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    Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

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    Join date : 2012-08-12
    Age : 26
    Location : Fire Country (Usually Leaf)

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Konoha Village
    Letter Rank: S
    Classification: Sennin

    Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Lord Vizer on Tue Oct 16, 2012 12:04 am


    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name: Uchiha Nobunaga Oda

      Nickname/Alias: The Red Fang

      Age: 31

      Gender: Male

      Is that really me?

      Appearance:

      Clothing: Nobunaga prefers to wear his light armor for formal wear, or with dealings within the village. Though prepared for battle he is donned with red and black heavy flak jacket. Providing more fuel to his earned alias, the Red Fang.

      Weight: 210

      Height: 6'3

      Ethnicity: Asian...

      Voice:

        Likes:
      • Ramen
      • Interrogating
      • Espionage
      • Power
      • Beautiful women

        Dislikes:
      • Weakness
      • Genjutsu users
      • Being outnumbered
      • Hyuuga's
      • Fear


      Personality: Nobunaga is not completely evil and but has it in his heart to destroy everything that gets in his way. But he is not one of insane killers that kills for no reason. He only kills when he needs to. But even then that is not for sure depending on his attitude for the time being. He is also not very forgiving. Failure is not an option in his book. Though he wasn't like this in the beginning. At first he was more lively and even caring at times, dedicated only to the preservation of his village. Things began to change when others and his teammates started to have scorn and resentment for him being a Uchiha. This eventually led to his slight insanity breach that left 3 people dead. Forcing him to leave the Leaf village. After a couple of years Nobunaga returned to the village, but not for peace. He had came back to kill an old friend. After fighting his best friend Hato, he finally killed the man who had never held any sort of resentment towards him being a Uchiha. In doing this he achieved the Manegkyo Sharingan. Old news of him as a Prodigy were in the distant past...he now longed to be reigning Hokage.

      My...Family?

      Clan: The Uchiha clan were one of the founding noble
      families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from
      the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because
      their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled
      at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime
      candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps. The
      organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol
      into their official logo. Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess
      the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye
      skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
      and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being
      performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to
      complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are
      unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast
      jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye. The clan itself
      is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an
      adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such
      as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire
      and the mind of an Uchiha member.


      Unique Clan Features: Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said
      to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the
      Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to
      read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the
      clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly
      memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including
      the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member
      cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the
      clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical
      requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though,
      as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow
      them to harness their full potential.

      Nobunaga's Mangekyo Sharingan :

      Left Eye:

      Name: Ryu-Tien (Obsidian Flame)
      Rank: S
      Type: Doujutsu
      Requirements: Mangekyou Sharingan
      Description: Nobunaga will first activate his Mangekyo Sharingan in his left eye. With this technique he is able to summon a wave of golden like fire. The golden fire floats in the air like dust particles but whatever it touches dissipates and begans to break it done molecule by molecule into nothing. The wave of the golden like fire substance would destroy any solid, gas, or liquid substance in its way, able to make anything turn to ash. With harsh concentration Nobunaga is able to control the movements of this golden fire, to where he could shape it to almost anything he wanted. The amount of fire present is about the size of an elephant and about that much in weight. (5 Posts)

      He can reach a controlled range of 35 feet before a person can escape its range. The speed of the fire is not extremely fast but its persistence is unwavering, being able to use the wind currents to its advantage as well. Escaping this technique is next to extraordinary, unless one person has a S ranked sealing technique. This puts a decent amount of strain on the eye and it pushes the eye to blindness faster when used extensively.

      Right Eye:

      Name: Ezioetsu (Sands of Time)
      Rank: S
      Type: Doujutsu
      Requirements: Mangekyou Sharingan
      Description: The Sands of Time is an extremely powerful Genjutsu utilized by Nobunaga. When he activates his Mangekyou Sharingan in his right eye, Nobunaga's body will then begin to sparkle in small specks of gold and white. The moment his opponent looks at his body or eyes, the opponent will be caught in the Genjutsu. This Genjutsu unlike the Tsukyomi does not cause any pain of any sort. The full effect is that when the person looks upon his figure, time will slow down for them. To them it will seem as if the person has now gained double their speed and their own reaction time is slower by double. This jutsu lasts as long as the enemy comes into 20 feet of Nobunaga. This puts enormous strain on Nobunaga's eye, but with his Mangekyo Sharingan he can maintain this for a long time. This doesn't put as much strain on the eyes as others but caution to using it extensively can still push the eye to go blind. (6 posts)

      Both Eyes:

      Name: Sekiha Tenkyoken (Chaotic Implosion/Explosion)
      Rank: S
      Type: Doujutsu
      Requirements: Mangekyou Sharingan
      Description: This is Nobunaga's most powerful eye technique in his arsenal. And the most chakra draining. But for good reason. After activating his Mangekyo Sharingan in both eyes, Nobunaga can pick any spot where he wants and generate a big golden orb. This orb is pure Kinetic energy and will generate a great amount of raw power. With the power to implode and explode given to whatever he desires. With the implosion technique, it can suck in anything within a 50 yards radius with pulling winds that could match a F4 tornado. Anything that even comes close to the orb of energy could be paralyzed or could die from the discharges. With the explosion technique it would take up to about the same as 100 yards radius of pure kinetic destruction. Using his eyes he would stop the charges from harming himself. But at the same time exhausting almost all of his chakra in the process. The chances of he himself getting caught in the attack are subject to if he is being distracted at the moment. This dojutsu is easily the most stressing dojutsu and should only be used sparingly. For each use puts you closer to having blurred vision, and then finally blindness. (1 post)

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: Sennin

      Letter Rank: S

      Village:Village Hidden in the Leaf

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points:


      • 1. Ninjutsu (Master)
      • 2. Genjutsu (Master)
      • 3. Kenjutsu (Artisan)


      -Elements-


      • 1. Fire
      • 2. Lightning
      • 3. Wind
      • Comb.


      -Jutsu-

      E:
      D:
      C: 11
      B: 8
      A: 7
      S: 3
      _____________

      Lightning Techniques
      Spoiler:


      Name: Thunder Clash Skill • [Raiton, Denkō Gachin no Jutsu]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: Description: A skill that is normally used after a Lightning jutsu, to add a thunderous effect. When the lightning jutsu strikes, it will utter forth a shock wave which will send the opponent backwards. Increasing the distance between the user and the individual effected by the skill by 10 meters, giving a greater opportunity to plan the next attack.
      Special: This jutsu effect will be add to another Raiton jutsu of the same or higher rank, and not be used individually.

      Name: Swarm of Humming Birds Skill • [Raiton, Mure no Haoto Tori no Jutsu]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: A skill where the user utilizing Lightning Chakra, various sparks of lightning appear within the air. Within moments they transform into humming birds, giving off this loud humming sound, The humming birds will then rush the opponent, spreading out to hit even multiple targets. Maximum of three birds.

      Name: Lightning Scatter Shot Skill • [Raiton, Raikō Gorogoro Tama no Jutsu]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: The user gathers chakra into their fingertips, but changing the nature of the chakra into electricity and then firing it off as what seems to be bullets. These bolts will cause minor burning and shock, however, there is a slight possibility that the bolt may pierce through the thing it hit, if it's fragile.

      Name: Thunder Ball • [Raiton, Raikyū]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: A lightning technique that creates a ball made of lightning that can be hurled at the opponent. When it hits, it sends a painful shock through the opponent’s body, temporarily numbing him.

      Name: Ribbon Effect Skill • [Raiton, Ribon Tegotae no Jutsu]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: A skill that is normally used during the midst of a rain storm. The user will send forth a lightning bolt from their hands, that will be channeled through falling rain drops. When hitting the rain drops, the lightning will separate and scatter, turning into many smaller lightning bolts. Which all are concentrated towards the opponent, to shock them from multiple directions.


      Name: Dragon Lightning Technique • [Raiton, Ryukō No Jutsu]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: Sends a Lightning-created dragon to smash into the opponent, sending forth an incredible shock through the opponents body that can leave their entire body burned and temporarily paralyzed.

      Name: Spinning Lightning Shot • [Raiton, Jiten Rakō Dangan]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: Brings forth lightning that is compressed into a ball. This ball of lightning sends forth shots of lightning that spin through the air (and have slight drill qualities allowing the shot to partially get into the opponents body), giving them a powerful hit. This jutsu is dangerous and the drilling effect may turn into a pierced body.

      Name: Lightning Dragon Tornado • [Raiton, Rairyū No Tatsumaki]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: : Lightning emerges from the user and swirls about as a large tornado shaped like a dragon, capable of heavy hitting and shocking an opponent even if it passes by and discharges. This jutsu is able to destroy the land as it passes by due to the spinning effect it has. If it just barely misses the lightning will still strike him causing him to become numb.

      Name: Tornado Lightning • [Raiton, Tatsumaki Raitoningu]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: A lightning jutsu which harnesses a lot of raw lightning power. The main power of this jutsu is creating long extensions of electricity from the hands. Swinging them around, it tears through the surroundings and creates a massive wave of destruction, leaving the area in a state like if torn up by a tornado.

      Name:Thunder Aeon Skill • [Raiton, Denkō Shō no Jutsu]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Lightning
      Description: A skill in which the user gathers lightning chakra into their own blood, and summon forth a great being of Lightning. This large bird created from Electricity, will flow before the opponent and create a powerful barrier of lightning around them. The beast will then gather up electricity off a large concentrated blast of electrical energy down through the top of the barrier. If the blast does not hit the opponent, the force of the blast will flow outwards and send the opponent into the electrical barrier causing damage.


      Genjutsu Techniques

      Spoiler:

      Name: Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body
      Rank: A
      Type: Genjutsu
      Element: None
      Description: This genjutsu requires the Sharingan and eye contact to be activated, but attempting to use it costs no chakra. Only when the genjutsu is activated is when chakra is lost by the user. The illusion traps the victim in a dark empty space where their body is made of paper that burns from toe to head while the user is watching. The purpose of this jutsu is to use the target's vision of their new form to reduce his/her dexterity, making it harder for the victim to battle or perform hand seals. It makes it that the user is hardly able to see and handseals become impossible after an extended time and the genjutsu is not countered. (5 posts).

      Name: Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
      Rank: A
      Type: Genjutsu
      Element: None
      Description: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the user can stop the Genjutsu cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent.

      Name: Demonic Illusion: Shackling Stakes
      Rank: A
      Element: None
      Type: Genjutsu
      Description: Shackling Stakes is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Sharingan holders. After activating their Sharingan, the user will look into the eyes of their target to bind them with a paralyzing illusion, but attempting to use it costs no chakra. Only when the genjutsu is activated is when chakra is lost by the user. This illusion takes the form of giant spikes which stake them in place and restrict their movement. A powerful enough ninja will be able to fight the bind to give themselves an opportunity to gain freedom.

      Name: Demonic Illusion: Ephemeral
      Rank: B
      Type: Genjutsus
      Element: None
      Description: Unlike his other eye-based genjutsu, Nobunaga does not need to make eye contact with the target to use this technique, instead activating it by simply pointing at them. Eagles flock from him and turn into shuriken that bombard the opponent. They then experience the sensation of their body parts turning into their closest friends.

      Name: Summoning: Lightning Blade Creation
      Rank: B
      Type: None
      Element: N/A
      Description: This is a kind of "ninja tool summon" that, by sealing ninja tools like Shurikens or kunai into a peice of clothing, Such as Nobunaga's wrist plates which allows him to be called upon when needed. The greatest advantage of this technique is that the time between "taking out" a ninja tool, taking the right "stance" and actually "throwing" it is greatly reduced. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning," ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics.

      Name: Shadow Clone Technique • [Kage Bunshin no Jutsu]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: None
      Description: Kage Bunshin is a forbidden technique, that has been a controversial for many years. The Kage Bunshin aka the Shadow Clone, is a clone of the user that is a true clone of the user, that can attack and think on its own, while having 75% of the Stats, plus they can do the same jutsu the user can (except Bunshin Type Jutsu). This jutsu was initially made for spying purposes because once the clone is dispersed, the user and any other clone of his will get all the information gained with that previous clone. Maximum of clones made is four.

      Name: Explosive Shadow Clone • [Bakuretsu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu]
      Rank: A
      Type: None
      Hand Seals:
      Element: None
      Description: Bakuretsu kage Bunshin, is yet another kinjutsu derived from its original jutsu, Kage Bunshin no Jutsu. Its said to be a very powerful Ninjutsu technique where the ninja creates a suicidal Kage Bunshin (shadow clone). After creating it, the clone can detonate himself and explode in combat, taking anyone immediately surrounding it out. When used in close combat, without the enemy noticing, this technique can be quite deadly.

      Name: Multiple Shadow Clone Technique • [Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: None
      Description: This jutsu is even more powerful then the Kage Bunshin ability, because the Tajuuu Kage Bunshin literally means Multiple Shadow Clones. The user can create multiple shadow clones, using less chakra needed then in the regular Kage Bunshin. All of them being able to attack, and do the same things the user can. However when struck, they will burst into smoke. The clone conditions are exactly the same as in Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, except no extra chakra may be granted to them.


      Fire Techniques

      Spoiler:

      Name: Grand Fireball • [Katon, Goukakyuu no Jutsu]
      Rank: C
      Type: NInjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Fire
      Description: This jutsu gathering chakra expanding the chest and refining it to a higher level of chakra. Bringing the hand forth and breathing out that chakra, in which is blow out through the hand. Once leaving the hand it expands outward to a great fireball which covers an area with a radius of fifteen feet.

      Name: Fire Prison • [Katon, Horou no Jutsu]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Fire
      Description: A skill in which generates a circular flame upon the ground, raising up bars of flame and a covering over top. This intense flame heats all within it, preventing water from being created from the inside with the dryness of the air. Touching the sides results in various burns, and while this jutsu is used it can be linked to any other fire jutsu and the jutsu will be fired at the person inside the prison. This jutsu lasts for a maximum of two turns.

      Name: Great Fire Shot • [Katon, Dai Endan]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Fire
      Description: An evolution of the first technique, Endan, which has more power than the previous one. This jutsu allows the user to emit a jet of fire from his mouth which is powerful and can cause serious burning and cover a much bigger area than before.

      Name: Fire Dragon Napalm • [Katon, Karyuu Endan]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Fire
      Description: A skill in which has been considered one of the most powerful streaming fire jutsu. The user gathering up a great deal of chakra within their chest, condensing it and focusing it at the same time. Letting it flow out into the world, bursting forth into a grand stream of flame. This powerful stream having such a flying force and speed that the impact is devastating . This attack flies very fast, and is considered hard to dodge without the use of supplementary jutsu.

      Name: Great Dragon Fire Technique • [Katon, Gouryuuka no Jutsu]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Fire
      Description: This jutsu is a powerful evolution of previous Katon jutsu. The ninja will expel huge dragon head fireballs at their opponent that move at a considerable speed. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete and will cause serious burns. The user sends forth five dragon head fireballs, one at a time but with a short brake between them.

      Name: Burning Ash Accumulation • [Katon, Haisekishou]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Fire
      Description: A skill which will spew forth a strange ash from the mouth, it covers a wide range around the opponents body. Blinding the opponent for a few moments, also providing a chance for the opponent to accidentally breath in the ash. After a few moments, the ash will then combust into a powerful flame entrapping the opponent, partially exploding and causing massive burning damage to an opponent.



      This is my Story

      History/Background Story: Academy ARC: Nobunaga was born in the Hidden Leaf Village. His mother and father were one the more respected members of the Uchiha clan. As seen from his upbringing he was an excellent fighter. So his parents sent him to the ninja academy to hone his skills and make him even greater. He did not disappoint them. After years in the Academy it was apparent that he was a natural born fighter and he graduated the Academy with honors. He is now Genin proving his worth as a ninja.

      Genin ARC: Mission after painstaking mission. Nobunaga completed without fail, even though most of his missions were trivial amongst the citizens of the Leaf helping them out with even the most tedious tasks. But he did them nevertheless and he was quite popular for it was well. He was put on a team with respectable members and they got along fine enough to progress their missions and such. After going on countless D and C ranked missions they all requested a higher ranking mission to their sensei. So their sensei got them a B rank mission where they had to protect a Daimyo on his journey to a neighboring town for an important meeting dealing with the problems with bandits. Ironic enough they ran into a group of them who had ambushed the company everyone defended themselves but were unable to defeat them except their Sensei who flawlessly took out all the rebels. They completed the mission soon after.

      But Nobunaga noticed the big gap in powers between him and the world. He noticed just how weak he was compared to others, especially his teammates who began to take notice in this gap. But after a years worth of being a Genin it was time for the Chuunin exams. Difficult and arduous as the tasks were Nobunaga proved himself worthy and was promoted to Chuunin with flying colors. At the expense that his so called friends shunned him because of his abilities. So Nobunaga then began to stop being so opened with other people to avoid situations like that.

      Chuunin ARC: People were beginning to see just how powerful Nobunaga was going to become. His appearance was drastically changing from handsome to kind of deadly handsome. But he was also becoming very dark in his personality. Usually a very open and charming, was now somewhat distant and dark. This was probably due to the many harder and difficult missions he was now taking. Alot of blood had been shed by his blade. And the mental affect was taking its tole. It was highly unnecessary for so much blood to be shed but it needed to be done to keep the safety of the village and any other being. After being elevated to the prestigious rank of Chuunin Nobunaga was bound solely to the commitment to his village. He had taken a team compromised completely of Genin. And he was a great leader. They went on many missions and completed them flawlessly.

      And his first team grew up over the years together and they too became Chuunin like himself. Over the time the Hokage watched his prowess and was pleased to see that he was exceptional on all levels. Leadership, power, and strategy was all apart of Oda, and the Hokage liked that. So after his final mission as a Chuunin he was promoted to Jounin and was given another team as well. He was well on his way to acquiring true power.

      Jounin: It was well developed after going on the dangerous missions with his team he was suddenly very aware of the situation with himself. It was around this time in his life where he had made his first friendly kill. It wasn't a grand relief to finally be rid of the bad guy like a lot people thought. For the person he had killed was his friend, someone who had the betrayed the Village and went AWOL. It was the hardest thing he had ever had to do in his life, something that would haunt him for years to come, but would eventually fade. As a person whole and wide. He was on his way to achieving great power.

      Sennin: Nobunaga was a powerful shinobi indeed. After training for years he had finally gotten the power he so long sought for. But it also came at a price. So many friends lost in his struggle. So many betrayals its was sickening. He had endured to many hardships to be the person he once was. But the hardships made him stronger, into the respected Jounin he is today. He's on his path to making a name for himself. And for his village. It was indeed this time where he really began to think about what he wanted to do with his life. The protection of his village, or the power that so manifests within him, waiting to grow. That power turn full blast after he had a breach of insanity. Killing three people in his quake, one of them a very close friend, he felt much sorrow about but had achieved a great power in the end. The Mangekyo Sharingan. He fled the village and had started finding other ways to increase his powers.

      Roleplay Sample: Kyogi had been waiting for this opportunity to arrive. The time where the Chuunin would make a fatal mistake. The boy had turned back into his two tails where he was pretty much still guarded. But then he completely left the his guard down by taking off the Gobi's chakra cloak completely. Though no one could see due to the mist. Kyogi using his increased hearing took full advantage of the situation before Naizu could act. One of the clones Shushin 4 yards away from where Genkou was, and Naizu was now walking towards. Making a series of handsigns one clone yelled out, "Raiton, Denkō Shō no Jutsu!" A large barrier of lightning began to erupt around Genkou. Cutting himself away from Naizu before he could reach him. Then in the sky a being of terrifying proportions appeared. Coming from the body of the clone itself. A bird from what its shaped showed. But the bird was humongous. It opened its wings right above the barrier's top. The reason Kyogi created it was he feared Naizu would interrupt yet again before the poison could take full affect. So he captured Genkou in this terrifying cage of destruction. If Naizu interrupted the barrier in any way. The bird would crash down and kill him and Genkou. It didn't matter if the Chuunin died or not. He would still hunt the Gobi down regardless.

      But Kyogi was not a man of one move plans. His other clone who wasn't as close as the others were. Also was making a series of handsigns. But as the clone was doing that Kyogi snapped his fingers, whispering to Hiyo who was at his side. "Take care of the clones." Kyogi disappeared within the mist. Using a techinque of his, Kyogi projected his voice only a to where Naizu was. Appearing only a few feet away from the Mizukage. "I know you cannot see me Naizu. But I can see you. In a sense. But few feet in front of you lays a barrier of powerful proportions. If you interrupt it. Genkou will die. The boy is out of chakra from coming in and out of transformations like that, and performing that very powerful technique. And also his body is deteriorating slowly but surely from the poison. If you don't want to end the boys life so painfully. I suggest you don't interfere. Or the boy will die. Surely. But if you do. The moment you touch that barrier. That enormous giant bird you see before you. Will dive down and incinerate him. Your choice. So please do not obstruct in this battle any further. Unless that is. You want to do battle with me." The Hokage spoke to the Mizukage. Bold words, words that had ill meaning to them if they weren't taken lightly.

      Hiyo had by then opened his mouth and shot a barrage of needles to the clones looking for Kyogi. Using his superior senses he found them all out and directed Hiyo to their positions. Destroying the clones. It was also time for the rest of the plan to come into play. Using his augmented voice the Sandime bellowed to all around the area. "Now." Ebinu, Oza, and Obura began racing towards Genkou's location underground with great speed. Everything was set. The boy would fall any minute. If he moved further he would only set the poison up faster. Death or victory could only be the cause after this. Kyogi began to laugh manically. Projecting his madness through the shroud of mist.




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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Lord Vizer on Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:59 pm

    I took out my transplants because I figured you'd have a problem with it..and everything else but I'll fight for the EMS.
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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Eki Gisou on Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:01 am

    Alright bro, because there's no more EMS on this, you need to add in how much closer to blindness each of your Mangekyo techs are getting you. The gold dust, needs a maximum range (and normally I'd say make it something like Amaterasu, where it's just whatever you can see, but unfortunately that techs banned) as well as a limit on how much of it you can create. Chaotic Implosion, can only work as a one off unfortunately, not a two post lasting game. For the amount of range and destruction potential it has, I'd also add in a daily use limit as well... Maybe start with one. Aheh.

    Anywho, onto the rest of the techs.

    Raiton's All Good, solid job.

    Name: Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body
    Rank: A
    Element: None
    Description: This genjutsu requires the Sharingan and eye contact to be activated, but attempting to use it costs no chakra. Only when the genjutsu is activated is when chakra is lost by the user. The illusion traps the victim in a dark empty space where their body is made of paper that burns from toe to head while the user is watching. The purpose of this jutsu is to use the target's vision of their new form to reduce his/her dexterity, making it harder for the victim to battle or perform hand seals.

    If the Genjutsu reaches completion, how is the opponent effected?

    Fire Release, Melting Rain Skill • [Katon, Yuutename no Jutsu]
    Elemental Ninjutsu, Katon, Offensive, Ranged, A Rank
    Description: A skill in which is one of the most difficult fire based jutsu to master. Within the sky fire chakra is imbued into the clouds from the user. From these clouds, it begins to rain down a series of burning embers destroying the nearby area or a potentially long range target in a rainfall of fiery embers. This skill can also be dangerous to the user. This jutsu lasts for three turns.

    That's a pretty big chakra transmission, you need a better way to get the energy there. Whether it's spitting 'em up, and what goes up, must come down, or visa-vis. I'll leave it up to you.

    EDIT: I just got TOLD! Sorry, Chidori has to be earned iRP through Admin Approved training. Take it up with Revy if it's an issue, otherwise, scrap it for four more jutsu!

    Finally... That was easy, and to be honest, a relative pleasure, thank you for kindly abiding by the rules Viz.


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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Lord Vizer on Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:59 am

    Edited.
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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Eki Gisou on Fri Oct 26, 2012 5:13 am

    You didn't edit the mangekyou eye techniques I requested you to.

    Add in the extra description for rate of blindness and remove the two post usage from the Chaotic Implosion/Explosion as requested. Once again, Gold Dust needs a range, and an amount created limit.


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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Eki Gisou on Fri Oct 26, 2012 5:52 am

    Solid.

    APPROVED and MOVED.

    Color and Ryo on it's way.


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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Echo on Fri Oct 26, 2012 6:44 am

    Before this is fully approved, there's a few more issues i see.


    • Both Obsidian Dust, as well as Sands of Time need a post limit for how long each can stay activated for. You can go longer than the duration of course, at the cost of an eye.

    • The third ability you have listed for 'Both Eyes', I'd have to discuss a few things with the other staff before approving, as Susanoo is the ability that requires both eyes. So for now that ability will remain unapproved until we figure out whether or not Susanoo will be something that's interchangeable. Your app can be approved without it, and later on, after we set some rules, you can make an update for it.

    • Amaterasu is banned so there is no use of you having Blaze release.

    • As a Sennin you start with 14 skill points. You're 1 point over your limit, so drop 1 specialty down to Artisan.

    • Lastly, your Jutsu need to be put on the site template that is offered. (I know it's a pain, but without it, they lack critical detail)


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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Nocturne on Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:24 pm

    As for the blindness part, he does not have to have a blind rating as the sharingan guidelines state how many uses a character has until their eyes lose all light.

    Revy, if you will like to work out something for susanoo just let me know. Honestly, it really isn't that bad of a technique when it is edited. Susanoo is an ability that does not appear in all Uchiha that have the Mangekyou so it remains a choice weapon.
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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Lord Vizer on Sat Oct 27, 2012 3:21 am

    Ok edited.
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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Echo on Sat Oct 27, 2012 3:22 am

    The light element requires a KKG of it's own.


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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Lord Vizer on Sat Oct 27, 2012 3:39 am

    Ok I changed it to Scorch. But I would have really liked to keep the Light. I could have used it as another release to my MS...since I couldn't have Blaze. I would have liked to use Light.
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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Nocturne on Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:03 am

    Scorch is also an element. I know creativity is important, but Mangekyou techniques have their limits. Blaze isn't even an element, just simple manipulation of the amaterasu flames.


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    Re: Nobunaga Oda Uchiha [Do not move yet]

    Post by Nocturne on Sat Oct 27, 2012 10:28 am

    Approved. Note that the third MS ability may be swapped out however our internal discussion turns out.


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