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    Post by Kazuki on Mon Jul 05, 2010 2:16 pm

    Name:Kazuki Uchiha

    Nickname/Alias: Kazu

    Weight:169
    Height:5'10

    Age: 14
    Gender:Male

    Appearance:(AVATAR)

    Clothing: The basic uniform consists off a flak jacket which holds scrolls, a pouch attached to the thigh that holds kunai and shuriken and a back pouch that contains more kunai, shuriken, exploding notes or caltrops.

    Personality: When Kazuki does not find an event interesting, or even slightly appealing, his mind is quick to travel elsewhere but he was not always like that. He has no interest in focusing on things which do not interest.he can be quite the impulsive, often suggesting to himself that he should charge into danger instead of approaching with more care.He is also very lazy.He can be very sneaky sometimes.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Uchiha

    Kekei Genkai: Sharigan

    Clan Symbol:The organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.

    Clan History: The Uchiha clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps.

    Ability Summary:Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification:Chunin
    Letter Rank:B

    Village:Mist

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:?

    •Main:Kenjutsu

    •Sub:Ninjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:
    •Main:Lighting

    •Main:Water

    •Sub:

    Special Characteristics:

    ~Jutsu~
    Name:Sharigan
    Rank:-
    Element:-
    Description:This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it.

    ACADEMY JUTSU
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    Name:Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

    Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

    Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

    Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Replacement Technique)
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

    Name: Sennen Goroshi - One Thousand Years of Death
    Rank: E
    Element: None
    Type: Taijutsu
    Description: Though it is called "Leaf's Ancient Supreme Technique", Sennen Goroshi serves more as an insulting shock technique rather than a skilled Taijutsu technique. The ninja forms their hands into the seal of the tiger, and then jabs their fingers into the nether regions of their target. The result is shocking violation of the targets sanctity and often their launching in the air to stop the awkward feeling.

    GENIN JUTSU
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    Name: Shadow Shuriken
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Type: Taijutsu
    Description: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fūma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency.

    Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
    Rank: D
    Element: None
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique.The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

    Name:Demonic Illusion:Hell Viewing Technique
    Rank:D
    Type:Genjutsu
    Description:This is a genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside people's hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn't want to ever see. This genjutsu is a technique that draws forth such an image from within the heart and has one mistake it for reality. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in. If the mental image is a gruesome one, the shock will be accordingly great.

    Name:Dynamic Entry:
    Rank:D
    Type:Taijutsu
    Description:This jutsu is simply a flying jump kick at the side of the enemy's face while shouting "dynamic entry". Guy's version also sometimes involves throwing a kunai to distract the opponent's attention and then attacking them from their blind spot. This technique can also be used to break into buildings.

    Name:Leaf Gale
    Rank:D
    Type:Taijutsu
    Description:A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint.

    Name:Leaf Whirlwind
    Rank:D
    Type:Taijutsu
    Description:A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint.

    Name:Kage Shuriken no Jutsu (Technique of the Shadow Shuriken)
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description:The Ninja throws with two consecutive Shuriken at the enemy, so that one of the thrown weapons is in the shadow of the other. The aim of this technique is to draw the attention of the opponent on the first Shuriken, so that the enemy only notices the second Shuriken when it is too late for an evasive maneuver.

    Name: Sō Shuriken no Jutsu (Shuriken manipulation technique)
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description: It is a technique in which the user throws very quickly two giant shuriken on the opponent.

    Name:Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu
    Rank: D
    Element: Genjutsu
    Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

    Name: Kai (Release)
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

    CHUNIN JUTSU
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    Name: Kokohi no Jutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Genjutsu
    Desrciption: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

    Name:Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Genjutsu
    Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

    Name:Crow Clone Technique:
    Rank:C
    Type:Genjutsu
    Description:A technique that produces a clone by projecting one's own chakra towards dozens of "crows". Because it uses crows as a medium, it requires less chakra than the normal Shadow Clone Technique, while still being able to perform techniques. The dozens of crows come together to form the body of a clone. When the chakra projected by the user is severed, the crows disperse, though the user is still able to continue to speak through it.


    Name:Jibashiri - Earth Flash
    Rank:C
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Description:Jibashiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Lightning Element. He will then unleash an electric current which will run along the ground towards her opponent.

    Name:Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Element Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:C
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Description:Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.

    CHUNIN JUTSU

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    Name:Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle
    Rank:B
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Description:Hiraishin is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After coming into physical contact with opponent, he will then generate a bolt of electricity which will travel through his body into the body of her opponent.

    Name:Kakashi's Lightning Wolf Technique (Unnamed)
    Rank:B
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Description:This unnamed Ninjutsu technique utilizes the Lightning Element. After creating Raiton in his hand, he will send out a wolf made of lightning to attack his target. Lightning will run from his hand to the wolf itself, limiting its range.

    Name:Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave
    Rank:B
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Description:Kangekiha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element.he will first create a protective wall of water. He will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through.


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    Re: Kazuki Uchiha

    Post by Kazuki on Mon Jul 05, 2010 7:36 pm

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story: (History of your character. Please try to separate them into arcs.) Example:
    Birth Ark:When Kazuki was a little boy nobody liked him because of how he would act sometime's.Kazukiwould get lost all the time even though his sense of direction was very good,His older sister would be the one who found him always.When kazuki was 5 his parents where killed by sound ninja in front of him.Kazuki tried to stop them but he was only a little boy and wasn't that strong.Kazuki was then made to stay with his sister.Kazuki trained eye's day to try and become stronger so that he would be able to protect anybody that he loved.

    Academy Ark:Kazuki stayed with his sister until the age of 12 that's when he got his own place.Kazuki enrolled in the academy where he was always lazy and barely did work and always going to sleep because nothing the teacher was teaching was interesting enough to keep his interest.Kazuki then taken by his sister and left the leaf Village and went to the hidden mist.
    She had left because of the fact that she had killed a Jounin and was now a Missing Nin.She took Kazuki with her because she was scared he might get hurt or interagated and not know why.

    Genin Ark:When Kazuki was one of the best fighter's on his squad and everybody knew that. They
    also found out that he was very smart and if he wanted to apply himself to something he would be very good at it.Kazuki was tricked into playing a I.Q quiz by one of the jounin in the Village and scored over a 200 on it.Kazuki then was made to take the Chunin Exzams even though he didnt want to,he thought it was to much work and he didnt like to kill othr people.


    Chunnin Ark:
    One day while Kuzuki was walking down the street he a sigh that said that Chunin Exams was coming up,so Kazuki though this would be a good chance for him to become a leader of a squad and show of his leader ship skill's.

    Kazuki read the sign and went to where it was at on the day and time,when he got there he saw that it was about 10 people there 5 girls and 5 guys going for the spot excluding Kazuki.He thought why wouldn't more people go and try out for Chunin.Kazuki then thought that people sometimes waer not qalified for the chance.

    Kazuki then walked in and saw a man starting on a stand and talking.The man said ''Today all you will be trying out for the position of Chunin, you all should be very scared and at the same time very excited,my name is Tamkido and I will be the judge of the fights you all will participate in.You all will have to pick a number out of this box I hold in my hand''.Everybod then pick out a number from the box.Kazuki had number 1,all the other number went from Kazuki having number 1 a girl number 2 and in that pattern.

    Tamkido then showed us a piece of paper telling us who we where going to fight aginst.Kazuki had to fight a man named Tamachi.Their match was immediately after everyone knew who they where going to fight.Kazuki was giving the first attack since Kazuki main weapon was his sword thats what he used,he charge at the man before jumping in the air and coming down with his sword.Tamachi blocked it with his kunai and then kicked Kazuki in the stomach which sent him hurling to the ground.

    Tamachi said''Why the hell is somebody as weak as you going out for a position like that your only going to end up getting your self hurt or worse dead you should just quite now and let somebody stronger go on ahead''.Kazuki was very mad at what the man had said to him,that mad and fell weak then it made kazuki head have flash back of his Parents being dead in their home.Kazuki then passed out,Tamachi then smile and said''ha I knew he was weak this was easier than I thought it would be''.

    Kazuki then stood up with his brand new sharingan.Kazuki then said''somebody like you will never mess my chances up of being a chunin''.Kazuki then charge at the man and was able to cut him on his shoulder.The man said ''damn you,you lil punk ill kill you''.Kazuki smiled and said '' you can try but you wont be successful in your attempt to kill me''.The man charge at Kazuki with great speed but thanks to his sharigan,Kazuki saw his attack and was able to block it but since the man was stronger than Kazuki it made him fall.

    Tamachi said ''your still weak even after your little bloodline kicked in I always knew you Uchiha's were weak''.Kazuki then got so mad at the Tamachi disgraceful talk of his clan,so charge at the him aiming at his head.Tamachiwas unable to block Kazuki attack.Kazuki stop his attack just before he pierced his head.Kazuki said ''I would never kill a piece of trash like yourself and plus your strong I would want to kill somebody strong that would be bad for the village since everybody lives matter''.

    Tamachi stood up and bowed before saying ''I forfeit the match''.Kazuki bowed and said ''why did you forfeit''. Tamachi said 'because i have no right and whaat I said and id was discrseful''.Kazuki said ''thank you''.Tamachi then left and went into the stands.15 mins later everybody wo won their fihts became chunin.



    Jounin Ark:N/A

    Roleplay Sample:My post Ranges from Both mine but from different Sites
    This- Shinji smiled and said All you have to do is simple get both bells before I get sleepy and if you don you wont get lunch and if you sneak a lunch i will Kicck you off my team.Shinji smiled waiting to see what their expresson will be.Shinji was joking but didnt show it he seemed seious.

    To- Kuroi smiled and spoke. "Hello my name is Kuroi Rein of the Rein, or Black cloud clan. I enjoy games that test my skills and knowledge of strategies. I am very intelligent and very talented, I fight when I need to, and when my allies are in danger. I excel at Ninjutsu, but a some hidden skills. I love to spar, and I am the head of my clan." Kuroi looked at his fellow teammate and then back at his sensei. He knew that it was going to be fun working with this team.


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    Re: Kazuki Uchiha

    Post by Khaiyne Illidari on Mon Jul 05, 2010 8:34 pm

    The rest of the application looks up to standard.. Your bio, personality, and appearance has to be atleast a paragraph or more in order to be considered however, Kazuki.


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    Re: Kazuki Uchiha

    Post by Khaiyne Illidari on Mon Jul 05, 2010 8:34 pm

    Oh, and make it convincing. XD


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    Re: Kazuki Uchiha

    Post by Kazuki on Mon Jul 05, 2010 8:46 pm

    The Rest Of My Jutsu's
    CHUNIN JUTSU
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    Name:Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Description:Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

    Name:Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Description:Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

    Name:Daibaku Suishouha - Great Exploding Water Collision Waves
    Rank:B
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Description:Suiton • Daibaku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel a great amount of water from his gullet. This water will then form into a massive dome, encasing Kisame and his targets inside. When Kisame merges with Samehada, his aquatic mobility greatly increases, thus allowing him to make full use of the aquatic battlefield set up by this jutsu.

    Name:Kamira's Genjutsu (Unnamed)
    Rank:B
    Type:Genjutsu
    Description:This unnamed Genjutsu is a technique used by Kamira. Kamira will cause the area around the target to be enveloped by darkness. Once inside the black space, the target will see grotesque figures said to be tortured criminals, the previous victims of the technique. These grotesqueries will reach out and grab a hold of the target. They will then be thrown into the void to the mercy of a spectral dragon. The horrifying oni can even extend from the targets own body to attack them. All aimed at transfixing the victim with fear and shock while Kamira herself chokes and kills the target.

    Name:Tsukire [Moon Slice]
    Rank:B
    Type:Kenjutsu
    Description:An attack where an enemy will rush an opponent, apparently trying to stab a foe, only to launch themselves over an enemy, jumping in a path similar to a crescent moon while slashing at a foe's shoulder/neck/head. This allows the user to simultaneously surprise a foe, move behind them, and strike them from above.


    Name:Boushikibou [Hat Trick]
    Rank:B
    Type:Kenjutsu
    Description:A technique that relies on chakra enhanced projectiles, the ninja will throw three knives, needles, or similar weapon at an opponent. The first shall be thrown normally, the next chakra-enhanced, the last containing an immense amount of force behind it. The purpose of this technique is to penetrate armors and defenses. The first blade shall strike the defense, the next pushing it further in, and the last striking it to push the blade in deeper, cracking bones if necessary. Each transfers their force to the next blade, surprising the enemy and breaking an opponent's defenses.

    Name:Kurenai's Flower Petal Dissolve (Unnamed)
    Rank:B
    Type:Genjutsu
    Description:This unnamed flower petal technique is a Genjutsu utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. If Kurenai becomes trapped in a Genjutsu or wants to appear to be trapped she can disperse into a shower of flower petals. With this technique these petals will fly around and consume her targets, dissolving their bodies away.

    Name:Kurenai's Flower Petal Escape (Unnamed)
    Rank:B
    Type:Genjutsu
    Description:This unnamed flower petal technique is a Genjutsu utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. If Kurenai comes under attack, she can use this technique to cover her escape. After forming the needed hand seals, Kurenai's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract her opponent while she escapes or hides.

    Name:Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Genjutsu
    Description:Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. After Yoroi forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.

    Name:Sōshōryū [Twin Rising Dragons]
    Rank:B
    Type:Kenjutsu
    Description: A technique that allows a ninja to manipulate several dozens of weapons by manipulating a string, sending chakra impulses in order to move the weapons in whatever manner he desires. This allows him to levitate and coordinate the weapons, surrounding a foe with them and slicing an enemy to pieces. The more weapons utilized, the stronger and more difficult this technique is to face. Requires strings of some sort to manipulate them.

    Name:Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop
    Rank:B
    Type:Taijutsu
    Description:Hayabusa Otoshi is a Taijutsu technique used by Uchiha Sasuke. While at an elevated position, Sasuke will grab his opponent from behind. Firmly locking himself to their back, he will lock his ankles to their neck to get their body rigid. He will then plant them head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back piledriver, the move can provide a great concussion to his opponent's head.

    Name:Bakuken
    Rank:B
    Type:Kenjutsu
    Description:Allos the user to Minipulate thier weapon ith their Main element
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    Re: Kazuki Uchiha

    Post by Michishige on Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:08 pm

    your rank says chunnin, but you have jounin jutsu, you can't have fire a a sub element, that part is meant for KKG elements like Ice and Wood. Each arc of you history my be at least one paragraph. explain what hidden chakra is. and your RP sample isn't supposed to be a story, it is supposed to be what your average post looks like


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    Re: Kazuki Uchiha

    Post by Echo on Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:04 am

    You don't have Genjutsu so remove all the Genjutsu out of your Jutsu list. Also, next time use the coded template. It has Please use the coded Template below there for a reason.


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