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    Noche [Finished]



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    Noche [Finished]

    Post by Noche on Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:45 am

    ~General Information~

    Name: Noche Karladbolg

    Nickname/Alias: The Immortal Regis

    Weight: 175

    Height: 5' 10"

    Age: 742

    Gender: Male

    Noche is on the right, with Depore to the left

    Noche is a man of average height and weight. Noche has long black hair that reaches down to his thighs. His eyes a deep crimson. His jacket is a deep brown, accented by orange stripes. His pants match the shade of his jacket, with a thing orange pin stripe running down the seam of each leg. His sandals are almost like shoes, but are cut off, leaving his toes open. On his left hand he has two rings. The one on his ring finger is a large rectangle covering from the base of his finger to the first joint, with a cross covering it. The second ring on his pinky, is a smaller one of a standard iron cross.

    Additional Outfits: N/A

    Personality: Noche can sometime come of as crazy to others due to his constant talking to himself. He is in love with his sword, or at least the woman inside of it. He is a power obsessed person, doing whatever is needed in his quest to be the king of the world. While being a rather violent person when alone, he changes into a kinder, more reserved person when Depore is present in her human form.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Karladbolg

    Kekei Genkai: Daiyagara

    Clan Symbol:

    Clan History:
    When the clan was founded, it was unknown how they came to learn about or form their KKG. Due to the unique and valuable nature of the diamonds, the clan became very wealthy. As time wore on, the villagers realized that theses diamonds were not natural, but formed through synthetic means. As a result, the kage at the time had them stripped them of the small fortune they had amassed and banned them from creating diamonds for the purpose of selling. As a result, they turned their efforts on creating a strong ninja clan.

    Ability Summary:
    Mixture of the heat of fire chakra and the power of earth jutsu to change and compress other elements into any shape of diamond. While unable to shape diamond like it is able to with earth jutsu, those of the clan are able to control them after the have been formed, such as creating a diamond sword for use in combat.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Missing-nin

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Kurogakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Medical ninjutsu
    • Sub: Kenjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Earth
    • Main: Fire
    • Sub: Diamond

    Special Characteristics: His sentient sword named Depore

    Rank: S

    Owner: Noche


    Length: 5'

    Width: blade at it's thickest - 7"
    thinest - 5"

    Material: Made of pure chakra, making the sword impossible to break. The jewel is a simple crystal.

    Weight: 10 lbs.

    Abilities: Grants the user enhanced strength, making their body seem weightless. Can grant the user a form of immortality by removing the owners heart and binding into the stone. Protecting the owner from aging and poisons and diseases. Besides entirely obliterating the owner's body, the only way to kill the person after they have bonded with the stone is to kill Depore.

    Info: Depore was a powerful kenjutsu master of her time. Known for her ever unbeaten record, she was revered across the land as "Destruction's Voice". Fearing her power they were unable to best her in combat, so they tricked her, and sealed her into a tiny jewel. Since than, she had waited countless ages until someone would come along. Due to being a being of pure chakra now, she has three forms, a jewel, a large sword, and her original human form.


    Name: Chakra no Mesu - Chakra Scalpel
    Rank: B
    Element: N/A
    Description: Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.

    Name: Domu - Earth Spear
    Rank: B
    Element: Earth
    Description: After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

    Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
    Rank: B
    Element: Earth
    Description: After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

    Name: Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
    Rank: B
    Element: Earth
    Description: The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

    Name: Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears
    Rank: A
    Element: Earth
    Description: After forming the needed hand seals, spears of stone will raise from the ground to pierce the target. The technique can be countered by an opponent who hardens their body with a stronger Earth Element jutsu.

    Name: Inyu Shometsu - Secret Healing Injury Destruction
    Rank: A
    Element: N/A
    Description: Focusing his chakra to an area to be hit, he can begin the cell creation process the moment the area becomes injured. This ability to activate his cells and create new ones is the very reason why Orochimaru favored Kabuto's talents.

    Name: Ranshinshou - Chaotic Mental Collision
    Rank: A
    Element: N/A
    Description: Changing the chakra in her hand into an electricity, Tsunade can create an electric field to disrupt her targets nervous system. Because the brain and body communicate using electrical impulses, Tsunade can use the field to disrupt her targets ability to move. What results is commands to move one body part being relayed to another, making it near impossible for them to move unless they have high skill and understanding of the body.

    Name:Shousen Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique
    Rank: A
    Element: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the ninja is highly skilled, they are able to heal more critical injuries. Highly skilled medical-Nins such as Tsunade can use their techniques to perform surgeries that otherwise would not be possible.

    Name: Daiyagara creation
    Rank: A
    Element: Diamond
    Description: Using his KKG, Noche is able to form diamonds in any shape he chooses underground. He can than bring them to the surface either as a surprise attack, a defensive wall, or a tool for Noche to use in combat. Being diamonds, these creations are extremely difficult to break, being made of the hardest substance on earth.

    Name: Daiyagara wall
    Rank: B
    Element: Diamond
    Description: Using his KKG, Noche will for a large diamond wall underground, that will shoot up from below the surface to deflect an on coming attack. Being made of diamond, this wall is extremely difficult to break through.

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:
    As a child, Noche lived an average life. His parents were kind, yet firm, never mistreated him, yet kept him in his place when he got out of line. He lived his life as a middle class commoner, never knowing wealth, yet never having to suffer from poverty. Throughout his academy years, his scores reflected his position in life. Even when he put all his effort into his work, he could not do more than show himself as an average ninja. When he finally graduated, he was happy to have a new jounin that would help him to be stronger, yet was worried, that he would never be more than average. His mediocrity is what drove him forward, always trying to become stronger to prove he was the best.

    Under the leadership of his new teacher, Noche was able to improve his talents. He became proficient as the team's medical support, along with developing his skills as a swordsman. While he was not a phenomenal healer, he was undoubtedly an undeniably important asset to his team's success. For a time, things were uneventful. His team went on missions, they completed them time after time, even if they had to scrape by by the skin of their teeth.
    After two years of being in his squad, his leading jounin finally decided to nominate the three of them for their chuunin exams. By this time, Noche had developed both his medical skills and swordsmanship to a lethal leve, even being able to combine the two arts into a deadly mix. Proud with his skills, Noche accepted the challenge.

    The chuunin exams proved harder for Noche than he had expected. He had barely been able to survive and be promoted to chuunin, but one of his teammates was not as fortunate. During the tournament style exams, his friend Jae Huyk was killed by his opponent. Saddened, Noche continued on without him, losing in the finals, but being promoted all the same.
    It was during his time as a chuunin where Noche would find the means to achieve his end. He was sent on an B ranked mission, an assassination of a local daimyo who had been stirring up trouble for his village. Due to lack of funding, his village was unable to pay the proper amount to pay for an B rank mission, so in return they promised Noche that he could take anything of value from the daimyo's estate that he wished. Upon completion of his mission, Noche ventured around the giant house. He found some interesting items, but nothing of value. Coming to the study, he found a large collection of scrolls. Among them was a map, leading to a deserted part of the country, that he wouldn't be able to reach at his current skill. Keeping the scroll, he returned to his village.

    After his success with the assassination, the village began testing his abilities by sending him on progressive more difficult missions. As his skills increased, the missions seemed to get easier and easier. At the age of 20, he was finally promoted to jounin. Feeling he finally had the strength and skill needed, he gathered up his tools, rolled out his map, and headed out to find the treasure it lead to. Coming to a secludded cave hidden in what appeared to be an extinct volcano crater, it was easy to see why nobody had discovered the area by chance. Entering the cave, Noche found a small shrine within it. It seemed like a shrine used to honor deceased loved ones, but instead of a picture in the middle, there was a small jewel, no larger than a ping pong ball. Picking up the jewel, Noche noticed a seal under it. But before he could get a closer look at it, and arm grew out of the tag, followed by a stone clone of himself. Caught off guard, the clone attacked. Noche would have died there, but instead when he opened his eyes, an enormous sword had cleaved the clone in two. Standing over him was a a girl who couldn't be any more than 15. She wore small bits of plate armor, her blue-white hair flowing behind her. Her one arm loosely wrapped around Noche's neck, the other holding the sword that cleaved the clone in two.
    She turned Noche around and pulled his close as she whispered to him. "I like you, you smell of death. So I won't give it to anyone else." She slid the handle of the sword into his hand, and despite it being so large, it felt like it weighed nothing at all, and like he had been using it for so many years before. Looking up the girl had vanished, but in his head, he could still hear her speaking. "Even though you want to live so much, even though you want so much power, I'll give it all to you, so long as you will always be mine." The sword in his hand faded away, leaving nothing but the jewel had had picked up in the palm of his hand.

    The Disease
    After years of using the odd stone, Noche had discovered that the stone was called Depore, named after the woman who was sealed inside it centuries ago. Like Samehada, it was a sword that choose it's owner. And this time, it had chosen Noche. The two grew closer and closer as time passed. Using his new found power, Noche quickly grew in strength, quickly taking a place as the strongest jounin in the village. The stone had given him so much power, that it was even thought he could rival the kage. His reign as the strongest was short lived. Like most of the world, he was stricken with an unknown disease. Without any cure, he was reduced to a weak man confined to his bed. As he lay there, Depore again appeared before him, appearing the same as she did the first time she came to him. She laid her hand over his heart and spoke softly to him "I told you my power is yours, even the power to live." As he motioned for her to do as he needed, Depore's hand slipped through his chest as Noche screamed in pain. Pulling out his heart, he laid there screaming and writhing in pain. Take his heart, Depore held next to the stone she had been sealed in. As the stone grew around the heart and shrunk back to its original size, Noche began to calm, as he returned to how he was before he fell ill. "Noche, you and I are now one. Your body is now linked to this stone. You will live through the ages, yet never know death. So long as you keep this stone by your side." Placing the stone in his hand, she again faded away.

    The Immortal Regis
    Centuries later, the plague that had afflicted him, had ravaged his land. Over the ages, he and Depore lived, unchanged and immune to the disease. Over the ages, Noche had honed his skills to become the stuff of legend. To keep himself alive, he had Depore's stone implanted into his right hand, showing as a deep purple stone bulging from the back of his hand and his palm. Returning to his ruined village, Noche made his way to the collapsed kage's office. Using the rubble, Noche created a thrown where the building once stood. Sitting down in it, Depore appeared laying across his lap looking up at him. "Here is where we will start our empire Depore. Me the immortal king, you as my queen."

    Roleplay Sample:

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    Letter Rank: S
    Classification: Mizukage

    Re: Noche [Finished]

    Post by Echo on Mon Jul 19, 2010 10:57 pm

    The first few things i see.

    You cant start as S rank. And this app wont be approved until a Kuraikage is made.

    For your KKG history, the history cant be lost in time out of RP. It may be lost in time in RP but the history is never lost outside of RP.



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    Re: Noche [Finished]

    Post by Noche on Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:10 am


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