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    Posts : 22
    Ryō : 2360
    Join date : 2012-02-28
    Age : 26
    Location : UK

    Shinobi ID
    Village: Kirigakure
    Letter Rank: A
    Classification: Legendary Swordmen

    Ohime Kagawa Enzeru

    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru on Fri Oct 19, 2012 11:32 pm


    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name: Ohime Kagawa Enzeru

      Nickname/Alias: Thunder Princess

      Age: 29

      Gender: Female

      Is that really me?

      Appearance:


      Facial Region: Enzeru has a heart shaped face, which is cupped by her yellow and orange bangs. She has reddish pink eyes that seem to hold all her emotions behind them, if someone knows her really well they would be able to read her from the emotion in her eyes. Her hair when down reaches down to her ass, however she prefers to keep it up in a pony tail so that it ends at about her mid back. Her hair color is a mixture of Pink, Red, Orange, and Yellow giving it a fire appearance.

      Extras: On her exposed cleavage there is a blood red tattoo, Upon using her Moetatsu no Jutsu (blazing technique) the tattoo beings to turn into fire allowing the rest of her body to do the same. Her tattoo goes from the top of her breasts down to her stomach and around her belly button, this tattoo will be black when shes asleep, blood red when shes alike and fire when activating her blazing technique. On the belt area of her pants she has a brown pack to the side normally hidden by the large jacket that contains a few kunai, burn medication, three shuriken and a few seals. The scarf around her neck is actually her old band, if she flips it over you can see the Kusa symbol with a line slashed through it, though its very unlikely to be seen.


      Clothing: Enzeru wears a simple outfit that is good for any weather (since she can turn into fire). Her outfit consist of a bikini top that be ranged from colors to black, pink, white,blue, yellow etc. She has numerous colors for different visits. Around her shoulders or normally being warn is a males jacket, she will either roll up the sleeves and tie up the back or leave it ale one and wear it unbuttoned. She`ll sometimes wear a scarf around her neck depending on the weather. Her bottoms consist of a pair of pants that have been cut to be used at short shorts, the colors consist of Black or Blue. When you reach to her knees you`ll see either a pair of long black boots or colored knee length fish net stocking along with a pair of boots that being a few inches down from the sock. Her boots may be used to color code with her tops..

      Weight: 150 pounds Slim and Fit

      Height: 5'5

      Ethnicity: Light skin tone.

      Voice: Cool, Collected and doesn't rush in choices.

        Likes:
      • Water
      • Alcohol
      • War
      • Effortless things
      • Sweets

        Dislikes:
      • Slutty women
      • Idiots
      • Homosexual men
      • Effort
      • Happiness


      Personality:
      Positive;
      Intelligent: Enzeru is a very intelligent ninja. She has spent most of her life training and Learning. Enzeru learned how to read peoples emotions from a young age, along with how to study peoples fighting styles.(Note:She can NOT copy them) While in a fight Enzeru plans out numerous ways to carry out different endings. This process takes about forty to sixty seconds.
      Leadership: Enzeru likes to take leadership. When it comes to controlling other people she prefers to be in charge. She doesn`t expect to be liked she just wants to be in control. She believes that a leader is made to be feared not loved.
      Confident: Enzeru is a very confident ninja. When it comes to presenting herself in front of other people Enzeru makes sure that she shows off her strengths. She speaks with a confident tone to her voice and never shows fear to others.
      Flirty: Enzeru is very flirty with both genders, she doesn`t mind if shes messing with a female or male. Both genders tickle her fancy, although she prefers the male gender out of both choices. As flirtatious as Enzeru is she prefers to avoid real relationships this allows her to keep herself from becoming emotionally attached and allows her to use her "lovers" as pawns.
      Charming: Enzeru is a charmer and a bit of a player. She has been known to mess with peoples hearts and minds to get her way. She can be well mannered to others making herself seem less intimidating than she really is. When Enzeru becomes charming she is known to play and hide any feelings of hatred or untrust towards them.

      Negative;
      Conniving: When Enzeru wants something she`ll use everyone and anyone to get her way. People use to tell Enzeru that she had a way with words and they were correct. She can tell a female everything they want to hear and she can be very persuasive with males. She has been known to black mail and even turn people against one another.
      Sarcastic: When it comes to being sarcastic Enzeru is the queen of it. She doesn`t take the time to play nice with others and if something stupid is said she is more than likely going to comment on it so that they can hate her. She never holds back whats on her mind so she tends to say things sarcastically to get peoples attention or to mock them till they want to kill her.
      Bi-polar: Bi-polar is a understatement though it fits her well enough. Enzeru has alot of mood swings and although its hard to make her upset she will switch back from angry to happy quickly and suddenly. When speaking to her, alot of the Kusa people would stand back incase she got upset. Her moods reflect her in the fallowing ways;
      Upset/Sad: This normally leads to a tantrum or a fight depending on the person and if she has them wrapped around her finger or not.
      Anger/Pissed: This will either be a fight or some rough and tumble adult like stuff depending on the person.
      Happy/Excited: A straight up fight or black mailing scene is sure to fallow this mood.
      Tired/Cranky: You`ll be likely to get ignored or into a fight with a very upset and mean Enzeru.
      Sadistic: Enzeru enjoys peoples pain, if she can cause someone to suffer she will without any hesitation. She feels that pain is weakness. If she kidnaps someone enzeru will torture them in many ways, she likes to hear peoples pain filled screams and loves to start wars. If no one is getting hurt then you can come to the conclusion that Enzeru was not behind it..

      My...Family?

      Clan: Ohimi CLan

      Unique Clan Features: KKG Storm Release

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: Legendary Swordsmen Of The Mist

      Letter Rank: A

      Village: Kirigakure

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points: 10


      • 1. Ninjutsu- Master
      • 2. Weaponary-Kenjutsu- Artisan
      • 3. Genjutsu- Novice


      -Elements-


      • 1. Lightning
      • 2. Water
      • 3.
      • Comb. Storm


      -Jutsu-

      E:1
      D:4
      C:12
      B:8
      A:7
      S:3
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      Spoiler:
      Name:Hari Jizō (Needle Jizō)
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 2
      Element: None
      Description: This is a technique where the user encases themselves in a countless number of sharp needles, but in truth, the spikes are the user's hair. Chakra grants the strands of hair the hardness and shape of needles, endowed with a capacity to injure and kill on par with that of metallic weapons. In addition, if activated in response to an opponent's attack, it can also be used as a counter. The hair is made hard enough that it can withstand blows from certain types of weapons such as arrows.

      Name:Ranton: Reizā Sākasu (Storm Release: Laser Circus)
      Rank:A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 4
      Element: Storm
      Description: This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. First, a halo of bright energy spreads around the user's hands as this technique is activated, then the technique encircles the user's hand and from that the beams are shot out towards the enemy. The user is able to alter the beams direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity. The user can increase the number of beams to a great amount to pin down an enemy. The user can use a max of 25 of these.




      Name: Goudatsu [Plunder]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: Storm
      Description: A simple technique that requires a weapon capable of allowing chakra to be channeled into it. Once filled with ranton energy, the bladed weapon will glow and from there a single swipe can be executed to send a thin crescent shaped projectile of ranton energy at a target, capable of causing searing heat upon contact as well as moderate cutting damage that could easily peel through human flesh and even thin layers of stone. However, things more resilient such as steel or iron could provide more than enough of a defense if it meets the projectile created.


      Name: Gekidou no Jutsu [Upheaval Technique]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 2
      Element: Storm
      Description: A simple technique where the user sends a beam of ranton energy into the ground and has it comes up from underneath his target, increasing the flow of his chakra upon the moment of its emergence. This causes the beam to further energize and create a pillar of destructive ranton energy that has a radius of ten feet and height of thirty. The damage this jutsu can do is really bad body shock on the enemy making them very weakened



      Name: Rezaryuudan no Jutso [Laser Dragon Projectile Technique]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 4
      Element: Storm
      Description: Upon completing the handseals, a veil of ranton energy forms around the user. Various dragons are then shaped out of this energy before being send hurling toward their target(s), capable of causing moderate burn damage along with enough to concussive force to send one flying a dozen yards background. The amount of dragons capable of being produced by this jutsu is merely dependent on the user's chakra supply, therefore multiple dragons can be created and manipulated at will. Due to their form, these energy dragons move quicker than their lightning counterpart, giving them the capability of striking within half of the time which makes them highly annoying to dodge, however, if the user makes more than two dragons the damage is cut to a maximum of B-Rank per projectile.

      Name: Tsubame no jūden (Charging Swallow)
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 0
      Element: None
      Description: An upgraded version of Hien, the user will swing, or draw his blade and use Hien like normal. But instead of extending the blade with shakra, he will use chakra shaping and send a crescent blast of chakra towards the enemy which is powerful enough to cleave through stone with ease. It only has a range of ten meters before the chakra dissipates. This variant of Hien cannot use elements however, only pure chakra.


      Name: Hien Nobiru (Flying Swallow Extend)
      Rank: A
      Type: Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: 2
      Element: None
      Description: Another variant of the flying swallow, it acts mostly the same however the user can extend the blade up to five meters in length with chakra, much like the Samurai. The chakra is invisible to the naked eye, but not to Doujutsu and is capable of cleaving straight through stone. This variant of Hien also cannot utilise elements, instead relying on chakra shaping

      Name: Kamigan no Jutsu [God's Eye Technique]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 5
      Element: Storm
      Description: A powerful defensive technique, the user creates various diamond shaped constructs of ranton energy. This diamonds of ranton energy then circle around the user with a two foot radius, similar to a satellite around a planet. When an oncoming attack or object moves in to get within this two foot area, the diamonds then form in the location of the attack in order to attack that before the user reacts, as this defensive jutsu activates by motion rather than the flow of the user's chakra. Basically, these tiny diamonds can protect the user from nearly any angle and when they block an oncoming attack, it has the ability to block jutsu equivalent up to A-Rank technique. However, the drain of this jutsu depends solely what is blocking, draining only the necessary chakra from the user at the time of impact in order to strength the defense to that specific rank.

      Name: Kaika Taiyou no Jutsu [Blooming Sun Technqiue]
      Rank: S
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 8
      Element: Storm
      Description: The user first prepares this jutsu by performing a somewhat long set of handseals, ending it in the tiger sign. He then gathers a large amount of ranton energy within the palm of either hand in order to create a sphere of ranton energy. He then tosses the car-sized sphere of energy about a mile into the sky, at which the sphere just sits there. On command, the sphere can releases over two hundred laser beams down upon a quarter mile area. This lasers can also be redirected to aim at specific targets at specific points, making them quite dangerous as the user can easily change the direction of each beam to home in on a single target from various angles.

      Name: Raikou Bakugekiki no Jutsu [Lightning Bomber Technique]
      Rank: B
      Type: Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: 0
      Element: Lightning
      Description: This technique begins by running the user's chakra through their katana, creating a veil of violet colored lightning around the entirety of the blade. The user then jumps high into the air and then brings the blade down upon their target, releasing all the lightning at the point of impact which creates a small pillar of lightning capable of easily tearing through flesh and bone.

      Name: Shinigami Ittoryu: Murasaki Kawa [Death God One-Sword Style: Violet River]
      Rank: C
      Type: Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: 0
      Element: Lightning
      Description: The user stabs their sword into the ground, charging their body with a high amount of raiton element chakra and running it through their blade. The lightning bolt produced pierces the ground, going through the earth via the blade and shoots back up in a river of violet colored lightning. Rather than piercing, this lightning is created to burn and shock the enemy, washing them over in a torrent of lightning. This stream of lightning can be manipulated in any direction radiating from the blade, meaning the user can fire it from behind their bodies to protect their rear if need be.

      Name: Shingami Ittoryu: Oketsu [Death God One-Sword Style: Impure Blood]
      Rank: B
      Type: Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: 0
      Element: Lightning
      Description: The user charges raiton element chakra along their blade, causing it to crackle with violet lightning. This lightning then begins to swirl around the length of the blade, making a loud, distorted noise akin to a power drill while at the same time forming a sort of a drill head around the blade as the lightning spins. Then the user simply makes a mad dash for their target, aiming to impale their target with the lightning drill they have formed as it specializes in drilling through defenses.]


      Name: Raiton: Iaido [Lightning Release: Quick Draw]
      Rank: C
      Type: Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: 0
      Element: Lightning
      Description: A simple quick draw of the sword from its scabbard causes intense friction between the metals of those two objects. At the same time, the user pumps raiton chakra into their blade to further facilitate a reaction. What occurs as a result is nothing short of pure skill. A single lightning bolt is shot forth from the tip of the blade at the moment of drawing, going in whatever direction that the user drawn their sword in. Basically, a mid-long range lightning bolt produced simply by drawing their sword. This can be done repeatedly, as fast as the user can go, capable of creating a barrage of lightning bolts. The damage that these bolts can do is burns if they hit the range is about 20 metres.

      Name: Suiton: Mizuame Yagura [Water Release: Syrup Turret]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 3
      Element: Water
      Description: The user will generate Suiton chakra into the back of their throat, spatially recomposing it as a liquid. This liquid will then be spewed out of the user's maw, aiming to deflect mid-air projectiles and repel even heavy opponents several yards away. The liquid being projected, however, contains a surprisingly high viscosity, its texture almost like that of molasses. When drenched in the substance, victims will find any movement made to be strictly resisted, making it almost impossible for those without great strength to move properly. The liquid is also flamable and can be ignighted with lightning.


      Name: Suiton: Mizuame Bunshin [Water Release: Syrup Clone]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 4
      Element: Water
      Description: A clone will be created from either an existing source of water or one's own Suiton chakra at a higher cost. This will be much like a regular Mizu Bunshin, only that the liquid making up its physical form will possess high viscosity. When struck in battle, the clone will revert back into molasses-like state. Anyone who would dare deliver a finishing blow to one of these clones will find themselves stuck in the viscous liquid, their movement impaired by the resisting fluid clinging to their body. The luquid is also flammable and can be ignited with lightning.

      Name: Reflective Chakra
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Holding 1 seal
      Element: Storm
      Description: This is the skill that, once learned, allows a practitioner of the Ranton to redirect the projectiles of their ninjutsu by projecting their chakra out and making the particles in the air reflect the same wavelength of light that their energy projectiles are. This allows the user to redirect their attacks and attack from varying angles simultaneously

      Name: Taiyou Furea no Jutsu [Solar Flare Technique]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: Storm
      Description:With a single handseal, the user can release a pulse of concussive ranton energy capable of pushing back individuals or small objects several yards. This jutsu does call for the user to stand still in order to use this jutsu, making it a jutsu that one must use in a tactical manner. About 3 metres

      Name: Yari no Longinusu [Spear of Longinus]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: Storm
      Description: The user quickly shapes a spear made completely of ranton energy, harboring the destructive power of the release. By throwing it as if were a normal spear, it can be hurled a great distance (up to 100 yards) and impact with explosive power equivalent to an explosive note.

      Name: Kesshou Kangoku no Jutsu [Plasma Prison Technique]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 6
      Element: Storm
      Description: The user performs a short sequence of handseals before slamming their hands upon the ground, sending various beams of ranton energy through the ground and burrow beneath the intended target. The beams of energy then pierce upward from underground, quickly redirecting and weaving a cage of energy around them. The cage of which is created varies from use to use, as well as the shape. However, the size of the cage depends on how much chakra is put into it, meaning larger cages expend more chakra. Hot enough to cause third degree burns upon touching it. Despite that, a few mirrors or objects with a surface as reflective as a mirror would serve to create an opening within the cage, which makes it technically easy to escape.



      Name: Tsuki [Thrust]
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 2
      Element: Storm
      Description: A technique that requires the utmost skill in the use of Ranton, Tsuki is highly versatile and can be used in many different situations. By focusing chakra at specific points around their body, the user can causes a burst of powerful ranton chakra to ionize and energize the particles in the air which in turn creates propulsion. This can be used in quick bursts to redirect one's body or change directions or even jump to great heights. It can also be used for extended periods to facilitate locomotion, though at the cost of quickly having their chakra drained.


      Name: Shinigami Ittoryu: Tenshi no Shoushi Ikazuchi [Death God One-Sword Style: Angel of Midnight Thunder]
      Rank: S
      Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: 3
      Element: Storm
      Description: The user of this technique, first sends out a large shockwave of violet colored raiton chakra outward within a thirty foot radius at a high rate of speed. This chakra carries with it a special charge, though harmless. This raiton chakra then condenses itself around the user in as it prepares to be molded. The level of physical speed required for this technique is key. Moving at a high rate of speed, attacks from various directions are performed. Using the prepared raiton chakra, the user of the technique is then capable of creating afterimages of themselves in the form of blinding lightning. At the same time, the user is still attempting to slash at the target, though avoiding any oncoming attacks to themselves. These dozens upon dozens of lightning afterimages then condense into the form of swords, raining down as projectiles directly at the target. Using any previous contact with the shock wave of chakra from the beginning of the technique as homing signal due to the residual electrical charge. These swords made of pure raiton chakra carry with them the ability to pierce like lightning and cut into flesh with ease, attempting embed themselves into the target at a high rate of speed while still delivering a powerful shock. The idea is to confuse the enemy in a form similar to the Dance of the Crescent Moon, but by adding a lightning styled twist to it.





      Name: Kubire (Constriction)
      Rank: C
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: 2
      Element: None
      Description: After two handseals, the user will cast a genjutsu and make the enemy believe their clothes are constricting. It doesn't cause any permanent damage and simply restricts their movements for a key number of moments until the opponent releases the genjutsu. Eye sight needed.


      Name: Asshuku shotto - Compression Shot
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 3
      Element: Water
      Description: After a series of three hand seals, the user will inhale and then fire off a bullet of water roughly a meter long and half a meter wide. Before the water leaves the chest cavity the user uses their chakra to compress the water and when fired it's shoots out like a jet. It is capable of piercing through stone.


      Name: Asshuku danmaku - Compression Barrage
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 4
      Element: Water
      Description: After a series of four hand seals, the user will inhale then fire off a barrage of highly pressurised water bullets. These bullets are around the size of a marble and can pierce stone with ease. The jutsu can be used continuously and create a vast amount of piercing bullets of water.




      Name: Asshuku taihō - Compression Cannon
      Rank: A-S
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 5
      Element: Water
      Description: After a series of five hand seals, the user will inhale then unleash a powerful jet of compressed water. While this is not overly complicated, the chakra control needed to compress the water is extremely difficult and thus it's high rank, and the damage it can cause is catastrophic. Compressed at this level, the water could easily cut through diamond and is capable of damaging even a Bijuu if used by someone with high enough skill in Ninjutsu.


      Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu: Body Replacement Technique
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: None
      Description: With this technique, users replace their own body with some other object, generally with a block of wood, the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. It's a basic ninjutsu even taught at the Academy, but it's a useful art that can be applied in variety of situations.

      Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique )
      Rank: D
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: None
      Description: he Body Flicker Technique is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed.[ To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination.

      Name: Kai
      Rank: A
      Type: Supplementary
      Range: Self/Within Reach
      Hand Seals: N/A
      Element: N/A
      Description: Applying a sudden surge of chakra the user is able to combat the effects of an opponents Genjutsu, stopping the flow of their chakra in the users body and thusly halting the Genjutsus' effects. This can also be used to aid a comrade afflicted by a Genjutsu by surging the users chakra through their allies body, releasing them from the Genjutsu's grasp.

      Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hiding in Mist Technique)
      Rank: D
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: Water
      Description: This displacement technique is a speciality of the ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.

      Name: Ranton - Bunshin [Storm Clone]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: Storm
      Description: A simple jutsu where the user creates a clone out of pure Ranton energy. The clones can only use Ranton jutsu and are weaker than most clones, due to them being pure energy. The trump card however, is that when disrupted. The energy can either cause a large, concussive blast.



      Name:Shinigami Ittoryu: Gou Senpuu [Death God One-Sword Style: Thunderous Whirlwind]
      Rank: B
      Type: Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: 0
      Element: Lightning
      Description: The user charges two katana with lightning chakra, giving them enhancing cutting and piercing capabilities. The user then begins slashing and spinning in a controlled, unpredictable manner. Each slash causes a small string of lightning to be created, razor sharp and searing hot to the touch. With this, the user is able to not only cut through things with ease with their blades, but using these tiny ribbons of lightning connected to the tip of their blades to mince through their enemies at the same time.

      Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu ( Shadow Clone Technique)
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: None
      Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows, though even then it may not be enough, as evident when during the Fourth Shinobi World War a few more notable clones of Naruto took heavy hits but didn't disperse. The clones can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original.

      Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.

      Name: Magen: Kurobara [Demonic Illusion: Black Roses]
      Rank: D
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: None
      Description: A low class illusion that when used the caster will burst into a large number of black rose petals when they are struck. The petals will spiral around the area. Eye sight needed

      Name: Enmaku (Smoke Screen)
      Rank: D
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: None
      Description: The user for this illusion breaths in and seems to breath out a large thick smoke. The smoke illusion is used to consume him and the area to hide him and allow him to attack his enemies from inside the illusion of smoke. If the smoke is inhaled

      Name: Gen Bunshin no Jutsu [Illusionary Clone Technique]
      Rank: C
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: 2
      Element: None
      Description: When casted this illusion will create multiple 'clones' of the caster in the form of an illusion. Everything these illusions do is at the exact same time. They will talk together and move together. When they are attacked the attacks will go right through them yet the illusion will stay unharmed,. Similar to the clone technique just more advanced. But once discovered as a genjutsu they can easily be broken by the simple release command. Eye sight needed


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      [Background]
      Ohime family has been a part of the Kirigakure since its creation. It was one of the richer, high class but not exactly combat orientated family's scattered over the royalty of Kirigakure. The family believed in the old ways of marriage for profit, increasing the money income by marrying their kids off and merging with other big families, so it wasn't easy to be a part of it, and especially as a younger child. Many were made to marry against their will, for the goof of the family, but once, a girl, refused the tradition and ran away, to marry a shinobi. Unfortunately, the shinobi died, leaving her a widow, as she came back to the family elders begging for forgiveness. What they didn't know at the time, was that she was pregnant with the Shinobi's child. It was obvious that the child would not be considered a full member of the family, and to forever remain a bastard child in the eyes of the rest if her clan. The child's name was Enzeru.

      [Growing up as a Bastard]
      Ever since she was born, she was treated differently by her family members. Everyone were pretty cold to her for what she saw as no reason. She had no real friends, as the other kids weren't allowed to play with her. Enzeru popped out a lot in her family, having much Lighter skin than anyone else. She was told to spend time in her spacious room most of the time, only being allowed out to get some food or to play in the garden twice every week. It was like a prison. The elders refused to include her into any family related matters as well as were ashamed to show her in public. Reaching the age of 6, Enzeru was already quite capable at combat. Having not much to do in her room, she trained and read ninja books. She at that time was already capable to sneak out of the house past the guards and into the village. One of these days, she ran to the Academy and saw kids together learning to be a shinobi. She really wanted to go, but was refused to.

      Luckily to help, came a maid that took care of Enzeru. She signed her up as a student, under a fake name Hanzo Enzeru. She was able to sneak out of the house every morning and come back unnoticed nearly every day for a few years. The maid always covered for her, and that's hot he managed to get through the academy.

      [Academy Shenanigans]
      Enzeru had the most amazing time in the academy. Finally she had friends, teachers, people that cared about her. She excelled in most of the subject, and especially Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu. She learned these two from books before ever since he learned how to read, so they did came to her rather easily. One subject he seemed to struggle with was genjutsu, but mostly because she didn't have the patience to learn a skill that isn't as flashy as the others. SHe knew she had somewhat a Raiton user, but instead of crumble, the piece of paper she held didn't just crumble but also disintegrated. It was strange, but the academy teacher knew of one person before that happened to have a similar reaction to the test. This is how Enzeru found out she could use Ranton, as well as she found out who's hrt father was. A famous and skilled shinobi of the name Kagawa. The only problem with the realization was also that the academy teacher found out she was lying about hrt second name. Her family agreed to let her study in exchange of his teacher's work that she will not reveal the tides of the child to the Ohime family, so Enzeru was allowed to study, often sitting with her sensei listening to the great stories about his fathers victorious battles. SHe also took the name of Kagawa Enzeru.

      [Genin Banter]
      Like everything, the Academy has finished and Enzeru graduated to a fully fledged Genin. SHe looked forward to her life as a ninja, being in a team and all the good stuff. Enzeru loved going on mission, even the shitty and boring ones and getting money. She couldn't wait to gather enough money and move out of her clan house. Finally she could be free! She hoped her team would stay around forever, but only few months in, the chuunin exams started, and her team being the strongest Rookie team in generations, managed to get in. How? It was due to all of their abilities. They worked well together, and in the end, all became chuunin on their first try while still being Rookies. They were called the youngest Chuunin in history of Kiri, but ended up doing all the jobs other Chuunin wouldn't touch.

      [Chuunin Racket]
      Chuunin years were pretty bad in Enzeru's standing. Her being one of the youngest chuunin around, was always pushed around and given the worst jobs. Complaining didn't work, being to small to stand up to the bullies, Enzeru led a life of a push over up until she turned 17. She grew stronger doing missions that were expected to fail, and made a name for herself. At that stage, the skill and experience gained was much above any ninja her age. The missions she was made to go through while extremely difficult, left their toll and now Enzeru was more capable than most chuunin, not only in her age category. Even some jounin would have tough time fighting her. She was finally a recognized shinobi to the point, that even her clan members began to take a hint in that maybe approving her wasn't such a bad idea. Few days past her 17th birthday, the Mizukage requested to see her, to grant her the rank of a Jounin. Enzeru had no reason to refuse. She accepted it and began to work as a Jounin, but not a sensei. She was much too young to be one.

      [Jounin Overkill]
      Being a Jounin is hard, especially as a 17 year old. They are the pillars of the village as well as to some degree 3rd in line to make decisions, after the Kage and then the Council, it wasn't easy to get used to the every day craze. She was the youngest Jounin so far, as well as the most inexperienced, but managed to stay on top of her game to to her over average intelligence and skill. Being a quick learner at that stage was important. Constant disagreements and fights between the villages must have been solved by these men, including Enzeru and that put a large burden on her shoulders. While it was all that bad, Enzeru manage to do well, due to her being used to always needing to posh herself harder and faster from her Chuunin years. Years, wars and missions have passed, Enzeru grew to the age of 29, still not at the top of her skill, always improving her potential seemed to be never ending. The clan approved of him, making her somewhat of a golden child and somewhat of a mascot. She took the name of Ohime Kawaga Enzeru, but only due to love of her mother, not caring about the clan all that much.

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      Date was a new member of the village of Iwagakure. Date had just come from been a missing nin from the village of Kirigakure and lots still ran through his mind about Kirigakure and the village itself about revenge and other aspects but when he had been saved by Asako outside the village of stone he was saved from death and to him a second chance at life. Date had got the permission to join Iwa from there Kage he swore his allegiance to the village and vowed to protect it from harm. Date had joined the village mainly because of Asako, Date felt something for her that was starting to built up in side him and he wondered if she will ever feel the same only time will tell. A lot of the Ninja in the village of stone still don't trust Date and will often threaten him but often tells them what he thinks or offer a challenge himself because that's one thing talking behind his back he does not like and often ticks him off.


      Date was currently in his new village home that was directly next door to Asako home the size difference of the homes is massive when comparing them but Asako 's home was for all her family and Date well lived by himself and didn't need a big house even though he spent sometime in Asako's home most of time when her dad bairon is out of the home, as the both of them don't get along so well and Date tries for Asako sake not to argue with him when they do pass or even worse fight.

      Date was laid on his bed relaxing abit thinking about new village life and how good it was actually with him thinking about it and was thinking if things had been different within Kirigakure but as the thoughts entered his head he rejected them and stopped dreaming on past and what ifs. Date opened his eyes and placed his hands at the back of his head and spoke slightly to himself. " I wonder how Asako is....? Date just had spoken to himself he then paused for a second then continued. " I think ill go see her what harm could it cause. " Date had just spoke again as he did he laughed to himself. Date climbed out of his bedroom window and jumped to the ground below as he did he landed on his feet silently so that he did not wake anyone. then he walked around the house to Asako's window as he looked up at it above him since the house was so big he wasn't possible to jump up so he would have to climb instead. Date reached out his arms and started to slowly climb on the vines that were up the house but it only went half way so he would have to use something else foe the rest of the distance, after about 5 ins of trying Date had reached Asako window as he sat on the edge of it and held up a single hand sign to form and Ice flower in his hand and he got a thick cloth from his pocket and place it around the base of the flower so it would not make other cold if they touched it or held it. Date then knocked on the window slightly to try and wake or draw attention that someone or thing was at the window. " Asako are you awake? Date then waited to see if she would come or not.




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    Re: Ohime Kagawa Enzeru

    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru on Sat Oct 20, 2012 10:52 pm

    done i think
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    Re: Ohime Kagawa Enzeru

    Post by Echo on Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:39 am


    • Expand more on your appearance and personality.

    • You'd be A ranked just starting off.

    • To use Storm Release you need a Kekkei Genkai


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    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru on Mon Oct 22, 2012 9:12 pm

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    Post by Echo on Mon Oct 22, 2012 9:42 pm

    Kishin no Jutsu [Fierce God Technique]

    You don't have the lion contract.

    Kurogane no Oui: Tekkoujo [Iron Throne: Ironworks]

    That requires you to be able to summon the Iron Throne, something you wouldn't be able to do.

    Kurogane no Oui: Naeru Oukan [Iron Throne: Withering Crown]

    Same with this.

    Kamigan no Jutsu [God's Eye Technique]

    The way it is described makes it seem like it can knock an S ranked technique down to A rank before it comes into impact.

    An S ranked technique, with enough destructive force, would simply blow the thing away. The jutsu itself, if focused on pure destruction, that is.

    Raiton: Iaido [Lightning Release: Quick Draw]

    Explain the lightning bolts a little more. The range, all that stuff. How powerful each bolt is, etc.

    Ranton no Yoroi [Storm Release Armor]

    Currently the Lightning Release technique is banned, thus a mimicking technique of it isn't allowed.

    Dangan bāningu - Burning Bullet

    To heat it up you would need fire as an element.



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    Re: Ohime Kagawa Enzeru

    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru on Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:34 pm

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    Post by Eki Gisou on Fri Oct 26, 2012 3:39 am

    Should be your last couple of fixes Ohime... I like to do things all at once and get it wrapped up.

    Name:Ranton: Reizā Sākasu (Storm Release: Laser Circus)
    Rank:A
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 4
    Element: Storm
    Description: This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. First, a halo of bright energy spreads around the user's hands as this technique is activated, then the technique encircles the user's hand and from that the beams are shot out towards the enemy. The user is able to alter the beams direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity. The user can increase the number of beams to a great amount to pin down an enemy.

    While I know you wouldn't abuse it, it needs a max number. Even something as high as 25 is fine for me, but it needs to be there.

    Name: Gekidou no Jutsu [Upheaval Technique]
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 2
    Element: Storm
    Description: A simple technique where the user sends a beam of ranton energy into the ground and has it comes up from underneath his target, increasing the flow of his chakra upon the moment of its emergence. This causes the beam to further energize and create a pillar of destructive ranton energy that has a radius of ten feet and height of thirty.


    How does this effect an opponent. What kind of damage? Utter obliteration? Or a bodily shock? Secondly, a ten foot radius is twenty feet across, at thirty feet high, that's huge for an attack you wouldn't see coming. Either up the rank, or lower the size.

    [qoute]Name: Shingami Ittoryu: Oketsu [Death God One-Sword Style: Impure Blood]
    Rank: C
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Hand Seals: 0
    Element: Lightning
    Description: The user charges raiton element chakra along their blade, causing it to crackle with violet lightning. This lightning then begins to swirl around the length of the blade, making a loud, distorted noise akin to a power drill while at the same time forming a sort of a drill head around the blade as the lightning spins. Then the user simply makes a mad dash for their target, aiming to impale their target with the lightning drill they have formed as it specializes in drilling through defenses.][/quote]

    B rank.

    Name: Suiton: Mizuame Yagura [Water Release: Syrup Turret]
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 3
    Element: Water
    Description: The user will generate Suiton chakra into the back of their throat, spatially recomposing it as a liquid. This liquid will then be spewed out of the user's maw, aiming to deflect mid-air projectiles and repel even heavy opponents several yards away. The liquid being projected, however, contains a surprisingly high viscosity, its texture almost like that of molasses. When drenched in the substance, victims will find any movement made to be strictly resisted, making it almost impossible for those without great strength to move properly

    SOOOOO much more potential, make the fluid flammable for your syrup techniques, then ignite with the Raiton. Us mods don't just criticize you know.

    Name: Taiyou Furea no Jutsu [Solar Flare Technique]
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 1
    Element: Storm
    Description:With a single handseal, the user can release a pulse of concussive ranton energy capable of pushing back individuals or small objects several yards. This jutsu does call for the user to stand still in order to use this jutsu, making it a jutsu that one must use in a tactical manner.

    Needs a range of effect. I.E. Not how far it can push something, but how far you can push something from.

    Name: Shinigami Ittoryu: Tenshi no Shoushi Ikazuchi [Death God One-Sword Style: Angel of Midnight Thunder]
    Rank: S
    Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
    Hand Seals: 0
    Element: Storm
    Description: The user of this technique, first sends out a large shockwave of violet colored raiton chakra outward within a thirty foot radius at a high rate of speed. This chakra carries with it a special charge, though harmless. This raiton chakra then condenses itself around the user in as it prepares to be molded. The level of physical speed required for this technique is key. Moving at a high rate of speed, attacks from various directions are performed. Using the prepared raiton chakra, the user of the technique is then capable of creating afterimages of themselves in the form of blinding lightning. At the same time, the user is still attempting to slash at the target, though avoiding any oncoming attacks to themselves. These dozens upon dozens of lightning afterimages then condense into the form of swords, raining down as projectiles directly at the target. Using any previous contact with the shock wave of chakra from the beginning of the technique as homing signal due to the residual electrical charge. These swords made of pure raiton chakra carry with them the ability to pierce like lightning and cut into flesh with ease, attempting embed themselves into the target at a high rate of speed while still delivering a powerful shock. The idea is to confuse the enemy in a form similar to the Dance of the Crescent Moon, but by adding a lightning styled twist to it.

    That type of control, needs some hand seals, if anything, just to make it fair for an opponent to get out of the way. This could be a practical auto-hit if they were right in front of you otherwise.

    Name: Kubire (Constriction)
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: 2
    Element: None
    Description: After two handseals, the user will cast a genjutsu and make the enemy believe their clothes are constricting. It doesn't cause any permanent damage and simply restricts their movements for a key number of moments until the opponent releases the genjutsu.

    Needs a medium. All genjutsu uses one of the five sense to take effect. Do they hear you whistle a short tune, look at your eyes or fingers. Do you make them smell a certain fragrance. Otherwise this would auto-hit.

    Name: Asshuku taihō - Compression Cannon
    Rank: S
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 5
    Element: Water
    Description: After a series of five hand seals, the user will inhale then unleash a powerful jet of compressed water. While this is not overly complicated, the chakra control needed to compress the water is extremely difficult and thus it's high rank, and the damage it can cause is catastrophic. Compressed at this level, the water could easily cut through diamond and is capable of damaging even a Bijuu if used by someone with high enough skill in Ninjutsu.

    I remember having a jutsu similar to this as a Hoshigaki character I played. I got away with A rank, though mine could only cut through stone. Either way, this seems between A-S rather than a full out S. If you want, you can nerf it a bit and save your last S rank slot. Just let me know, otherwise, it's good.

    Name: Ranton - Bunshin [Storm Clone]
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 1
    Element: Storm
    Description: A simple jutsu where the user creates a clone out of pure Ranton energy. The clones can only use Ranton jutsu and are weaker than most clones, due to them being pure energy. The trump card however, is that when disrupted. The energy can either cause a large, concussive blast.

    Regular Bunshins are B rank, elemental ones are instantly A rank if they have dispersal effects. Not C.

    Name: Magen: Kurobara [Demonic Illusion: Black Roses]
    Rank: D
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: 1
    Element: None
    Description: A low class illusion that when used the caster will burst into a large number of black rose petals when they are struck. The petals will spiral around the area.

    Name: Enmaku (Smoke Screen)
    Rank: D
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: 1
    Element: None
    Description: The user for this illusion breaths in and seems to breath out a large thick smoke. The smoke illusion is used to consume him and the area to hide him and allow him to attack his enemies from inside the illusion of smoke.

    Name: Gen Bunshin no Jutsu [Illusionary Clone Technique]
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: 2
    Element: None
    Description: When casted this illusion will create multiple 'clones' of the caster in the form of an illusion. Everything these illusions do is at the exact same time. They will talk together and move together. When they are attacked the attacks will go right through them yet the illusion will stay unharmed,. Similar to the clone technique just more advanced. But once discovered as a genjutsu they can easily be broken by the simple release command.

    Mediums. just rephrase it so they need to be looking at you when you use the jutsu, that'll do.

    History is sufficient, RP sample exceptional, fix these up, and you'll be approved.


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    Re: Ohime Kagawa Enzeru

    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru on Fri Oct 26, 2012 3:53 pm

    Edited I was fine with that S rank so just added it A-S for damage wise.
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    Re: Ohime Kagawa Enzeru

    Post by Eki Gisou on Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:07 pm

    Approved and Moved.

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