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    Post by Loki on Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:27 am

    ~General Information~

    Name: Loki Karasu

    Nickname/Alias: None

    Weight: 168

    Height:6'3

    Age:23

    Gender:Male

    Appearance:Loki is tall but skinny with long Black hair. He usually wears his hair in a ponytail and his hair is spikey. His eyebrows are long and thin. He wears glasses and his eyes are red

    Clothing: He prefers to wear a long dark brown trench coat with his headband on his right bicep. Under his trench coat he wears a jounin vest filled with scrolls containing senbons, wires, herbs, and various poisons. He wears special tan pants made to hold scrolls and other items.
    Extra Features: none

    Additional Outfits: None

    Personality: Loki doesn’t like to fight and will do anything to stay out of a combat situation such as he will usually try to find a diplomatic solution to problems. He also is seen by some as a smart aleck because he is very literal. He likes to tinker with new sealing techniques.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Karasu

    Kekei Genkai:

    Clan Symbol: None

    Clan History: The Karasu Are a group of average ninja with extremely good chakra control



    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Jounin

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Sheetagakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Medical Ninjutsu
    • Sub: Fuuinjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Fire
    • Main: Wind
    • Sub:

    Special Characteristics: Black hair and red eyes

    ~Jutsu~


    Name: Finger Engraving Seal
    Jutsu Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Rank:C
    Description: The user concentrates chakra into their finger and using the heat from that can apply writing on whatever they want. This allows them to write on the skin of animals, iron plates, or a wide range of things however when doing so requires them to be very delicate with their chakra control. This jutsu causes slight discomfort for a living target and if it is on flesh, it will scar.

    Name: Fire sealing Method
    Jutsu type: Fuuinjutsu
    Rank:B
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to seal a nearby fire into a scroll. The user writes the seal on a scroll and then performs the required hand seals. This causes a vapor to appear from the scroll, enveloping the fire and sealing it on the scroll as the kanji for seal (封).

    Name: Five Elements Seal
    Jutsu Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Rank:A
    Description: This jutsu produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become unconscious and unable to fight for a short time.

    Name: Five Elements Unseal
    Jutsu Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Rank:A
    Description: This jutsu is used to remove seals of up to equal power, like the Five Elements Seal

    Name: Generic Sealing Technique
    Jutsu Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Rank: D
    Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu, typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons. The items themselves are unaffected by time.[1][2]
    Puppets can have these hidden inside various compartments as a means of increasing their own killing potential as well as hiding useful weapons from the opponent's sight. Interestingly, objects with seals on them can be sealed in other seals, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use

    Name: Mystical Palm
    Rank:A
    Element: Healing
    Description: his medical ninjutsu allows the user to speed up the body's natural healing process by sending chakra from their hands into a wound or afflicted body part. This allows the user to heal a patient without the need for medical equipment or surgery, making it highly useful on the battlefield. It can be used to treat both external and internal injuries. It is vital to match the amount of chakra used to the severity of the affliction or injury. This requires a great amount of chakra control. Because of this, only a few highly skilled medical-nin are able to use this technique.

    Name: Chakra Scalpel
    Rank: A
    Element: Healing
    Description: This medical technique forms one's chakra into a small, sharp blade. This can then be used for highly accurate incisions necessary for surgeries and anatomical dissections. Unlike regular scalpels, the Chakra Scalpel can actually make cuts inside the body without actually creating an open wound, limiting the risks of an infection.
    The Chakra Scalpel can also be used offensively, although it requires great precision to be effective. Because of this requirement, using the Chakra Scalpel offensively is highly unusual. In heated combat, even the greatest medical-nin won't be able to exert the precision needed to make fatal cuts, but it can still effectively cut muscle tissues and tendons, rendering the target immobile.

    Name: Dokunuku no Jutsu
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: Medical
    Description: This ornate jutsu uses chakra to literally pull foreign materials from someone's body, no doubt requiring precise control on the user's part to avoid causing further internal injuries to their patient.

    Name: Seal of Silence
    Rank: D
    Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Description: Loki forms a few hand signs and his right index fingers glows black. He than touches a targets tongue and seals it temporarily to keep them from talking. This was made to keep loud mouths from annoying people

    Name: Body Constriction Seal
    Rank: A
    Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Description: This jutsu is taken from the unnamed cannon jutsu of the Danzou vs. Sasuke fight. After successfully touching an opponents skin Loki can place a seal on them that slowly binds the area near the seal to keep the area from moving at all. After the seal is placed the seal will take 2 posts to completely bind their opponent. The seal starts at where the body was touched and spreads. Once the seal is on the opponent it cannon be broken unless a powerful enough chakra can be focused to it like an A rank amount of chakra

    Name: Fire style: Delayed Blast

    Rank: C-B

    Type:Ninjutsu

    Element:Fire

    Description: The delayed blast will be activated by hitting the necessary hand signs and taking a very deep breath with the hand beside the mouth like most common fire style jutsu, but hand is in a fist vs the regular to fingers up position and when the user exhales all that comes out is the hot air that makes everything in front of the user appear wavy like asphalt on a hot day. When the user has held it for the desired amount of time he unclenches is fist and seems to cough and the entire area that appeared wavy ignites in an almost explosive blast of flame. (at C rank the jutsu cant be delayed a whole post but at B rank it can be activated and held for one post but must be activated the following) Thoi covers a distance of 20 sq feet

    Name: Sunaarashi no Jutsu (Debris storm Jutsu)

    Rank: C

    Type: Ninjutsu

    Element: Fuuton

    Description: This jutsu is similar in use as the Mist techniques used by Kiri ninjas. The user gathers wind chakra into the palms of their hands then, waving them in a circle around them, can create a tiny storm to obscure vision on the field. The user can then move away from the storm and it will keep blowing, using a steadt stream of chakra. The storm is simply a funnel of wind that picks up any small pieces of debris lying around to aid in the purpose of this jutsu. The wind is strong enough to simply pick up dirt, leaves, twigs, etc. and nothing more. It cannot cause damage and is simply meant to prevent someone from seeing anything momentarily. This technique is also effective against ninjas who can find shinobi via scent. The wind will blow any scent all around the field, making it hard to determine the location of the source.

    Name: Chakra Palm
    Rank: D
    Type: Ninjutsu (Medical)
    Element: None
    Description: A ninja channels a small amount of chakra to their hand, which changes to different colors according to the current condition of the ninja’s chakra, and personal preference. A ninja is able to note if there is something interfering with his chakra, if it is running lower than thought, etc. by the chakra in their palm.

    Name: Disease Suspension Jutsu
    Rank: D
    Type: Ninjutsu (Medical)
    Element: None
    Description: A very basic medical technique, a ninja sends chakra to cells affected with a disease or virus, destroying them and halting the progression of a disease for however long the ninja’s chakra lasts. This jutsu can halt most common illnesses in the body, but more lethal or powerful diseases, such as genetically enhanced, chakra enchanced, or cancers, cannot be halted or slowed with this jutsu.

    This jutsu is often taught to Academy Students or Genin to see if they are medically suited ninja. Ninja who are able to perform this jutsu are considered prime candidates for medical ninja and are often raised as such. A common disease or virus, such as a cold or fever, is often given to the ninja, and then this jutsu is taught, so that even if they fail, they won’t die from the disease.

    Name: Organ Preservation
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu (Medical)
    Element: None
    Description: A medical ninja is able to supply a sphere of green medical chakra to an organ or body part to sustain it for longer periods of time than would normally be possible. This jutsu cannot be used to sustain an organ longer than 24 hours with this jutsu and this jutsu does not repair a damaged organ, it only keeps it in the state it was in when this jutsu was used. This jutsu is often used to save severed limbs.

    Name: Painless – Itaminai no Jutsu
    Rank: D-S
    Type: Medical Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: While this jutsu does not completely kill pain, the ninja using it is able to focus chakra into a single wound, locate the nerves, and temporarily numb them in order to, say, successfully stitch up a small cut or “ice” a bruise. The amount of time pain is deadened and the severity of the pain killed reflects directly to the amount of chakra used. Physical contact is required for this jutsu to work.

    Name: Slowed Blood – Fukappatsu no Ketsueki
    Rank: C
    Type: Medical Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: The chakra goes straight to the heart and mixes with the blood and nerves controlling the organ. The blood thickens and begins to slow its course, and the heart begins to pump more slowly. This way, you can save someone’s life or slow someone down. Physical contact is required for this jutsu to work

    Name: Solid Bones – Kenrou no Hone
    Rank: D
    Type: Medical Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Rather than fully healing bone fractures and breaks, the ninja who uses this jutsu instead focuses the chakra to use the marrow like a sort of glue, holding the bones together for a short time. Physical contact is required for this jutsu to work.

    Name: Dancing of Wind

    Rank: D

    Type: Ninjutsu

    Element: Wind

    Range: About 10-30 meters

    Description: Utilizing the manipulation of wind-natured chakra, the user will use their chakra to control the movement of air molecules within the surrounding area and move them around at will. The user can easily create air currents by doing this and the force of the wind ranges from being a gentle breeze to being a sudden gust of wind that is capable blowing leaves off of a tree. This jutsu is a very basic usage of wind chakra manipulation however, and it has very little slicing capabilities. This jutsu would not be strong enough to cut through human skin but it can cut through weaker things, like paper or leaves, if the wind is condensed enough. The amount of area in which the wind can be controlled depends on how strong the wind is. If it a simple breeze than the wind can reach out to about 30 meters. If the wind is condensed enough to make use of it's slicing capabilities then it can go out to about 10 meters. The chakra used in initiating this technique is also used for manipulating this technique. The main aspect of this jutsu relies mainly on chakra control and using a specific amount of chakra to move around wind molecules instead of a constant demand of chakra. When the user of this technique breaks his/her concentration, the technique ends.

    Hanjuku Tama no Jutsu - Half-Cooked Bullet Technique
    Rank: C
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Mid (5m ~ 10m) Far (10m ~ 15m)
    Katon • Hanjuku Tama no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. The ninja will first begin with a set of hand seals, storing chakra in their chest while inhaling air. They will then release the chakra and expel small spherical shaped fire projectiles. Traveling at high speeds, the projectiles pack enough power to crush small boulders. Multiple projectiles can be fired at once.

    Name: Gantai no Jutsu - [Bandaging Jutsu]
    Type: Medical Ninjutsu
    Rank: E
    Element: -
    Description: One of the first techniques that a Medical Ninja must learn. Reasons why is because these techniques are what matters between life and death. This is a special type of technique in which a medical ninja is capable of making bandages by using their surroundings such as sand, grass water and others with the help of using chakra.

    Name: Sansokyoukyuu - [Lung Expansion Jutsu]
    Type: Medical Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: -
    Description: An easy justu for the Medical Ninja. A ninja uses chakra upon the chest area focusing it to help the body in some ways. It helps the lungs expand easier making the chest and neck muscles become more efficient which allows the airways to expand and pulmonary blood vessels so then the cells of the body may breathe easier.

    Name: Kanetsu no Gyou - [Body Warming Jutsu]
    Type: Medical Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: -
    Description: A simple Jutsu in which the Medical Ninja focuses the chakra in their body by placing it along the person's chest creating heat within them. This is so then the person would not be in danger of Hypothermia, a condition in which the body starts dropping its temperature at a quick pace, and if goes untreated it might cause paralysis and even death. One must be careful for if used to long then it may warm up a part of the body which may cause fever.

    Name: Ketsuki Gyouko - [Bleeding Prevention Jutsu]
    Type: Medical Ninjutsu
    Rank: B
    Element: -
    Description: A simple healing technique. The user uses their chakra on their wound to make the blood there coagulate quickly. The wound still remains but the bleeding stops. It goes quickly for small wounds but larger ones need a couple of minutes to finish the coagulation. It can also be used on wounded allies.

    Name: Medical Art: Headache Relief Jutsu
    Rank: D
    Range: Close
    Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu - Medical
    Elemental Affinity: -
    Clan: -

    This is one of the first medical jutsu a medic learns. By emitting a pulse of green healing chakra through the finger tips, the medic is able to relieve the headaches of any person, regardless of cause (stress, migraine, other ailments, alcohol consumption, etc.) This jutsu has no further purpose, and is above all else a training jutsu for the medical arts.

    Name: Unseal
    Rank: A
    Jutu Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Description: The user of this jutsu does a few hand signs and places his palm on a seal up to B-rank. When his plam touches the seal it dissapears and the affects are gone. (can only be used 2 times per Topic)


    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:Birth Ark: When Loki was born he had bad eyesight right from the start. He was wearing glasses by the age of 2 years old. By 4 he had a lot of chakra control and could control already concentrate chakra to his finger so that it was visible.

    Academy Ark: When Loki got into the academy he could easily pass all his tests, especially his tests about the body. He knew over 72 chakra points by the time he was 6. He didn't have very many friends because his parents made him study whenever he had free time. Because of this many of the kids were unsure about him and tried to stay away from him. He graduated the academy at the age of 9.

    Genin Ark: Loki's team had 2 people who were at the bottom of his class and his sensei was rumored to have killed his own parents. They first started doing D rank missions like catching cats and weeding lawns. Eventually the Ikakage let him go on a C rank mission. The mission was to collect a rare herb from outside the village. While he was on the way there he was attacked bye a rogue ninja trying to make some money. The ninja ran at Loki and his teammates with a kunai in his right hand. He and his teammates broke the ninjas legs and killed him by slashing his throat. They continued to the spot to pick the rare herb and returned to the village. After they finished this mission they were sent to the chuunin exams.

    Chuunin Ark: When he got to Konoha for the Chuunin exams he was told their first trial was an extremely hard test. Most people had to cheat in their own way but Loki was smart enough to do the test normally without cheating. He got every answer correct and advanced to the next round. Where they were each given a scroll and they had to take the opposite scroll from another ninja. Loki walked into the forest calmly and waited for someone to come by. A ninja from the rain village came by and sat down to rest. Loki took advantage of this and caught the ninja’s arms and legs and pushed him against a tree. Loki took out a scroll and said “If you don’t give me your scroll then I will burn you to death.”
    The rain ninja scoffed and said “Ya right your just a little kid” Loki then open the scroll and said release. The scroll shot out fire and started to burn the area around the rain ninja. The rain ninja said he would give him the scroll if he got rid of the fire. Loki pretended like he didn’t hear him and took the scroll out of the ninjas pocket and sealed the fire away. He let the ninja go and ran to the end of the second exam.
    The third exam was an all out tournament. If the kages thought you did well you would become a chuunin. Loki was up first and he was fighting a ninja from Konoha. They both walked into the middle of the arena ready to fight. Right as the proctor said go the konoha ninja jumped into the air and shot a fireball at Loki hoping it would burn him. Loki used his Burning plam to make a hole in the fire ball. This made the ball turn into a ring of fire and disperse. Loki then shot a fire palm at the konoha ninja and Burned his legs so he couldn't move. He walked up and used his finger engraving seal to write failure on the ninjas arm. He then knocked the boy out with a punch. Loki left the arena and was made a chuunin.

    Medical Training: The chief medical ninja of sheetagakure took him in as a student after discovering Loki's healing ability. Over a 5 year period Loki learned all about medical jutsus and even created some of his own. Eventually He surpassed his master and was made a Jounin.

    Jounin Ark: Loki joined the Medical squad and became one of the best medical ninjas in Sheetagakure. People from all over the world came to be cured by him. He also created 100s of poisons and antidotes. Eventually Loki became Head of the Sheetagakure Medical Core

    Roleplay Sample: Loki kept walking in the general direction of the Cave of Naru, still pondering about how he was going to get the crystals without dieing from mutation. After about twenty minutes he made it to the dark, dank cave. He looked inside and saw a faint, purplish light. The light seemed to change colors as time passed on. Loki let his chakra seep out as gas. He surrounded himself with the black gas to protect him from the strange energy that is emitted from the Naru Crystals. He walked into the cave focusing on the light. He went deeper and deeper into the cave looking for crystals. He eventually found one. The crystal seemed to change shape slightly every few seconds. Loki turned some of his chakra into a solid and picked up the crystal with it. He started to walk out of the save when suddenly the spot where he took the crystal started to collapse. The grew bigger and bigger as Loki started to run out of the cave. The falling ground was right behind Loki when he jumped out of the cave. As he jumped out the crystal went flying and he barley caught it. He started to walk to the Medical area.

    When he got to the area he saw a black mark on each of the patients necks. He held the crystal up to one of the marks and the mark started to grow like a vine. It surrounded the patients body and started to crush his body. the body exploded, blood and gore spewing all over the walls. Loki quickly turned the front of the chakra gas solid blocking most of the blood.
    "So that is what happens" said Loki as he walked out of the Medical Zone. Right has he got out of the area he moved as fast as he could to report the mission to the Ikakage


    Last edited by Loki on Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:20 am; edited 6 times in total


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    Re: Loki Karasu

    Post by Michishige on Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:00 am

    please use our template for your application


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    Post by Michishige on Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:13 am

    you're clan cannot have dark chakra, that is only produced by the zero-tailed leech, also chief medical ninja is not a rank, please change to genin, chuunin, or jounin



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    edited again >.>


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    Post by Michishige on Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:49 am

    seal of mirrors - since you are only an A rank, you cannot have a jutsu that is S ranked. Also, the chakra usage of this jutsu would be immense if you were to create a solid chakra clone that can sustain physical harm without dissipating, especially over a 200ft area.

    Sandstorm Jutsu - this would require the earth element to go along with the wind element

    Joint Displacement Jutsu - no medical ninjutsu would allow you to turn your head 360°, the stress would snap your neck

    Slowed Blood - this would be ineffective if used in a fight, since the targets heart would be pumping to fast to mix chakra in from and out side source, that and at best you would get a momentary effect, since your chakra would be severed as soon as they broke contact

    Burning Palm - i don't see how this is possible, since fire jutsu is preformed by mixing chakra with air in the lungs, than igniting it upon expulsion from the body through the mouth

    Blood Transfusion Jutsu - increasing the density of the blood would provide the opposite affect, making it far more difficult to pump, like water flowing through a hose, that slowly changes to the consistency of honey

    Decontamination Technique - poisons are unaffected by white blood cells

    Weapon Binding Jutsu - instant teleportation of a weapon would not be possible without the use of chakra and handseals, and only a master of fuinjutsu would be able to recall the weapon to them without use of any actual summoning

    Unseal - change it so that is can only remove up to B rank

    make a full paragrpah for your academy ark, and not everyone is a prodigy that graduates at the age of 7, and what your parents think of you doesn't affect your team. the village assigns you a genin team, and that's the team you're stuck with.


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