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    Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Fri Jun 25, 2010 3:53 pm

    ~General Information~

    Name: Shikamatsu
    Nickname/Alias: Shika
    Weight:165 lbs
    Height:6'0
    Age:23
    Gender: Male

    Appearance:

    Clothing: Shika stands about 6 feet in the air, he has white eyes due to his KKG and clan known as the Hyuuga. Unlike most Shinobi Shika has a faded color skin. Its almost like the color of snow, but a little darker which gives him the advantage when he fights in the snowy areas. Like his skin Shikas hair is the same color of his skin and is most of the time wrapped in a pony tail that barley touches his twin blades located on his back. The twin blades were passed down to Shika before he fled the village by his older brother. As for his forehead protector it is still wrapped around his forehead, but has a blue like rag that is behind it and stretches to the left side of his shoulder. The blue rag fly's forward as if its going to fly away, but it doesn't. The rag stays perfectly on his shoulder. Since Shika is in the organization known as the Akatsuki he is always seen with his Akatsuki cloak on which is always open never buttoned up. But with the help of his strap that holds his twin blades keeps his cloak adjusted just right.

    Additional Outfits:N/A

    Personality: Shika is dangerous person, and when around others if they seem scared of him
    he will acknowledge it with a smart remark that will most of the time make the other person mad. The other reason he is like this is because Shika is a fighter and he will be willing to fight anyone who thinks they are worthy opponent for him. Unlike most people when fighting Shika won't rush into an attack, instead he will read his opponent tell he has figured them out then will quickly end the fight in a cruel and evil way. Shika is a cold hearted person which is the reason he doesn't care for many people. If Shika was ever going to like someone it would be someone in the Akatsuki, but then its still possible that he will dislike the person.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Hyuuga

    Kekei Genkai: Byakugan

    Clan Symbol:

    Clan History:
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    The Hyuuga clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be the ancestors of the Uchiha clan who possess the bloodline of the Sharingan eye. Each clan member possess the "Byakugan" or "White Eye." When the "Byakugan" is activated, the clan member gains an extra-sensory perception, which gives them penetrating sight and telescopic vision. This allows them to see the internal chakra circulation system in other beings. This vision also grants the member a near 360° view of their surroundings. The higher the skill of the clan member, the further the distance from which they can sense incoming attacks. Unfortunately the vision does have a weakness, a small blindspot that extends outwards from their upper back.

    The clan uses this ability in conjunction with their own chakra creating the Juuken (gentle fist) fighting style. By focusing the chakra to their finger tips, they can press the tenketsu or chakra pressure points of their opponents body. When the finger nears the tenketsu the chakra is forced out, collasping the targetted tenketsu for a period of time. The tenketsu serve as the connectors and exit points for the chakra pathways. So when they are stopped by the Hyuuga clan member, the ninja greatly loses his or her ability to utilize their chakra for jutsu.

    These great powers lead to internal strife within the family. Because the eye grants such a unique and powerful ability, the clan became possessive and over-protective of it. Seeing only the main family as worthy users and inheritors of the eye, the heads of the clan began to place restrictions on those branch family members not in power. What resulted were two Hyuuga lines, the powerful main family who would represent the line, and the branch family who were directed to protect the main family and bear the cursed seal.

    The cursed seal is placed on the foreheads of branch family members. It serves as a means to protect the secrets of the Hyuuga Byakugan eye. If the branch family member was to ever betray the main family or be killed in battle, the seal would be activated to destroy the body's secrets. Thus forcing the branch family to further bow to the will of the main family.


    Ability Summary:

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Akatsuki member

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Land of Fire

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main:Ninjutsu
    • Sub:Kenjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main:Raiton
    • Main:Fuuton
    • Sub:

    Special Characteristics: Good chakra control

    Weapon

    Name: Hook swords

    Rank: B

    Owner: Shikamatsu

    Appearance:

    Length:33" overall

    Width: Blade Lengths: 21" , Handle Guard Blade 9"

    Material:Blade Material: Stainless Steel, Handle Material: Black Wrapped Cord

    Weight:1.6 Lbs (Each)

    Abilities: N/A

    Info: N/A

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:

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    The Beginning Arc:
    Years ago in the land of Fire there was this powerful clan that was known as the Hyuuga clan. They were a very Persis clan, and people. The clan was divided into two groups one being the main branch and the other a lesser branch. But the leader of the main house hold was going to have a child. Everyone knew that the kid was going to be strong and the best hyuuga so far, just because of the family he came from. both his mother and father were Hyuuga Legends and had mastered all the Hyuuga clan jutsu. This then meant that when there child was born he would get the advantage of getting help from his mother and father, Hyuuga masters. Only a couple people of the clan had bad thoughts about the child because they feared that he would learn to quick, and grow very powerful. And to them this was a bad thing because they had no clue how he was going to use these poewers, but most of the others were happy for the family. They knew that This child being born into the hyuuga clan would be best because it just meant another hyuuga Master or close to it.On the day that Shika was born was the same day that the war between the Hyuuga clan, and another unknown clan from the hidden mist village started. The mist village had heard that a new child was being born into the clan, and this was there time to strike. They wanted to secrete to the Byakugan so they could use it to their own advantage, but the Hyuuga clan would defend it with their lifes. The war started when one of the Jounin Hyuuga members went out for a mission with his teammate who wasn't a Hyuuga, and on there way back to the village they were ambushed by the Mist shinobi. The jounin Hyuuga and his teammate immediately broke out and threw everything that they had at the mist shinboi which was just enough. They were both still injured badly but managed to make it back to the village and get help. The Jounin Hyuuga whos name was Danzo, reported back to the main house hold and explained what happened and what they were after. It was obvious that the mist village was after the Byakugan. And now that a new born had just been born into the village whos name was Shikamatsu. They feared that the mist Village would soon go after him once his Byakugan developed which wasn't that long away. Shikas mother didn't wanna stay in the leaf village because she knew that they would get into the village if they tried so she decided to move away for a while. She wasn't going to do what most parents were going to do and let them go to the academy and learn what they needed to, instead she was going to teach Shika everything that she knew he needed to know. Such as Hyuuga Techniques, and developing his Byakugan. Once she thought that he was ready she was going to bring Shika back to the village and put him in the Academy so he could learn the basics of the ninja, but she knew he was going to be at least a year late to the academy just because she had plans.

    Genin Arc:
    About Nine years had passes and Shika was getting all the knowledge he was needed to know. Most of it wasn't about the Hyuuga clan because she wanted to wait a little longer before beginning that stage. Shikas mom knew that if she wanted any longer he wouldn't be able to make it in the Academy with his age group so she told him that their training would begin soon. On the next Day Shika awoke to his mother telling him to meet her out side, and that he did. Once he got outside he was looking at just about his whole clan because they were there to teach him the way of the Hyuuga. First they helped Shika understand what powers the Byakugan obtained, after that they helped him develop it and activate it which took long, but he still accomplished it. But by the time they were finished with those two things it was night fall already so they would pick up the rest in the morning. And that they did. Although it wasn't the same lesson as they planned but it was helping Shika understand they way of the Hyuuga, and the gentle fist fighting style which was the way all hyuugas fought. After a while Shika started to get the hang of everything which made the training so much more easy for him because now they were moving onto techniques. The first one that his mother was going to try and teach him was the Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin. It was a powerful jutsu, but she knew that Shika could handle it if he just took the time to try it. It didn't take Shika that long to learn it, or at least for his age it didn't. It was just over a week for him to get down the jutsu, but little did they know trouble was coming. Just as his mother was going to teach him something else she was assassinated by some of the Mist Shinobi. Her guard had been down because she thought that no one could find them, and because she was with her son, but even the smartest Ninja can lost a battle. Shika had no clue what was going on but he did her his mothers words which were " The only way to win is by playing a smarter opponent". At the time Shika didn't understand what that meant but he would figure it out when he got older, but now he had to focus on the trouble ahead of him. It was only three Shinobi but there was only one of Shika. His Byakugan quickly activated as he began to release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu, then quickly began rapidly spinning just as they launched there attack. The rotation wasn't that big but since they were flying towards the rotation it was going to take effect on them and sent them flying back hitting a tree. After they shika quickly began to make his way back to the village which wasn't that far from where there hid out was. The second that Shika pasted threw the gates the guards defeated the Shinobi from the mist village and it was all over for now.

    About a year later Shika was enrolled in the Academy, but still recived lessons from people in his clan that way he would be able to learn his family Jutsu. He was in the Academy for about a month when they noticed that he was skilled enough and didn't need to be with this group. Instead they threw him in a squad so he could get more experience. Even though shika was still learning his Hyuuga clan jutsu he had found out that his main element was Lighting a powerful element that most Hyuugas didn't get. So now Shika was learning low powered Lighting jutsu, and pretty powerful Hyuuga Jutsu. And also they were taking missions that way they would be able to test there skills if something came up during the mission which most of the time didn't because they were only Genin.


    Chuunin Arc:
    On the day of the chuunin exams Shika and his squad meet, then prepared for what was ahead of them. They had to leave the village and travel to the hidden Stone village where the exams were taken place this year. When they arrived they noticed many of other shinobi from various villages that were there to take the exams, but this year was a little different. There was only one round and it was the fighting round but since the number of people everyone winner was going to have to fight twice, and the two winners out of that would battle out. So as the Rounds began to start two people were called from their seats to fight and that they did. Once it reached Shikas turn he immediately rushed to the battle field to find out that he was fighting a Shinobi from the hidden mist. Shika didn't want to lost, but he also didn't want this to take for ever because he knew that the Mist Shinobi were tricky but nothing he couldn't handle. Quickly a thick coat of mist covered the area and his opponent disappeared. but since Shika had his Dojutsu that allowed him to see at his own speed he was able to dodge the mist shinobis attack, then counterattack which worked because once Shika lighting his him he was down due to the little bit of water that was int he air and just like that the match was over. Shika was happy that he didn't lost but this was just the beginning of many more battles to come, so made his way back to his seat and waited out tell the next round. And at that time all of his team was still standing but they would have to make it threw another round pulse more if they wanted to get threw this but both of his squad members lost in their next round to strong opponents. This then made Shika think if he was going to be able to handle his next opponent but he also knew if he entered his next match thinking he was going to lost then he was. So when Shika was called to fight he was positive about his match. The only thing was that he had to fight a Shinobi from his own village which was no problem for him but he didn't wanna have to fight someone from his own village. But the other person attacked with full force so Shika couldn't hold back or he would end up dead or losing the match which he didn't want at all. It was an even match, but Shika had the little advantage and he used it to his fullest which led him to victory even though he was injured bad. Everyone from this last match was injured bad so the Mizukage called off the next round for a week thus giving the contenders to regain their strength, chakra, and mind state. After that week went by Shika and the other contenders showed up as their names were slowly called off on who they were going to be fighting. Shika had been called first and he was going up against another mist Shinobi but more skilled than the last one. Shika was confident that he was going to win, but some who he let his guard down and got caught by a powerful Jutsu that the Shinobi from the mist preformed and they was nothing he could do, he had lost the match. Even though Shika made it to the last round he felt that he could of done way better in the last round. When the squads returned back to the village each Shinobi that did well in the battle was called to talk with the Ikakage Shika had no clue why but he would soon figure out. Once he entered the room the Hokage had a smile on his face and told Shika that he did good and that he was now to be called a Chuunin of the Lighting village. Shika was happy but the only thing that that meant was that he was going to have to train harder because he was getting to the point were he was going to become a powerful shinobi.

    Jounin Arc:
    Years and Years had passed and Shika had been promoted to the rank of Jounin, he was finally able to learn new and improved Jutsu which was mostly what he cared about because he wanted to be the strongest of them all. He wanted to be a legendary Hyuuga that no one would forget such as his mother and father. But the more and more that Shika grew up the more he started to dislike his father, and the way the clan was ran. He began to believe that his father was using his power to his own advantage and one day Shika was going to end it. It was just a matter of time which Shika didn't have with being a Jounin and all he had missions to go one just about everyday, and training to do. His training was improving and getting harder everyday which wasn't a bad thing because he would learn more and more. One of Shikas training was to make a stedy clone and fight himself which also improved his skills because he was able to see what his weaknesses, strengths are. It also showed him what he needed to work on so that the day he comfronted his father he would be at his best and destroy him. They only thing that Shika didn't know was how the clan was going to react. were they going to be happy, were they going to dislike Shika, or were they going to kick him from the village. He didn't know but really he didn't care, he didn't have anything to live for, his mother was dead and his dad wasn't the same person he was years ago. It was as if Shika was falling apart, but it was the better for him because he needed to make something of his life and skills, he couldn't just let them go to wast. So the next Day Shika called his father into the training room and challenged him to a death match that no one knew about. His father wouldn't accept and tried to walk away from Shika, but that was his mistake because Shika wasn't going to take no for an answer. So he attacked his father, sending a power bolt of electricity towards him after doing a couple hand signs. His father was able to dodge it because his Byakugan, then shook his head. After they a great gruesome battle broke out and Shika ended out on top. He had killed his father with a smile on his face and didn't feel bad about it at what-so-ever. But when the others say they took it the wrong way and tried to kill Shika, but were successful instead he just injured them to the point were they couldn't chase him. but it was only like two or three people so it was no problem for Shika, but before he left the village he stole a couple scrolls then made his way out the village without being seen due to one of his jutsu. This was the new Start of Shikamatsu.

    Akatsuki Arc:
    Start of Rp





    Roleplay Sample:
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    As the three paths Preta, Animal and Asura paths stood on top of the building not to far away from the Raikage, they soon noticed that there hearing was messed up allowing them to not be able to hear any such thing. The smartest of the three was Asura, so he knew that to do. Asura Path quickly made hand signs before the clone even popped up behind then and summoned the last path, but wasn't any were near them. The last path was named Naraka path, and was located on the building behind the Raikage and his clone. But this path wasn't here to attack it was there to be Preta, Animal and Asura paths eyes and ears because they all had there eyes closed allowing them to see what Naraka path was seeing. Preta path quickly turned around facing them because he knew what was going on even though he hadn't heard he seen that movement before and knew that the Sonic blasts were coming towards him and quick. He arched his back making his stomach stick out just as the Sonic blast came in reach they all slowly began being absorbed tell is was once again no more, but once all of the Sonic blast had been absorbed Preta path was starting to feel tired...out of energy so he was going to have to regain his energy before fighting. Naraka path had did his job so he began to run the other way towards the other paths because he had a slight feeling that they needed some help.

    In the mean time Animal path his eye's on the Raikage because he knew that he had something up his sleeve and was about to pull something, but soon he saw that the raikage had withdrew some shuriken. All three of the paths slightly knew that if they were hit with these shuriken they would be infused with his lighting chakra so they were going to have to avoid them as good as they could. Animal path made some hand signs as the giant panda showed again taking the hit, But the panda wasn't enough it had broken threw the panda and hit Preta path. Animal path was being attacked by a the clone that was sent by Raizo, but since Asura had been free he was going to be taking on the clone because Preta wasn't in a good condition to fight and Animal path was getting ready to make another summoning. Asura Had slightly smile on his face just like always. Upon focusing chakra to his right wrist he pointed his hand towards the clone as he wrist flew off and towards the clone immediately killing it if hit which was really likely to be done because the clone had been focused on the two other paths thinking that the shuriken would of held him off. After the flying wrist flew towards the clone it caused a large whole in the wall so if the clone wouldn't of been killed it would now be in side the building away from all of the paths. "Sasuke" Animal path said trying to get his attention because the Raikage was now gone allowing them to get there hearing completely back.

    As Human path was about to stab his Chakra Disruption Blades into the jounin from the cloud it slowly began to rust away, but not all the way enough was left that the blade pierced his body allowing the the Rinnegan eyes to appear in their mind leaving his body incapable to move. Even though the blade only pierced his body a little the Chakra Disruption Blades are the same things the six bodys of pein use to receive there chakra from Nagato. For there making Nagato have little control over the jounin which led to his body not being able to move. With the situation going on now Human path needed to take advantage before he could fully move his body, he quickly reached his hand forwards getting a good grip on the jounin's head then pulling back releasing his hand from his hand. But Human path had removed the jounin's soul just as the wire cast by another jounin pulled back the dead body and the soul that was held in Human paths hand was given to the outer path that had just showed up summoned Naraka path who was hidden. Naraka path had reached the crew so fast because he had flickered from building to building tell he reached the hot springs, but the adrenaline rush he had made his body move faster so that he could reach the other paths. The other people wouldn't be able to see the outer path tell they had been in contact with him.

    With Deva paths rain falling hard from the sky he was able to tell that the 8 tails was already on a move to strike Human path for trying to hurt his friend. The eight tailed began to quickly move his body with all seven swords used by just about every part of his body. As the eight tailed got closer and closer to Human path, he knew that he was going to have to fight him head on but wasn't a problem for him. Two more of the Chakra Disruption Blades slipped out of both of his sleeves right into the hands of Human path. as he held them in both of his hands Human path waited to come in contact with the eight tailed so they would have a sword fight.Since it was raining which was caused by Deva path he knew that Someone else was present, but Deva path couldn't use his grativity jutsu because it had only been four seconds but soon he could be able to use it. Deva path knew that the Genin that just showed up wasn't going to be much trouble but if he was then Naraka path would handle him.

    Soon crows began to surround the area, which soon led to another Genin appearing but this Genin was trying to attack Deva path with his electricity ball in his hand so Deva path jumped to the side so that his back wasn't facing anyone because he knew what was coming next. Just seconds after the electricity ball was formed the genin would of notice that Deva paths hand was extended and he could move much, Naraka path then jumped behind the Genin with out him knowing as Deva path trusted his hand forwards sending him towards Naraka path. Naraka path Had both of his chakra deception blades in his hand as he jumped forwards trying to stab his blades in his back which would of resulted in not being able to move and soon death all depending on were he had hit and if he had hit. Deva path then jumped to the side as he hoped that he wouldn't get attacked and the time would pass by fast.

    Meanwhile as they three paths stood over were the Raikage was Animal path made some hand signs as he slammed his hands onto the ground causing a large cloud of smoke to appear. Human path then was raised in the air as the cloud of smoke disappeared a Giant Snake-Tailed Chameleon stood under the Human path. The Giant Snake-Tailed Chameleon opened its mouth as his tongue stretched out allowing Human path to jump onto his tongue. the Snake-Tailed Chameleon then put his tongue back into his mouth with Human path inside of it as they both became invisible to the human eye, but really all that was going on was that the Chameleon was blending in with its surroundings. Only Human path and maybe the other paths knew that he wasn't in his same spot that he was on the move. Preta path then rose from his knee as his energy was just about fully regained...well enough to were the point for him to stand and be ready to fight. Preta path was going to be following or fighting with sasuke so he awaited for him to respond to him.


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:21 am

    :Raiton Based Jutsu


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    Name:Gian - False Darkness
    Rank: B-ranked
    Element::Raiton
    Description: Gian is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After releasing his black Lightning elemental from his body, Kakuzu will use the spirit to release a strong bolt of electricity from its mouth. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.


    Name:Kakashi's Lightning Wolf Technique (Unnamed)
    Rank:A
    Element:Raiton
    Description:This unnamed Ninjutsu technique utilizes the Lightning Element. After creating Raiton in his hand, Kakashi will send out a wolf made of lightning to attack his target. Lightning will run from Kakashi's hand to the wolf itself, limiting its range.


    Name:Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Element Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:A
    Element:Raiton
    Description:Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.



    Name: Lightning Illusion: Thunder Prison Technique (Rai Genjutsu: Kaminari rou no Jutsu)
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Style: Ninja Art
    Description: This genjutsu makes lightning strikes down at the victim, and creates electrical walls, which traps the victim to be paralyzed inside the illusion.


    Name: Raiton: Raiengai (Lightning Release: Lightning Dome)
    Rank: C-Rank
    Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Lightning
    Description: Using this jutsu the user can form a dome of lightning around him with the highest point being roughly 50 cm more than the user’s height. This dome can withstand D-Rank Attacks easily and 1 C-Rank before breaking. There is a plus to this dome for if the attacker touches it he will receive an electrical shock. Of course respecting the elemental laws if a C-Rank wind attack hits it then the dome lose and crack.

    Name: Raikousochi No Jutsu(Lightning step)
    Rank: C
    Range: Short, Its a buff to user
    Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Lightning
    Description: This jutsu is helpful for mainly the type of close combat type people. What happens is that the electricity from the chakra will make your muscles move faster and much stronger. This move will make the user 2X faster than normal speed. The only problem is that the user can only use it every other post since its only C rank . This move is sometimes used to save partners from an oncoming attack.

    Name: Electromagnetic Murder
    Rank: B
    Element: Lightning
    Desciption:This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.



    Ikadzuchi no Utage - Lightning Bolt Feast

    Rank: A

    Raisou (Lightning Burial): Ikadzuchi no Utage is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kurosuki Raiga. Drawing together his dual short swords, electrical energy will begin to crackle. He will then implant his swords into the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack each target individually








    Fuuton Based Jutsu

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    Name:Atsugai - Pressure Damage
    Rank:B
    Element:Fuuton
    Description:Atsugai is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After releasing his black Wind elemental from his body, Kakuzu will use the spirit to release a large wind blast. Working in conjunction with his partner Hidan, they can make use of Hidan's immortality to have Hidan get in close to their target and pin them down while the blast hits them both. Hidan will survive the blast but their target will normally not be as lucky.


    Name:Kazekiri - Wind Cutter
    Rank:A
    Element:Fuuton
    Description:Kazekiri no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. A large slicing wind will then be created which can cut through his opponent. This can be used to immobilize large summons. This will be the initial attack in an elemental trio used by the ANBU. It will be followed by Raiton • Shichuu Shibari to stun and trap the target and finally Doton • Otoshi Buta to imprison the summon in a gigantic sealed pot.


    Name:Kaze no Yaiba - Sword of Wind
    Rank:B
    Element:Fuuton
    Description:Kaze no Yaiba is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Sand ninja Baki. After forming the needed hand seal, a cutting whirlwind will envelop his opponent and cut them to pieces. Unlike a real sword which can face resistance, the wind blade will be able to slice with little difficulty.


    Name:Shinkuu Gyoku - Vacuum Sphere
    Rank:B
    Element:Fuuton
    Description: Shinkuu Gyoku is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seal, Danzou will inhale air and then expel numerous penetrating wind bullets.


    Name:Shinkuuha - Vacuum Wave
    Rank:A
    Element:Fuuton
    Description:Shinkuuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Danzou will inhale air and then rotate his body while expelling arcs of cutting wind. These arcs will be capable of cutting through an airborne opponent.

    Name:Shinkuu Taigyoku - Vacuum Great Sphere
    Rank:B
    Element:Fuuton
    Description:Shinkuu Taigyoku is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Danzou will inhale air and emit a large concussive wind bullet from his mouth.


    Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
    Daitoppa Character Use: Orochimaru
    Rank: C
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
    Type: Attack

    Daitoppa
    Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.





    Hyuuga Based Jutsu

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    Name:Hakke Hasangeki - Eight Divination Signs Destructive Mountain Fist
    Rank:B
    Element:N/A
    Description:Hakke Hasangeki is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Neji. Extending chakra from his body, Neji will thrust his palm into his target. This will send out a wave of chakra that will knock his opponent backwards into nearby rock to cause further damage. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.

    Name:Hakke Kuushou - Eight Divination Signs Air Palm
    Rank:A
    Element:N/A
    Description:Hakke Kuushou is a ranged Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Neji. Extending chakra from his body, Neji will thrust his palm at his target. This will send out an invisible wave of chakra that can knock his opponent back. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.


    Name:Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin
    Rank:B
    Element:N/A
    Description:Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack.

    If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.


    Name:Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
    Rank:B
    Element:N/A
    Description:Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forceably closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu.


    Name:Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou - Eight Divination Signs, One-Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms of the Hand
    Rank:B
    Element:N/A
    Description:Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a variation of Hakke Rokujuuyonshou, a technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to make nearly double the normal 126 strikes, striking 254 times against their individual foe or opponents. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, 64 and finally 128 times.

    Name:Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
    Rank:A
    Element:N/A
    Description:Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.


    Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
    Bunshin Bakuha
    Rank: A
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack

    Bunshin Bakuha
    Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Echo on Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:39 am

    Sorry but your KKG is way to similar to Sharingan, and is incredibly OP. I cant approve this.


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Michishige on Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:40 am

    at a quick glance, you have to many S rank jutsu, you are only allowed two, start by taking out lightning armor, you're not allowed to have it, it is a kage/leader jutsu only. and as for your KKG, to powerful, so admin says cut it out, to much of a sharingan copy. work on that and i'll take a look at the rest of your app


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:38 am

    Okay
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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Michishige on Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:41 pm

    sorry, no chidori, and edit your history to fit being a hyuuga. and this isn't a problem, just a question of mine, why have kenjutsu if you don't have a sword or sword techniques


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:18 pm

    Okay, i will do that when i have the time two. As for the Kenjutsu part he had two twin blades there just wasn't a place to put the info about it...and the Jutsu i'm still working on
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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:54 pm

    Edited.
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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Michishige on Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:13 pm

    you cannot have a main element (fire, water, etc) as a sub element, sub elements are for combinations from a KKG, like steam or lave and such, so remove Doton and all according jutsu


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:16 pm

    Edited again.
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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Michishige on Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:23 pm

    we are not accepting anymore S rank ninja, so please change it to A rank


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:23 pm

    .....Done
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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Michishige on Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:37 pm

    Lightning Release: Strike! seems almost likse chidori, and we aren't allowing chidori like jutsu


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:52 pm

    ..Edited..
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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Michishige on Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:01 am

    for Raikousochi No Jutsu(Lightning step), put a post count instead of seconds, and how long before you can use it again


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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Shikamatsu on Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:12 am

    Okay Done.
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    Re: Shikamatsu (done)

    Post by Michishige on Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:17 am

    approved


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