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    toshiro madarame

    Post by gatman on Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:03 am

    ~General Information~

    Name:toshiro madarame

    Nickname/Alias:none

    Weight:126 lb.

    Height:5'11

    Age:15

    Gender:male

    Appearance:slim/slender blue eyes blonde hair

    Clothing:very loose pants a heavy jacket with a fury hood

    Additional Outfits: none

    Personality:angry aggresive

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name:madarame

    Kekei Genkai:none

    Clan Symbol:none

    Clan History:none

    Ability Summary:none

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification:joninn

    Letter Rank:b

    Village:kirigakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main:taijutsu
    • Sub:ninjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main:water
    • Main:wind
    • Sub:lightning

    Special Characteristics:none

    ~Jutsu~

    Name:toshiro madarame
    Rank:jonnin
    Element:water
    Description:slim/slender heavy winter coat

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:unknown

    Roleplay Sample:none
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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by Kaito Jin on Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:08 am

    There has to be some history. You need a roleplay sample (Something that you will post almost everytime) Jutsu are your attacks not your looks... Sub elements are Kekkei genkai only. Jounins are ranked A. Personality needs at least 1 paragraph. Dont have a clan name if theres nothing in your clan. More appearence, or a picture.

    Sub element cannot be lightning.

    Kkg = Ice, Wood, Steel, etc. BUT YOUR CLAN must have that KKG element. and your two elements have to mix to make it. ice= wind and water, Storm = Water and Lightning. Etc.

    History has to be something like this:

    Academy Student ark: (What happned as a student)
    Genin Ark: (What happned as a genin)
    Chuunin ark:
    Jounin Ark:

    Look at someone elses approved application.


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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by gatman on Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:23 am

    ~General Information~

    Name:toshiro madarame

    Nickname/Alias:none

    Weight:126

    Height:5'11

    Age:15

    Gender:male

    Appearance:slim/slender blue eyes blonde hair

    Clothing:large black pants and a heavy coat with a fur hood

    Additional Outfits:none

    Personality:angry/aggresive

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name:madarame

    Kekei Genkai:ice

    Clan Symbol:none

    Clan History:we originate in the land of snow until recent generations

    Ability Summary:our clan has the ability to manipulate and make ice

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification:jonnin

    Letter Rank:A

    Village:kirigakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main:taijutsu
    • Sub:ninjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main:water
    • Main:wind
    • Sub:ice

    Special Characteristics:

    ~Jutsu~

    Name:white moon" (初の舞・月白)
    Rank:A
    Element:ice
    Description:denotes a circular area around my target and freezes everything within the circle from the ground upwards until it reaches the sky

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:i play a lot of roblox with kaito

    Roleplay Sample:i play the game bleach soul evoloution wich is also a forum based game


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    Post by gatman on Thu Jul 08, 2010 1:07 pm

    ~General Information~

    Name:toshiro madarame

    Nickname/Alias:lil-shiro

    Weight:126lbs

    Height:5'11

    Age:15

    Gender:male

    Appearance:toshiro is a slim guy with messy long black hair and violet eyes you never see cause their under his hair.http://s.bebo.com/app-image/6461257391/6459403897/PROFILE/i.idlestudios.com/img/q/u/08/04/13/Anime_Emo_Boy_2.jpg

    Clothing:toshiro usaually wears a tight zip up jacket.he has braclets all up his arms and wears gloves on both hands.he wears tight black pants with chains on both sides.http://s.bebo.com/app-image/6461257391/6459403897/PROFILE/i.idlestudios.com/img/q/u/08/04/13/Anime_Emo_Boy_2.jpg

    Additional Outfits:none

    Personality:toshiro is an agressive person because of his past.hes angry all the time.hes selfish he only cares for himself.but thats ok no one ever wants his hellp anyway.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name:madarame

    Kekei Genkai:Kōri no sōsa

    Clan Symbol:http://orbita.starmedia.com/animanigra/pics/ltzimi.gif

    Clan History:there clan originates in the land of snow the kekkai genkai remained unmasterd for fear of being exiled till recent generations when a man named yukoshima madarame desired power that desire forcefully made itself a dominant trait and he became clan leader and forced all tribe members to draw forth the kekkai genkai. then one day the clans worst fears of being exiled came true and the clan had to move they wandered the world in search of a home when they came to prospiice nation called the land of water they settled into a village called kirigakure soon after the clan arrived several of them became ninja of the village and three years after settleing there the clan leader passed away and the clan was exited to return to there old ways but then some men in the village decided they liked the lives they led and decided they would have a tournement to decide who would be clan leader.a man named toshiro though only ten years old emerged victorious and passed the clan leadership on to his father yukakku who was never able to learn the secret to the kekkai genkai.

    Ability Summary:his clan has the ability to manipulate and make ice and snow from water and the moisture in the air into any shape or form the please

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification:Chunnin

    Letter Rank:B

    Village:kirigakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:



    Main:kenjutsu

    Sub:taijutsu

    Elemental Affinity:



    Main:water

    Main:wind

    Sub:ice


    Special Characteristics:

    ~Jutsu~

    Name:white moon" (初の舞・月白)
    Rank:C
    Element:ice
    Description:denotes a circular area around my target and freezes everything within the circle from the ground upwards until it reaches the sky

    Name: white ripple (次の舞・白漣
    Rank:A
    Element:ice
    Description: fires a massive wave of ice

    Name:white sword 参の舞・白刀,
    Rank:B
    Element:ice
    Description:forms a blade of ice out of both hands that can cut through skin like its butter.

    Name:White Tree 樹白
    Rank:B
    Element:ice
    Description:i stab the ground which creates a trail of ice in the direction of my intended target
    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:
    birth ark: from the moment toshiro was born his clan knew he was special.he was the genius among genius's.his mother died at birth which gave him a horrible case of deppresion the clan try'd there hardest to make him happy but all attempts failed from a young age he took on the ways and teachings of the clan he became more powerful than the clan elders who have had that power there whole life.

    academy arc.when toshiro was at the academy he never talked much he was the top of his class in all subjects although he acceled in taijutsu at an unusaul rate he later picked up a sword and was fairly good with it he mat a man with a large sword one day and asked to learn how to handle a blade the man said yes but only after he graduated the accademy.toshiro was very anctious to graduate so he could go off and learn from the man there was still about two months till graduation so he waited it out putting forth little effort twords his work.after two long months toshiro graduated the accademy top of his class.

    gennin arc.after becoming a gennin toshiro left to take up the teachings of a great swordsman the swordsman used a large sword but toshiro decided he much rather would like to use two swords they started training right after the academy graduation they started training in kirigakure the swordsman later was assigned a mission where he decided to take toshiro toshiro was exited because this would be his first mission they set off on there quest to the village hidden in the grass they were to transport a peace document to the leader of the grass village.it would take six days the swordsmen said before we departed about three hours into the journey we were ambushed by about six or seven rain ninja the swordsman told me to stay back while he took care of the scum but i was anxious to fight so i took my swords and the swordsman decided to let me take on one of the weaker looking ones he didnt turn out to be much of a challenge so i made quik work of him so i could watch the swordsman he took down all five of them in less than two minutes it was remarkable.we set off from there and were ambushed several times on the way nothing we couldnt manage we reached the hidden grass and got the signature and went back to the village were we learned there was a chunnin exam in a week and the swordsman talked the mizukage into letting me in without a squad he was confident i didnt need one it was fairly easy to pass the exam because i later figured out i was training with one of the swordsman of the hidden mist.i was amazed that all that time i didnt know.after that i was driven to surpass the swordsman and passed the exam easily.i was awarded the rank of chunnin and went off for more training.

    chunnin arc.i developed a new jutsu to make carrying around my two swords unnessesary it made a blade of ice come out of each hand the other chunnin all went back to there squads while i was granted the the honor of being able to do missions and train on my own.i was assigned a mission and completed it quikly to get back to training.and i am currently training trying to surrpass my sensei.

    Roleplay Sample:i was walking along one day in the land of fire when something caught my eye.i proceeded to investigate it seemed to be some sort of animal it was to cut up for me to tell what kind of animal.so i walked on cautiously.i was walking along when soon enough i passed by someone who looked like a rain ninja.we crossed paths subtley eyeing eachother.i saw him reaching for his kunai pouch so i quikly executed the hand sings required."White Moon jutsu!"he was rushing at me and in an instant he was frozen.i chizzled him out after an our or so.and left him there.*the leaf ninja can take care of him*i thought and continued on my path home.


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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by Kaito Jin on Thu Jul 08, 2010 5:28 pm

    You can have more then one jutsu, I have around 46 - 50. And next time, click Edit instead of posting an entire new thing.


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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by gatman on Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:15 pm

    yeah i figured that out
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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by Echo on Thu Jul 08, 2010 11:19 pm

    If you want to be a Jounin you will need a better app then this..more detail into everything.


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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by gatman on Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:58 pm

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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by Echo on Sat Jul 10, 2010 3:35 pm

    Sorry but i still don't feel that this is worth Jounin.


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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by Kaito Jin on Sat Jul 10, 2010 6:23 pm

    You might want to... Re-grammarize the thing? and add more then one sentence to history, if you want to be a jounin you should have at least a paragraph for each one.


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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by gatman on Sun Jul 11, 2010 5:50 am

    i was tired when i wrote the thin sorry
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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by gatman on Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:15 am

    i switched it to chunnin
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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by gatman on Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:51 am

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    Re: toshiro madarame

    Post by Kaito Jin on Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:55 am

    Umm, I hope thats not how you roleplay... Your grammar: i walked through the field.i was busy at night.i had fun.

    Good grammar: I walked through the field. I was busy at night. I had fun.

    everything else looks pretty good though, so ask monica or zodiark for approval.


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