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    Charlie K (ANBU)

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    Charlie K
    ANBU Black-Ops
    ANBU Black-Ops

    Posts : 18
    Ryō : 2449
    Join date : 2012-10-17

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Konoha
    Letter Rank: A
    Classification: ANBU

    Charlie K (ANBU)

    Post by Charlie K on Wed Oct 17, 2012 4:23 am


    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name: Charlie "Kun" Kaguya.

      Nickname/Alias: Charlie-K

      Age: 31.

      Gender: Male.

      Is that really me?

      Appearance: Face & Hair: He has a very nice tousle of hair that is very soft and silky, like a kitten's mane when someone touches and pets it. It took a lot of shampoo products to maintain the rather soft side of it, it's also rather short in a way that it doesn't for some reason cover his face as the hair is always in a permanent parted bang style. His face meanwhile is beautiful, he has a big nose that shows his heritage as a powerful person, and distinctively beady eyes which can stare someone down, or be mistaken for being asleep. Whichever the case, he has black eyes, and a very firm mouth. He has smooth skin on his face too missing any scars, and for some reason he resembles a famous movie star in Kung-Fu flicks.

      Torso: He has absolutely no scars in any way, and tends to actually keep his body rather fit and athletically built to exploit every manner of muscles there is instead of being a big lumbering brute. Has a tendency to make funny Asian noises when flexing his muscles or attacking things with his torso. His stomach is the most developed muscle of them all though, with so much dedication to it, he has several packs. Questionably, he has absolutely no scars, but that just means he is pretty good at what he does in many ways. Also he has a tattoo on his right chest that says "Love Kittens" in Chinese characters, which shows his dedication to the furry animals who deserve praise in every way.

      Lower Body: His lower body is also well built as well, which isn't thick with swollen muscles which makes him look like a tank, but well developed to use power and speed at the same time, and also meant to have as much stamina for what lay in between in what affectionately dubbed Charlie's second nickname in the darker recesses of society to be "Stallion Black Evil" in some communities.

      Clothing: He wears a black body glove that is stretchy and envelopes his body as a whole, and tends to be rolled up when he is using his prowess in stuff as a whole. But on top of it he wears that white-grayish ANBU vest on top, and wears an ANBU mask over it of that of a turtle, because not that he is slow but he is steadfast in his ways and adamantly vehement.

      Weight: 199 lbs.

      Height: 6'2" ft.

      Ethnicity: Big Nosed Asian.

      Voice: He sounds like an African-American bouncer of a night club, except with some slight Bruce Lee-like tone.

        Likes:
      • Women.
      • Beating stuff up.
      • Exercising.
      • Orphans.
      • Booze.

        Dislikes:
      • Children.
      • Fat people.
      • Yossomites.
      • Not killing.
      • Stupidity.


      Personality: Charlie at most is a douchebag, speaking incoherently and mumbling often and sometimes not. Random in his nature because he cannot make up his mind, who is he? And what is his role in life? Besides killing people and running around and spying on things like turnips and shrubs. Making him unpredictable or simply unpredictable by being predictable, but then again, he is merely but that of human stocks.

      Being cruel and vain as a result, with butter scotch of arrogance and vulgarity, contradicting it further by showing himself to be one for 'theatrics'. Time spent in the Kabuki theater made him a good actor, making it highly unlikely that he wouldn't be able to pull off an air of eloquence and upstandingness when need be. Showing off that he indeed has the capability to pull off subterfuge if required, not making him the dullest end, but not the smartest honker around in the book. Rather he is the shrewdest around.

      His insanity afforded him a philosophical insight into matters because the smart and the stupid linger in his mind without a filter and courses through without an ending in sight. This is all a result of his experiences as a ninja which has brought him to become a flexible force to which people will have to deal with.


      My...Family?

      Clan: Kaguya.

      Unique Clan Features: he Kaguya clan (かぐや一族, Kaguya Ichizoku) is a now extinct clan, known to have been very barbaric. Select few, namely Kimimaro, possessed the kekkei genkai Shikotsumyaku; this ability was so powerful that even the war-loving Kaguya clan feared it. With the exception of Kimimaro, the clan was killed off when attacking Kirigakure in a failed attempt to show off their ferocity. The clan was very savage and had no tactics when going to battle, and refused to back down even when surrounded and completely outmatched, preferring to fight to the death for fun. Kimimaro would for years live as the last member of the Kaguya clan, but eventually died of a terminal disease.

      Apparently, the members who possess the Shikotsumyaku abilities have a different body structure than others, as when Kimimaro was fatally ill, Kabuto Yakushi claimed there had been too little information on his body to give any medical treatment. Charlie has Shikotsumyaku.

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: ANBU

      Letter Rank: A

      Village: Konohagakure

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points: 10


      • 1. Ninjutsu/Artisan - 4SP
      • 2. Taijutsu/Artisan - 4SP
      • 3. Genjutsu/Adept - 2SP


      -Elements-


      • 1. Katon.
      • 2. Raiton.
      • 3. N/A
      • Comb. N/A


      -Jutsu-

      E: 5
      D: 2
      C: 6
      B: 2
      A: 2
      S: 1
      _____________

      Clan Based:
      Spoiler:

      Name: Ten-Finger Drilling Bullets
      Rank: C
      Type: Taijutsu.
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: N/A
      Description: Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones of the user can be regenerated, the rate of fire from the user's arsenal is limitless. This technique is essential to Kimimaro for his long distance attacks.

      Name: Dance of the Seedling Fern
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: N/A
      Description: Countless bones rise from underground, which can be as many as thousands, up to the tens of thousands. The blades of bone indiscriminately slaughter whoever stands on the ground's surface. Furthermore, if this fails to bring down his foe, Kimimaro can become one with the bones, which in turn can allow him to attack an enemy unnoticed. It can be used once per thread, given it's vast nature, the making of the bones are permanent given bones are not exactly temporary structuring. He can stay 7 posts in the bones with C-rank Chakra used per post. If hit by a strong impact trauma-inducing A-ranked jutsu, the user in the bones can be damaged dependent on the extent and exact nature of the jutsu, thusly he is not invulnerable.

      Name: Dance of the Clematis: Vine
      Rank: B
      Type: Taijutsu
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: N/A
      Description: The first half of Kimimaro's fourth dance. With the Shikotsumyaku, Kimimaro can modify and pull out his own spinal column, and regrow a new spine to replace it. Between the bones in the gaps there is cartilage that allows flexibility, which makes it possible to bend it as if it were a whip. With average estimation skills along with the impossible range it stretches, dodging is difficult. The protrusions on the vertebrae are modified to make them stronger and sharper. It has a range of 50 meters to be used adequately without it being so slow as for others to realize it completely as the maximum range.

      Name: Dance of the Larch
      Rank: C
      Type: Taijutsu
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: N/A
      Description: The third of Kimimaro's five dances. From the body, several bones pop out all at once. The stronger the opponent's physical attack, the more powerful the counter attack is, dealing severe damage. The sudden defence, combined with the needle-like bones high killing ability, makes way for a technique which potential his high for battle. The bones can be used to block or trap an opponent's strikes. In addition to being an unwelcome surprise for opponents, it makes him basically untouchable at close range. If an opponent would start to get close to him, he would start to spin rapidly slashing the foe in multiple areas of their body.

      Name: Dance of the Camellia
      Rank: C
      Type: Taijutsu
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: N/A
      Description: The second of Kimimaro's five dances, which he performs by modifying one of his upper arm bones to create a short, bone-hilted bone sword. He then stabs chaotically and continuously which causes the opponents eyes to lag behind. The speed resembles blurs, the hand with the sword is again and again visibly projected. And yet the movement is irregular which makes it difficult to predict. With each thrust the sword's track is very capable of changing. The attack comes from unexpected angles, causing a person's delicate defence reaction to come off guard. Though one can have great reflexes and moving ability, it is next to impossible to keep dodging the fierce attack until it stops. Thus if one showed an opening, a finishing blow will be dealt by one stab in an instant. It has the speed of a blur instead of after-images.

      Genjutsu Based:
      Spoiler:

      Name: Genjutsu Kai
      Rank: C-A
      Type: Anti-Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: Ocular means.
      Element: N/A
      Description: It releases the user from Genjutsu appropriate to the rank.

      Ninjutsu Based:

      Spoiler:

      Name: Temporary Paralysis Technique.
      Rank: D
      Type: Ninjutsu.
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: N/A
      Description: A technique that physically restrains an opponent, as if the opponent had been tied in invisible steel ropes. It debilitates the victim for a short period of time, which allows the user to either strike again, or take the target into custody. This is a D-rank ninjutsu where the intensity will vary greatly according to the user's level of skill. The technique can also be cast on every target at once, depending on the user's skill, and won't fail a shinobi during his missions.

      Katon Based:
      Spoiler:
      Name: Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
      Rank: S
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Horse → Tiger
      Element: Katon
      Description: Charlie exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact. This is much like Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique, but a larger and more destructive version. It has the radius of 1/4th a mile in destruction (lessened from Konoha's initial 1/3rd radius).

      Name: Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Horse → Tiger
      Element: Katon
      Description: technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth either as a massive orb of roaring flame or as a continuous flame-thrower. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. This technique apparently requires more than average chakra reserves and most genin should not be able to do this technique.

      Name: Exploding Flame Shot
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: Katon
      Description: By creating a spark from their hands, this technique allows the user to throw multiple balls of flames, which are able to either cause fiery explosions on impact or set the target on fire. It has the power of an explosive tag, and it's a C-rank jutsu.

      Misc. Based:
      Spoiler:

      Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element:N/A
      Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

      Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

      Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

      Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

      Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: N/A
      Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

      Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
      Rank: D
      Element: N/A
      Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

      Name: Shadow Clone Technique
      Rank: B
      Type: Buushinjutsu
      Hand Seals: Tiger -> Bunny
      Element: N/A
      Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows, though even then it may not be enough, as evident when during the Fourth Shinobi World War a few more notable clones of Naruto took heavy hits but didn't disperse. The clones can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original.
      Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.

      Name: Bunshin Daibakuha
      Rank: A
      Type: Buushinjutsu
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: N/A
      Description: This technique is used to create a shadow clone that can be detonated. The clone looks like a normal shadow clone, which allows the user to get it close to the target without them expecting anything besides a normal attack, or the target might even close in willingly to try to attack the clone. Using multiple tricks and diversionary tactics to disguise the nature of the clone can make this technique more likely to be effective. When it explodes, it bubbles.

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      This is my Story

      History/Background Story: Fetus/Birth Arc: Long time ago in a land far far away called Konoha was born a Kaguya, who was a spawn of two normal ninjas that didn't think they had any recessive Kaguya traits, but they did. When he was born, his mother's nether region split open like a melon being smashed into a thousand pieces, as the birth was so painful, that Charlie was born. His mother was bleeding all over the place, and Charlie in an uncharacteristic way of most babies, decided to reach for the nearest sake and chugged it down in due haste, only to fall in a stupor and unconscious, displaying unparalleled intelligence not typical of most babies, as the first thing he wanted was not milk but booze. During the times he was in his mother's womb, his bones were so tough, he couldn't have died when his mother went out to fight in missions and she had punches aimed at her womb, which would've killed most babies, but not Charlie.

      Orphan Child Arc: When Charlie was born, he was abandoned at a young age to an orphanage in Konoha, where he learned to hate orphans because they whine about just about everything that their lives sucked in every way. So over time he acquired a taste of punching those that whine and became the top dog, growing up quite fast mentally as he learnt in this ninja world, only grit and tenacity will be what gets him through without a concern. He manifested his ninjutsu skills very early at the time, which caught the notice of a bunch of ninjas who came passing by out of altruistic need to adopt orphanages, instead, they got a full fledged Kaguya who has come to be adept in how to do his boner skills most splendidly. Although not an attractive child, he was certainly someone of Kaguya disposition given his bloodthirsty nature that seems as if it was an inherent trait in him.

      Academy Student Arc: When he was adopted by two lesbian couples who tried to teach Charlie the superior ways of feminists over man, and are using the most manly and crude of male orphans out there to mold him into a woman worshiping sycophant, they failed harshly as Charlie kept to his manhood and even taught them better by partaking in domestic abuse over time. That surprisingly he has managed to bully them into seeing that man was superior, and straightened them out to becoming his lovers instead of his mere guardians that were to foster him into the coming age. As unusual as this sounds, Kaguya mature at a far faster rate than a normal person would. From there on then, his talents for ninjutsu shined when he was taken to the academy, but on many accounts was held back because of his crude and bullying ways which startled his teachers given he has almost killed his Uchiha classmates on account of them being pansies who rely too much on eye sight, and often tried to gouge out their eyes were it not for the intervention of his Chuunin teachers. Being a trouble child he was, and given Konoha's soft regimen, he was instead taken to a juvenile delinquint detention center where he has grown up with hate and rage in his blood, mostly because he was denied a kill over all else.

      Prison Arc: In prison, he was often thrown into solitary isolation and talks were made about taking away his capacity to make ninjutsu, but was complicated due to his completely different bone structure and physiology which complicated matters. Until one day, an ANBU leader came upon him with interests of having an elite fodder who will be molded into a fine assassin without conscience, and he already fits many pedigrees that comes with being a killer. He has no qualms or hesitations when trying to harm someone, and seems to respect power, but not authority necessarily. With offers of being interned into an ANBU development program instead of going through the usual ninjutsu ranking deal, Charlie accepted merely because he wanted to get out of prison and was becoming insane as a result of it.

      ANBU-in-training arc: During his times as an ANBU intern, Charlie went through brutal training that would leave most normal ninjas in misery, but he persevered on account of his pain threshold being much higher than your normal ninja. He was brutal and he was tough, and overall he never tattled on his missions. Which pleased his superiors making him into a model ANBU. Over time he was attached to another ANBU of this secretive ANBU group which made him learn their ways of team, which didn't sit well with him because he was following weaklings, and yet promises of pay were what kept him from overly rebelling and also freedom under the ANBU guaranteed him happiness to do as he pleases... except harm fellow team members. Which regardless, he advanced up the ANBU hierarchy and he has gotten to the rank of Chuunin not by an exam but by recommendation of performing several missions which were inherently difficult and not given to Genin with ease and success, albeit at the cost of his team and mentor succumbing to death as a result. This promotion was reviewed by a board and was accepted with a few problems being his attitude and work ethics making him into something of a loner type of person... not that he seeks to be alone but more that others tend to not want to work with someone of his antics.

      ANBU Chuunin Arc: During those times as Chuunin, Charlie has done whatever needed to be done, and pushed himself to the limit often times, learning new skills and techniques as taught by the ANBU leader who envisioned him an ideal ANBU solo agent, which he has done many times. Life was easy and nice, and there weren't ninjas that could boast themselves his equal till... Charlie has unearthed an ancient ninja tomb which preserved a powerful ancient scion of the Kaguya clan in Kirigakure in a black ops mission to retrieve an artifact, whom given they were olden members, were no doubt power incarnate as the bloodline ran through them very freshly. The two fought many times but Charlie found himself in the brink of death many times trying to fight the scion on his own turf as a Kaguya. But nonetheless he survived by letting his teammates take the fall and die.

      Though it was not an easy thing, he swore vengeance upon the man who made him flee, and followed him everywhere despite their similar bloodlines. But such a man was killed when Charlie did something extremely reckless and performed his most powerful ninjutsu which came as a surprise to the Kaguya scion. The Kaguya don't usually use ninjutsu when fighting but Kekkei Genkai and Taijutsu entirely, which has taken him aback when such a powerful Katon incinerated him,
      but whichever the case the reason why he was killed by such an attack was on account of him not being in his prime, and a long century of hibernation and stasis has left him weakened. Charlie counted himself lucky to have bested the Kaguya, as he also prevented a diplomatic incident from arising as local Kirigakure intelligence indicated that Konoha was after a scion of the Kaguya, and if such a thing was correct, it would've led to a huge repercussion or in more extreme cases -- war. In doing such a thing, despite the unleashing of the Kaguya scion was his folly, Charlie left for Konoha again to receive commendations from the ANBU leader, and subsequently many recommendation for a promotion. It was a controversial thing to be allowed into the Jounin rank despite his careless ways, but his skills were very evident as the years that it took to hone them into a killing machine made him an exemplary member albeit a poor team member. Under a ceremony in secret, he was made a Jounin by appointment in the ANBU, and has come to be teamed up with those of the same caliber as himself for secret black ops missions for a deeper undercover ANBU group whom pride themselves as being a secret society within a secret group.

      Jounin ANBU arc: During that time as ANBU, he has come to behave erratically as his agenda has become borderline unknown even to the higher ups as he follows a very strange agenda, very typical of ANBU who do not discuss it with anyone else. Were he a normal member of Konoha, he would be famous for now, but Charlie's is that of a man to fight in shadows and die in the shadows.

      Roleplay Sample: Sample from another site.

      Spoiler:
      And once again, Nanashi sought out to get more powerful ONCE AGAIN in an effort to regenerate so he can actually become an even more powerful Kaguya even more powerfully so. Therefore he adventured out into the wilds again where he had sought to in fact get to become powerful... ONCE AGAIN in his quest for power. Not those illegal sorts, just a little bit of a questing, which was pretty much fun and all. It was typically just like all of his other quests, just walk around and HOPE he can in fact get better, or something like that, who knows? Last quest he was on involved him impregnating a bunch of she-demons who were in all extents, hot as Hell, or Yomi in Nanashi's version, but then again he is a Jashinist, pain is pleasure, but it still hurts like a mofo, so Nanashi doesn't know when he'll ever get used to pain, sure it is numbed up at this point, but regeneration has it's perks. And he is gonna QUEST to find said perks! So therefore he just went off on his quests as he usually does.
      Going into some area, random it was, and pretty much dull at the same time but that's how all of his quests start off in the name of the legendary instant regeneration perk of the Kaguya. Or was it just regeneration? Healing factors can be a tad bit annoying, ever since that time Nanashi had drunken the elixir, he thinks that he has gotten to the peak of his abilities, but alas! That is not the case. He will persevere no matter what, or just stop by the same Siren inn and enjoy his time there, after all, who says quests don't need a little silverlining such as booze, sex and more sex?
      And so our heroically dashing and handsome hero sets off (he is really the most despicable villain around, but he thinks himself a hero). Always thinking he is a hero when really he is just that one big jerk who cannot fathom just how evil he is. He kills children, puppies, and all that shit with not a concern over the human life and destruction he causes in such a short time without even caring about who he and he doesn't kill. Yet he is arrogant enough to believe himself good and all that which further makes him deluded... of course taking into account he believes himself good in the eyes of Jashin. Nothing else, nothing more, and it is required and compulsory for Nanashi to kill something every now and then. Animals work out as temporary solution but humans are always needed to be eliminated.
      Being a ninja has its advantages though. Where he has easier access to murdering others with not a single remorse with him really. Anyways, so he decided he shall quest off to the land he hates most... Kariforniyanan, land of the barbarians called 'tourists'. NANASHI FUCKING HATES THEM. He figured if there is anywhere else he can become a good regenerator at, it'd be at Kariforniya. A place surrounded by danger, hostility and DANGER. A place so hated that Nanashi figured it's the best place to get regeneration because.... he has absolutely no clue as to why really, he is just making bullshit up to himself on the go to justify the fact he is going there.
      Anyways, he got in a boat, rowing rowing rowing the fucking boat. Rowing all the way to the place where he just rows like HELL. Eventually landing short of his destination, which was NOT Kariforniya but somewhere else. Somewhere foreign and had a shroud of black cloud made of hate, evil, pus, maliciousness and darkness. In other words, it was just a really dark cloud that blotted out the sun's rays... wow, Nanashi can already tell he FUCKING hates this place. There were many extremely pale people with fangy teeth and sparkly eyes... and it occured to Nanashi, most of them are fan girl material stock freaks of nature. They were apt with muscles, and were somehow... filled with couples, with ugly girls courting their dream men.
      'Twas a terrible place for Nanashi to be at because of how alien and stupid this land looked to be like. But whatever, he did not want to deal with some of the shit of how stupid this land is, and is more concentrated on finding something to help him regenerate even faster than usual. So Nanashi took out his Katana from his SHEATHE which was supposed to be ATTACHED TO HIS OBI SASH BELT. He held the Katana from the grip. Making some cool pose where he flexes his butt and smiles and goes, "TEEHEE."
      BUT SUDDENLY. A vampiru police officer came up, and he was all sparkly-like, he was wearing tights and looked more like some BDSM fetishist. So Nanashi scowled and growled at the police officer. The police officer barks back and goes saying something. He wanted to give him a ticket for illegally entering Twayaraito and wants his license.
      "I can't give you my license officer." Says Nanashi.
      "Why not?" Says the officer who was like all faggy and sparkly.
      "BECAUSE YOU ARE A ****** AND I DON'T TRUST YOU." Said Nanashi, who decapitated the officer's head and kicked it into the ocean before running into this dark and foreboding land. Bloody sword being sheathed.
      He then jumped and landed on the ground, and ran into the forests where then he ran and ran. He used his legs to run. And put them on the ground and then run. That's what he did. He kicked a couple of squirrels on the way and maybe a few golfers. Then he kept running after using the bathroom after bathroom emergency.
      So after he left, he would try to go around walking, going to the city. After he got out of the forest. Nanashi made sure to beat the shit out of a passerby and steal his clothings. So he wore the clothing over his own ninja gear, and hoped nobody would notice. Walking around the streets populated by so many fat and ugly heart shaped headed girls. And then there was them sparkly kids, or boys, who held unto these girls, as if they were on steroids, somehow... they exposed the most out of their chests as if it was a bid to attract unattractive girls. It worked.
      Maybe there was a few lizzie couples around. Nanashi couldn't tell, girls are awfully affectionate with each other. So, he went to a poor hobo (for since when was there a rich hobo anyways?) and kneeled down, looking at him with his eyes. Very intensely might he add. The hobo was scared shitless, so Nanashi didn't care. It was in an alley way in a city and all.
      "Why are there so many fags around here?" Asks Nanashi.
      "You're not from around here are you? Yes... yes... you aren't." Replies hobo.
      "No am not, that's why I asked, you douche."
      "Sheesh, no need to be harsh. I thought you were a local because of your attire."
      "Oh? This? Dumbshit, this is a DISGUISE. Because I am not from around here."
      "That explains a lot, well, ever since this one woman, Setafoni Meyeru came in, she used her plague to transform everyone into this... the rest of us who were too ugly, had immunity. So we are unrich and are living in misery. Could it be you came here to liberate us ugly people?"
      "No, I just came here to practice some shit. Let my regeneration kick in and get powerful. Do these fags know how to regenerate?"
      "Well... they have superspeed, super strength, super healing, can sparkle, can read minds, and some of them can transform into wolves. There is no chance in Hell you can fight them on even grounds, you're just a normie."
      "No bitch. I am a ninja." Nanashi punched the hobo to the face. A casual punch fractured that over assertive bitch's face into skewed up gory chunk of meat instead of a recognizable ugly and dirty face.
      So Nanashi stood up, after kneeling down to accommodate the hobo's slouched height. Unsheathing his Katana as he would take walks around the street, getting suspicious look from those sparkly bastards. Eventually making his way to the biggest building around. It is probably that one which is tallest. The place where this bitch which made this mess lives in. So Nanashi ran there and got there.
      He killed a few people on the way who were sparkly, and the sparkles made Nanashi feel invigorated with vigour. So he met a giant vampire thing and fought her. He slashed her, but she couldn't die. She just humped a few juiced up steroid monkey olive skinned boys and she SUDDENLY gets strong.
      "How do I kill her?" Nanashi asks himself.
      "You just have to... believe. And fucking stab those boys really." Nanashi's imaginary friend, Ted, who appeared conveniently in time said.
      "Yes! I will." Nanashi was happy.
      So he charged and killed those steroid monkey human things whom she humps, then FINALLY slashed Setafani Meyeru and she DIED.
      Suddenly, the entire land began sinking to the ground. She was the only thing holding it afloat. So Nanashi started running like HELL. He sliced up all the vamipeiru on the way as their sparkles rubbed off on Nanashi and gave him a faster regeneration. They attached to his skin and infected his DNA, changing his attributes as Nanashi ran off, sparkling and the like... until he got on the boat, and paddled the FUCK as fast as possible.
      He then paddled and paddled so fast, he was some miles away from the island only to see it suddenly sink underground, and a massive explosion happened which caused a tsunami. The tsunami capsized Nanashi's boat as he held his breath, and before long, the Tsunami went so fast, it flung him out SOMEHOW and into the ninja mainlands. Mostly Kirigakure. From there, Nanashi's wounds healed very quickly. But without the sparkles to them. It was the sparkles that made Nanashi the man he is... or something. He has no idea what the fuck happened. But that's how it happened. And THIS is how the tale of Nanashi's powers came to be.




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    Re: Charlie K (ANBU)

    Post by Echo on Wed Oct 17, 2012 5:26 am

    Dance of the Seedling Fern

    Add a chakra cost for fusing with it, and a cost per post it's held.

    Dance of the Clematis: Vine

    Needs an actual range it can extend to

    Dance of the Camellia

    Slow it down a little since it's C ranked

    Temporary Paralysis Technique.

    Just know it is dodge-able, and many more skilled ninja may recognize the technique and avoid it.

    Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball

    Add more detail on the size of the explosion, and the fireball. I know it's cannon, but still.

    Exploding Flame Shot

    Those explosions, i take it they would each be equivalent to a single explosive tag? And does the technique take the same C ranked amount of chakra to make each ball?

    Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill

    You don't need that on your app, it's a passive. Look here for info: http://narutosd.darkbb.com/t358-character-limits-and-rules

    Look under Automatic Jutsu

    Bunshin Daibakuha

    Add a way someone can tell it's either about to explode, or it's an exploding clone.



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    Re: Charlie K (ANBU)

    Post by Charlie K on Wed Oct 17, 2012 5:33 am

    Done and done.
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    Re: Charlie K (ANBU)

    Post by Echo on Wed Oct 17, 2012 5:45 am

    Dance of the Seedling Fern

    Needs a duration you can stay merged with the bones, and a chakra cost per post, judge it by rank. Like every post you're merged it uses a B ranked amount of chakra.

    Dance of the Clematis: Vine

    100 meters is way too long.

    Dance of the Camellia

    You should probably remove where it says it has the speed of after images.

    Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball

    That is far too large, especially with it's destructive power. Give it an estimation based on a number of explosive tags and sum it down a little, or just give it an explosion radius.



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    Post by Charlie K on Wed Oct 17, 2012 5:48 am

    Done and done once more.
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    Re: Charlie K (ANBU)

    Post by Echo on Wed Oct 17, 2012 5:57 am

    Dance of the Seedling Fern

    30 posts is far too much. While merged with those bones you're borderline immortal, and can launch an attack from any direction. I'm thinking more along the lines of a C ranked amount of chakra per post to keep up, and can only last like 7 posts. Also, if someone hits the bone you're in with an A rank ability, it can damage or destroy the bone depending on the ability used. If you're in it, you can take damage as well, or even die if the bone is destroyed with you in it.

    You should add that in.

    Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball

    1 mile is still far too big. That's over 17 football fields placed side by side, long-wise.

    Make it like 1/4th a mile


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    Post by Charlie K on Wed Oct 17, 2012 6:02 am

    Done and done.
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    Re: Charlie K (ANBU)

    Post by Echo on Wed Oct 17, 2012 6:04 am

    Approved.

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