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Konohagakure~


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    The Haitian
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    Village: Konoha
    Letter Rank: A
    Classification: ANBU

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    Post by The Haitian Tue Oct 16, 2012 10:15 pm


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    Who... Am I?

      Name: Cocaine.

      Nickname/Alias: The Haitian.

      Age: 21.

      Gender: Manly Man.

      Is that really me?

      Appearance:
      Cocaine stands at depicted height, but makes up for it in sheer bearing alone. His face is too narrow about the chin to have the classical and dangerously sharp features, although he remedies this by the clipping of his hair to a decent chin length. Cocaine looks as if he has something to hide, though much people would not know. Close enough such an assumption may be, but the expression in Cocaine’s eyes in one, which few would match to a normal warlord. If it were not for the fact that he laughs so much, or possibly even despite it, one could imagine him to be enraged by how intense his gaze can be once attracted to a subject, and by just how much it demands to be granted anything and everything on the spot.

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      Upper Body:
      His upper body is somewhat muscular. Having a lean ratio of toned muscle gained through his own persistence, that isn't bulging muscle, but enough to make him have some type of strength, his arms are very long and have a very good biceps and triceps giving the slight indentation that his arms are longer than normal. With this in mind he has a very good range of attack. Though he appears to be tough, which further applies to the decent amount of scars that lie rampant among the ninja's chest from years from warfare and battle experience; what suits don't do to the same extent they once did is reveal the wearer's background. In our ninja-esque sartorially egalitarian age, one doesn't need to be an Uchiha or a Hyuuga to occupy the economic systemo f his village or know the name of the best tailors. Although it is redundant, due to the fact that the Cocaine can easily change his appearance.

      Height & Weight:
      His weight is not much compared to others and comes to about one-hundred ninety pounds. As he is a tentative demon fighter, it is expected of him to be quick on his feet so that he can make split decision judgment calls at a higher pace. Though sometimes, this can be a somewhat nuisance. His height is where he really shines though at 6'9"; most that don't know him are intimidated by him being much taller than him. Only people who know him actually look at him at eye level on a friend basis, though he has the name Cocaine because of his mental attributes; implicating to his almost speed demon style of fighting. His upper body is brown like the rest.

      Lower Body:
      Cocaine's lower body is longer than his upper body, and could be called long legged. Having such long legs give him the ability to have a faster running speed. His legs not only have a lot to do with speed, but also to do with how he attacks the opponent. Upon his legs, he tends to wear a range of camouflage pants that help him build comfort and flexibility as he takes flight upon the field. Unlike others, he finds training the brain plasticity in order to comprehend his muscles to maximum output helps him in the field better than pure muscle maximization, as his legs are as equally worked upon like the rest of his body. Other than that, not many notable features can be told here, since it is just his legs.
      Weight: 192 lbs.

      Height: 6’9”.

      Ethnicity: Haitian.

      Voice: An ebonic deep voice with a slight Caribbean accent.

        Likes:
      • Human Doubt.
      • Deception.
      • People.
      • Watching.
      • Life.
      • Good.

        Dislikes:
      • People.
      • Organization.
      • Chaos.
      • Pipe Dreams.
      • Evil.


      Personality:
      That the world is a game is an excuse used by more than one soul to explain away precisely -why- they find the ideas of mundane thought to be alternately boring and hysterical, but it is again applied to Cocaine. Take a mind gifted with a proper intellect and give it room to grow, and then introduce to it the lure that all of reality could be understood and controlled-one only had to study it from the proper angle. This mind would belong to a young boy born in the shadow of the towers of others. The key? Water.

      Cocaine possesses just enough intellect to see past the games of breakfast, lunch and bed, and not quite enough to know that buckling down and working to control the world was a far safer venue that setting yourself up as a demonic lord. But to hear it from him, the latter itself would be foolishness; there are far greater prizes to be won than kingdoms or even gods. Cocaine has an ambition which burns inside him to possess reality itself, and to those ends there is nothing sacred. All those who would cling to the practice of gaining traditional power or worshiping deities who seem so weak on their own thrones are considered lacking in ambition by the ninja, who tends to see rules and restrictions as challenges for growth. The concepts of dark arts are laughable for Cocaine , who sees no such thing as good or evil. Morality, in his eyes, is set down by the gods to be followed by quaking mortal sheep, and if you need not obey them then why should you abstain? For this reason, it is quite simple for the man to perform deeds which could be considered perversions of nature or of justice-why bother stopping? Who was going to catch you? The ANBU? Well, if you were weak enough or shortsighted enough to be stopped by a -hunter nin-, then you deserved your fate.

      Understandably, Cocaine thinks of the divine as being nothing more than overgrown humans who have power that they should keep better watch over lest it be taken from them. There is no reason in his eyes as to why a human cannot attain that level, particularly not when the gods pluck away souls and then bind them to their wants.

      By the same token, Cocaine suffers from feeling as if there are no absolutes in the world. He occasionally tires of his own games, knowing by his own logic that reality is only what he is reaching for, and if he should put his side of the playing pieces down then there are no stories of justice or morals to rally him back. He is far too proud to resort to giving into such illusions, however,

      What do you do when you see the seams of the world and also see just how frail they truly are? When you can shake out the game of mortal lives and bind it to your own ambition to give it its only worth, what rule is there to command you when the nights are quiet and the rewards not as bright as they had once seemed to be?

      You entertain yourself. Cocaine has no intentions yet of giving into the same despair which his own logics have brought him to, and if his laughter is a little too wild and a little too out of control-forgive him, he's only having a long day.

      Cocaine also has a noted lack of patience, expecting other people to at least be enrolled in whichever task they claim to be intent on. Those who will not either admit to having no interest or no purpose in being involved with a subject are only wastes of time. When the necromancer has a more relaxed schedule, he does not mind being diverted, but when he is fixed upon a task he demands for it to be completed and to the flames can be resigned any who do not intend to help or get out of his way. Because of this, many can be put off by Cocaine’s mannerisms, which swing from utterly playful to ruthlessly in demand for them to perform appropriately. His life in a complete disarray he follows his own.

      This Ninja also enjoys amused whining and being utterly off-balance in his approach to others. At heart, he knows that he would rather be seen in thrall to a baker's cart than actually resist fulfilling one of his plans due to mere complaints, but it's far too entertaining to watch other people react. For a man with such a sense of pride, he gives up a surprising amount in just how silly he can get-incomprehensible to all save those who see just how sensitive he can get when his intellectual capacities, the true root of his vanity, are mocked and assumed lacking.

      My...Family?

      Clan: Kingwe.

      Unique Clan Features:

      High Sensory: His clan's family features allows him to be able to have a higher than normal sensory capabilities, distinguishing between different shinobi chakra signatures. Cocaine is able to tell exactly who is among a crowd of people and the sensory skills are such that they are even able to tell if their targets are lying based on any fluctuation of their chakra. Past the sensing level, they are able to mask their presence to all but contact style sensing techniques; to such extent that they are able avoid detection by traditional sensory techniques.

      High Intellect: Through a myriad self attained experience, Cocaine's cognitive abilities prefaces the mundane standard. Equipped with a surplus of knowledge, the Ninja is blessed with an intellect that remains on an extremely heightened level. He applies this battle knowledge to the field in his own skirmishes; including his ability to correctly surmise how his opposition reacts against himself.

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: ANBU.

      Letter Rank: A.

      Village: Konohagakure.

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points: 10.


      • 1. Fuinjutsu Artisan.
      • 2. Weaponry Artisan.
      • 3. Ninjutsu Adept.


      -Elements-


      • 1. Water.
      • 2. Lightning.



      -Jutsu-
      E: 5.
      D: 2.
      C: 4.
      B: 2.
      A: 6.
      S: 0.
      _____________
      Non Elemental:

      Clan Jutsu:

      Water:
      Fuuinjutsu:


      This is my Story

      History/Background Story:
      It all started that fated day, the 1st day of the 1st month when he was conceived to the world of men, women, children and ninjas. At an age as young as birth, he was considered different and weird; even to his parents. So much so they would attempt to murder him. Two Years from his birth, when he should have been celebrating his 2nd birthday; his parents had turned on him. Evil in their eyes, hate in their veins, they lunged their weapons on him before turning their own weapons on themselves. He should have died, would have died if it weren't for his care takers. Dead for two minutes, chakra enveloped through his wounds and had restored life to him; said to be the lifesaving chakra that sacrifices the users life, hence why he survived he would remember that day for the rest of his life. However this chakra did not seem to be strong enough to live throughout his whole life.

      Genin Arc.
      Passing the Graduation test, Cocaine was dubbed a genin. Being able to heal his wounds and having extensive fuuin knowledge gave him reason for this. At 12, he was said to have greatness contained in him, enveloped in him; brought in him, just like the chakra enveloped his wounds. He was assigned to a team of ninja who could supposedly compete with his skill, but they could not. In every mission he went on he was considered the outstanding achievement of the team and when the chuunin exams came, he passed...easily. If it wasn't due to the fact of his completely cynical nature, Cocaine found himself always searching for answers. He didn't care of the questions, for it was more like OCD. Such actions had led him to make the foreshadow jump to finally activating his Doujutsu and coming apart his clan. The regiment of when the man completely turned around in bodily form would be explained.

      Chuunin Arc.
      Assigned to a Konoha General of Fuuin skill, Cocaine learnt the vast majority of things through her. She was his idol, besides being a different gender, he stood for everything she stood for. Countless missions into enemy territory proved the best of him. On one occasion, he had to be rescued by her, but never again should he be rescued as he trained for two days flat out. His worth was proved on a mission; where she they were met by several missing-ninja. She murdered two, however the last one, the third, overpowered her and just as he was about to murder her Cocaine interfered and fought the A ranked ninja by himself. The fight ended fast, resulting in the death of his opponent. From that day, several missions passed until the jounin exams happened. Most notable on one of these missions he met a man by the name of Alhambra, the certain Medical Ninja of the Leaf. He found the man much similar to himself, though the only difference was, Alhambra was more open and in tune to the chaotic side unlike the Mist ninja here. Cocaine found himself indulged as their acquaintance was made, and plans made for the future ahead.

      Jounin Arc.
      Passing the jounin exams was slightly harder than expected but easier than the fight he had several missions ago. He fought a hyuuga, beating him beyond all things with his famed Fuuinjutsus. He was considered a fully fledge jounin, meeting the hokage formerly and being assigned his own team of ninja. ----- Assigned to lead squad 4 of Jiro, Yusei and Kimiko. Cocaine found peculiar things and multiple flaws with his fuuinjutsu and did a radical change when he was approached by the Hokage to be a part of the 12 guardians. He figured, to be unique and awesome he would need to help the village and he has done so by learning the laborious skill of Fuuinjutsu. From then on he lost all knowledge of fuuin chakra and is now in possession of sealing [fuuin]. Since then, he lead his team on multiple missions, created a seal to protect his famed village; go up against an Akatsuki and be informed he was to take over Anbu. He didn't deny the offer and currently leads the Anbu Team.

      Anbu Arc.
      Cocaine went through what seemed like the longest part of his life, however with the shortest length of time. He experienced the time of two leaders, Yuto Hozumi and Orito Aburame; for which Yuto was murdered by the previous Akatsuki leader. From that day on and with the new leadership of Orito, Cocaine vowed to rid the world of impurities and that meant by destroying the Akatsuki Leaders to come. He stayed true to that vow by slaughtering the predecessor of the man who killed his former Sensei; Bob Kingwe. However, with the accomplishment of his vow; his best and only friend was murdered as a result. He carried the body of his co-leader and friend, Ayumu Peinto for days before arriving to his home and laying his friend to rest. From then on, things began to spiral downhill. After this stage, things began to spiral downhill and with major lack of sleep, depression and some form of anxiety; Cocaine began to find a need to travel and do as he feels. He received a letter from the Elders of the Karta to visit the small village for which they inhabited. He left immediately.. Whilst passing through the Country of Fire, Cocaine began to realize a truer purpose in life and set out to pursuit it, with the beginning of meeting with the Elders. From upon his return...Life changed.
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    Last edited by The Haitian on Wed Oct 17, 2012 3:00 am; edited 5 times in total
    Kenji
    Kenji


    Posts : 66
    Ryō : 4311
    Join date : 2012-10-12
    Age : 31
    Location : Michigan, U.S.

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Kirigakure
    Letter Rank: A
    Classification: Jounin

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    Post by Kenji Tue Oct 16, 2012 11:31 pm

    You are aware that if you create your clan later than you won't be able to use any clan jutsu or your KKG until it's created and you've purchased/trained the jutsu and trained to use the KKG. Apart from that I've noticed a few small details.

    1. You state the you like good and dislike evil, but in your personality you say "The concepts of dark arts are laughable for Cocaine , who sees no such thing as good or evil." It's not really a big deal, just pointing that out.

    2. I take it from your history and the "S-Rank" that you're going for the ANBU Captain position, just in case you missed it that position is only obtainable in RP as stated here. On a side note you may only start as A rank for basic ANBU, but you can be later promoted to S.

    3. You're also short on abilities, but I expect you knew that, you also double counted an A Rank so you only have 5 of them. The main thing I have to say here is that I would like to see more of a description in some of your jutsus.

    • Gogyou Fuuin/Kaiin: Whats the range? How long does it take? (As one simply cannot have one-hit jutsus that can effect all ranks I would suggest it be more of a immobilization technique for higher ranks) What rank can it hold, slow down, slightly limit, and for how long? What's the upkeep?
    • Shishou Fuuin: How powerful of a creature, are we talking Bijuu? What kind of people would survive this? How long does this take?
    • Keiyaku Fuuin: More description in general, it's only one sentence.
    • Soushi no Jutsu: How much water roughly?
    • Mizu no Tatsumaki: Give a fair rank for Taijutsu and Ninjutsu defenses.
    • Suiryuudan no Jutsu: A little more description in general, namely how big.
    • Bunshin no Jutsu: "Each additional clone will cost 2 chakra each." Convert that to a rank.
    • Flight Technique: That isn't available to start with, has to be earned with admin permission or through the Antique Shop.
    • Kai: This only works up to a certain rank of Genjutsu pending the rank of Kai used. Refer to this guide for more info.
    The Haitian
    The Haitian
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    Posts : 26
    Ryō : 4950
    Join date : 2012-10-15

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Konoha
    Letter Rank: A
    Classification: ANBU

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    Post by The Haitian Wed Oct 17, 2012 12:07 am

    On the KKG, by "later" I was in reference to after my character application is accepted.

    1. The contradiction is a big item in his personality. I made it that way so it actually makes sense when I RP as this character.

    2. That was an error, and was fixed accordingly to A rank.

    3. These jutsu's area all cannon. And can only be used in the same terms as the Cannon state. Allow me to divulge upon them.

    -The Gyogi Fuuin was very specific in cannonical terms. Everything you're requesting was already defined in Cannon and the description. My description is from Naruto Wiki actually, it seals the victim's chakra and incapacitates the user for a short time, their chakra only being able to become unreleased from it's unstable state by someone using the release on the victim. Just as Jiraiya used on Naruto. The full extent of the debuffs are up to the Victim completely, though the basis of the technique is to seal the victims' chakra and make it unstable for use without the release. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Five_Elements_Seal

    -The Shishi Fuuin is meant in conjuction for body's of Chakra. Though primarily Bijuu's, the jutsu is the same as cannon. Though, there is a duration on the technique regardless I do not actually plan on using it in battle.
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Four_Symbols_Seal

    -The Keiyaku Fuuin description I got from Naruto Wiki, though it has been developed more thoroughly.
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Contract_Seal

    -Mizu No Tatsumaki has been omitted for the sake of simplicity.

    -Bunshin Technique was a copypasta error, and has been omitted.

    -Water Dragon Technique, and the Soushi technique is all in correlation to the amount of chakra used for that technique. Making it improbable to specify a size to the jutsu. Although, The Water Dragon Technique has been omitted.

    -Kai: Glad to know you made a rule because of my trouble. It has been edited.
    Kenji
    Kenji


    Posts : 66
    Ryō : 4311
    Join date : 2012-10-12
    Age : 31
    Location : Michigan, U.S.

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Kirigakure
    Letter Rank: A
    Classification: Jounin

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