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    Harumi Hana Application [[Finished!]]

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    Yami Kurushimi
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    Harumi Hana Application [[Finished!]]

    Post by Yami Kurushimi on Thu Jun 24, 2010 2:26 pm

    ~General Information~

    Name:
    Harumi(=spring beauty) Hana (=Flower)

    Nickname/Alias:
    None

    Weight:
    110,23 lbs / 50 kg

    Height:
    5,5774 ft / 170 cm

    Age:
    17

    Gender:
    Female

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    Clothing:
    She wears a black long dress with black military boots which go slightly below her knees. She wears high black socks which go up until her legs. Her nails are painted purple and instead of wearing a headband she wears a ring with the Suna symbol on it. The dress is colored in different colors. Around her waist is a belt wrapped and around her sleeves as well.

    Personality:
    Harumi is a very nice person and cares about other people. She is always smiling and kind to anyone. She is very mature and it takes a lot to annoy her. She isn’t naïve and thinks before she speaks or does something. Some would say, judging from her appearance and kindness, that she is sensitive. This, however, is not the case. Harumi is not sensitive at all she never shows her real emotions and prefers to let them think that she is happy. She can be stubborn but when needed she makes concessions. She is a loyal friend and would die for her friends’ sake. She isn’t selfish and always puts others needs first. Harumi respects people above her but she is not afraid to speak her mind, no matter who is standing in front of her. She is a good leader but prefers to go on missions on her own so others won’t be in danger. Harumi is intelligent and calm the most time. Someone would very rarely see her angry or rude. But when she is angry, you better run. She is an optimistic person who never gives up no matter what. She is also very creative and talented in drawing. When in danger she can be harsh to her comrades but that is only because she is afraid they might die. On the battlefield all her sweetness and kindness is gone and she becomes a ruthless bloodthirsty killer.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name:
    Hana (= Flower)

    Kekkei Genkai:
    The Future Telling Eye

    Clan Symbol:
    Spoiler:

    The adults of the clan get the clan symbol tattoed on a body part.

    Clan History:
    About 600 to 800 years ago, a simple man was sitting in front of a lake. Then suddenly scream reached his ears and he instantly stood up, walking towards the noise. There he saw a beautiful Nymph with long blue hair. She was being held captive by some mysterious man. The simple man ran towards the nymph taking down the men who were threatening her. The Nymph grateful for the man’s help, offered him a wish. He could have whatever he desired. The man had no family or friends whatsoever and he was totally alone on his long journeys, she he asked her to accompany him through his travels. The Nymph agreed and so they were travelling from country to country for many years. The Nymph was also teaching the man about plants and medics. As time passed by they slowly fell in love and finally returned to the lake were they first met in order to marry. The Nymph’s parents, however, did not want their only daughter to marry a mortal, so they chased him away. Since the Nymph truly loved the man she went with him to his home village, Konohagakure. There they married and lived for the rest of their lives. No one however knew that the man’s wife was a Nymph. The Nymphs were always being hunt down for their wings and blood as both contained a substance which was able to heal any injury. The man and Nymph had many children. Their children had the appearance of a Human but the powers of the Nymphs. When the children turned 21 they were considered adults and had their wings given. Since the Nymph was immortal and the man mortal, the children were not completely immortal neither completely mortal. They could still die but they didn’t age. They looked always like 17. Those children could still die if injured or attacked.


    Ability Summary:

    The Future Telling Eye


    The future telling eye, is a Doujutsu that makes the user capable of predicting, things that will happen. It also shows random things which the user can not control. This Doujutsu needs a large amount of chakra thus it is very tiring especially for a Genin.


    Future Telling Eye: Deactivated.

    Spoiler:

    This Doujutsu is easily distinguishable because of its colours and shapes within the eye. It can do nothing special. Most people tend to avoid clan members because of its appearance.

    Future Telling Eye: Activated.

    Spoiler:

    The user's eyes become green and blue with green and blue butterfly wings surrounding it. If the user looks the victim in the eyes he/she can see random thoughts and emotions of the user. (Ex. if he is nervous, happy, sad)It also allows the user too see, whenever he/she wants in slow motion so she/he can dodge attacks more easily. It can also work as a sensing tool, with it the user can feel when someone is molding chakra, and sense a nearby presence. This varies from the user's skills, experience, chakra amount and rank. The time limit is 3 posts for Genin, 4 posts for Chunin, 5 posts for Jounin and 6 posts for Kage.

    Future Telling Ability: Activated.

    Spoiler:

    The user's eyes become black with cat-like pupils. Around the eyes black lines are formed. With it the user can see everything he could see with the Future Telling Eye: Activated. but additionally he can see the future. If the user is inexperienced random pictures will pop into his head. If the user, however, is skilled enough he can see the future of the person he concentrates on (He can see whatever the other person wants to know).If the user is good at drawing, he/she can draw the pictures. The user can even see the past. This ability, however, is limited. The user can only see the past from his birth and after.


    The Tracker Eye

    Spoiler:

    With this stage the user can even track another Ninja. If he activates that ability he will se everything in black and white except of purple/pink heat lines. These lines are the markings from the Ninja the user wants to find. If the lines are purple the Ninja has passed from there a long time ago. If the lines are pink the Ninja is probably still there.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification:
    ANBU

    Letter Rank:
    A

    Village:
    Sunagakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:
    Main: Ninjutsu
    Sub: Genjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:
    Water
    Earth

    Special Characteristics:
    Extremely skilled in Medical Ninjutsu and almost perfect use of her Kekkei Genkai.


    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:
    Birth arc:
    Harumi was born in Konohagakure on the 1 May. That is why she was given that name. Harumi was a rather loud and difficult child who would cry the whole night long. She didn’t like human food and thus her mother had to travel back to the lake in order to make her Nymph food. As she grew her parents noticed that she was especially skilled in handling with flowers since whenever she would touch an almost dead flower, it would come back to life.

    Academy arc:
    When she was 6 she entered the Academy. She didn’t care about learning how to kill another being but she was still good at it since that was what her parents and teachers expected. Harumi made many friends among them some boys too. Because of her beauty and intelligence she was admired and popular. Everyone wanted to befriend her and Harumi enjoyed that. She was at the top of her class in almost everything. The only things she had problems with were Taijutsu and attacking another class comrade. From her first year at the Academy one could see that Harumi detested to kill or even to hurt fellow people. From a young age she had decided to become a Medical Ninja in order to be able to help other people.

    Genin arc:
    When she was 10 she graduated from the Academy, being the best of her class. After the graduation ceremony Harumi returned home waiting for her parents to congratulate her. That however was not the case. She stepped into the house only to find blood on the floor and walls. She heard her mother scream: Run Harumi! It didn’t take long for Harumi to react and she ran away from the village, away from her home, away from her parents who are already dead. She was travelling for days around disorientated and scared that those Jounin would find her. Everything in her body was screaming to turn back but she knew that she would die too. There was nothing she could do. Suddenly she collapsed in front of a gate. Then a Ninja, who appeared to be from the village hidden in the Sand, approached her and took her in. He brought her to his home and treated her. This man was a medical Jounin. As soon as Harumi woke up she asked were she was and who he was and the man told her everything what happened. Since then Harumi lives with this man and he teaches her medical Ninjutsu. Harumi became a Ninja of the sand, developing hatred towards Konohagakure. The young girl had changed. She no longer cared about human life and did not hesitate to take lives. Harumi activated her Kekkei Genkai The Future Telling Eye. With it she couldn’t fail a mission. She took up drawing lessons in order to be able to manifest her visions.

    Chuunin arc:
    Harumi, at the age of 15, participated at the Chuunin exams being the only one who survived from her team. The Kazekage saw her potential and made her a Chuunin. Harumi was spending her time at the research centre in order to find antidotes to poisons and illnesses. She successfully neutralized some poisons and developed new, more dangerous, allowing Sunagakure to decrease its casualties in case of a war. Harumi was being sent on missions, not failing one. Once she was sent on a mission involving Konoha Ninja. She came back, her face and clothes covered in blood, delivering to the Kazekage the scroll he needed with a wide smile on her face. It looked like she was proud of herself. The other day a squad was sent to see why Harumi was bloodstained and the Ninja discovered an area full of blood and cut off body parts of the Konoha Ninja. The Kazekage was thrilled by her blood thirst for Konoha and decided to take advantage of this. He sent Harumi on missions in which it was reassured that she would have to fight Konoha ninja. Every time she came back she was bloodstained with a big smile on her face.

    Jounin arc:
    She became Jounin rather easily . As a Jounin she trained harder her Kekkei Genkai. Harumi expanded her knowledge on plants and poisons. She still came back from missions with a big smile always successful. She took on a squad and her students became all skilled Medical Ninja. Harumi continued researching differnt poisons and illnesses and found some antidotes. The kage was keeping her close as she was concidered precious for the village. One day the Kage sent her on a difficult mission even for a Jounin. No ANBUS were available and so she had to go. Harumi came back wounded but still alive. The Kage was thrilled by that accomplishment and so promoted her to an ANBU.

    ANBU arc:
    [[In progress]]


    Roleplay Sample: :

    ‘‘Sis, Sis look what I drew!'' the little girl shouted happily.
    ''Hm? Oh that’s very beautiful honey!'' the older girl said with a smile.
    See? This is Daddy'' she said pointing at a figure with brown hair ''this is me'' she said pointing at a little girl with long brown-blonde hair and big golden eyes ''and this is you!'' pointing once again at a young girl with purple hair and brown eyes.
    ''Wow Miya you are only 4 and yet you have so much talent! Maybe you should start taking lessons!'' the purple haired girl said with honesty.
    ''Really do you mean that sis?'' the little girl's eyes widened in surprise.
    ''Sure. Now lets go to bed it's pretty late you know. And tomorrow is a very special day . Do you know what tomorrow is, Miya?'' the older girl said leading her younger sister to her room
    ''Yes yes it's my 5th birthday!!'' Miya said as she lay in her bed covering herself with a blanket.
    ''Right right and how much is 5?
    Miya held up her right hand to show how much 5 was.
    ''This much!'' Miya said with a big smile revealing her tooth gap.
    ''That’s right! Now goodnight sissy. Have a nice dream!'' the brown eyed girl said giving her sister a kiss on the forehead. She walked out of the room closing the door behind her.


    ''My Lord that was the last villager'' a female voice said as a dead body fell on the ground.
    ''Good, very good'' a snake-like voice said.
    ''You remember your promise, don't you?'' asked the girl a little worried.
    ''Of course. I will not harm your sister. As promised she will live.'' he answered with a fake smile.
    ''And as exchange I will come with you...'' the brown-eyed girl ended his sentence sadly.
    ''That is right...Now lets go we have a lot of things to do'' he said, chuckling.
    The two bloodstained figures disappeared from the scene, leaving behind a blood drunken village.


    The sun was shining upon Miya's face, causing her to wake up. Already morning..? she thought stretching her arms and walking towards the door. She walked towards the kitchen only waiting for her sister to jump out and shout HAPPY BIRTHDAY MIYA. But...she wasn't there. Not even Sayoko her babysitter was there. Where is everyone? she thought searching the whole house with no luck. Suddenly she smelled a strange smell which was coming from outside. It smelled like bad eggs. She went outside screamed as she saw everywhere lying dead bodies and blood. So much blood...She started crying searching for someone who was alive, screaming for help but no one would answer. What happened?! Why is everyone.... she couldn't even think it. Then out of nowhere an Oinin from the village hidden in the mist appeared in front of the girl.
    ''Miya is that you?'' said the woman. She was approximately in her late twenties.
    ''Who...Who are you?!'' Miya asked scared, backing off. The woman took of her mask revealing her green eyes and shoulder long black hair.
    ''It's me, Azumi.''The woman replied, a worried smile on her lips.
    ''Auntie!'' Miya screamed running towards her aunt hugging her. ‘‘Everyone.....Everyone...''was all the little girl could say between the cries.
    ''Shh...Everything will be fine... Its okay...Shh...'' Azumi said patching the girl's had softly.


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    Re: Harumi Hana Application [[Finished!]]

    Post by Yami Kurushimi on Thu Jun 24, 2010 9:48 pm

    Taijutsu


    Name: Dance of the lethal Cosmo
    Rank: C
    Element: Taijutsu
    Description: The user jumps into the air spinning around himself kicking the opponent. Then the user lands on his feet and jumps again at the opponent, who is dizzy from the previous kicks, and kicks him at the head.

    Name: Dance of the Graceful Lilly
    Rank: C
    Element: Taijutsu
    Description: The user jumps on the opponent kicking his chest and then with the other leg he aims for the opponent’s head.
    .
    Name: Dance of the shy Violet
    Rank: C
    Element: Taijutsu
    Description: The user kicks the opponent two times and then grabs his arm, throwing him over the user’s shoulder.

    Ninjutsu

    Name: Giant Rose Queen
    Rank: B-A
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: A gigantic rose will appear and from its stalk the thorns will attack the opponent. The amount of the thorns vary from the rank
    B: 50
    A: 100


    Name: Flower Clone
    Rank: C
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: The user forms the necessary hand signs and a clone out of Flowers is made. This clone is solid and can perform Jutsu. When hit, it will dissolve into flowers which flutter around the opponent and distract him

    Name: Tree Transformation
    Rank: B
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: The user transforms into a tree. It is useful to hide from the enemy.

    Name:Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

    Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

    Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

    Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Replacement Technique)
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

    Name: Kai (Release)
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

    Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker)
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description:[/b] Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

    Name:Kage Shuriken no Jutsu (Technique of the Shadow Shuriken)
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description:The Ninja throws with two consecutive Shuriken at the enemy, so that one of the thrown weapons is in the shadow of the other. The aim of this technique is to draw the attention of the opponent on the first Shuriken, so that the enemy only notices the second Shuriken when it is too late for an evasive maneuver.

    [/b]Name:[/b] Sō Shuriken no Jutsu (Shuriken manipulation technique)
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description: It is a technique in which the user throws very quickly two giant shuriken on the opponent.


    Clan-Jutsu

    Name: Metamorphosis.
    Rank: C-A
    Clan: Hana
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: This Ninjutsu allows wings to grow out of his/her back which are very big. Out of the wings a poisonous gas comes and when the apponent inhales it they are paralyzed for a short amount of time.The user is not affected as he takes an antidote. Those wings can be used to fly short distances, as it is very chakra draining. This Jutsu is mostly used when the user is inside the cocoon, as the user would need protection for the metamorphosis.


    Name: Protective Healing Cocoon
    Rank: C-S
    Clan: Hana
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: Out of the user’s body chakra strings appear which embrace the user and a cocoon is formed. In this cocoon the user can be healed and transform into a creature with wings. The cocoon is very hard and if its S ranked it is nearly impossible to break it.


    Name: Butterfly dissolve
    Rank: C
    Clan: Hana
    Element: Genjutsu
    Description: The user creates butterflies and then the butterflies turn into needles which cut the opponent. Since its a Genjutsu the cuts are not real.


    Name: Dance of the beautiful Rose
    Rank: B-A
    Clan: Hana
    Element: Genjutsu
    Description: Millions of rose petals appear on the battlefield and the user will disappear. Then the rose petals will fly straight at the opponent and cut him. Then a Gigantic rose will appear from under the opponent and swallow him. When the Genjutsu is over the opponent will be in great shock and faint.

    Medical Ninjutsu

    Name: Shosen Jutsu
    Rank: A
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: The Shosen Jutsu allows the user to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to his hands. The better the user is trained, the worse wounds he can heal.

    Name : Chakra no Mes (Chakra Scalpel)
    Rank: A
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: It is a special Ninjutsu which Iryonin use. Typically this Jutsu is used for operations but can also be used in combats. Once the Ninja formed the necessary hand signs, he focuses his chakra into his hands. With this the user can cut the opponent’s muscles and blood vessels and then the enemy is paralyzed. The opponent can even die.

    Name: Inyu Shōmetsu (阴 愈伤 灭, "Secret healing injury destruction)
    Rank: A
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: Inyu Shōmetsu is a healing art with which the user can create new cells in wounds, leading to rapid healing. It is also possible in the battle to focus the healing process aimed at the body site to which the enemy with his attack targets, which reduces the damage to a minimum.

    Name: Saikan Chūshutsu no Jutsu (Technique of critical illness extraction)
    Rank: B
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: Saikan Chūshutsu Poison is drawn out of the body of a person with the help of chakra and water. Since the poison is extracted directly, you can examine it and thus produce an antidote.

    Name: Chikatsu Saisei no Jutsu (Healing life force regeneration)
    Rank: A
    Element: Ninjutsu
    Description: Chikatsu Saisei is an advanced medical Jutsu, which uses parts of the victim’s body to rebuild the cells in the damaged area. The greater the injury is, the longer the process. The injured person is placed in a ritual square. One Iryonin its on a corner of the square to support the chakra control while another leads the process.

    Water

    Name : Suiton • Baku Suishouha
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water.

    Name: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

    Name: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu
    [b ] Rank: [/b] A
    Element: Water
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

    Name : Suiton • Haran Banshou
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description: it is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will create a waterfall to slam into her opponent.

    Name: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

    Name: Suiton • Mizurappa
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.

    Name: Suiton • Suigadan
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.

    Name: Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu
    Rank: B
    Element: Water
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.

    Name: Suiton • Suiun Suishi no Jutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source.


    Earth

    Name: Doton • Dochuu Eigyo
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: The user hides within the earth.

    Name: Doton • Dochuu Senkou
    Rank: C
    Element: Earth
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth.

    Name: Doton • Doro Gaeshi
    Rank: C
    Element
    Description: It is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

    Name: Doton • Doryuusou no Jutsu
    Rank: B
    Element: Earth
    Description. It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, spears of stone will raise from the ground to pierce the target. The technique can be countered by an opponent who hardens their body with a stronger Earth Element Jutsu.

    Name: Doton • Ganban Kyuu
    Rank: B
    Element: Earth
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will generate plates of rock which will rise from around his target, entomb and then crush them. A ninja skilled in Earth Element abilities can avoid being crushed and emerge from the coffin.

    Name: Doton • Ganchuusou
    Rank: B
    Element: Earth
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. With this technique, the user can generate spears of rock which can rise up and impale the target.

    Name: Doton • Iwagakure
    Rank: B
    Element. : Earth
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This Jutsu allows the user to change their appearance by blending and merging with the surrounding rock. This allows the ninja to move unseen, which assists in attack and escape.

    Name: Doton • Iwa Yado Kuzushi
    Rank: B
    Element: Earth
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whoever is trapped inside.

    Name: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Earth
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground

    Name: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu
    Rank: D
    Element: Earth
    Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.


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    Post by Yami Kurushimi on Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:12 pm


    Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu ( "Demons illusion: Technique of hell representation")
    Rank: C
    Element: N/A
    Description:It is a technique in which one can create an illusion in which the victim has to endure images of his/her worst fear that his/her own mind produces.


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    Post by Echo on Sat Jun 26, 2010 8:44 am

    Add a limit for how long you can keep the fortune telling eye activated. Seeing the future is something that most Naruto sites banned since you can see everything that is coming, avoid it, and reply with a deadlier attack before the attack even comes.

    And the death eye is sort of..metagamingish here. Seeing something that would be impossible to know.
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    Post by Echo on Sat Jun 26, 2010 8:44 am

    You can only have 2 S rank jutsu.

    The ones that say C-S, or anything that reaches S counts as one S rank since it can reach that power. And just a few jutsu problems.

    Also, your KKG is a Doujutsu..So you really should only have Genjutsu clan techniques. It doesn't say anything about petal release which is what a lot of your clan jutsu is.

    Name: Metamorphosis.

    I don't understand how it paralyzes someone if they simply touch it..unless they are cut by it maybe, or it has a constant electricity flowing around it.

    Name: Butterfly Escape

    It doesn't say how you reappear, where you reappear, of even if you reappear lol. Also, the butterflies are just chakra right?

    Name: Protective Healing Cocoon

    A chakra force can always be resisted. If a strong enough hit hits the cocoon it will break, just like Gaara's sand cocoon.

    Name: Future: Dissolve

    Unapproved for metagame reasons
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    Post by Echo on Sat Jun 26, 2010 8:44 am

    Approved

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