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    The Haitian
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    Join date : 2012-10-15

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    Village: Konoha
    Letter Rank: A
    Classification: ANBU

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    Post by The Haitian on Tue Oct 16, 2012 10:15 pm


    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name: Cocaine.

      Nickname/Alias: The Haitian.

      Age: 21.

      Gender: Manly Man.

      Is that really me?

      Appearance:
      Cocaine stands at depicted height, but makes up for it in sheer bearing alone. His face is too narrow about the chin to have the classical and dangerously sharp features, although he remedies this by the clipping of his hair to a decent chin length. Cocaine looks as if he has something to hide, though much people would not know. Close enough such an assumption may be, but the expression in Cocaine’s eyes in one, which few would match to a normal warlord. If it were not for the fact that he laughs so much, or possibly even despite it, one could imagine him to be enraged by how intense his gaze can be once attracted to a subject, and by just how much it demands to be granted anything and everything on the spot.



      Upper Body:
      His upper body is somewhat muscular. Having a lean ratio of toned muscle gained through his own persistence, that isn't bulging muscle, but enough to make him have some type of strength, his arms are very long and have a very good biceps and triceps giving the slight indentation that his arms are longer than normal. With this in mind he has a very good range of attack. Though he appears to be tough, which further applies to the decent amount of scars that lie rampant among the ninja's chest from years from warfare and battle experience; what suits don't do to the same extent they once did is reveal the wearer's background. In our ninja-esque sartorially egalitarian age, one doesn't need to be an Uchiha or a Hyuuga to occupy the economic systemo f his village or know the name of the best tailors. Although it is redundant, due to the fact that the Cocaine can easily change his appearance.

      Height & Weight:
      His weight is not much compared to others and comes to about one-hundred ninety pounds. As he is a tentative demon fighter, it is expected of him to be quick on his feet so that he can make split decision judgment calls at a higher pace. Though sometimes, this can be a somewhat nuisance. His height is where he really shines though at 6'9"; most that don't know him are intimidated by him being much taller than him. Only people who know him actually look at him at eye level on a friend basis, though he has the name Cocaine because of his mental attributes; implicating to his almost speed demon style of fighting. His upper body is brown like the rest.

      Lower Body:
      Cocaine's lower body is longer than his upper body, and could be called long legged. Having such long legs give him the ability to have a faster running speed. His legs not only have a lot to do with speed, but also to do with how he attacks the opponent. Upon his legs, he tends to wear a range of camouflage pants that help him build comfort and flexibility as he takes flight upon the field. Unlike others, he finds training the brain plasticity in order to comprehend his muscles to maximum output helps him in the field better than pure muscle maximization, as his legs are as equally worked upon like the rest of his body. Other than that, not many notable features can be told here, since it is just his legs.
      Weight: 192 lbs.

      Height: 6’9”.

      Ethnicity: Haitian.

      Voice: An ebonic deep voice with a slight Caribbean accent.

        Likes:
      • Human Doubt.
      • Deception.
      • People.
      • Watching.
      • Life.
      • Good.

        Dislikes:
      • People.
      • Organization.
      • Chaos.
      • Pipe Dreams.
      • Evil.


      Personality:
      That the world is a game is an excuse used by more than one soul to explain away precisely -why- they find the ideas of mundane thought to be alternately boring and hysterical, but it is again applied to Cocaine. Take a mind gifted with a proper intellect and give it room to grow, and then introduce to it the lure that all of reality could be understood and controlled-one only had to study it from the proper angle. This mind would belong to a young boy born in the shadow of the towers of others. The key? Water.

      Cocaine possesses just enough intellect to see past the games of breakfast, lunch and bed, and not quite enough to know that buckling down and working to control the world was a far safer venue that setting yourself up as a demonic lord. But to hear it from him, the latter itself would be foolishness; there are far greater prizes to be won than kingdoms or even gods. Cocaine has an ambition which burns inside him to possess reality itself, and to those ends there is nothing sacred. All those who would cling to the practice of gaining traditional power or worshiping deities who seem so weak on their own thrones are considered lacking in ambition by the ninja, who tends to see rules and restrictions as challenges for growth. The concepts of dark arts are laughable for Cocaine , who sees no such thing as good or evil. Morality, in his eyes, is set down by the gods to be followed by quaking mortal sheep, and if you need not obey them then why should you abstain? For this reason, it is quite simple for the man to perform deeds which could be considered perversions of nature or of justice-why bother stopping? Who was going to catch you? The ANBU? Well, if you were weak enough or shortsighted enough to be stopped by a -hunter nin-, then you deserved your fate.

      Understandably, Cocaine thinks of the divine as being nothing more than overgrown humans who have power that they should keep better watch over lest it be taken from them. There is no reason in his eyes as to why a human cannot attain that level, particularly not when the gods pluck away souls and then bind them to their wants.

      By the same token, Cocaine suffers from feeling as if there are no absolutes in the world. He occasionally tires of his own games, knowing by his own logic that reality is only what he is reaching for, and if he should put his side of the playing pieces down then there are no stories of justice or morals to rally him back. He is far too proud to resort to giving into such illusions, however,

      What do you do when you see the seams of the world and also see just how frail they truly are? When you can shake out the game of mortal lives and bind it to your own ambition to give it its only worth, what rule is there to command you when the nights are quiet and the rewards not as bright as they had once seemed to be?

      You entertain yourself. Cocaine has no intentions yet of giving into the same despair which his own logics have brought him to, and if his laughter is a little too wild and a little too out of control-forgive him, he's only having a long day.

      Cocaine also has a noted lack of patience, expecting other people to at least be enrolled in whichever task they claim to be intent on. Those who will not either admit to having no interest or no purpose in being involved with a subject are only wastes of time. When the necromancer has a more relaxed schedule, he does not mind being diverted, but when he is fixed upon a task he demands for it to be completed and to the flames can be resigned any who do not intend to help or get out of his way. Because of this, many can be put off by Cocaine’s mannerisms, which swing from utterly playful to ruthlessly in demand for them to perform appropriately. His life in a complete disarray he follows his own.

      This Ninja also enjoys amused whining and being utterly off-balance in his approach to others. At heart, he knows that he would rather be seen in thrall to a baker's cart than actually resist fulfilling one of his plans due to mere complaints, but it's far too entertaining to watch other people react. For a man with such a sense of pride, he gives up a surprising amount in just how silly he can get-incomprehensible to all save those who see just how sensitive he can get when his intellectual capacities, the true root of his vanity, are mocked and assumed lacking.

      My...Family?

      Clan: Kingwe.

      Unique Clan Features:

      High Sensory: His clan's family features allows him to be able to have a higher than normal sensory capabilities, distinguishing between different shinobi chakra signatures. Cocaine is able to tell exactly who is among a crowd of people and the sensory skills are such that they are even able to tell if their targets are lying based on any fluctuation of their chakra. Past the sensing level, they are able to mask their presence to all but contact style sensing techniques; to such extent that they are able avoid detection by traditional sensory techniques.

      High Intellect: Through a myriad self attained experience, Cocaine's cognitive abilities prefaces the mundane standard. Equipped with a surplus of knowledge, the Ninja is blessed with an intellect that remains on an extremely heightened level. He applies this battle knowledge to the field in his own skirmishes; including his ability to correctly surmise how his opposition reacts against himself.

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: ANBU.

      Letter Rank: A.

      Village: Konohagakure.

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points: 10.


      • 1. Fuinjutsu Artisan.
      • 2. Weaponry Artisan.
      • 3. Ninjutsu Adept.


      -Elements-


      • 1. Water.
      • 2. Lightning.



      -Jutsu-
      E: 5.
      D: 2.
      C: 4.
      B: 2.
      A: 6.
      S: 0.
      _____________
      Non Elemental:

      Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element:N/A
      Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

      Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

      Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

      Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

      Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

      Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
      Rank: D
      Element: N/A
      Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

      Name: Kai - Release
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the effect of the spell.


      Clan Jutsu:

      Name: Kingwe Kommunication
      Rank: C
      Type: Fuuinjutsu
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: None
      Description: After physically placing a special reciprocating seal on the target in question, the user can send messages to the target in the form of a scroll. Said scroll will summon to the target with an accompanying sound in determined by the sender.


      Name: Kapital Kastle
      Rank: B
      Type: Fuuinjutsu
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: None
      Description: Upon Killing an enemy, the user opens the victim's head and places a seal on their brain. Storing their memories in a seal, stored within the Doujutsu. The Sealed memories can be viewed upon by the user in a library esque manner. Although Jutsu's are viewed upon, the user cannot learn them until it is trained for.


      Water:

      Kirigakure no Jutsu
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Rank: D
      Element: Water
      The user creates a thick mist in the air, which makes it impossible for anyone (even the user) to see anything. The user must then use his superior assassin skills to kill the enemy. This jutsu requires water around.

      Ethereal Specification
      Rank: C
      Type: Water
      Element: Water
      Description: Description:The user spreads his chakra around him, thinning it out so it still has a connection to him. It's essence is similar to chakra strings, therefore a sustain used or multiple connections does not tire the useras freqently than just expelling chakra. This tech goes out to draw in moisture, which will be controlled by the chakra's command in an ethereal midset the dam like nature up to the discretion of the ninja himself.
      Drawback: Every time he uses this technique, the man undergoes a brief mental state of Increased blood pressure, Constricted blood vessels, Dilated pupils, Mental alertness, Increased energy, Increased heart rate, Decreased appetite, Increased temperature. These temperamental effects seem to highly alter him in battle.

      Mizu Shuugou no Jutsu
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Rank: C
      This jutsu allows the user to gather water from the environment around him, like from the air, soil, etc. However, if in dry lands, this jutsu is useless.

      Suiton Daibakufu no Jutsu
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Rank: A
      Element: Water
      The user creates a water vortex, but instead of rising up like in Mizu no Tatsumaki, this vortex will move forward trampling the opponent and carrying him in the vortex until the jutsu stops or it founds an obstacle.

      Mizu Soushi no Jutsu
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Rank: A
      Element: Water
      This is a highly advanced water jutsu on which the user spits out a huge amount of water from which he can perform any other kind of water jutsu.
      Fuuinjutsu:

      Name: Keiyaku Fuuin
      Rank: C
      Type: Fuuinjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: When the user implements this fūinjutsu on a summoner, it removes any direct control the summoner has over a summoned creature. Contact of the summoner's body is necessary. Though the Contract Seal removes the summoner's ability to control its summon, it does not give the user of the fūinjutsu the ability to control the summon in turn, nor does it remove a summoner's ability to continue to summon the creature.

      Name: Fuuka Houin
      Rank: B
      Type: Fuuinjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: Fuuka Houin is a Fuuinjutsu that allows the ninja to seal away a nearby fire. After unrolling a scroll to hold the fire, the ninja writes the needed sealing incantation onto the scroll. Then by forming the needed handseals, a vapor will emanate from the scroll to encompass the fire and take it back to the scroll for sealing.

      Name: Fuuja Houin
      Rank: A
      Type: Fuuinjutsu
      Description: Fuuja Houin is a Fuuinjutsu used to counter-act the effects of a cursed seal. The ninja writes the needed seal characters on the ground and body of the person cursed with the seal. The ninja then forms the needed hand seals and places his hand over the cursed seal and then activates the written seal. The seal characters will then retreat to surround the cursed seal in a circular seal. Though the Fuuja Houin can work well against lesser seals, it will not be able to fully stop a cursed seal placed by a powerful, skilled ninja.


      Name: Gogyou Fuuin/Kaiin
      Rank: A
      Type: Fuuinjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: This technique produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become unconscious and unable to fight for a short time.

      Name:Shishou Fuuin
      Rank: A
      Type: Fuuinjutsu
      Description:This is a sealing technique based on the fūinjutsu of Uzushiogakure. The sealing formula is used to seal any target into a human body or an object, and is mainly used when a giant enemy or evil spirit needs to be sealed away. To use it, it is necessary for the user to have great ability. This has a 3 post duration as this standalone technique.





      This is my Story

      History/Background Story:
      It all started that fated day, the 1st day of the 1st month when he was conceived to the world of men, women, children and ninjas. At an age as young as birth, he was considered different and weird; even to his parents. So much so they would attempt to murder him. Two Years from his birth, when he should have been celebrating his 2nd birthday; his parents had turned on him. Evil in their eyes, hate in their veins, they lunged their weapons on him before turning their own weapons on themselves. He should have died, would have died if it weren't for his care takers. Dead for two minutes, chakra enveloped through his wounds and had restored life to him; said to be the lifesaving chakra that sacrifices the users life, hence why he survived he would remember that day for the rest of his life. However this chakra did not seem to be strong enough to live throughout his whole life.

      Genin Arc.
      Passing the Graduation test, Cocaine was dubbed a genin. Being able to heal his wounds and having extensive fuuin knowledge gave him reason for this. At 12, he was said to have greatness contained in him, enveloped in him; brought in him, just like the chakra enveloped his wounds. He was assigned to a team of ninja who could supposedly compete with his skill, but they could not. In every mission he went on he was considered the outstanding achievement of the team and when the chuunin exams came, he passed...easily. If it wasn't due to the fact of his completely cynical nature, Cocaine found himself always searching for answers. He didn't care of the questions, for it was more like OCD. Such actions had led him to make the foreshadow jump to finally activating his Doujutsu and coming apart his clan. The regiment of when the man completely turned around in bodily form would be explained.

      Chuunin Arc.
      Assigned to a Konoha General of Fuuin skill, Cocaine learnt the vast majority of things through her. She was his idol, besides being a different gender, he stood for everything she stood for. Countless missions into enemy territory proved the best of him. On one occasion, he had to be rescued by her, but never again should he be rescued as he trained for two days flat out. His worth was proved on a mission; where she they were met by several missing-ninja. She murdered two, however the last one, the third, overpowered her and just as he was about to murder her Cocaine interfered and fought the A ranked ninja by himself. The fight ended fast, resulting in the death of his opponent. From that day, several missions passed until the jounin exams happened. Most notable on one of these missions he met a man by the name of Alhambra, the certain Medical Ninja of the Leaf. He found the man much similar to himself, though the only difference was, Alhambra was more open and in tune to the chaotic side unlike the Mist ninja here. Cocaine found himself indulged as their acquaintance was made, and plans made for the future ahead.

      Jounin Arc.
      Passing the jounin exams was slightly harder than expected but easier than the fight he had several missions ago. He fought a hyuuga, beating him beyond all things with his famed Fuuinjutsus. He was considered a fully fledge jounin, meeting the hokage formerly and being assigned his own team of ninja. ----- Assigned to lead squad 4 of Jiro, Yusei and Kimiko. Cocaine found peculiar things and multiple flaws with his fuuinjutsu and did a radical change when he was approached by the Hokage to be a part of the 12 guardians. He figured, to be unique and awesome he would need to help the village and he has done so by learning the laborious skill of Fuuinjutsu. From then on he lost all knowledge of fuuin chakra and is now in possession of sealing [fuuin]. Since then, he lead his team on multiple missions, created a seal to protect his famed village; go up against an Akatsuki and be informed he was to take over Anbu. He didn't deny the offer and currently leads the Anbu Team.

      Anbu Arc.
      Cocaine went through what seemed like the longest part of his life, however with the shortest length of time. He experienced the time of two leaders, Yuto Hozumi and Orito Aburame; for which Yuto was murdered by the previous Akatsuki leader. From that day on and with the new leadership of Orito, Cocaine vowed to rid the world of impurities and that meant by destroying the Akatsuki Leaders to come. He stayed true to that vow by slaughtering the predecessor of the man who killed his former Sensei; Bob Kingwe. However, with the accomplishment of his vow; his best and only friend was murdered as a result. He carried the body of his co-leader and friend, Ayumu Peinto for days before arriving to his home and laying his friend to rest. From then on, things began to spiral downhill. After this stage, things began to spiral downhill and with major lack of sleep, depression and some form of anxiety; Cocaine began to find a need to travel and do as he feels. He received a letter from the Elders of the Karta to visit the small village for which they inhabited. He left immediately.. Whilst passing through the Country of Fire, Cocaine began to realize a truer purpose in life and set out to pursuit it, with the beginning of meeting with the Elders. From upon his return...Life changed.
      Roleplay Sample:
      Spoiler:
      Cocaine’s bayonet flew straight into the tree, missing the target he had aimed to get, the werewolf Mindy. Cocaine’s eyes narrowed as he watched Meyers throw a chain of bayonets at her position. With haste, the hunter pulled out the bayonet form the back and backed up to escape being caught in the explosion. Time seemed to slow down to a crawl as the fate of the werewolf became unknown to both parties. Did she escape? Did she suffer? There was no idea that compelled Cocaine to believe that this situation was not becoming parties but also to the other interlopers who would decide to on-look on their actions. Cocaine surveyed the area around him, he noticed that the area was engulfed in fire form the explosion that they caused, the fire was quickly growing into a forest fire warped the scenario a deprivation of hell. One lure can snag a thousand lures, which seemed to correspond the licks of heat that steadily rose the climatic setting around Cocaine himself. he glanced at Meyers who stood stationary with his bible in his hand and the glasses that reflected the fire around him. Cocaine had expected more werewolves to come to the scene following Mindy's attack, since from the hunter's memory, these werewolves travelled in packs. Mindy herself, must have had no pack, or werewolves themselves were afraid of death and had no sense of compassion toward one another. Simple cowards, since that was what dogs were. Energy spiralled up toward the sky and Cocaine watched clouds gather innocuously, with no heed to logic whatsoever the clouds of the night blockaded he moon and someone arrived. a spiralling bolt of red electricity smacked down against the ground, thunder crackled with ferocity of its speed, ripping apart the oxygen that surrounded the electricity with absolute parallel. A man stood in the wake of the lightening, dressed in black with a tacky vest on top of him. one thought ran through Cocaine’s peripheral lobes. He could only sum up one thing about this man on first thought. Was it negative? The Hunter couldn't determine. Was it positive? To Cocaine’s sense of humor, yes. This seemingly omnipotent being had no sense of style.

      Cocaine himself stood hunched underneath a burning tree at six feet and nine inches, his clothes were ragged in the the tribal African monastery apparel. He was sprouting his African heritage that day, due to it being black history month, and his hat he had a complete one foot tall multi colored rag. Against his ancient tape player he had a steady track of kompa playing, as his body slowly moved in compliance with the systematic bass of the tribal music. Cocaine himself looked up daringly at the sky to see if some mode of transportation was flying by that would let this man see their destruction and decide to come upon it. Getting a negative answer, Iops' facade become feral and he shouted toward the sky. His back pulsated with energy as silver dust blew in from the break of the forest and rain tormented down from the sky. The water of the rain stripped the fire that ravaged he forest of its oxygen, putting it out effectively. The pure substance free flowing against the body of Cocaine and pelted against he ground around him. Surely the man in front of him wasn't an angel, and from a second observation, he wasn't a demon. Cocaine could have considered him a nephilim but as he recalled, they dressed much better than that. This man was standing around for no reason, Kingwe could determine that he was waiting for someone a friend, an ally, or maybe even a partner. Cocaine found this disgusting, as someone who had the ability to descend from the sky like a god would need help to kill humans. The hunter had made an assumed guess but surely he was not here to kill Mindy the werewolf, for that would be a complete buzz kill for Cocaine. An asterisk of though compiled onto Cocaine’s next actions, while he waited for his friend, Cocaine would give his guest a welcome, since he seemed to be interested in what he was doing here in this area. Cocaine gripped the bayonet in his hand, slinging it up into the air. he dashed toward the man. From his descent Cocaine could safely say that he had some control over electricity since he did not seem to be affected by the lightening and ha someone how discolored the nature of it.

      A freak of nature.

      Cocaine’s teeth gritted as he ran straight for the man who descended he could feel his conscious losing control as Cocaine puffed on a joint of marijuana and his legs pumped forward. Taking infused water, then breaking it down for a second, he had the atoms of hydrogen and oxygen collide against each other. Because the water itself did not conduct electricity, the aMP that the human increased himself with charged his nervous system. His experimented on body allowed him to sustain such a boost in his reflexes, the pure amp conducting it with the speed of electricity itself. Cocaine always found it a good thing to put even out the playing field when he fought. Instantly, the water on Cocaine seemed to waver and splatter off as he ran straight past the man who descended. Cocaine , turned his figure around as a deep murky water spouted form the ground around this interloper that was diluted with so much silver and iron, it looked as if it was a wall and not a liquid at all. A melodic tune rang though the head of Cocaine while he initiated his attack, as he heard a deep voice animate from within him. in med dash Cocaine clutched his chest and fell over. An obscure green surrounded his body as he rose once again, his body seeming to be much more calm now. His sprint started against as the bayonet began to descend toward the floor. The murky sheet of water rose form the front of the man's body as Cocaine himself controlled the water behind it. Because of the silver properties of the blade, Cocaine no longer had to put his own silver in the blade itself. He manipulated the atoms of the water behind the blade, as he boosted its speed. Releasing the atoms itself upon the individual electrons the handle of the bayonet tore off due to its speed as a cloud appeared around it. Once it passed through the cloud itself, the bayonet entered mach speed. Electrons pushed against itself as more opposite electrons boosted it faster as the bayonet itself reached light speed. While the sheet of dark liquid stayed stationary form the ground and to the full height of the man, like a wall, it stood two feet away from the man's body. The bayonet was pushed into a new direction at the last minute. Spinning into a blazed glory, the slick bayonet rushed forward the area of the man's chest. Cocaine knew that this man was not ordinary, but or one thing. he seemed to resemble a human body so he must have had human parts. Not knowing what it would do, Cocaine targeted his heart. The bayonet passed through the dark water from where it was hidden and it struck forward without losing any of its speed to attempt to impale the heart of the Mystery man.

      As Cocaine passed by the man once against on his left, the attack proceeded at the same time. The hunter ended up back where he had started as silver bands appeared around his finger. From that, a thin layer of pure water branched off the silver on the whole of his hands while he touched the ground. The rain began to blow harder, pelting Cocaine back as he continued to hunch over. Looking at Meyers do whatever the hell he was doing, Cocaine made a fence of pure water sprout out of the ground in coordinated places. Every two to ten feet, a fence of a 15 feet height sprouted from the ground. Cocaine couldn't think of how the battle that was about to occur was going to turn out. He wouldn't necessarily determine the winner straight out but Cocaine had his..."doubts" on the abilities of this mystery man as of now. His attack that he launched against the interloper was simply a test. A test of how better Cocaine had gotten himself and a test over the time period that he stayed dormant from the face of the earth. Cocaine stood there, waiting on the actions of Meyers, and the new comer that This interloper had dictated with his body language. But something was off, what the man had said when he arrived had made Cocaine think that there was someone watching the area. Why the werewolf forest? Cocaine had no idea, maybe these seemingly omnipotent people had thought that these beasts of burden were their pets. Cocaine could safely assume form that statement that this man in black thought the world revolved around him, or simply that the everyone exited to please him. Cocaine decided to just ignore what he said all together. A quick and efficient death would suit him just as he had planned to do with Mindy herself. But there was something off with the girl herself. With the fact that she was oddly nimble in her movements, she often defied logic. Cocaine shrugged it off, knowing that things in this world simply can never be explained by quick thinking and first glance judging.




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    Re: Ocean Spray[ANBU]

    Post by Kenji on Tue Oct 16, 2012 11:31 pm

    You are aware that if you create your clan later than you won't be able to use any clan jutsu or your KKG until it's created and you've purchased/trained the jutsu and trained to use the KKG. Apart from that I've noticed a few small details.

    1. You state the you like good and dislike evil, but in your personality you say "The concepts of dark arts are laughable for Cocaine , who sees no such thing as good or evil." It's not really a big deal, just pointing that out.

    2. I take it from your history and the "S-Rank" that you're going for the ANBU Captain position, just in case you missed it that position is only obtainable in RP as stated here. On a side note you may only start as A rank for basic ANBU, but you can be later promoted to S.

    3. You're also short on abilities, but I expect you knew that, you also double counted an A Rank so you only have 5 of them. The main thing I have to say here is that I would like to see more of a description in some of your jutsus.

    • Gogyou Fuuin/Kaiin: Whats the range? How long does it take? (As one simply cannot have one-hit jutsus that can effect all ranks I would suggest it be more of a immobilization technique for higher ranks) What rank can it hold, slow down, slightly limit, and for how long? What's the upkeep?
    • Shishou Fuuin: How powerful of a creature, are we talking Bijuu? What kind of people would survive this? How long does this take?
    • Keiyaku Fuuin: More description in general, it's only one sentence.
    • Soushi no Jutsu: How much water roughly?
    • Mizu no Tatsumaki: Give a fair rank for Taijutsu and Ninjutsu defenses.
    • Suiryuudan no Jutsu: A little more description in general, namely how big.
    • Bunshin no Jutsu: "Each additional clone will cost 2 chakra each." Convert that to a rank.
    • Flight Technique: That isn't available to start with, has to be earned with admin permission or through the Antique Shop.
    • Kai: This only works up to a certain rank of Genjutsu pending the rank of Kai used. Refer to this guide for more info.
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    Re: Ocean Spray[ANBU]

    Post by The Haitian on Wed Oct 17, 2012 12:07 am

    On the KKG, by "later" I was in reference to after my character application is accepted.

    1. The contradiction is a big item in his personality. I made it that way so it actually makes sense when I RP as this character.

    2. That was an error, and was fixed accordingly to A rank.

    3. These jutsu's area all cannon. And can only be used in the same terms as the Cannon state. Allow me to divulge upon them.

    -The Gyogi Fuuin was very specific in cannonical terms. Everything you're requesting was already defined in Cannon and the description. My description is from Naruto Wiki actually, it seals the victim's chakra and incapacitates the user for a short time, their chakra only being able to become unreleased from it's unstable state by someone using the release on the victim. Just as Jiraiya used on Naruto. The full extent of the debuffs are up to the Victim completely, though the basis of the technique is to seal the victims' chakra and make it unstable for use without the release. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Five_Elements_Seal

    -The Shishi Fuuin is meant in conjuction for body's of Chakra. Though primarily Bijuu's, the jutsu is the same as cannon. Though, there is a duration on the technique regardless I do not actually plan on using it in battle.
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Four_Symbols_Seal

    -The Keiyaku Fuuin description I got from Naruto Wiki, though it has been developed more thoroughly.
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Contract_Seal

    -Mizu No Tatsumaki has been omitted for the sake of simplicity.

    -Bunshin Technique was a copypasta error, and has been omitted.

    -Water Dragon Technique, and the Soushi technique is all in correlation to the amount of chakra used for that technique. Making it improbable to specify a size to the jutsu. Although, The Water Dragon Technique has been omitted.

    -Kai: Glad to know you made a rule because of my trouble. It has been edited.


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    Re: Ocean Spray[ANBU]

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