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    Fire Goddess ~ [Finished]

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    Fire Goddess ~ [Finished]

    Post by Silence on Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:09 am


    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name:
      Kai Fuuma
      Nickname/Alias:
      Silence ~ Unknown, when she got to Kiri she was known for rarely speaking.
      Red Lotus~ Due to her color of hair and eye color for the color and Lotus due to her beauty and her Close Quarter Combat skills.
      Fire Goddess~ Well known for her amazing skills in the art of fire, and massive set of techniuqes in the use of this element.
      Age:
      18
      Gender:
      Female
      Is that really me?

      Appearance:
      In this section it will explain the appearance features she has on the more upper part of her body. From the top of her head, it would show her head full of hair. Her hair length is pretty long, going down her body and stopping about the area of her mid back. Her hair type is very wavy, can be hard to explain sometimes but she usually just straighten it out but it still turns out to look nice. Her hair type has always been like this, she never had a desire to cut it shorter or keep it longer, if she had to she would put it in a bun or something of the sorts but as far as that she usually keeps her hair out and on her back.



      Hair color itself is a red, a usual red color but a few shades darker but still a nice pretty and obviously red. The camera would then be seen moving down to her face, clear and much shown out beautiful face. For a woman who has been through many battles and a few wars in her life time she has been able to maintain a untouched face, with no battle scars on them.



      The most notable features on her face are her eyes, some call it strange and others call it not but she has the same color and shade as her hair color. The camera was then seen moving down to her body area, in which showed a woman’s body on a whole other caliber. Her whole skin color matching everything on her body, as if she got the perfect skin color since she was little, a very athletic body, and just looks plain right sexy. A female ninja is usually suppose to be built athletic but this girl has fought more then usual ninjas in there 40’s has been fighting and usually still made it out on top. But she has no scars or any marks on her body either just like her face.
      Clothing:

      Weight:
      145 lb.
      Height:
      5'8 ft.
      Ethnicity:
      Korean
      Voice:

        Likes:
      • Experiencing Battles.
      • Stronger Opponents.
      • Her Big Breast.
      • Friends.
      • Training.

        Dislikes:
      • Unworthy Opponents.
      • Useless Attacks.
      • Small Breast.
      • Water Element.
      • Being Broke.


      Personality:
      Battle Princess ~
      As the daughter of a gladiator king, she has a heart meant for combat and she gets a major thrill for battle when she see it. She would get very bothered if a battle is very weak, she likes strong fighters battling each other and she doesn't mind seeing blood. When in battle she usually hopes to prolong a fight as long as possible if the opponent is as strong or stronger then her. The rush of attacking, defending and breath taking moments of battles give her so much happyniess she never ever have the strength to contain herself. She never minds a brawl, or jumping in a fight just to have fun. "You win some, you lose some ... but you live ... you live to fight another day ... I live to fight everyday!" - Red Lotus



      Silence ~

      She holds no reason to be shy, nervous or scared of anything she only talks when nessessary and usually its because she is thinking to herself but it can also make her look like the odd ball of almost any group. This also makes her more elite looking due to only a few ninjas are actually as silent as her which makes one opinion of her deadly due to no talking, just actions. She also once in a while is seen using the term Silence as if it was a way of life, she does it every once in a while and if your around her you would notice it. "Silence is Perfection ...." - Fire Goddess.


      Bounty Hunter ~
      If you think about it, all of it makes perfect sense ... she is in love with combat and she has this obsession for money. Being a bounty hunter is one of the trade marks that made her a super star in this world - She has a passion for it, and she will kill, find, kidnap or steal for a reasonable amount of cash. Though she does know when she can't handle a mission, she understands her own limit but sometimes for the cash she just might go for the mission. Which is very ironic because Kakuzu was a bounty hunter and he also had a strange obsession for money.



      Entertaining ~

      This section of his personality is to show of her meaning for entertainment. She has this very big thing for getting bored very quickly, big flaw of her is if the thing isn't good enough she will refuse it. Big perk is if its nothing else to do she will make the best of it. She will search for many things to do, from searching for bounty that can combat her even if she may lose the fight. She also rather enjoys games; she can create a game from anything rather. When in battle she likes to play her favorite game ‘Who can hit the ground first’ which is pretty self explanatory.


      My...Family?

      Clan:
      Fuuma
      Unique Clan Features:

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification:
      Jounin
      Letter Rank:
      A
      Village:
      Kirigakure No Sato.
      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points:10


      • 1. Ninjutsu (Master)
        Due to all her life of just the element fire, she has been known to have one of the hottest temperature of fire, her flames are so hot they are white.
      • 2.Taijutsu (Expert)
      • 3.Sensory (Adapt)


      -Elements-


      • 1. Fire
      • 2.
      • 3.
      • Comb.


      -Jutsu-

      E:
      D:
      C: 4
      B: 9
      A: 4
      S:
      _____________

      Spoiler:
      Name: Katon: Hoheki [Fire Release: Flame Wall]
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Ox, Rat, Dog
      Element: Katon Element
      Range: 1-5 Meters [10m high, 20m wide, and 5m thick]
      Description:
      The user summons a flame that comes in between him and his enemy. After stabilized, the user can push the wall at his target.Can block A-Rank techniques of almost any kind.
      Drawbacks:
      - Can only block B-Rank water jutsu.


      Name: Chi Katon Hari [Fire Release: Thousand Fire Needles]
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: One half of a seal [Tiger]
      Element: Katon Release
      Description:
      Using this technique, Kai gathers some heat from the air and surrounding environment into one thousand long fire needles. He then directs them to a specific target at high speed, leaping backwards before impact so he doesn't get caught in the crossfire. While the needles do surround a target from all sides, they don't appear above the target, creating an escape route. Kai is able to perform this jutsu with one-handed seals, allowing her to pin an opponent's arm and attack while they cannot use any techniques themselves.
      Drawbacks:
      - Range of this technique is very small.
      - Takes some seconds for the needles to form, which also gives opponent time to get out of the five meter range.


      Name: Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
      Rank: C-Rank
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger
      Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth either as a massive orb of roaring flame or as a continuous flame-thrower. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface.



      Name: Fire Release: Pheonix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
      Type: C-Rank
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Tiger
      Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.




      Name: Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
      Rank: B-Rank
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger
      Description: A Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when the user clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.


      Name: Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
      Rank: B-Rank
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Tiger
      Description: The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes.



      Name: Fire Release: Burning windmill
      Rank: B
      Range: 20 meters
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Sub-type: Offensive
      Elemental Affinity: Katon ~ Fire
      Notation: Secret Technique
      Handsigns: Holding any hand seal
      Description:
      This technique requires chakra focus and density, as using the heat around the user which is Kai. She can form and create a demon wind shuriken made of fire which is capable of slicing through any jutsu of C-Rank while the same rank is just as strong most likely canceling each other out, this is a launching attack which means it moves at attack speed.
      Drawbacks:



      Name: Atsusa Shoudou - Heat Impulse
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element:
      Description:
      Range: 10 Meters diameter
      Katon • Atsusa Shoudou is a Ninjutsu technique utalizing the Fire element.This technique allows the user to release an impulse of super heated flames all around their body and send them outwards. The flames can inflict third degree burns. The speed is one meter per second.
      Drawbacks:
      -Friends can be burned too


      Name: Sagakuryuu (Art Of The Balance Fist)
      Rank: B
      Type: Taijutsu
      Hand Seals: -
      Element: -
      Description:
      Revolving around handwork, speed, agility and marksmanship. For the users of this style of close quarters combat they have to find balance within there movements and striking. This Goken compared to Sagaku is very much the same when it comes down to the movement of the feet and the kicking structures, the handwork is different, warriors of the Goken aim for the bones of the body meanwhile Sagaku aim for the muscles of the body. One thing they are rarely trained in is strength, that is only if mandatory due to failure of attacking effect. The user of this style study the pressure points, vital areas and most of all muscles to where breaking there opponent down can be a matter of a one, two, three move if experienced enough.




      Punches/Jabs~

      The Balance fist is utilized by hitting pressure points of the body. To be a close quarter combat combatant you must have a fast body but this style of fighting teaches the student how to specifically move fast with the use of the arms. The Style punches are different from Goken and Juken due to not using full fist when it comes to punches or jabs but rather the use of knuckles which usually is the index and middle finger knuckles after balling up a fist or maybe even fingers if experienced enough. The purpose of the knuckles is so that it can make the attack lighter, and lighter equals more speed for one. Secondly, they are meant to hit in pressure points or muscles used to temporarily shut down functions in the limbs or body part or even damage the muscles rendering them useless. Do not mistaken this for Juken, it has nothing to do with the chakra points of the body but more trying to take down there opponent with fast "quick jabs" or "punches". Some beginners have to hit very hard to be able to damage a muscles, others may just have to hit pressure points with relatively light jabs. Never has the user been taught to do a basic punch, even taught to attack with the wrist of the aim, punches could be influenced by the Drunken Fist and that the stances of balance could also be inspired by it.




      Acrobatics/Agility~

      Without this part the students of Sagaku could possibly be at a disadvantage, the jabs and punches are of no use with out being able to mix it up now and then. The students are required to work on flexibility and movement, this was to strengthen there legs when it came down to all it has to do with legs. This is where the kicking with Goken are very alike in many ways. Due to the high speed of the punches and jabs, the kicks look much slower then any other attacks. The objectives are to be able to train the students so that they can flip, jump high into the air and be able to make fluid and very unpredictable movements unlike the predictable Goken. So most experienced Taijutsu users using this style of balance are able to not use chakra at all and move through any amount of jutsu through just solid movement or by jumping. Although a very useful method of fighting, the legwork is vital to this style of fighting and is used to not only get close but to give in powerful attacks behind the light and quick jabs.


      Name: Katon Kyanseru [Fire Cancel]
      Rank: C-A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Phsyical Contact
      Element: Katon Release
      Description:
      This is a very unique way of being able to actually destroy a technique of the fire element. By absorbing a sample of the heat around the user they are able to calculate how much chakra is needed to match the fire technique coming there way, before it hits or can fully activate, the user could use that heat to adjust a coating of chakra energy with the exact opposite frequency using that and putting that same frequency into a limb Of course the frequency chakra will be burned out but the technique will be destroyed instantly upon contact.
      Drawbacks:
      - This is a skill only used for Ninjutsu and Taijutsu dealing with the fire element.
      - Can only cancel form C-A fire techniques.



      Name: Katon Tereporutashon (Katon Element: Fire Teleportation)
      Rank: A
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Great Chakra Control.
      Element: Katon Element
      Description:
      This is a developed and one of the most clever technique in the elemental affinity of fire. This technique does not require any hand seals at all, but it is by far one dangerous technique that so far only Kai has been able to use due to her high mastery in fire. After performing a launching fire technique the user can with a incredibly small string of chakra connecting to the technique meaning the ball or whatever was launched - however, at a point chosen by the user, the users body seems to evaporate, being replaced by flames which are quickly swept along the same path as the flames from the technique. This means no one can know longer see the user at all. If a ray or blast the string isn't necessary anymore. At this point of time the user body is fire itself - Basically hiding in the fire of whatever attack is launched by the user. Once emerging from the fire the user automatically returns back to normal, this is used for surprise attacks or for very tricky escape.
      Drawbacks:
      - Cooldown: 2 post
      - If an opponent use a wind technique to blow the fire away then the user will return back to normal.
      - If an opponent use a water technique while you were in it, the user would be dead. End of story. the user would be extinguished with the fire technique and would no longer exist, seeing as the user body itself becomes fire.
      - If while hiding in the fire technique and it comes across another fire technique, the moment it connects the jutsu will deactivate making this technique difficult.
      - Stronger wind blowing it away and knocking you out is fine. Same with water.
      - A counter fire attack will either be overpowered or will overpower yours, so the user better be careful.
      -A stronger fire will incinerate the user. A weaker one may burn the user still. While in the fire the user is still vulnerable to attacks





      Name: Katon Ninpou: Nenshō suishin | Fire Release Art: Combustion Propulsion
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals:
      Element: Katon Release
      Description:
      A Fire-Release technique, using the combustive and explosive properties of the element to induce propulsion. The user will complete the required handseals, then bend their knees into a sprinter's pose, and form a half-tiger seal with their hands, releasing a highly focused, pressurized jet of fire from their hands. The user can release the boosters from his/her hands, while sprinting for a turn. A more powerful variant can be employed, releasing fire from the heels and hands simultaneously, using the flame to catapult themselves forward. Lastly, a fully realized master, can propel themselves for a total of three turns, with a using the flame to skim across the ground, and launch themselves through the air in elongated arcs.
      Drawback:
      Severely compromised by mud, water, or some other sort of liquid coating along the ground in a large quantity; Proving that inertia is indeed a cruel mistress, the user will be hurled off balance by their own fire, and the slippery surface while sprinting. Attacks from the side or below will also similarly send the shinobi out-of-control. It should be noted that the user cannot "boost" while wet, the flames will sputter and die pathetically. Once again, "Inertia is a cruel mistress", and with this acceleration, means the enemy can use an obstacle as a weapon.



      Name: Fire Needles
      Rank: C
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: -
      Element: Katon Release
      Description:
      The more deadly version of this technique is called “Thousand Fire Needles of Death” created for the sole purpose of ambush and murder. This is a diverted a more simple version, more simple version that if used properly can be quite as deadly. With a D-Rank amount of chakra with good chakra control the user can create fire needles between each fingers on one hand, this can be used for close quarter purpose or for projectile launching purposes. This has a C-Rank complexity for the reason of its chakra control required; a master of this technique can perform this without much effort at all.
      Drawbacks:


      This is my Story

      History/Background Story:
      The birth of Kai was very special indeed but even though it was all sweet her happy family wasn’t all nice and dandy because she didn’t see her happy family for long. When she was about three she was put up for adoption. It took her up to the age of six for her to finally to get some adoption parents but it all wasn’t so bad, she learned how to cook well due to the parents being famous rich chiefs meaning she could basically get anything she wanted or desire. As she grew up she had bright emotions and had such positive attitude about everything and you could almost never take a smile off her face. One day as she was still six she met some random boy around her age, he had some large dream with becoming a ninja and it drove her to no end.

      Her parents called her and him ‘Future lovers’ which they knew nothing about so they didn’t care at all which one thing that they had in common was. Her curiosity for being a shinobi wasn’t strong at first, but the way he talked about it and told stories hell and even bought stories to give to her. This completely changed her outlook on being a ninja, she wanted so bad but she felt she couldn’t just be a normal ninja she would need something special to catch everyone attention. She always had this thing for being different, so she looked for something different. Then she went on a research thinking maybe she could find some strong female ninja she could begin her quest of power with, with this research undergoing a different a more different set of emotions changing who she was.

      A Way In~

      She began attending waterfall shinobi academy about the age of seven and she was still on her research and then a few months before her birthday, it was a certain experimental plants that power up and gives all sorts of power to certain ninjas who either is desperate and rich or has some special purpose. This plant has all sorts of dangerous weapons and things in there in which was usually hidden until an observant of the plant accidentally dropped certain scroll in which explain certain information in which was suppose to be kept from open eyes. She manages to read it repeatedly until she found out what it truly was and she kept it a secret from the world.

      As she thought about the information everyday one day she found the man who lost the scroll and of course he didn’t know she had it, so then she began to keep tabs on him and watch him. She found out that he is an x-shinobi and an underground worker for the village leader preparing and creating things in case of war and basically experimenting on things he shouldn’t for the good of his village.

      Though she didn’t understand all that, she was more interested in the location of where he did all of this scary stuff. So she stopped for a moment, about a few months. Her birthday came and she hung out with friends and did social things in which was out of her character due to her quest for power.

      She was eight and very smart, she was learning the arts of Ninjutsu pretty well, her popularity rate was high for the fact that she didn’t want to be popular, that attract all the hoes or in her case dudes so girls either wanted to be her friend or wanted her head on a stick. Finally she one day found the man and caught on to where the location may be, a certain noodle shop a secret entrance behind the garbage dumpster.

      That didn’t quite mean she had to go in, she observed him for about a week, then finally once he left and went to his house she snuck in took his ID card and using transformation technique she went inside. As she went in she was automatically caught by their advanced sensor ninja, but before she was about to be killed a ninja stopped the whole thing and instead took her in to refuge.

      Soon enough they let her go but she came back interested in the way they lived and soon enough they took her in and began being friends with the girl so she knew everybody but they wouldn‘t tell why she was there but they did understand that she was a academy student so they began to give her lectors and show her how ninja things are done.

      She didn‘t ask any questions because she was happy to have older friends to help her out, she was told to keep there identity and location a secret and she understood and followed. So due to there guidance and help in training there was nothing the academy can teach her so at age 10, meaning while she was 9 she was doing anything she wanted she graduated with flying colors, due to her being in the same village Kazuzu was in she found out that he was quite legendary so she studied up on him and began using the same training method, she didn't like how his story ended, but she liked his moves and how he fought so he became her idle altho he died.

      Lets Begin!~

      Now the beginning of her year of being ten, she usually was quiet, she wasn’t going to get a team until she was at least twelve. She matured quickly physically, mentally and her chakra was always rising. Of course she kept training in the place with her special friends which they then told her more of what they were, the place was called ’Lower Power’ meaning there were all types of tunnels and secret places and stuff they had to life and who they are is kicked out ninja, a group of ninjas wanting to test out a new style of jutsu which is another kind of Earth Grudge Fear which the village leader told them no but they got caught doing it anyway and a lot of them was killed off but the ones who survived made an underground place right under the village waiting to seek revenge.

      They expected her response to be different, but she didn’t care as she basically found powerful ninjas that were trying to do something new but wasn’t able to do it, she instead wanted more guidance and training. It took a while for them to answer until finally when she accepted what the risk of being caught is she began her training by the end of the year near her birthday granted her the training of the fire element. It took her a few weeks to completely study the element. Then after that it was non-stop fire blowing training, she couldn’t quite grasp the element at this point of time but she was able to master a few jutsu. They trained her to no end, she wasn’t quite a prodigy but she was a fast learner and becoming pretty good on her own but they had to do something about her speed, the more she trained the more her chakra became normal due to it being lower the usual.

      So they worked on her speed and reflexes a lot even though she didn‘t have strength. Her Physical attributes were pretty good at this point, she wanted to make sure she was going to pass the test that a Jounin sensei usually give to see if their student qualify to be a shinobi or they would be sent back to the academy. She had already been excellent at close quarter combat, by taking lessons by a lot of the Police crops. Age 12 came around and she was coming along good with her fire element as she mastered more jutsu then a few years ago, and it was time for the Jounin-gennin meet up.

      One day after getting something to eat she went home, told her parents then left to train. She went to a place with trees and began breaking them just to push her self to see just what she could do herself. Then she caught her teammates spying her, she didn’t quite think it was them at first which cased her to kick one of her teammates into a tree.

      Once she realized she took him out of the tree and sat them down asking them what motives were there. One of them admitted her looks interested her on accident, but they both wanted to know how she got so much skill. She was relieved that they wasn’t trying to kill her, the earth user still had to heal so they just sat there and chat about stuff. She didn’t quite talk to people unless she needed something; it was quite an interesting experience for her. They wanted her type of training; she told them that she could have her training overlap with hers but nothing really special. They accepted quickly which would be the start of something different.

      Whats Next ~

      As she went home she felt better about herself, thinking maybe she got friends. The Lower Power shinobi instructed her to do research on the village one day if she gets the chance. While that was happening her injured sensei gave the report on how he was injured to the higher ranks, which questioned the little girl quickly. So as she was still twelve she was moving along in the quest of mastering the fire element as she felt she could take on another element, she started fighting her teammates in just Taijutsu low power and speed, they barely could manage but it made them better as they began to push her to go full power and finally that team was known as the “Lotus Squad” due to there high Physical Attributes.

      This interest the higher ops, then an ANBU member was assigned to watch them silently, luckily she was practicing in the arts of chakra sensory, but for a while she couldn’t notice him. Then they left, she went to go and see as she went through library records. She didn’t get much information on it, so she knew she was going to meet him again so she went home and forgot about it. The ANBU report their skills, it seems the Lotus Squad was good enough to qualify for black ops in the future.

      The Chuunin exams were starting in seven months, in that seven months they caught the same black ops member spying and were able to convince him into making him there sensei. They trained hard, the ANBU recording and reporting there every training session. Once they were thirteen they had heard they couldn’t be matched, she was usually the leader of the two but they went in passed the writing exams, as they went to make there way to the outside of the building a large room stood in there path in which held all the other gennin.

      They tried to sit there like everything was cool and wait until given further instruction until someone thought it would be cool to flirt with Kai. She knocked him down quickly, it was a set up, two of the village gennin of their own got jealous and decided to attack at the same time only to get taken down using only hand –to- hand combat. The other gennin from other villages and hidden ANBU black ops playing gennin were scared and amused. They then made their way to the gates of the forest of death.

      Hottest Shinobi ~

      At age 14 she finally made Chuunin, she was delayed her rank for a moment until they just told her she just straight failed. So she just trained more with the lower power and finally passed with flying colors. Her usage in fire has gone through the roof, she didn’t want another element yet but the lower power insisted and finally she chooses earth but still focused on fire. After gaining a good knowledge and power in her second element she was a teenager now and she was very powerful and well known in the village as “Burning Lotus of the Whirlpool”

      Which they kept making these comments about a man they called “The Dragon of the Leaf” So she did her research and heard his firepower was exclusive and it gave her such an interest. She trained for about four more months with the thoughts of surpassing him as she heard of the Uchiha clan and their great usage of fire; she was so strong she didn’t quite think she’d lose. She was still a chuunin indeed but she knew the waterfall village very well, and one day while walking around she came across a secret room of all types of scrolls that look interesting which she then found information on basically Kinjutsu.

      She then learned the secret’s to her body and who is inside it. She went back and told the Lower Power which was very interested to find this, she chooses not to learn there forbidden arts and just trained with them to help prefect it. She began learning more fire techniques and perfecting her art to no end and finally she began to dab into the forbidden arts which gave her different out looks changing her personality. She made 17 and finally she became a jounin with the fact that her high affinity of fire and mostly everyone else is water and the skill and mental power it takes to be an elite ninja.

      Sadly one day Lower Power headquarters was attacked while she was in it, she tried to fight them but more kept coming and eventually they were forced to flee which she felt was her most disapproving moments of her life and when they left the country they soon scattered after training more and hoping to meet each other again. For Kai it was different because she loved Lower Power so much she fought for them giving up her rank and everything…now what is there. As she searched the world for a purpose, then she remembered a desire to learn the arts of Taijutsu, so she went around challenging many in Mortal Kombat beating them until she met a man who she could barely touch. Some ninja that travels like her, he chooses not to use weapons against here before the battle began. He took his time breaking her down though she was lasting for a few moments until he began to push it up a few steps in areas where she couldn't handle. She lost badly, though she was not losing without a fight she kept getting up and there he saw potential in her and took her to be her student, gladly accepted she and him had a few training sessions, they traveled around a bit and he gave her a few lectors and made her do a few task she couldn't handle. She thought of her sensei as a very quiet man and even herself if she wasn't careful she would get herself killed and she is well aware of that because he told her that the first day they were training. She was taught to push her even farther which most of the time almost got herself killed but she stuck through it. Eki was his name, a very famous and lethal assassin from the sunagakure, Eki was able to get her a spot in the ranks of mist village ninja and she moved out again only to find herself to be a strong village ninja yet again.
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      She honestly used this once in a while, but never really to the extent that she was going to push herself to at this moment. She made mental note of the speed she was about to take off on, she remembered the comment she was given which gave her nothing but a bit of pleasure as she gave off a small smirk along with moving the piece of hair from her face in which she knew that it was time. It only took one more breathe to fully get exactly what she was thinking of achieving from what was about to come next. His body went into movement; completely disappearing from view to most but to Silence she had a tracker on him so she completely was able to understand his flow.



      Her body went into movement as well she usually didn’t move full speed but in this moment she had some change of heart. Her movement with Strong fist enhanced she did one side no hand flip and that took her some distance in little time and once she made contact she was already in range of her opponent. He leaped in the air, and made her first offensive move towards her once again; in that offensive movement it was countered by something that was the opposite of defensive.



      ‘Leaf Strong Whirlwind’ was the technique that boost her attacks, the dramatic change as she swung her left leg through the air quickly clashing into his right leg, but this kick was only the first of chain and it had much more power then the usual kicks she threw at him. This kick was power and it could hit his leg and knock it completely the opposite way in which may cause him to twist the other way in a uncontrollably manner, in which in tactic terms something that Silence went for. After giving a incredible counter she took no time leaping through the air with another spinning kick, this one was aimed at his other leg which wasn’t in active motion and like mention this one was more faster and stronger so this kick would be enough to damage the leg and send his whole body in a awkward position while in the air as she went for another spin for the final two kicks.



      The third to last kick came in as a kick to the face and that was controlled as the final kick came around straight to the stomach to send him flying. The four kicks that was delivered and directed was controlled to take control of his body stance in the air and then give out strong finisher. The kick was downward to send him off the branch to see if he would find his way back up, she spun a few times before landing nice and swiftly on the branch. She heard the sound of her landing back on the branch, she took another deep breath and got back into her stance.


      Silence is Ultimate …



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    Re: Fire Goddess ~ [Finished]

    Post by Echo on Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:49 am


    • Expand more on your personality. A link doesn't really add much to an application, same character or not.

    • "Due to all her life of just the element fire, she has been known to have one of the hottest temperature of fire, her flames are so hot they are white."

      Just know that's not something you'd be able to do with absolutely every single fire jutsu with ease, even if you're a master in Fire. White flames are fine here and there, but not every technique you do would be white.

    • Katon: Hoheki [Fire Release: Flame Wall]

      Describe how big this wall is

    • Chi Kaon Hari [Fire Release: Thousand Heat Needles]

      The way it's described, you would need the wind element to do that. If the needles themselves were made out of fire though, it wouldn't be a problem.

    • Katon: Kumo Of atsusa [Fire Style: Cloud Of Heat]

      This needs a limit on what it's capable of effecting up to. I'd assume only C ranked and under techniques. Also, describe how you feed off the cloud of fire, how it looks, etc.

      Seeing as you feed off the heat in the cloud, i can understand the chakra reduction, but the reduction would be no more than probably 15% - 20% seeing as the cloud itself is made out of a B ranked amount of chakra. Basically, the way this is described is like making a well of heat, and using it to fuel the following attacks. But that itself would either require using the chakra inside of the cloud, or your own chakra, thus you wouldn't get much of a chakra reduction from this. You can pump the Jutsu you're using up more by using the fire and heat from the cloud, but as far as a chakra reduction goes, it just doesn't quite add up.

    • Fire Release: Burning windmill

      That's not much of a drawback. In fact any rank water jutsu so long as the body of water has mass to it could douse that completely. In other words, even a C rank water technique is capable of nullifying the attack.

      Also, describe it's total size.

    • Horou no Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Prison]

      It says the Jutsu sustains itself. If that's the case, add how long the chakra fueling it lasts until the prison falls.

    • Atsusa Shoudou - Heat Impulse

      Add a description for how far these flames travel.

    • Katon no Kami (Fire God)

      Cutting the chakra cost would give less fuel to the jutsu, thus it wouldn't be nearly as powerful. Make it a smaller amount like 25% then it would be fine, but cutting it in half is like chopping an entire rank or 2 off the abilities power.

      I'd also recommend making this technique only usable when there is either a lot of fire around, say you start a forest fire or something, or in really hot weather like the deserts of Suna. That way the heat itself would keep your fire jutsu going with such a chakra reduction. Even if only a small amount.

    • Sauna Mist Technique (Sauna Kiri jutsu)

      Requires the water element. If you'd liek to use it without the water element, it'd have to require you to be on top of a large body of water. And even then the steam would simply cloud up on the top of the water. It wouldn't exactly spread to the land very quickly.

    • Katon Tereporutashon (Katon Element: Fire Teleportation)

      If a water technique was used to put the attack out while you were in it, you'd be dead. End of story. You would be extinguished with the fire technique and would no longer exist, seeing as your body itself becomes fire.

    • Heat Needles

      Same thing as Thousand Heat Needles here.



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    Re: Fire Goddess ~ [Finished]

    Post by Silence on Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:39 am

    Fixed ._.
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    Re: Fire Goddess ~ [Finished]

    Post by Echo on Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:10 am

    Chi Katon Hari [Fire Release: Thousand Fire Needles]

    Still says heat needles in the description.

    Katon Tereporutashon (Katon Element: Fire Teleportation)

    I don't see any change in that.



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    Re: Fire Goddess ~ [Finished]

    Post by Silence on Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:45 pm

    Fixed ... again.
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    Re: Fire Goddess ~ [Finished]

    Post by Echo on Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:49 pm

    Approved.


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