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    Inazuma Yoshino

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    Inazuma Yoshino

    Post by Inazuma on Thu Jul 08, 2010 2:05 am

    ~General Information~

    Name: Inazuma Yoshino

    Nickname/Alias: Exelerate

    Weight: 180 pounds

    Height: 7'2

    Age: 23

    Gender: Male

    Appearance: Inazuma's appearence is marked by spikey blonde hair,vivide blue eye's. Inazuma is slim mucular and tall. Inazuma alway's carry's his large Sword Around. Inazuma is Muscular from his training every day. Inazuma has medium sized pupil's and has medium Spiky Hair. Inazuma has a Normal nose and head is Average. Inazuma is Pale Skinned also.


    Clothing:

    Inazuma were's a sleevless black top with black pant's. Inazuma has a left arm leather attachment that attaches a sleeve to the left arm. Inazuma has a Eagle Head Crest on the Attachment near were his heart is. Inazuma has black gloves on both hand's. Inazuma also has a leather covering for his Left leg. Inazuma has a sword holder attached to his back and some knife holder's underneath the left leg eather Attachment.

    Alternate Clothing: Regular Mist Shinobi Flack Jacket.
    Alternate Clothing 2: Black T-Shirt with white Long sleeve's.
    Alternate Clothing 3: Yellow Jacket with Yoshino symboll in back and Blue T-Shirt



    Personality: Inazuma is a calm person. No matter what Inazuma would be calm. In a dangerous situation Inazmua will stay calm and figure a plan out 1...2...3! Inazuma act's normally with other's. Inazuma will talk normally not get annoyed not exited nothing just a calm attitude. If Inazuma is given a mission he Will do whatever it take's to complete it. Before inazuma step's into action he will study his surrounding's and people around him. If Inazuma was in a mission and he was sneaking his way to complete it wich is the way he is on mission's if there were people he would study and then he would strike. Inazuma has one Goal and that goal is to be one of the best Swordsmen in the universe like the first Yoshino was.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Yoshino (they are able to breath underwater the town was underwater)

    Kekei Genkai: Static Mist

    Clan Symbol:

    Clan History: The Yoshino Clan was a Clan Hidden Under The Ocean in a secret Little Town Called Umi The clan hid there 50 years after naruto died. The Yoshino Clan was a new starting clan. There clan DNA evolved every year turning different. When the Yoshino Clan Was Over 90 People The Yoshino Clan's Town "Umi" Floated up into were mist was and fused with mist. Ever since that the Yoshino's have been a rare clan in mist. The Yoshino are Barely seen in the Mist because thy are alway's in there town wich has expanded Alot. The Yoshino's didnt really like how they floated into mist because they were planning to float into the middle of the ocean but they then found out the mist village was still good. The Yoshino clan then became Powerfull Ninja's In Mist Village. During 1 year some of the Yoshino started dieing off from a terrible death taking disease. Around 15 Yoshino's Survived the terrible event that occurred. The reason why some of them survived is because instead of the disease killing them it made them stronger. During present day There is around 30-60 Yoshino's (Birth with other people that are out of clan). The Yoshino's are one of the Mist Village's Toughest Clan's.

    Ability Summary: Static Mist can only be done by Yoshino's. If a yoshino has Pure Yoshino DNA they will automaticly know Static Mist Jutsu. Inazuma has perfected the Static Mist Jutsu and has evolved it so Inazuma's Sword can exorb Some Static From the Mist and shoot it out. The Static Mist Jutsu will only Blind and hurt the target but will not harm the user.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Mist Jounin

    Letter Rank: A Rank Ninja

    Village: Mist Village

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:



    Main: Kenjutsu

    Sub: Ninjutsu


    Elemental Affinity:



    Main: Lightning

    Main: Water

    Sub: Electrifyed Water


    Special Characteristics: None

    ~Jutsu~

    Name: Lightning Style: Parylyzation
    Rank: B
    Element: Lightning
    Description: The User send's a shock of electricity that goes inside the target and the Shock of electricty expand's and divides into 1000 little bits of elecriticy wich go through the blood stream and slip through onto the bones and inside the body they go and cling onto a body part and send parylyzing lightning chakara wich will meet and then parylyze the target completely. The only way to break out is if the time minute of 1 Minute Passes.

    Name: Water Style: Water Cage Jutsu
    Rank:B
    Element: Water
    Description: The User Can do 2 thing's with this jutsu. 1 Option: The User Can Trap the opponent inside the Cage. Inazuma Use's His Sword and opens up a hole in the cage and stab's his sword through it hitting the target , Or can take all the air out of the bubble and drown the opponent. The Other Thing the user can do is trap itself inside the cage and make the cage the shape of the user and uses it to swim in the ocean and breath normally. or even make a large area to fight sombody else within the water.
    Combonation: Lightning Style: Spark
    Combo Info: The Spark goes into the Water Cage and makes a lightning shield around it so if the Target touches the water a little bit they are zapped with electricity.

    Name: Lightning Style: Spark
    Rank:C
    Element: lightning
    Description: The User Send's a spark onto the opponent zapping him/her. Even though the Original One doesnt do Much damage inazuma can expand the Jutsu and make it deal great amount of damage and injure the opponent.
    Combonation: Water Style: Water Cage Jutsu
    Combo Info:The Spark goes into the Water Cage and makes a lightning shield around it so if the Target touches the water a little bit they are zapped with electricity.

    Name: Electrifyed Water Style: Electrifyed Water Tiger Torpedo
    Rank:B
    Element: Electryfyed Water
    Description: A Tiger Formed off electrifyed water run's towards the target and hits the target with a massive force and explode's also leave's the opponent parylyzed.The Tiger-shape remains connected to the user's hand with a bolt of lightning, allowing them to control it during its attack. Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)

    Name: Lightning Style: Lightning Strike
    Rank:B
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: Inazuma (the user) sends lightning style chakara into the sky and sends a Bolt of lightning to the ground. If it is already stormy then Inazuma doesnt need to put chakara into the sky to control the lightning. (Is possible because sasuke did it in the fight with itachi)


    Name: Sword Charge
    Rank: B
    Element: Sword Ninjutsu
    Description: Inazuma (The User) Send's Electricity into the Sword And Charges it for a Large Attack. Charges the Sword With Electricity for either Static Sword Jutsu or Sword Discharge Jutsu. Lightning surround's the sword.

    Name: Static Sword
    Rank:B
    Element: Sword Ninjutsu
    Description: Inazuma (The User) Use's the Lightning that is charged inside The sword and make's the inside lightning surround the sword making it a static sword. If the sword hit's the target the target will be Electrifyed.

    Name: Sword Discharge
    Rank:A
    Element: Sword Ninjutsu
    Description: Must use sword Charge First: The User Discharge's the Lightning Charged Inside the sword and make's an electric explosion. The User and the Sword Arent Damaged at all but The Target is hurt severly. Close Range

    Name: Water Style: Shark Bomb Torpedo
    Rank:C
    Element: Water
    Description: A shark shaped torpedo made of water fly's at the target. If the Jutsu hits the target the shark bomb torpedo will explode.

    Name:Lightning Hound
    Rank:B
    element:Lightning
    Description:By manipulating lightning chakra into the dominant hand, the user can make the lightning expand to create the form of a hound. The hound-shape remains connected to the user's hand with a bolt of lightning, allowing them to control it during its attack. Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)

    Name:Electric Ball
    Rank:A
    element:Lightning
    Description: Inazuma will create a lightning-based defense barrier around him which protects him from incoming attacks. It requires 7 hand seals to activate this and Inazuma cannot move for his next turn in battle. It is easily breakable by a technique strong to lightning that is B or up or an attack that is higher or the same as the technique.

    Name:Water Bullet Jutsu
    Rank:C-A
    Element:Water
    Description: Kaito preforming the hand seals which come to 4, shoots a wide water bullet out of his mouth towards his enemy. This water bullet can grow with different chakra added. It will block any Fire offensive attacks and defensive attacks that are below the rank of this jutsu. Kaito can charge this water bullet with lightning to make a more powerful water bullet that will do extra damage to the opponent.

    Name: Water Dragon Bullet
    Rank:A
    Element:Water
    Description: Inazuma, when he summons his water dragon, or twin dragon can then make them shoot out a giant water bullet at the cost of more chakra then normal. Inazuma must add the last 4 hand seals to his jutsu when he summons the water dragon, and when that is complete he can then fire the water bullet when he wants. Kaito can also charge this jutsu with Lightning chakra once he charges the entire dragon.

    Name: Lightning Burial: Banquet of Lighting
    Rank:B
    Element: Lightning
    Description:Using his sword,Inazuma can create several thunderbolts that cut through the ground until they hit the enemy can create several thunderbolts that cut through the ground until they hit the enemy.

    Name: Lightning Dragon Tornado
    Rank:B
    Element: Lightning
    Description:Drawing his sword together Inazuma will raise them into the air and draw lightning down upon his body. The current will be contained within and around Inazuma's form. He will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of him. It will then strike out against his opponent and painfully trap them in the vortex. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

    Name:Lightning Destruction:
    Rank:B
    Element: Lightning
    Description:The user places his hands to the ground after converting their chakra in to lightning, then sending a powerful bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the target. The shape of the bolt is a triangle with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

    Name: Lightning Release Shadow Clone
    Rank:B
    Element: Lightning
    Description: This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform jutsu and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.

    Name: Lightning Release Armor
    Rank:A
    Element: Lightning
    Description: By wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, Inazuma can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armor, combined with taijutsu, allows A to utilize nintaijutsu.

    While using this technique, his reflexes are comparable to that of Konoha's Yellow Flash, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him.By combining this armor with the Body Flicker Technique, he can even dodge the Amaterasu at a split second, as well as Jūgo's Cursed Seal Chakra Blast at point blank range. The armor also increases his defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming attacks as even a direct Chidori was barely able to pierce his chest. In addition, the armor seems to increase his strength, though this could be part of his own natural abilities.


    Name:Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
    Rank:B
    Element: Lightning
    Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from his hands. The user can vary it's power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.

    Name: Lightning Strike Armor
    Rank:A
    Element: Lightning
    Description: By using his sword at the hilt and rotating them, Inazuma can use this jutsu to surround himself with electricity. The intense electric field protects him by electrocuting anyone who makes contact with it, but only works for one attack.

    Name:Water Release: Demon Fish Wave Crash
    Rank:A
    Element: Water
    Description:After using his Hydration Technique to merge with a water source, Inazuma can form a giant wave that looks like a demon-like fish.Inazuma can use this form to crash into his opponents, or he can use it to shield allies from attack.

    Name: Water Prison Technuiqe:
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This jutsu can't be performed without a sufficiently large body of water to supply the water for it. Despite the fact that the prison is made up entirely out of water, it is stronger than steel as stated by Zabuza Momochi. Once trapped the target is unable to move while within it due to the heaviness of the water. Even so, the target is still able to speak. Water clones can be used in preparation for the jutsu, which blocking an opponents attack and trapping the attacker in the prison using the clone's own water.

    Name:Water Prison: Shark Dance Technuiqe
    Rank: A
    Element:
    Description:Inazuma acts as the center of the giant dome of water. The dome shifts in the same direction he moves, making it difficult for his target to escape. This technique gives Inazuma great field advantage as he can breathe and freely move underwater, while his target drowns.

    Name: Water Clone Technuiqe
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power, as stated by Haku. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water.

    Name: Great Waterfall Technuiqe
    Rank:C
    Element: Water
    Description:This technique extends water over a large scale, surges and rises up to several dozen meters high. Then it streams down to the ground in one big cascade, much like a gigantic waterfall. In doing so, it resembles a huge wave, with tremendous power that can hollow out the ground. What remains after that jutsu's utilization is reminiscent of no less than the aftermath of a natural disaster. This is a considerably advanced ninjutsu, and activating this technique requires a fair share of chakra.

    Name: Great Exploding Water Coliding Wave
    Rank:B
    Element: Water
    Description: A stronger version of the Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave,Inazuma spits out a large amount of water and covers a entire area, with massive waves crushing the opponents. He then forms the water into a giant orb, rather than let it flow out like the jutsu's weaker version.

    Name: Water Style: Five Shark Frenzy
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description: The user puts his hand on the surface of a body of water and from the tips of five fingers, chakra is released into the water, changing it into the form of ferocious sharks. The five sharks circle the target with high speed, creating a raging stream that takes away their prey's freedom of movement and their sharp teeth tear into the enemy with five consecutive attacks. In the anime, these sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy.

    Name: Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
    Rank: A
    Element: Water
    Description: After spitting out a great volume of water from his mouth, the enemy is swallowed up by this advancing surge and crushed. The user can ride the wave, allowing them to move at high speed, and attack the enemy, now swept off their feet, without fear of counter-attacks, the amount of water created is proportional to the amount of chakra used. When used with Inazuma's enormous chakra, even dry wastelands can become similar to a small ocean. Afterwards, the excess water can presumably be used for additional water release jutsu.

    Name:Water Release: Infinite Shark's
    Rank:B
    Element: Water
    Description:Inazuma summons a water shark to force the enemy under water where Inazuma releases an orb of water that releases countless water sharks to strike the enemy before causing a massive implosion.

    Name:Water Release: Huge Explosion Technuiqe
    Rank:B
    Element:Water
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a torrent of water. Besides that, the user will be turned into water and lead his or her opponent into drowning.

    Name:Water Release: Gunshot
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description: The user kneads chakra, and converts it into water, and then spits it out in the form of condensated balls. The high-speed waterball attack possesses just as much power to kill as an actual gunshot. While this is a water release technique, it can still be employed someplace where no water is available, which is a great advantage. It's also possible to increase the power of destruction of the balls themselves by building up the chakra inside of them. The number of bullets is determined while kneading chakra. By taking advantage of gravity, the bullets can brutally increase in power.

    Name: Water Release: Water Fang Jutsu
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description:A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of application's.

    Name: Water Release: Water Shockwave
    Rank:B
    Element: Water
    Description: This technique allows the user to make a spiraling vortex of water from the moisture in the air. The vortex then proceeds to explode from the top in the form of a wave. The user can control the direction the wave goes.

    Name: Water Release: Waterfall Basin Technuiqe
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description: This is a jutsu which creates a waterfall by developing spring water in a place without water veins and manipulating the resulting water current to form a wave. This is a very convenient technique as it can be used for things like training and relaxation. On the other hand, because it changes the environment on a large scale, it also has the effect of hiding one's location from the enemy by confusing them. The width of the water source, waterfall, and basin can be expended, as long as the user continues to send chakra in.














    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:
    Birth Ark: When Inazuma was born he was born with Pure Yoshino DNA, wich mean's inazuma could use the clan Kenkei Genkai. Growing Up Inazuma Couldnt Wait for Him to join the academy.
    Inazuma Loved to train with his Genin Brother. Inazuma would alway's beat Ikumano because of his Outgraous Power and chakara. Inazuma Didnt even need To go to the academy.
    Academy Ark: Inazuma Skipped Academy.
    Genin Ark: Inazuma Was teamed up with Squad # 0 Wich was an unknown squad wich was the best. Inazuma was paired of with a Girl Named Akira who was also Yoshino, The Boy in the group was one of the Best student's in the Class Leon. Leon didnt know who inazuma was Because Inazuma skipped the academy because of his exellence. Akira had seen Inazuma in the Forest training and beating his older brother who was now chunnin. One day Inazuma was walking home from a mission and Leon appeared infront of inazuma. "Inazuma... I wanna fight... Just to see who's stronger... Akira has been saying that youve been training and you beat your chunnin brother every day..." Leon said as he stared into inazuma's eyes. Inazuma looked at Leon. "Sure... I was just about to fight my brother but it look's like you can do." Inazuma said. "But Let's take it into the Little Forest behind my house..."Inazuma and leon ran to the spot they would fight. Inazuma Got into a battle stance and so did leon. " Water Style: Shark Bomb Torpedo Jutsu!!! " Leon Yelled. Inazuma Watched the Shark. " Lightning Style: Lightning Strike Jutsu!!! " Inazuma sent some lightning chakara into the sky. A Bolt Of Lightning hit the Torpedo bomb shark. Leon Looked in amazemen but then got serious. "That was just practice the real fun Start's Now!" Leon Said. " Water Style: Sea Dragon Jutsu! " Leon said. I looked behind me. I saw a Large Sea dragon shoot water out at me. "Lightning Style:Spark!" Spark's of lightning flung out toward's the Sea dragon and it exploded. "Lightning Style: Parylyzation Jutsu!!" The Jutsu worked and Leon. Leon Knelt down parylyzed. Leon put his head up and looked at inazuma who was looking down at Leon. Inazuma Grabbed A Kunai and took it and put it on leon's throat. "Your finished... i win..." Inazuma said. Inazuma took the kunai and put it back in the kunai pouch. " Get up leon. The parylyzation i took off" Inazuma Said. Leon got up and looked into Inazuma's eye's. "Inazuma the chunnin exam's are coming up soon." Leon Said. "So?" Inazuma said. "Will you help me with my training? Akira also" Leon Said as Akira came out of the disguise she was in. "Inazuma will you?" Akira said. " Sure come tommorow ill be waiting. " Inazuma said. Then akira and leon left.
    Chunnin Ark: It was the beggining of the Uchiha Exam's. They were hosted in Konoha. Inazuma Looked around. Inazuma saw people cheating. Inazuma remembered what his brother told him to do "Cheat". Inazuma looked at a mirror sombody had cheating on one of the smartest people. Inazuma's vision was good so he saw the whole sheet. Inazuma finished fast. Time was over and Inazuma left in a hurry with akira and leon. They couldnt waste training time. It was time for the forest of death. Inazuma came up with a plan. In middle of the Forest was a gigantic Tree. they all stood on different part's of the forest. They waited an hour. They then heard a sound and saw a shinobi team with the scroll's. Inazuma shook his head and the area was filled with mist. Inazuma and Leon took the scrolls and dissappeared. Akira was gone also. "The Scrolls! There Gone!" A shinobi said, but Leon Inazuma and akira were already gone. After they finished they waited for the Next stage. Inside They had an Electric board wich would choose the fight's. Inazuma had to fight Somone who used Fire. Inazuma finished fast with water. Leon survived also. During the last stage Leon had to Fight Inazuma. Inazuma and Leon had a Great Fight but in the End Inazuma used his sword and finished the Match. Inazuma was so Good They Skipped Him as Chunnin and Made him Jounin.
    Jounin Ark:Inazuma Is currently A jounin he is one of te best. Leon and akira are also jounin leon own's his own Squad and Akira Does also. Inazuma is currently doing Anbu Ranked Mission's.

    Roleplay Sample: " Who do you think you are? You are not Vampire you must be Human!!!" Vladimire Said To Bill. "i am Not Vampire nor Human i am a Ogre." Bill said to Vladimire. Well prepare to die!" Vladimire said. " Why should i prepare to die when it is you who should prepare to die?" Bill said as he grabbed a wooden steak and stabbed vladimire in the chest. "Fowl ogre... You will pay!" Vladamire said as he turned into ashe's . The sun Rose into the sky as the moon dissappeared.


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    Re: Inazuma Yoshino

    Post by Kaito Jin on Thu Jul 08, 2010 4:04 am

    It doesn't say in your clan history or your clan that your KKG is electrical water. By the way, anyone can have electrical water unless you mean storm kkg, which is not mentioned. To join the 7 swordsmen of the mist you need to have Kenjutsu (Swords Jutsu) as your main element. And you can only have 2 specialties. Pick either Taijutsu or Genjutsu. And I am unaware if we are taking S ranked nins or not, and do remember that you have to RP becomming a swordsmen out, so do not pick swordsmen of the mist as your classification until you become one.


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    Re: Inazuma Yoshino

    Post by Inazuma on Thu Jul 08, 2010 10:18 pm

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    Re: Inazuma Yoshino

    Post by Kaito Jin on Thu Jul 08, 2010 10:49 pm

    One more thing to be a swordsmen of the mist (which you want to be) You need to have Kenjutsu as a main skill specialty. Lightning is not a sub element, and sword jutsu is not an element either.

    Example of a Swordsmen app:


    Skill Specialty:



    Main: KENJUTSU

    Sub: (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, genjutsu)


    Elemental Affinity:



    Main: (Water, fire, lightning, wind, earth)
    Main: (Water, Fire, Lightning, Wind, Earth)
    Sub:KKG ELEMENT ONLY (Ice, Wood, Steel, Boil, Lava, etc...) Kkg is your clans element.

    And your character cannot be as fast as lightning. Or so I was told when I tried that.


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    Re: Inazuma Yoshino

    Post by Echo on Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:22 am

    If you want to be a jounin you need a lot more in appearance, and more detailed clothing with more then juts a picture


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    Re: Inazuma Yoshino

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    Re: Inazuma Yoshino

    Post by Michishige on Sat Jul 10, 2010 12:21 am

    Lightning Style: Parylyzation - how do you send the lightning, is it a visible bolt through the air, or do you need to touch the person?

    Water Style: Water Cage Jutsu - how do you trap your opponent, does the water just form out of nowhere and encase them

    Lightning Style: Spark - same with the first one, do you have to touch the target to use this jutsu or what

    Electrified Water Tiger Torpedo - like kakashi's lightning tiger, to supply the electricity to it, you would have to keep keep it connected to your hand, limiting it's range, so please edit

    Perfect Aim Technuiqe - you cannot just give yourself perfect aim, aim like that takes years of practice, remove this jutsu

    Lightning Style: Lightning Strike - this would take to much chakra to create a blot of lightning and control where it comes down, either edit or remove this

    Sword Growth - you cannot physically lengthen your sword with pure chakra, please edit or remove

    Sword Torado - how does pure chakra propel a weapon at your opponent, especially a weapon as inaccurate as a sword (thrown at least)

    Sword Speed: Lightning - lightning travels at half the speed of light, only the 8 gates can give you this kind of speed, please remove this

    Sword Charge - charges it how, will it explode upon impact, or is it electrically charged to shock the opponent

    Sword Discharge - describe how large the explosion is, like how far it will reach

    Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu - you do know this jutsu takes 44 hand seals to preform right

    Lightning Hound - keeping connected to you also limits its range, please edit it to say that

    Plasma Ball - this jutsu was only done in the movie, when the person was powered by the stone of gelel, which you don't have, please remove this

    Water Bullet Jutsu - lightning added to this will not make it faster, only stronger



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    Re: Inazuma Yoshino

    Post by Michishige on Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:39 am

    Lightning Style: Parylyzation - how do you send the lightning, is it a visible bolt through the air, or do you need to touch the person?

    Water Style: Water Cage Jutsu - how do you trap your opponent, does the water just form out of nowhere and encase them

    Lightning Style: Spark - same with the first one, do you have to touch the target to use this jutsu or what

    Lightning Style: Lightning Strike - sasuke didn't make a blot of lightning strike itachi, he used himself as a lightning rod, and channeled the natural lightning at him.

    Water Dragon Bullet - this jutsu requires 44 hand seals to do, please add that in, and don't forget about it when you use it, it is a strong jutsu, but the long time required to do the seals is a fatal flaw

    Lightning Release Armor - remove this jutsu, only select people are allowed to have it now

    Electromagnetic Murder - please put a range limit on this jutsu

    Demon Fish Wave Crash - please remove this, as you do not have the hydration technique

    Shark Dance Technuiqe - how do you breath underwater?

    Huge Explosion Technuiqe - you can't turn into water



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