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    Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Kirai on Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:39 am




    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name: Tsuki, Kirai.

      Nickname/Alias: N/A.

      Age: 17.

      Gender: Female.



      Is that really me?
      Appearance:
      Kirai is an attractive, short young woman. She reaches a fair complexion, with flushing rosy red cheeks and bright blue eyes. She doesn't like to put her hair up, so she lets it flow downwards onto her back and reaching her thin waist. She is a busty young woman who is often seen smiling, she isn't really a frowning type of person. Her hair is described as a dark audburn to be concise, but if you were bland, you could just say she was a brunette. She has long bangs that cover her right eye. Kirai has long eyelashes that emphasize the largeness of her baby blues. She has small ears and a little nose, and pinkish lips that are firm and soft. On each ear she has 4 piercings, cartilage, conch and two on her lobes. She carries a longsword with a strap, carried in a decorated sheathe, with strange kanji lettering downwards on the left side. On the strap that reaches beneath her breasts, there is plated metal, to protect her - even as little help as it sounds. Her nails are often painted white, to contrast with her fair complexion.

      Kirai sports a thin figure, petite although busty. She has an hourglass like shape to herself. Her hands are little although strong, and her bicep is muscular although not very noticable. She has a round shaped face, nearly in the shape of a heart, and her hair is thick, framing her face and accentuating her distinct looks. It also appears as silky and soft as it really is. Her beauty if different, and people say they can see a burning flame within her eyes. Her skin looks soft and delicate, especially on her face. Her nose points a little at the tip and she has a tattoo on her left hand, as a tradition of the Tsuki clan that looks like a lineart of a flame. She has a large scar on her stomach, from getting hurt in the Chuunin Exams.

      Clothing:

      Kirai wears a baggy black jacket, with her Kirigakure metal plated band hanging from her neck protecting her collarbone. She wears dark blue (like a navy colour) stretch pants that hug close to her ankles, with a pair of ankle high ninja sandles. She sports a small bag around her waist to carry medical goods and small weaponry tools. When in battle, you often see her wearing a protective vest to guard her torso.

      Weight:
      112 lbs.

      Height:
      5'5".

      Ethnicity:
      Caucasian.

      Voice:
      Kirai talks with a high-pitched, girly tone that makes her sound bubbly and cute.


        Likes:
      • Boys. (cough Eki.)
      • Training.
      • Learning new skills.
      • Spicy food.
      • When people are courageous.

        Dislikes:
      • Fighting.
      • Having to hold back.
      • Seeing herself fall for someone.
      • Finding flaws in oneself.
      • Seeing her friends hurt.


      Personality:
      Kirai is a gentle, compassionate girl, although she sees herself as ignorant and lonely. She is a wanderer of her mind, finding who she is, and finding who she loves, which unknowingly sets her in a position to fall in love easily. She is protective and distinct with her emotion changes. She keeps grudges against those who hurt her, and makes herself look cold and hard on the outside, and loving on the inside. You could describe her as hot-headed, as she is easy to lose temper, or start an arguement. She likes to spend time with her loved ones and try to help people in distinct ways. She connects to those who are courageous like herself, or adventurous you could say. She hates the water, she can't swim or be near it.



      My...Family?
      Clan:
      Tsuki Clan.

      Unique Clan Features:
      Akuma Homura. (Satan's Flame)

      Akuma Homura is the fighting style passed down from the Tsuki clan. This fighting style adds the use of the fire element, Katon. From the clan member's tattoo on their left hand, they ensue a spewing flame with chakra constantly stringing around the user to envelop their body (or specific body parts) in flames, although leaving them unharmed. This increases their hand to hand combat speed and power as well as their physical speed. Often, the user of this fighting style will usually only use the chakra around their hands, leaving enough chakra to still perform techniques and recover as well. When the user comes in contact with the opponent, it will deal a burn damage. Akuma Homura is described as the burning red fighting style, since the user's skin turns an orange-ish colour from being in contact with the heat of the flames.
      *Note: Any clan member can use all three paths, although using one that is not trained will burn the skin and drain chakra and stamina."



      It's all coming back to me now..
      Classification: Chuunin.

      Letter Rank: B.

      Village:
      Kirigakure.



      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-
      Available Starting Points:


      • 1. Taijutsu. (3)
      • 2. Weaponry - Kenjutsu (2)




      -Elements-

      • 1. Katon.
      • 2. (None)
      • 3. (None)
      • Comb. (None)




      -Jutsu-
      E: (All of the basic ninjutsu are included here.)
      D: 0
      C: 4
      B: 3
      A: 0
      S: 0
      _____________
      (Deleted Hand Seals and Element since Taijutsu do not need them)

      Name: Hien - Flying Swallow
      Rank: B.
      Type: Taijutsu.
      Description: With Kirai's custom technique to this, she will implement the same technique as Asuma did in the canon show and feed her chakra into her blade as to make a sharp edge like function upon the normal blade itself. This will make the opponent misjudge their dodge if they cannot see the feeded chakra since it is risen far from the blade itself. The chakra that is risen from the blade is about five inches long.

      Name: Tsūten Renkyaku - Heavenly Foot of Pain
      Rank: B
      Type: Taijutsu.
      Description: Kirai will implement her strength as she jumps up into the air at an incredible height and reach out her leg and drop kick her opponent with incredible force. The maximum height jumped is about 13 feet.

      Name: Kage Buyou - Shadow Dance
      Rank: C
      Type: Taijutsu.
      Description: This taijutsu technique is utilized to get behind your opponent in mid-air. The user would usually kick their opponent upward from a low position, launching them into the air, and follow them using this jutsu. They will appear right behind the target, repeating their position like a shadow. From there, a number of attack options is presented to the user.
      Name: Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop
      Rank: C
      Type: Taijutsu.
      Description: A rather simple move that can only be used under certain conditions. The user will attempt to grab their opponent from behind while the latter are in the air and lock their ankles around their neck, restricting movement to a degree, while also grabbing them with their arms. They will then change position in the air so that the opponent is falling towards the ground head first. The point of this technique is to slam the enemy's head into the ground at a high speed. While quite deadly, this technique is hard to initiate and not that hard to break out of.

      Name: Dainamikku Akushon - Dynamic Action
      Rank: C
      Type: Taijutsu.
      Description: A move that the user will launch themselves at the opponent and launch a series of attacks, such as kicks, punches, and any sort of physical hand-to-hand combat.



      Name: Akuma Homura: Path One
      Rank: C, C Upkeep
      Type: Taijutsu
      Description: Akuma Homura's first path is pretty basic. It allows the user to direct the flames from one's tattoo, to two direct body parts, mainly starting on the hands. The user's skin will turn an orange-ish glow, and it will increase their hand-to-hand combat speed and power.


      Name:
      Akuma Homura: Path Two
      Rank: B, B Upkeep
      Type: Taijutsu
      Description: Akuma Homura's second path is a little more complicated. It makes the user spew the flames out from their hands like pillars. to up to 4 or 5 direct body parts, mainly the torso, hands and feet. The flame will direct itself to the current of the wind, burning the oxygen that it is fueled with. It is known to be a metre off the selected body part, but if controlled, it will most likely follow the wind direction. It burns at about the radius of one metre. The user's skin will reach a solid reddish-orange and it will increase their hand-to-hand combat speed and power a little more than the first path.





      This is my Story
      History/Background Story:
      Starting Life
      Kirai was born to a woman named Kitsune and her famous father, Tsuki, Ren. Her mother died shortly after she was born, leaving her with her single parent, Ren. He was a strong man, worthy to be called a father as he was a taijutsu specialist as well as utilizing his weaponry in his techniques. Ren raised Kirai as his close daughter, letting her experience her life in a ninja village, Kirigakure. Kirai moved along the years and aged to the point where her father sent her to the Ninja Academy.

      Here at the Ninja Academy, Kirai found her ability for taijutsu over all of the ninja arts. She was excessively skilled in hand-to-hand combat, and she found she wasn't able to adapt to a lot of chakra control in her past. Kirai was learning quickly and picking up new skills from the back of her hand. She also adapted to being around new people, and not just her old man. Kirai became friends with the kids who were going to be the other two genin that fit into her puzzle as a team.

      Exams weren't harsh at all for her, in fact, she scored one of the top final marks in her class.

      Genin Life

      After graduating from being an Academy Student, Kirai slowly stepped up to be a Genin in Kirigakure. She knew the dangers of being a ninja, yet she wanted to achieve the strengths that her father has. She was trained in the name of the Tsuki clan, taking up any of her free time, as well as having her sensei, Ukiku, and her two teammates, Ai and Kuro. Ai was a girl that looked similar to Kirai, and Kuro was a handsome boy that was a distant branch of the Hyuga clan. Kirai was trained with simple tasks, like a dangerous maze that her sensei set up, or small missions, but slowly, the three genin didn't know how close they were to extreme heights. Their Jounin assigned them to a mission that would mean him leaving the group in one part of the forest and the genin in the other part. Little did they know that their sensei completed a hunter ninja's task, a murderous man set foot by Ukiku and killed him. The genin found their sensei's killer who ran quickly after he was seen.

      Without a jounin, the genin were depressed and somewhat scarred. They were taken in by Kirai's father who trained them in mainly taijutsu arts.

      Kirai slowly stepped up to the Chuunin Exams, courageous to become a Chuunin, which she completed her task in a hard set of matches. She was the only girl who was set as a weaponry and taijutsu specialist.

      In the chuunin exams, Kirai faced the classic Konohagakure styled battles, and the Forest of Death as well. Without her sensei around, it was hard on her and her teammates to travel through, especially with the memory of her sensei's death stabbed into her head while she was travelling through the forest, obtaining the scrolls as they successfully reached them.

      She set forth to the next challenge, Kirai noticed it was all about the one on one matches. She felt fired up, although her teammates didn't. Kirai noticed that she was going to fight one of the genin from Konohagakure, a young man who looked just like her sensei's killer. Fearfully, she stepped up to the plate and fought with anger and revenge, in the end, the match resulted as Kirai being the winner, and her opponent was left with large slash marks all over his body.

      She found herself in a position that made her look like a monster, and her teammates were ironically puzzled. Kirai changed drastically at that moment. The next match for her came up as one of the final matches against her opponent Kuro, her teammate. She showed no mercy, although Kuro tended to be a sweetheart. He refused the match and got a forfeit loss, for he wanted his friend to succeed and not hurt her.

      In the end, Kirai was announced to be a Chuunin, which her father praised her for. Although, she couldn't help not feel bad for Kuro. In the end, Kuro was promoted about a year later, and disappeared.

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    Last edited by Kirai on Wed Oct 24, 2012 9:49 pm; edited 9 times in total
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    Re: Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Echo on Tue Oct 23, 2012 2:14 am

    Your clan needs to be made in the Other Creation forum.

    You cant start with any weapons, they must be made and purchased in the Other Creation forum with the starting Ryo you get.

    You're only allowed 2 Skill Specialties as a Chuunin.

    Add more description to your appearance, especially since you don't use a picture, as well as your personality.


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    Re: Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Kirai on Tue Oct 23, 2012 2:41 am

    Done.
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    Re: Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Nocturne on Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:02 pm

    Hien - Flying Swallow
    Please add a range. Take note the technique is much weaker than Asuma's version because he had wind-natured chakra.

    Chi Buyou - Energy Dance
    You would need the medical specialty to perform this.

    Dainamikku Akushon - Dynamic Action
    What does this series of attacks include?


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    Re: Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Kirai on Tue Oct 23, 2012 8:01 pm

    1. Done.
    2. Would I be able to make it a lower rank with a little less medical at all?
    3. Fixed.
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    Re: Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Kirai on Tue Oct 23, 2012 9:41 pm

    Never mind, added a canon jutsu.
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    Re: Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Echo on Wed Oct 24, 2012 3:30 am

    Since your clan has it's own thread, i deleted the post with it on this app, it's not needed on here. The last problem i see is you need a lot more history.


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    Re: Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Kenji on Wed Oct 24, 2012 9:35 pm

    So far so good, but let's get that clan stuff in here so you can actually use it. I'd like you to take "A fighting technique passed down from the Tsuki Clan. (Information found at bottom of application." and replace it with your description of "Akuma Homura is the fighting style passed down from the Tsuki clan. This fighting style adds the use of the fire element, Katon. From the clan member's tattoo on their left hand, they ensue a spewing flame with chakra constantly stringing around the user to envelop their body (or specific body parts) in flames, although leaving them unharmed. This increases their hand to hand combat speed and power as well as their physical speed. Often, the user of this fighting style will usually only use the chakra around their hands, leaving enough chakra to still perform techniques and recover as well. When the user comes in contact with the opponent, it will deal a burn damage. Akuma Homura is described as the burning red fighting style, since the user's skin turns an orange-ish colour from being in contact with the heat of the flames.
    *Note: Any clan member can use all three paths, although using one that is not trained will burn the skin and drain chakra and stamina."

    After that just add which paths your character knows in a fashion like...

    Name: Akuma Homura: Path One
    Rank: C, C Upkeep
    Type: Taijutsu
    Description: Akuma Homura's first path is pretty basic. It allows the user to direct the flames from one's tattoo, to two direct body parts, mainly starting on the hands. The user's skin will turn an orange-ish glow, and it will increase their hand-to-hand combat speed and power.

    ...And...

    Name: Akuma Homura: Path Two
    Rank: B, B Upkeep
    Type: Taijutsu
    Description: Akuma Homura's second path is a little more complicated. It makes the user spew the flames out from their hands like pillars. to up to 4 or 5 direct body parts, mainly the torso, hands and feet. The flame will direct itself to the current of the wind, burning the oxygen that it is fueled with. It is known to be a metre off the selected body part, but if controlled, it will most likely follow the wind direction. It burns at about the radius of one metre. The user's skin will reach a solid reddish-orange and it will increase their hand-to-hand combat speed and power a little more than the first path.
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    Re: Kirai Tsuki

    Post by Kenji on Wed Oct 24, 2012 9:57 pm

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