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    Souma Aburame

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    Souma
    Sheetagakure Jounin
    Sheetagakure Jounin

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    Age : 24

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Sheetagakure
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    Classification: Jounin

    Souma Aburame

    Post by Souma on Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:22 pm

    ~General Information~

    Name: Souma Aburame

    Nickname/Alias: Sou

    Weight: 170 lbs

    Height: 5'11''

    Age: 18

    Gender: Male

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    Clothing: Green tinted sunglasses to cover up his blind eye. Usually wear an orange t-shirt beneath a hooded coat which when zipped up covers the bottom half of the face. Blue baggy jeans and ninja sandals. He dresses more casually than ninja like.

    Additional Outfits: N/A

    Personality: Souma is a very cheerful boy, he rarely gets angry or agitated by anyone or anything. He as some deep emotions due to his past but keeps them held inside and trains hard to get stronger. Even though he seems nice and cheery he much prefers not to get involved with others, he is great at teamwork but doesn't really have any friends because he denies them. Souma has an inside voice which always tells him to do bad things, he ignores the voice but if he ever agreed to it, his personality would change immensely. Basically its almost like he has a split personality but chooses to be Kind, thoughtful, cheery and well just maybe too happy.

    Although he seems more self involved he would hesitate to risk his own life for another with more value of his, this is because Souma believes strongly in rank and status. To him the more power you have the more valuable your life is. Souma is the kind of person that you wouldn't realize was standing beside you, his presence would most likely be ignored, it's how it's been all his life.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Aburame

    Kekei Genkai: Aburame

    Clan Symbol:
    Spoiler:

    Clan History: http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Aburame_Clan

    Ability Summary:
    Spoiler:
    The clan characterized by their use of insects as weapons. The insects live in symbiosis within the body of the shinobi. At birth, members of this clan are offered to a special breed of insects called destruction bugs as a nest, residing just under their host's skin. The insects can leave and enter through various pores, apparently by eating their way through the skin. They feed on chakra as a food source, making them quite deadly. The relationship between the shinobi and the insects is mutually beneficial. The host grants the bugs shelter and allows them to feed off their chakra, their body becoming a living hive of tens of thousands of these bugs, and in return the bugs do the user's bidding, allowing the shinobi to perform ninjutsu-like techniques without the use of hand seals or chakra conversion.

    A female bug can be left on a target, which then can be tracked by smell by the male bug, or scout bugs can be sent out and return to tell the host information about the area. For this reason, Aburame clan members are experts in espionage; they can communicate with the bugs, and the bugs specialize in stealth because they make no noise or motion during combat. In addition to utilizing insects in battle, the Aburame clan also studies insects. They were rivals of the Kamizuru clan, the bee users, until they defeated them in battle. A major defining trait of the Aburame clan is that all of its known members wear dark sunglasses that hide their eyes as well as jackets that cover part of their face.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Jounin

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Sheetagakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Ninjutsu
    • Sub: Genjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Earth
    • Main: Fire
    • Sub: N/A

    Special Characteristics: Heightened senses and larger chakra pool than normal for insect residing in body to feed off. Can use bugs to get a rough sketch of his environment due to his blindness.

    ~Jutsu~
    Basically all Earth and fire jutsu to A rank, i've listed a few earth below.

    Spoiler:
    Name: Doton: Chihou no Jutsu (Earth Compass Technique)
    Rank: E
    Element: Doton
    Description: Through the use of this simple technique, the user flows their chakra into a small rock. Once done, they drop it on the ground, the chakra in the rock causing it to always gravitate toward magnetic north. Very useful for when lost and without a compass.
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    Name: Earth Cracker Technique
    Rank: D
    Element: Doton
    Description: The user stomps the ground, creating a cracked surface and a small pit beneath, useful for tripping some opponents or digging quick holes to hide traps in.
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    Name: Shuriken Technique
    Rank:D
    Element: Doton
    Description: The ability to turn basic dirt into shuriken.
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    Name: Tsuchiken (Stone Fist)
    Rank:D
    Element:Doton
    Description: The user dips his hands in thick mud, which then harden with chakra to become dry and rock hard, giving the user fists that are almost as hard as stone. Cannot use hand seals. (Note: Recommended using one hand only)
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    Name: Katou Chirikire (Flexible Dirt Strips)
    Rank:D
    Element:Doton
    Description: The ninja can create highly durable bands out of dirt. They emerge from the ground and fly in any direction guided by the ninja. The width, and density, of the dirt bands can vary depending on how much chakra is used. Katou Chirikire is more useful as a supplementary and defense technique then as an attack technique.
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    Name: Genwakudoro no Jutsu (Sticky Mud Technique)
    Rank:D
    Element:Doton
    Description: Through the use of this technique, the user scoops up a handful of mud and channels chakra into it to make it into a sticky substance. The sticky mud has the consistency of a strong glue and will hold up (or down) nearly anything depending on how much chakra is spent. The technique can be used to “melt” down solid rock into sticky mud, but this use requires more chakra.
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    Name: Doton no Jutsu ("Earth Release")
    Rank:D
    Element:Doton
    Description: Doton no Jutsu, the act of using the earth elements, allows the ninja to go into the earth and hide from his opponents. The ninja can only attack if their entire torso is above ground. (Note: Do not confuse this with "Doton Shijuu Zanshu" where its purpose is to draw your body underground and leave you immobile, while your head is visible)
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    Name: Kondaku Henkan ("Muddiness Transformation")
    Rank:D
    Element:Doton
    Description: This simple technique allows the user to quickly transform a patch of earth into mud, or a mud patch into solid earth. Note that it's more difficult to make mud in dry areas, or solid earth in wet areas. (Note: Takes more chakra if defying climate)
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    Name: Bakuhatsu Seizoroi (Explosion Array)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description: By doing the nessicary hand seals and punching the ground, this jutsu can blast anything upwards within a ten foot circular range of the ground targetted, including dirt, rocks, or anyone inside. Since this jutsu's effects aren't lethal (though the resultant fall might be), it can be used to knock targets unconscious and capture them. In addition, the pillars of displaced dirt and rocks can be used to hide from or blind the target. There is a chance that nearby party members or hired help will also be blasted, but there's little chance they'll perish, so, in a way, there's no need to worry when using this jutsu. Of course, there's no harm in exercising caution, either.
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    Name: Doton: Dochuu Eigyo(Underground Fish Projection)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:A Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. With this, a user will utilize multiple clones to confuse their enemy, then attack their target from the shadows by throwing shuriken or kunai to correspond with the clones' attacks, or by using Earth Release to sink into the ground, occasionally resurfacing to attack.
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    Name: Doton: Doro Bunshin no Jutsu
    (Mud Clone Technique)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description: This creates a replication of the user out of mud. It isnt useful as a decoy, but can attack.
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    Name:Doton: Doro Saafingu Jutsu
    (Mud Surfing Jutsu)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:Used with Doton Doryuu Taiga or any rolling mud, the user can maintain balance and travel down the river surface.
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    Name:Doton : Doroku Gaeshi
    (Earth Type: Upside-Down Mud Wall)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:A Doton (earth type) Ninjutsu technique where the ninja strikes the ground with their hands and a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.
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    Name:Doton : Doryuu Atsuennami
    (Earth Rolling Wave)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:The user slams the ground, making the ground bulge like a wave and move along the earth for a short distance, defending the user and attacking the enemy.
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    Name:Doton : Doryuu Shinko
    (Earth Rising)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:The ability to make some earth rise in front of the user. This can be a defensive technique, or combo-ed with some of the other jutsu that relies on dirt. (note: Can only raise half their bodies mass of earth.)
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    Name:Doton: Doryuu Taiga
    (Earth Flow River)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.
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    Name:Doton: Kirehari no jutsu
    (Strip Spikes)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:The useful attack technique of the aforementioned Chirikire jutsu. After using Katou Chirikire, the ninja can change handseals, causing thin or wide spikes to protrude out of the bands and shoot out.
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    Name:Doton: Kodorou no Jutsu
    (Earth Release - Rising Earth Prison Technique)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:A ninjutsu in which the user preforms the necessary handseals and then slams their palms upon the ground. A rectangular prison, complete with a ceiling, will rise and form around the targeted individuals. The ground is charged with the users chakra, making it extremely dense and negating any jutsu used to travel through earth. The walls and ceiling are also extremely dense. If the caster removes their hands from the spot on the ground where the jutsu is initiated, the jutsu is broken.
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    Name:Doton: Koudokasui no Jutsu
    (Earth Release - Rising Earth Spike Technique)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:A simple yet effective jutsu. After casting the necessary seals, the user slams their hands on the ground. A single sharpened construct of earth will rise in front of the target, aiming to impale them. Higher level ninja may form multiple spikes, but will suffer greater chakra usage by doing so.
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    Name:Doton: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:This ninjutsu isn't a widely used technique, since it is only used when surprising the enemy. After performing a series of hand seals and raising his chakra, the ninja is buried underground using his chakra. He can then move freely inside the ground, as if he was outside.
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    Name:DOTON: Shuuran Haji no Jutsu
    (Earth Type: Grasping Ribbons Technique)
    Rank:C
    Element:Doton
    Description:A skill where the user channels his/her chakra through the ground, forcing earth farther away to rise up in thick ribbons. The skill is mainly used to grab an opponents legs, and can be controlled as to where the earth rises up.
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    Name:Doryuudan
    (Earth Dragon Projectile)
    Rank:B
    Element:Doton
    Description:Doton Doryuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create a dragon from the river of mud made after using the Doryuu Taiga technique. This dragon will then spew mud projectiles from its mouth.
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    Name:Doton Doryuuheki
    (Earth Element - Earth Rising Wall)
    Rank:B
    Element:Doton
    Description:Doton Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.
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    Name:Jishin
    (Earthquake)
    Rank:B
    Element:Doton
    Description:With several hand seals, the jutsu user places his/her hand on the ground and sends out a pulse, which then causes something like an earthquake within a certain area. The shaking is strong enough to destroy a building or to seal the entrance to a cave. This spell doesn't attack living beings directly, but can be used to kill target(s) if used correctly.
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    Name:Doroudomo Doten Kekkai
    (Earth Barrier Clay Prison)
    Rank:B
    Element:Doton
    Description:A earth elemental ninjutsu attack in which the user pummels his hands into the ground and forms a dome around the enemy. The dome is a prison, reinforced by the user's chakra; the chakra flow and strength of the earth walls are weaker farther away from the user. The weakened areas offer the best chance for the dome's prisoners to break loose.
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    Name: Tsuin Doton Doragon
    (Twin Earth Dragon)
    Rank:A
    Element:Doton
    Description:The user creates two dragons from earth and sends them at their enemy. The earth dragon is more damaging than the Water Dragon Missile due to the fact that its made out of rock that's further enforced with chakra, although the attack can be blasted through with a lightning jutsu or defended against with another earth jutsu.
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    Name:Kikaichuu no Jutsu
    ("Destruction Bug Technique")
    Rank:E
    Element:n/a
    Description:A Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Aburame clan of Leaf village. After being born, the clan member serves as the host nest for the kikai bugs. In return for feeding on the chakra the hosts' body provides, the insects will do the bidding of the clan member. The host can use the bugs to seek out the chakra of the opponent and attack them, or use the bugs for their own techniques such as the Kikaichuu Bunshin.
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    Name:Mushi Yose no Jutsu
    ("Insect Gathering Technique")
    Rank:D
    Element:n/a
    Description:Mushi Yose no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Aburame clan of Leaf village. After forming the needed handseals, the clan user will place their hand to a surface and extend a web-like chakra lure to insects in the surrounding area to their location. Running this web over the area will cause any nearby bugs to walk up into it and follow it back to the source.
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    Name:Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu
    ("Bug Clone") AKA: Kikaichuu Bunshin
    Rank:C
    Element:n/a
    Description:A Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Aburame clan of Leaf village. Using the destruction bugs living in their body, the clan host uses the bugs to form a Bunshin copy of them self to trick their opponent. Once damaged by an attack, the technique ends and the clone disperses back into the bugs which formed it.
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    Name:Mushi Kame no Jutsu
    ("Insect Jar Technique")
    Rank:C
    Element:n/a
    Description:Mushi Kame no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Aburame clan of Leaf village. After forming the needed handseals, the clan user will expel the destruction bugs living in their body. The bugs will surround the member and fly at a high rate of speed forming a protective vortex. The vortex will be strong enough to destroy incoming bug attacks. The vortex can be disrupted and the clan members inside rendered vulnerable if sufficient explosive force is expended outside the protective shell.
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    Name:Mushi (Insect)
    Rank: A
    Element:n/a
    Description:Ability to control bugs at will. The higher the rank the more the bugs.
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    Name:Katon: Ho Bunshin no Jutsu
    ("Fire Element: Fire Clone")
    Rank:C
    Element:Katon
    Description:Similar to the other bunshins, Honoo Bunshin makes a replication from fire. Normally this technique isn't very orthodox as one can easily tell which is which. What makes this technique dangerous is it behaves similar to Kage Bunshin as the flame clones can and will hurt things. The downside is it requires a fairly large fire source to use and is easily dispelled by strong wind and weak water jutsu.
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    Name:Katon: Kaki Tooneedo
    ("Fire Elemen: Fire Tornado")
    Rank:B
    Element:Katon
    Description:A Katon style of ninjutsu in which the user will exhale a large stream of fire that will strike the ground in front of the target before it bursts upward in a swirling tower of fire resembling a tornado around the target that lasts for several seconds and can be controlled by the user through heavy focus.
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    Name:Katon: Zukokku
    (Fire Release: Intense Pain)
    Rank:B
    Element:Katon
    Description:The Zukokku begins by the user performing the seals of Rat, Dog, and Tiger. The user then inhales, their chest expanding as the air within their lungs is converted into fire, and exhales a small fireball onto the ground. The fireball then expands into a massive, destructive flame which spreads quickly across the ground, consuming everything within its path.
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    Name:Katon: Heisen
    ("Fire Element: War Flame")
    Rank:A
    Element:Katon
    Description:The user places his hands together to form a triangle with his thumbs and index fingers. He/She would then extend his/her arms, with the triangle still formed. From chakra alone, a projectile is formed by the user in the shape of the triangle made by his/her hands. Similar to the snowball effect, the fireball expands as it travels further. The fireball is supposed to go to as far as the user's eyes can see, setting its path completely ablaze, even lighting the surfaces of water and ice on fire. The most dangerous effect of this jutsu, though, would be the large explosion that the fireball would make if something went into direct collision with it. Most effective when it collides right at the end of its trajectory for the largest detonation.
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    Name:Katon: Ryuujin Bakuha
    ("Fire Element: Flame of the Dragon King")
    Rank:A
    Element:Katon
    Description: Through the use of this technique, the user inhales as much air as possible and infuses it with chakra before releasing it in a huge cone-shaped wave of fire which gets larger in radius the further it goes from the user. However, once the fire is exhaled, it does not disappear. Instead in lingers around. The user then forms a single seal and with full concentration, is capable of full manipulation of the flame. The user is able to make the wave of fire rise, fall, shape itself, split, rain, curve, chase, or in other ways limited only by the users imagination. The fire can be spread out and do less damage, or it can also be highly condensed to do more damage. Should the users concentration be divided at all, then the technique is broken and the fire disappears. Also, should the user move or release the seal being held, the technique will also be broken.
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    Name:Katon: Ryuushinsei Kouen
    ("Fire Element: Nova Dragon Flame")
    Rank:A
    Element:Katon
    Description:A technique that summons intense blue flames that are twice as hot as normal Katon attacks which then take the shape of a large dragon as it flies from the users mouth.
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    Name:Mushi Taigen (Insect embodiment)
    Rank:S
    Element:n/a
    Description:Souma summons as many insects as he possibly can, the surround him completely engulfing him within. They act as an armor but are also synchronized through Souma's chakra. The create wings out of insects which give souma he ability to fly. beetles are cramped together as hands and feet making Souma Stronger. Due to the bugs Souma grows in size up to 7-10 ft tall. Souma basically becomes a giant insect-man. It lasts about 3 posts spened around half user's chakra.
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    Name:Mushi Taigen Hayato Gen (Insect embodiment Falcon illusion)
    Rank:S
    Element:n/a
    Description: When Souma is attacked in this state blasts seem to go right through him. When the insects disperse Souma is nowhere to be seen. He litterally becomes the insects when this genjutsu is activated bringing his opponent into his own little insect nightmare were Souma 'seems' invincible. This jutsu can naturally be stopped when Kai (Release) jutsu of similar rank is used or when the opponent inflicts himself with an enormous amout of pain to snap him out of it.

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:
    Birth Ark:
    Souma was born blind in Sheetagakure and lived with his parents. Souma was always outgoing as a younger child, he always enjoyed exploring places and had wandered nearly everywhere in the village. He had quite a normal life, his father was a chuunin and his mother was a nurse. Souma respected his father, he was the reason Souma chose to become a ninja. He would train alot with his father day and night whenever they had time. At the age of seven Souma’s mom got really sick and died. This event was of great influence on him, he began to act more serious than before yet still kept his old personality, he tried a lot harder on anything he did thinking that it would have made his mother proud of him.

    Academy Ark:
    Nothing really major happened during his academy days but there was one event that influenced his behaviour. He had a friend during is academy days, they always played together and were good friends until one day when both Souma’s friend’s parents died in an accident. She began to slowly drift away from Souma, they’re friendship had ended since she was scarred by her parents death. Shortly after both of them graduated from the academy she had been completely taken over by darkness. She mysteriously disappeared one day and was never heard of again. Souma was pushed a little more towards his evil side when this happened though he still managed to hide his true feelings. He wasn’t able to do anything to stop his best friend from being engulfed by darkness but vowed that he would always protect his friends.

    Genin Ark:
    A few months later Souma decided to explore his clan heritage more. He had heard rumours around about the Aburame clan but before now was uninterested with the details. It seemed like Souma’s life was destined to be misfortunate because just as he was beginning to forget all about the past and focus on the future his father went missing and a while later was announced dead although there was no physical evidence of this. Since then Souma has been under the watch of a Jounin who used to be a personal friend of his fathers, he is the person who mainly taught Souma how to be more power so that he could achieve his goal. Souma has been mainly training in heightening his other senses and controlling his insects.

    Chuunin Ark:
    This was Souma's busiest time, mission wise. He went on a lot of missions out of the village in groups and solo. He also had a chance of travelling to other villages and learning a lot of things, seeing a lot of things. Souma has become quite experienced since he first became a Chuunin. Souma was able to nearly completely forget everything of his past and began training much more intense jutsu and created a custom jutsu of his own. Souma trained hard and has been now promoted into a Jounin, he currently just likes to lay back since all his life he has just trained hard but even though he is still sort of working hard in his own way.

    Jounin Ark:
    Nothing has currently happened in this ark.


    Roleplay Sample:
    Souma was walking through the streets with his head down. He was wearing a red and yellow top which was now dump and wet due to the rain, water had accumulated into the fabric of his short trousers which made them feel heavier, like they were just hanging from his belt at his waist. Souma could be seen dragging along two katana in his hands and one smaller one in his mouth, he looked completely unenthusiastic and seemed like he was feeling down. You could tell by the expression on his face that he wasn’t bothered by the weather at all.

    The reason for Souma’s mood was because he had just finished a long day of training, by training i mean really intensive non-stop but that’s just the way Souma was. He would work himself until the point of exhaustion, this time he had been training with his three style sword fighting technique nearly the whole day, even when the rain started he never stopped. The streets were almost clear; it seemed that nearly everyone had gone back into their homes for shelter. Souma’s feet now began to drag through the mud, his legs got heavier and he didn’t feel he would be able to reach his house so he walked over by a tree and just let himself down sliding on the went wood until he was sitting down after splashing in the mud.

    Souma stabbed his swords into the ground seeing as he wasn’t bothered to sheath them, he slowly raised his hand onto his head and felt his hair. He vigorously shook his hand into his hair and watched the entire water just fling out before he dropped his hands and more water just felt onto his head once more. He tilted his head back to lean onto the tree whilst his eyes were closed because the rain would have gotten in them. He barely opened his eyes still squinting a bit and saw a silhouette of something in the tree branches. “What’s that?” He said to himself curiously before getting up and looking up again. Even though he had only rested for a few minutes it was enough for him to get some of his energy back.


    Last edited by Souma on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:24 pm; edited 5 times in total

    Souma
    Sheetagakure Jounin
    Sheetagakure Jounin

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    Shinobi ID
    Village: Sheetagakure
    Letter Rank:
    Classification: Jounin

    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Souma on Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:44 pm

    Done
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    Echo
    Mizukage
    Mizukage

    Posts : 709
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    Join date : 2010-06-22
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    Shinobi ID
    Village: Kirigakure
    Letter Rank: S
    Classification: Mizukage

    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Echo on Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:23 am

    This is finished now?


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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Souma on Tue Jul 06, 2010 11:08 am

    Yeah
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    Mizukage
    Mizukage

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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Echo on Tue Jul 06, 2010 11:36 am

    Name:Doton Karyoku no Jutsu

    Requires lava release kekkei genkai
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    Your only allowed 2 S rank jutsu.


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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Souma on Tue Jul 06, 2010 11:46 am

    Edited
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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Echo on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:04 pm

    You still have 3 S ranks listed..

    Mushi Taigen Hayato (Insect embodiment Falcon)

    Mushi Taigen (Insect embodiment)

    Mushi (Insect)


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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Souma on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:06 pm

    Mushi (Insect) varies from E-S i put an (A) beside to show what level he uses it at.
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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Echo on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:10 pm

    Jutsu that vary on rank count as an S rank if the highest they reach is S rank, due to them reaching such a power.


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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Souma on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:12 pm

    I changed it to A rank then
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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Echo on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:15 pm

    Name:Mushi Taigen (Insect embodiment)

    Add how long that stays active until it wears off. I expect it to be somewhat short due to the amount of chakra it would constantly use.

    Mushi Taigen Hayato (Insect embodiment Falcon)

    You need more detail on what this does exactly. Teleporting is not allowed either.


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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Souma on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:24 pm

    Alright Edited, i turned the second one into a genjutsu.
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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Echo on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:28 pm

    Approved. Just be sure to know that for the Genjutsu, you still need eye to eye contact.

    Also be sure to know that you only have what Jutsu you have listed there until you make more.


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    Re: Souma Aburame

    Post by Souma on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:29 pm

    Yep

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