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    Post by Satoru Uchiha Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:04 pm

    Name: Satoru Uchiha
    Nickname/Alias:The Distorted Devil
    Weight:187 lbs
    Height:177 cm
    Age:26
    Gender:Male
    Appearance:In avy
    Clothing: Akatsuki robe with Leaf village headband tied around his throat tight enough to make it seem like it is part of his skin.
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    Personality:Well, let's see. A lot of Satoru's personality is based around the fact that he doesn't really have one. He was trained to be emotionless - apparently from a young enough age that he can't even recall how to show emotions properly. It's as though a certain instinct most humans develop has been completely removed from him. He's horribly socially inept, and is only just now trying to learn how to become friends with others. Most of his knowledge comes from books and the poor explanations of his team mates. His lack of emotions also makes it difficult to read others, as even the concept of some emotions is hard for him to understand. He may attempt to give someone he's considering becoming friends with a nickname, but he's at a loss as to how to go about picking one without insulting them.He stills tends to give rather fake smiles when trying to be friendly, but those are being replaced more often with his awkward real smile. (It's actually very similar, as he closes his eyes for both, but his real one has genuine emotion behind it.) He's not exactly outgoing, better at being led into situations that require interaction with others than seeking it out himself.

    ~Clan Information~
    Clan Name:Uchiha
    Kekei Genkai:Sharingan
    Clan Symbol:
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    - Fan blowing a flame
    Clan History:Founding
    The Uchiha clan before the founding of Konoha.The Uchiha clan descended from the elder of the two sons entrusted by the Sage of the Six Paths with his power and will. When it came time for the Sage to chose a successor, he questioned the two on what course of action they would follow to bring order to the world. The elder believed that might was the way to bring peace, while the younger believed love was the way. The Sage favored the ideal of the younger brother, and therefore designated the younger as his successor, causing the elder to be filled with jealousy and hatefulness. From the younger boy descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha.
    Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the second being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju.
    Konohagakure
    The Uchiha clan after the founding of Konoha.
    Hashirama Senju, the leader of the Senju clan, grew tired of the endless fighting, and approached the Uchiha clan with a peace treaty. Madara feared that an alliance would lead the Uchiha to ruin, but his clan disagreed, and he was forced to accept. The two clans came together to form Konoha, with Hashirama being selected as Hokage. Madara believed that this was proof that the Uchiha would be made subservient to the Senju, but his clan saw this only as his attempt to rekindle the flames of war. They turned their backs on him, and he defected. Following Madara's betrayal, the Second Hokage gave the Uchiha control of the Konoha Military Police Force as a sign of trust. According to Madara, this was really just a way of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs. Over the years, some Uchiha, such as Setsuna, have figured out this motive's true meaning, and tried to rebel against the village as Madara did, but they find that it was too little, too late to make a difference, as the Senju had already completely suppressed the Uchiha.Massacre Main article: Uchiha Clan Massacre The end of the Uchiha clan.Decades later, after the Nine-Tails' Attack on Konoha, Konoha began to suspect that an Uchiha was behind the attack. The Uchiha were relocated to a corner of the village so that they could be more easily monitored. The Uchiha interpreted this as confirmation of what Madara had warned them of years earlier, and began to plan overthrowing the village. One Uchiha, Itachi, disagreed with the coup d'état, and informed Konoha's leadership of what the Uchiha were up to. The Third Hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi, tried to negotiate for a more peaceful approach. This failed, and to prevent an uprising that would create another war, Itachi was ordered to wipe out the Uchiha. Itachi spared only one Uchiha: his younger brother, Sasuke. Sasuke would spend the next few years trying to avenge their family by killing Itachi, something Itachi had planned for from the very beginning. Once accomplishing this goal, Sasuke learned that Madara was also still alive. Madara told Sasuke about the Uchiha's history and why Itachi had wiped out the Uchiha, prompting Sasuke, with Madara's help, to resolve to destroy Konoha.

    Ability Summary: The Uchiha were infamous for their highly powerful chakra, exceptionally strong techniques, and natural aptitude for anything combat-related. The clan possessed a proficiency in fire jutsu, having created several and using them more skillfully than any other. Their signature jutsu was the Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique. Clan members were not recognized as adults by the rest of the clan until they could successfully use this jutsu. The Uchiha were also highly known for their mastery of ninja tools. They themselves invented many shuriken techniques which required the use of thin metal wires, one example being the Windmill Triple Blades technique.
    The Uchiha clan were most feared for their powerful Sharingan, a kekkei genkai which gives them the ability to see the "colors" of chakra, allowing them to analyze and copy their opponent's skills, along with a number of other abilities. Only a select few members of the Uchiha clan manifested the Sharingan. Due to their natural affinity for battle, and their proficiency with genjutsu, many ninjas considered it more tactically favorable to flee rather than face an Uchiha shinobi in one-on-one combat. Among the techniques granted by the Sharingan, the Izanagi is deemed to be forbidden, due to it rendering the user blind in exchange for temporarily turning their personal reality into an illusion. Though the clan was feared for their Sharingan, the eyes have also been transplanted into various characters outside the clan.
    Madara discovered that, by the death of someone close to you, the Sharingan could be taken to its next level: the Mangekyō Sharingan. It gave the user great power, but slowly deteriorated their eyesight. Only by taking the eyes of a sibling could one's vision be restored. Itachi indicated that the intricacies of the Mangekyō Sharingan were only discovered after years of trial and error, implying that many Uchiha throughout history had made the attempt to gain the Mangekyō Sharingan.

    ~Rank/Village Information~
    Classification:Akatsuki member
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    ~Skill Information~
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    • Main: Ninjutsu
    • Sub:Taijutsu



    Elemental Affinity:






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    Post by Echo Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:09 pm

    You need a classification, letter rank, and village. Also, you have no appearance in your avatar
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    Post by Satoru Uchiha Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:12 pm

    Fixed
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    Post by Echo Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:22 pm

    No gravity element, remove that.
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    Post by Michishige Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:23 pm

    no metal without a KKG, so either take it out or change from uchiha to a metal KKG, and no gravity at all

    no chidori jutsu, take them all out

    you don't have fire as your affinity

    remove Taihoudan since you don't have the water element

    Una~Tsu ookami - explain better, and be careful, i'm not going to let you make your own rasengan/chidori

    and so you know, no mangekyou sharingan allowed yet, not until we have some thing ironed out about it
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    Post by Michishige Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:51 pm

    replace your water element with fire since you have fire jutsu and no water ones.

    remover metal and magnatisim from your element list

    and explain exactly what Una~Tsu ookami does to the opponent, you're just saiyng fire is swirling around your hand

    and for some reason you removed your rank and former village
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    Post by Michishige Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:08 am

    sorry, but you'll have to remove Una~Tsu ookami
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    Post by Satoru Uchiha Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:28 am

  • Main:Lightning
    Main:Earth
  • Sub: -


    Special Characteristics:

    Even though he is a uchiha, satoru was born only knowing mainly lightning and earth release jutsu's. he has a small fraction of the fire jutsu.

    ~Jutsu~
    Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
    Rank: E
    Element: Ninjutsu :: none
    Description:
    This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach using the Body Flicker Technique, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.


    Name: Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
    Rank: E
    Element: Ninjutsu :: none
    Description:
    This jutsu allows the user to transform either themselves or another object into the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konohagakure Ninja Academy, and most shinobi know this jutsu.


    Name: Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique]
    Rank: D
    Element: Ninjutsu :: none
    Description:
    This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and their intended destination.


    Name: Kage Buyō [Shadow of the Dancing Leaf]
    Rank: C
    Element: Taijutsu :: none
    Description:
    A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching their body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique begins with a swift upper kick that will launch their target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful jutsu. That said, it also has a rather high degree of difficulty.


    Name: Raiton: Gian [Lightning Release: False Darkness]
    Rank: B
    Element: Ninjutsu :: Lightning
    Description:
    The user kneads chakra in their throat and after the proper hand seals, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock, meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This makes it hard to evade.

    Name: Shadow clone explosion
    Rank: A
    Element: -
    Description:Bunshin Bakuha • a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.

    Name: Inescapible Hell
    Rank: A
    Element: Doton
    Description:Doton • Arijigoku • a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seal, Fudou or Satoru will create a conical crater below his opponent. This twisting, sinking pit will pull the target below ground to imprison and suffocate them.

    Name: Rising Spears
    Rank:B
    Element:
    Doton
    Description: Doton • Doryuusou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, spears of stone will raise from the ground to pierce the target. The technique can be countered by an opponent who hardens their body with a stronger Earth Element jutsu.

    [b]Name: Gliding false play
    Rank:A
    Element:Raiton
    Description: This skill is not an attack more of a false play. Satoru focuses his lightning release chakra in the soles of his feet and they quickly reject the ground having it seem like he is levitating but really he isn't. Thats all this jutsu does, but it allows satoru to glide 5 inches off of the ground.


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    Post by Michishige Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:35 am

    Approved
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    Post by Echo Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:38 am

    Unapproved for a moment. Gotta remove Katon, a main element cant be a sub element.

    You also cant start as S rank. Were only accepting up to A rank.
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    Post by Michishige Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:54 am

    since no katon, remove your meteor jutsu, can you can't have steam without fire and water elements, so don't worry about a sub element
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    Post by Satoru Uchiha Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:58 am

    Name:Raiton Nagareboshi Hakai (Meteorite Destruction)
    Rank: S
    Element: Raiton
    Description: Katon • Even though the jutsu says 'meteorite' that doesn't mean it involves doton. Actually it only requires Raiton. Satoru conjures up half of his lightning chakra in his body and all at once he dispereses it into round, blue and yellow spheres of sparking lightning that go all the way up in the air until they can't be seen. They then come back down and cause destruction because when they come back down they speed up and crush down nearly splattering electricity all over the place. The range this reachs is about 30-40 yards, when scattered.

    I changed it to this


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    Post by Echo Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:02 am

    All of your Jutsu need a rank, even the ones that don't have one in the anime. Put the rank on it that you think would best match that jutsu.

    And for meteorite destruction, a jutsu that big and that powerful would pretty much be game over for you if the enemy survived due to the chakra depletion on your body, you would have nearly none left. Also, put the range of what it destroys when it hits the ground, and put the size of the meteor.
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    Post by Satoru Uchiha Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:06 am

    Finished corrected and if there is another error, i will fix it again
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    Post by Echo Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:09 am

    I approve. Be sure to keep this in note:

    You only have room for 1 more S rank jutsu.
    You are approved with a 3 Tomoe Sharingan.
    And be sure to read the Sharingan rules under the "Rules" forum.

    Also, fill out your Shinobi ID as best as you can.

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