn) Duration: 12 Posts
    S: +50% to Reflexes and Perception, +60% to Movement and Attack Speed (Each time blood is drawn) Duration: 15 Posts
    (Note: This Bonus does not work if he cuts himself accidentally or on purpose {if ever})

    Also: This is customized with a Mithril metal imbuement. It is 20% lighter than its given weight.

    Info: This was the sword that Raphael found out in the Mist Village that one day. Because of this sword, he was forced to undergo life as a blacksmith and craftsman. Either way this blade has assisted him greatly throughout his endeavors throughout the Serene Demon Arc of his life and beyond. This is his main sword. This is used as for fencing.


    Last edited by Shojiro on Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:39 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    Re: Raphael Muteki

    Post by Echo on Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:00 pm

    I'll start with these. Your KKG's last ability needs to be removed or edited. You may be able to know how the weapon is used, but simply looking at it and knowing everything about ti is metagame. (Name: Eye for Talent )

    With that kind of kekkei genkai, you need weaponry as a skill specialty.

    And for this, you need a a real classification.


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    Re: Raphael Muteki

    Post by Shojiro on Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:10 pm

    Amended.


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    Re: Raphael Muteki

    Post by Echo on Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:34 pm

    Sho Meimei Eda (Many Invisible hands)

    there is no SS rank. And you need to add how long that stays active. The higher ranks of that must drain a lot of chakra since theres so many, and especially since you don't have the wind element.

    Nexus

    B ranked, especially with 100ft

    Ten Kouken (Heavenly Guardian)

    Same thing. How long does it last, and this would be incredibly chakra draining, especially since you don't have the wind element.

    Double Fang

    Way to fast for a C rank.


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    Re: Raphael Muteki

    Post by Shojiro on Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:40 pm

    Motion Passed.


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    Post by Echo on Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:43 pm

    Name: Eye for Talent

    Still a problem..seeing a weapons abilities is something no one can do unless the person were to show the abilities.



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    Re: Raphael Muteki

    Post by Shojiro on Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:02 pm

    I meant it like basic secondary functions. Like if he can clearly see a trigger, he can guess it shoots a projectile of some sort. He cannot guess boosts or anything.


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    Re: Raphael Muteki

    Post by Echo on Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:06 pm

    Oh ok..

    Approved. Create the account and post here with it and I'll give you your headband, and other accessories.


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    Post by Raphael Muteki on Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:10 pm

    Done and Done.

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