Shattered Dreams

Welcome to Naruto: Shattered Dreams. You may get started by logging in, or creating an account.

The world in chaos. A fight to the death. The future once more. Do you have what it takes to rebuild the Ninja dream?

At the moment the site is closed. Sorry!

Shattered Dreams

Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

A New Chapter

Log in

I forgot my password

Who is online?

In total there are 2 users online :: 0 Registered, 0 Hidden and 2 Guests

None


[ View the whole list ]


Most users ever online was 35 on Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:10 pm

Latest topics

» Bend THIS! An AU Avatar Forum
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptyTue Oct 08, 2013 2:20 am by Guest

» Republic City: Thread of Fate
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptyTue Aug 27, 2013 7:13 pm by Guest

» Naruto: Tales of the Shinobi [Relaunched AU Naruto RP]
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptyThu Jul 18, 2013 2:38 am by Guest

» Naruto Way of the Ninja 3.5
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptySat Apr 27, 2013 1:28 am by Guest

» Deadly Crows: A Fairy Tale RPG
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptyMon Apr 22, 2013 1:24 am by Guest

» RPG Haven - A place to roleplay your heart out!
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptyFri Apr 12, 2013 9:33 pm by Guest

» Naruto Mirage
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptyTue Apr 09, 2013 2:24 pm by Guest

» Deadly Crows: A Fairy Tail RP
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptySat Mar 16, 2013 9:26 pm by Guest

» Saigen Academy
Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] EmptyWed Mar 06, 2013 9:58 pm by Guest

Konohagakure~


Hokage: Cicera
Durability: 100%
Funds: N/A

Kirigakure~


Mizukage: Revy Izumi
Durability: 100%
Funds: N/A


Some content here has been used from some sites such as Narutopedia, and thus, belong to their respective creators.

Any creations, posts, and ideas from this site are copyrighted to their respective owners. Therefore, information may not be taken or used without their permission. Failing to abide is plagiarism, and the perpetrator will be tracked, and punished accordingly.
© All Rights Reserved.

Creative Commons License
This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.
Protected by Copyscape Online Copyright Protection Software

Staff Online


4 posters

    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    avatar
    Amechi


    Posts : 14
    Ryō : 4384
    Join date : 2010-07-22

    Shinobi ID
    Village:
    Letter Rank:
    Classification:

    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] Empty Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    Post by Amechi Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:03 am

    ~General Information~

    Name: Arashi Kiyoko

    Nickname/Alias: Arashi

    Weight: 120

    Height: 5'6"

    Age: 13

    Gender: Male

    Appearance and Clothing/Outfits
    Spoiler:

    Personality: Arashi is one who loves to train but doesnt do well in a team. He usually has a smile, will do anything to save a friend, and is a very good listener. Arashi is very smart and not very modest.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Kiyoko

    Kekei Genkai: Meikongan

    Clan Symbol: A black swirl with a red line threw it.

    Clan History: The Kiyoko clan has been in Sunagakure. They are masters of puppetry and swords. The Kiyoko clan are usually Ambidextrous and have a lot of chakra.The clan was formed from two people, A great swordsman and a Puppet master. They were both ambidextrous and were great at what they did, making weapons. So when there kids were born, they made them learn how to make strong weapons. So now weapon making is taught generation to generation. It wasnt tell one member, Hoshi Kiyoko, married a medic, Arama Canora. She wanted medic to be taught down generation to generation. It never really happened.
    Ability Summary: Strong puppet/sword users with a lot of stamina and endurance.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Missin-nin

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Sunagakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Puppet
    • Sub: Medical

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Wind
    • Main: Earth
    • Sub: Sand

    Special Characteristics: None

    ~Jutsus~

    Puppet Techniques
    Name: Puppet Master Technique
    Rank: C
    Element: N/A
    Description: The user makes strings of chakra on each finger and attaches it to the puppets to move the like marionettes.

    Name: Puppet Performance: Slashing Strikes
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Arashi moves his puppets, Brown Flash and Black Flash to goon the side of the opponent. They charge at him at incredible speeds and stab the opponent in the legs and in the chest.


    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:

    Spoiler:

    Roleplay Sample:Arashi goes into a deeply fogged forest. He hears a soft crackling noise and turns around in a flash. The sound was a small brown wolf. When Arashi is tired of trying to get through the fogged forest basically blind, he opens his backpack and gets out some food. "I better eat up so this fog can clear. It shouldn't take to long." Arashi stated. Within 30 minutes the fog has completely cleared and now Arashi can continue on his journey to Kumogakure.

    Name: Brown Flash
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive

    Description: It is a human looking puppet with brown hair. He was made when Arashi was 6 years old with help from his dad, Hoshi Kiyoko.

    Weapons Locations

    - Arms: In the palm of the left hand, it can shoot senbons. In the palm of the right hand a small sword.
    - Legs: None
    - Torso: In the left part of his chest, there is a panel that opens and shoots out kunais.
    - Head: None
    - Other: Has a long katana on back that he can grab.

    Jutsu: None
    _______________________

    Name: Black Flash
    Rank: A
    Type: Hybrid

    Description: Is made from a sand villager. It has the ability to use wind chakra. It was made when Arashi left the sand village and he tried to stop him.

    Weapons Locations

    - Arms: Can bring out swords from both hands. Can grab the fan on his back to manipulate the wind easier.
    - Legs: Can shoot poisoned senbons out of left knee.
    - Torso: Has a compresses air cannon like thing hidden behind a panel. When the panel opens it shoots a powerful blast of wind to reflect all projectiles.
    - Head: None
    - Other: None

    Justu:

    Name: Wind Release: Senbon Tornado
    Rank: B
    Element: Wind
    Description: Black Flash makes a tornado with the fan and shoots tons of senbons in it. It sucks people in while stabbing them with many senbons.

    Name:Wind Release: Cyclone Shot
    Rank: C
    Element: Wind
    Description: Black Flash sends a shot out of the compressed air cannon that shoots down all projeciles.
    _________________

    Name: Kitzo
    Rank: B
    Type: Defensive

    Description: Its a wolf like puppet, 4 legs, wolf head, bushy tail. It was made to look like Arashi's great grandfathers wolf.

    Weapons Locations

    - Arms: Can make the claws on its paws longer and as strong as steel.
    - Legs: Same thing as above.
    - Torso: None
    - Head: Opens mouth and shoots out tons of senbon.
    - Other: The tail is made of sharp poisoned senbons.

    Jutsu: None


    Last edited by ArashiKiyoko on Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:57 pm; edited 8 times in total
    avatar
    Amechi


    Posts : 14
    Ryō : 4384
    Join date : 2010-07-22

    Shinobi ID
    Village:
    Letter Rank:
    Classification:

    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] Empty Re: Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    Post by Amechi Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:11 am

    Will someone post on mine to give me some suggestions? :D Please post whatever you want. I love to be critiqued.
    Michishige
    Michishige
    Legendary Swordsmen
    Legendary Swordsmen


    Posts : 151
    Ryō : 4418
    Join date : 2010-06-24

    Shinobi ID
    Village: None
    Letter Rank: S
    Classification:

    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] Empty Re: Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    Post by Michishige Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:21 am

    take either the doujutsu, or the storm release out of your KKG, you can work either one to a usable level for this site, but i won't let you have two such varying abilities that could be so potentially dangerous
    Echo
    Echo
    Mizukage
    Mizukage


    Posts : 709
    Ryō : 4706
    Join date : 2010-06-22
    Location : USA

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Kirigakure
    Letter Rank: S
    Classification: Mizukage

    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] Empty Re: Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    Post by Echo Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:04 am

    Be sure to know that the only available storm release type here is the liquid lightning. Darui's storm release, not Hiruko's.

    And: Name: Kiyoko Clan Secret Technique: Teleportation Is straight unapproved. Teleportation is banned.

    Also, copying Dojutsu is to powerful. So thats something you wouldn't be able to do even if you learned from the elder.
    avatar
    Amechi


    Posts : 14
    Ryō : 4384
    Join date : 2010-07-22

    Shinobi ID
    Village:
    Letter Rank:
    Classification:

    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] Empty Re: Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    Post by Amechi Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:43 pm

    Finally. I is so glad someone commented. :3
    Kaito Jin
    Kaito Jin
    Konoha Academy Student
    Konoha Academy Student


    Posts : 287
    Ryō : 4358
    Join date : 2010-06-26
    Age : 29
    Location : In Konohagakure RPing with Jose, Rotoka.

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Konohagakure
    Letter Rank: D
    Classification: Jin Clan

    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] Empty Re: Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    Post by Kaito Jin Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:51 pm

    Good job, I have some things to tell you, ,but just so you know:

    1. In order for your character to have a sword in his hand and be very skiled with it, then one of your skill specialties must be Sword mastery. (Unless that is your puppet is controlling the sword.)

    2. Beause ninjutsu is not in your specialties, all of your elements, do nothing...

    3. You only have those two jutsu, until you add more in the "other Creations" section.

    4. Unless you have already posted a weapons app on your puppets, please copy and paste the puppet template under this characters app, so it can getr approved all at once.
    avatar
    Amechi


    Posts : 14
    Ryō : 4384
    Join date : 2010-07-22

    Shinobi ID
    Village:
    Letter Rank:
    Classification:

    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] Empty Re: Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    Post by Amechi Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:58 pm

    *edited* Also. It was the puppet stabbing the sand villager.

    Sponsored content


    Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval] Empty Re: Arashi Kiyoko [Awaiting Approval]

    Post by Sponsored content


      Current date/time is Thu Mar 28, 2024 9:46 am