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    Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

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    Sergiy Monomyth

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    Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Sergiy Monomyth on Thu Oct 25, 2012 5:32 pm


    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Characters Name)

      Nickname/Alias:
      Water God, Sea God, Creator of Water, Plague, Virus
      Age: 13

      Gender: Male

      Is that really me?

      Appearance:

      Clothing: Wears stranded Ninja Gear, Jounin flak Vest.

      Weight: 100 lbs

      Height: 5'4

      Ethnicity: From Mist

      Voice:

        Likes:
      • Training
      • Eating People
      • Murder
      • Vengeance
      • Torture

        Dislikes:
      • Men
      • Humans
      • Women
      • Children
      • Nice People


      Personality:
      Evil, manipulative, Cunning, Mastermind

      My...Family?

      Clan: Uchiha

      Unique Clan Features: Can Copy Stuff

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: Ninja Of the Seven Swordsman Of the Mist

      Letter Rank: A Ranked

      Village: Hidden Mist Village

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points:


      • 1. Ninjutsu(Master)
      • 2. Taijutsu(Adapt)
      • 3. Kenjutsu(Adept)


      -Elements-


      • 1. Water
      • 2. Fire
      • 3.
      • Comb. Water Manipulation(At will)


      -Jutsu-

      E: 1
      D: 4
      C: 11
      B: 7
      A: 9
      S: 3
      _____________

      Spoiler:
      Basic Academy jutsu

      Name: Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
      Rank: B
      Type: Attack, Supplementary
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

      Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
      Rank: A
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals: 2
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.


      Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique
      Rank: A
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals: 1
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

      Name: Daibaku Suishouha - Great Exploding Water Collision Waves
      Rank: S
      Type: Attack, Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Daibaku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel a great amount of water from his gullet. This water will then form into a massive dome, encasing Kisame and his targets inside. When Kisame merges with Samehada, his aquatic mobility greatly increases, thus allowing him to make full use of the aquatic battlefield set up by this jutsu.

      Name: Daikoudan no Jutsu - Great Shark Missile Technique
      Rank: S
      Type: Attack, Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Daikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Kisame will generate a large shark which he will launch towards his opponent. The shark is no mere blast of water, as it also absorbs the chakra of his opponent, which causes it to increase in size. This means that the more powerful his opponent is, the larger and more powerful Daikoudan will be when it impacts.

      Name: Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
      Rank: B
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.

      Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
      Rank: C
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals: Two
      Element: Fire
      Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

      Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

      Name: Gousuiwan no Jutsu - Strong Water Arm Technique
      Rank: B
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Gousuiwan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. Using his ability to transform his body into water, Suigetsu will reform his arm in a more muscular form. This stronger arm allows him to deliver more powerful swings with his head cleaver sword.

      Name: Hahonryuu - Destruction Torrent
      Rank: B
      Type: Attack, Defense
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Hahonryuu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. To use this technique Yamato will generate water to use against his opponent. This technique was seen in conjunction with Naruto's Wind Element Rasengan. These two attacks combined together to form Gufuu Suika, a large rotating water and wind vortex.

      Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval
      Rank: C
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals:None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Haran Banshou is a Ninjutsu utilzing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Fuuka will create a waterfall to slam into her opponent.

      Name: Houmatsu no Jutsu - Bubbles Technique
      Rank: B
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water.
      Description: Suiton • Houmatsu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. Utakata will first create numerous large bubbles with his gourd and straw. These bubbles will then surround the enemy. Should a bubble touch his target, it will explosively detonate. Utakata may also click his fingers together to detonate all of them at the same time.

      Name: Houmatsu Rappa - Violent Bubble Wave
      Rank: C
      Type: Attack, Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Houmatsu Rappa is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After Pain summons his giant crustacean, the creature will expel a huge wave of water from its mouth.

      Name: Jagei Jubaku - Snake Authority Spell
      Rank: C
      Type: Attack, Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: N/A
      Description: Jagei Jubaku is a Ninjutsu utilized by Orochimaru and Sasuke. Using Orochimaru's snake abilities, the two men can extend large snakes from their sleeves, which will coil around the target and bind them. The further addition or the user's murderous intent can weaken their target's resolve. With the removal of Orochimaru from Sasuke, this ability may be gone.

      Name: Ja no Kuchi - Serpent Mouth
      Rank: C
      Type: Attack, Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Ja no Kuchi is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Fuuka will generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a serpent with a gaping maw. This serpent can twist and follow her target. After activation, she can create further serpents if needed. Fuuka may also use this jutsu in conjunction with Doton • Doro Houshi. The water of Ja no Kuchi will increase the momentum of the earth of Doro Houshi to create a more powerful mud slide.

      Name: Jouki Boui - (Jokey Boy) Steaming Dangerous Tyranny
      Rank: A
      Type: Attack, Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Jouki Boui is a unique Suiton used by Nidaime Mizukage. Nidaime Mizukage has the ability to create a miniature child-like clone of himself which is made of an outside coating of oil, with an internal container of water. The malleable quality of its being allows it to change shape and create cutting implements with its body. The clone is capable of ultra-fast movement, so fast that when it moves the outside coating of oil begins to heat up. As it heats up, it causes the water inside to boil, evaporate and create steam. This steam allows the clone to then expand and grow until it reaches a large size and explodes. The resulting explosion has massive power, capable of leveling even the hardened prison of Sabaku Soutaisou. After the explosion, the vapor will cool as it rises and hail will begin to form in the sky. This will cool the clone which has coalesced back into being, and shrink it back to normal size. Once the hail stops, the steam explosion process can begin again.

      When one seeks to combat the clone, they should focus on locating Nidaime himself instead, as using the jutsu puts him in a weakened state. It's possible to defend against the clone explosion using a protective barrier of sufficient strength like Gaara's Shield of Sand. It's also possible to slow down the clone by inserting a heavier material inside its body, as Gaara inserted his gold dust into the clone. When the clone began to heat up, it melted the gold and fused it together with its body. Then utilizing the combination of hail within his sand, and gold's natural conductive qualities, the water cooled to stop a steam build up, effectively neutralizing the clone.


      Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
      Rank: B
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: Cross Hand Seal
      Element: N/A
      Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

      Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
      Rank: D
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

      Name: Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique
      Rank: D
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Kokuun no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu used by the Rain ninja Kagari which utilizes the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto his targets.

      Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
      Rank: C
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

      Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
      Rank: C
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: N/A
      Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

      Name: Mizudeppou no Jutsu - Water Pistol Technique
      Rank: A
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Mizudeppou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. After making their hand into the shape of a pistol, the user will fire a powerful bullet of water from their extended index finger.

      Name: Mizu Kamikiri - Rising Water Cutter
      Rank: C
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Mizu Kamikiri is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, Shizuku will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Water chakra. He will then slam his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.


      Name: Mizu Kawarimi - Water Replacement
      Rank: D
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: Water
      Description: Ninpou: Mizu Kawarimi is a Ninjutsu used by Shizuku under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. While in his enhanced form, Shizuku can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks.


      Name: Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique
      Rank: B
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals: Cross Seal
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.

      Name: Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
      Rank: B
      Type: Attack
      Hand Seals:24
      Element: Water
      Description: Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

      Name: Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Multiple Shadow Clone Technique
      Rank: A
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: Cross Seal
      Element: N/A
      Description: Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is an advanced variation of the Kage Bunshin Ninjutsu which was banned by the First Hokage. This has not stopped many Jounin-level ninja from learning the technique however. Instead of creating several clones, several hundred clones are created. Like normal Kage Bunshin a ninja's chakra is split evenly among the clones when created.

      The clones themself can utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clones finally disperse, any new knowledge they have gained is passed back to the original ninja and to any additional clones. This makes Tajuu Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. With the great number of clones in Tajuu Kage Bunshin, the ninja can effectively learn in a few weeks with a hundred clones what would take one ninja numerous years.

      Name: Plague Virus
      Rank: E-A
      Type: Ability
      Hand Seals: None
      Element: N/A
      Description: The Plague Virus is a Special Genetically Ability that was implanted in him during the the experimentation. It allows For Akuma to send Illness, Sickness, Viruses, Desiesies(Don't know how to spell it, Cancer, AIDS, HIV, Parknesses.) He is also capable of flaunting someone mind with the Plague Virus like Weed, Coicince, Crack, Heroin, Or LSB, making some people go nuts. Poisons, Toxins, Common Cold, to Minor to Medina Plagues on Cities. From the Plagues, Anywhere he walks there's a Dark Voidness, Evil Sick Defiled aura that can be heard, sensed, smelled around him unless he dedications this ability. This ability is also capable of Making Akuma Immune to Sickness, Viruses, Desissres, Cold, Poison, Drugs, Toxins.

      Name: Full Water Manipulation
      Rank: E-S
      Type: Water Manipulation(Required Element Water.)
      Hand Seals: None.
      Element: Water
      Description: Water(Owner of the jutsu Uchiha Makaze Akuma)
      This Jutsu allows Akuma to manipulation the water around him, Much Like Gaara's Sand Manipulation. Into attacks, Defenses, Suppliant Attacks, Without any need of handseals. The Jutsu can be used from the air, by absorbing oxygen, from the Inside of Akuma's Body, The water, ocean, etc. He can cause rain to fall from the sky to his advantage.


      This is my Story

      History/Background Story:
      Spoiler:
      (Making this short an sweet. There's no need for needless information in a Background. I can't stress enough why people bother putting long novol like backgrounds which contain a whole bunch of Cluster freak stuff.)

      Akuma was born in the Hidden Leaf Village. He was later transferred to Mist for Personal Experimentation. Turning his body into a complete yellow nature. That had sharp fang teeth. At the Age of Three He in rolled in the Ninja academy. And Became a Genin at age 4. Then Went into the Chunin exams at age 4 and a half, Activated His Sharingan. Became a Chuunin by age 5, Acaitived the Second Stage of His Sharigan, and became a Jounin by age 7. As well as Unlocking the Three Stage of the Sharingan, He was then hand Picked by the Mizukage as a Seven Swordsman of the Mist Member because of his skills. And Mastery over the water Element. And his Deadly Skill to manipulation Water at will. Has been a Jounin, and a Seven Swordsman of the mist for 6 years.

      During the 6 Years, as a Seven Swordsman and Temporary Part time Jounin Squad Leader. Akuma has learned much. And how much he hates humans. His Mastery over Water Manipulation, has dramatically Raised. He can do wonders with His Water Manipulation he could not do when he first learned how to Manipulation water at a Master Level. He has a Very High Chakra Pool, and Capacity for a Jounin, and for a kid his age. He also Seemed to have activated his Other Ability to Be able to Manipulative to a some or sort of degree Plagues, And Inness. He has no Interstice in Obtaining the Makeyrion Sharingan, or the Ethenal Makaeyrio Sharingan. He has no need for such foolish things. His Three Tames is all he needs. Over the years, his been on tons of S and A Class Missions, His Lucky if he got a B rank mission to enjoy himself of Killing mindless people out of boredom. Akuma is a very dangerous Genetically Haltered Human Being, the only blood that was not altered was his Uchiha Blood.

      Roleplay Sample:

      Spoiler:
      Sithis had mad his way slowly from his house. He wore a simple Outfit, Shorts, ninja shoes, boxers, and t-shirt. He made his way slowly towards the training field on a warm sunny day and slowly sat down on the ground his legs crossed as he begun to slowly Medaintine from the stress of his parents death. He closed his eyes and shook his head he knew that his parents would not want to see him suffer the way he was been since there death, if they were still alive and he was briefing for someone else but it could not be helped at all. He shook his head and stood up today he will be inventing a clan based jutsu that he plans every clan member from his clan will hopefully learn the learning and inventing part worried after, that using it would be a piece of cake.

      The Reason learning and inventing would be hard because he was inventing a complex Jutsu that was for his Kekkai Genkai. Plus the Jutsu would be classified as AN SS rank jutsu. He shook his head and then nodded with the war going on. This jutsu can come in handle in sticky substations. Plus the jutsu was a Jutsu that killed an enemy. Intimidatingly after crushing. It will drain quite a some of charka. Without further a duo. Let begin with the training he thought slowly towards himself. He closed his eyes and begun to focus his own charka around his body and then send that charka that was around his body into the air, the minute he sent the charka out, a massive negative gravity charge. Sent the Jounin flying.(Like a force push from Starwars.) The Jounin flipped in mid air, and landed on the ground. This was no something he expected already he was starting with a bad start.

      Shaking his head slowly as he slowly stood back up in a gentlemen fashion manner. And again closed his eyes and begun to focus. And again begin to focus his charka around his body and then send charka out into the air, again the navigation charged pushed him away further and further, as he flipped and landed on the ground. He shook his head, there had to be a reason why this was happening there just had to be a reason, He slowly sighed and begun to do the same. Thing simply closing his eyes and beginning to and this time he sent out more charka, this time it worked, the winds picked up in the most deadly and heavenly fashion, as the nearest tree, was rattly destroyed within impact. The Funny thing was about the tree, it no longer was even seen by the naked eyed. This thing that he just created was a dangerous jutsu that if used on in enemy will kill them. He felt disappointment, he didn't like killing, then again he was a Jounin. Shaking his head, as he dropped towards one knee as the charka drainage was quite the toll. He shook his head, this was getting to be a nerve reckon jutsu.

      Then again his parents, like he said would have been proud that he turned out into a Fine Ninja. Nodding he decided to Produce's with the creation of the jutsu. Shaking his head he stood up and begun to focus his charka, around his body and then send that charka out into the air with some incensed of charka. As that was done he would begin to slowly aim his to search out his target his target was a another tree, He would slowly begin to crush before quickly changing and crushing it. HE then collapsed on the ground after wasting charka. He had awaken ten hours later. Drained like a bloody monkey still. Shaking his head, for the next ten hours he decided to medatine and focus on recovering his charka, tomorrow was gonna be a bloody drag.

      As the next morning came, he opened his eyes slowly and begun to to stand up, feeling fully refreshed he would begin to close his eyes and focus his charka down towards his body and then send a little bit of charka out into the air, and then send a little bit, opening his eyes he directed his jutsu to another target and it begun to get crushed immediacy. He shook his head in simple disappointment again as the toll took place. The Jutsu seemed to work perfectly fine but the drainage was just to much. Shaking his head as he begun to focus again connecting charka around his body before sending the charka out into his body and then out into the air, and sending more charka after that as that was done he would then slowly. To find his target, and then execration the jutsu on another tree. Crushing it again. Then again the man fell towards the ground in an empty aura of bloody pain. Waking up twenty four house later. He would slowly feel drained still. Damn this jutsu was just something. Shaking his head in disappointment he decided to rest up for twenty four more hours to recover his charka.

      He sat down crossed legged as he begun to close his eyes and medatine. When the 24 hours passed. he would then slowly up his eyes and stand up he decided he would do something different regarding training wise. And to see if it would work or not. He closed his eyes and simply shook his head he begun to focus his charka around his body and send that little charka into the air, then he quickly begun to manifest the charka into the the current wind element as it begun to rush around the air. The wind begun to pick up, and then he would send a Gravitational pull around the tree, the tree that second was crushed down towards the ground. Like the bloody good little dog tree it was. Then again the Tree was not small it was in fact huge. He dropped to one knee and simply closed his eyes damn this was a pain in the ass, two days with food or water was really tiring. He had hoped to go back, but he was determined to finish then and then eat, drink, take a long hot bath, and relax, and sleep.

      Shaking his head in mere disappointment he stood back up and begun to focus his charka around his body and then send the charka out of his body as he it begun to slowly manifest, a gravitation pull begun to effect the area, however the citizens of the Village was fine, these jutsu only locked on to one target of Sithis's chosen not all. He then choose another tree and as it was targeted it was again crushed, yet again Sithis fell on the ground slowly. Wasted, and heavily tired. He woke up ten hours later. And He decided to do one last trick or, two, before he headed home. He got up slowly and then sat back down closing his eyes legs crossed. As he begun to focus on recovering his charka, in the next ten hours he had stood up and slowly begun to focus his charka around his body and then surface the Charka into the air, then manifesting it as the gravitational pull took affect. As it took effect he Decapitated the target to be the furthest tree, 50 meters from where he was standing as it got crushed down. He then again dropped towards the ground, the length of the jutsu took a bigger Toll then just using the jutsu short range. Strange it was indeed. He got up slowly and sat back down, taken a bit to recover his charka he presumed he would need that to do his last part.

      Plus he didn't want to be collapsing on the ground like before. He closed his eyes, and for the next twenty four hours he took time to recover. He opened his eyes as time passed. Man he needed food and water he was thirsty, very thirsty. He shook his head and spoke."I need to finish this, this must be done. We are ninjas. We are happy children, and feet." He said shaking his booty."Oh yeah we fun people." The Jounin was a weird one to say the least. He shook his head and simply sighed as the happened he would then. Begin to Focus his charka around his body and then send that charka into the air, as it manifested around his body he would then create a Gravitational Field, around the Village, roughly 25-50 Meters long, and within his desired he crushed the nearest tree down, without blinking or doing any form of movement, it was simple focus. He shook his head as the he spoke."Well, I guess I created a powerful clan jutsu, anyways time for me to enjoy myself, eat, drink, shower, do my daily duties and a long night of sleep. Take care." he said towards himself obliviously talking towards himself. As he headed back home.





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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Nocturne on Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:16 pm


    • Age is 7? lol Sorry, but you will have to change that.
    • Letter ranks are E-S as you already know. You can be A-Rank.
    • You have a total of 35 jutsu, which is 5 more than the maximum starting number. Max is 30 for Jounin.
    • Please remove Rasengan as it is not available at present.
    • Please fill out the jutsu template for every technique. I know, it is a pain, but it must be done.
    • Could you add at least another paragraph to your history?

    Sergiy Monomyth

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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Sergiy Monomyth on Fri Oct 26, 2012 8:57 pm

    Done. And Seven Swordsman are allowed to have 35 jutsu.
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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Echo on Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:50 am

    To join the ranks of the Swordsmen, or even a rank as high as A for that matter, you're going to have to improve a lot on this application. Just overall everything except Jutsu maybe.

    And the ability to manipulate water at will like that would have to be done through a bloodline.


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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Sergiy Monomyth on Sat Oct 27, 2012 2:05 pm

    I will improve on Everything else. However the Ability to mani Water at will should not be a Bloodline. Because then people will simply over crowd it. The Ability to mani water at will, Is a Rare thing. It should not be made to a bloodline. That's why I placed only he has it for now. Hope you understand,. I am currently getting ready to move to the new house, I'll have this profile fully fleshed and done in two weeks time hopefully. Once Ir reconnect to my internet.
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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Das Blaine on Sat Oct 27, 2012 4:19 pm

    Theyre saying it's like you have two KKGs with Uchiha AND your ability to manipulate water.
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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Kenji on Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:30 pm

    That's actually contradictory, if you claim the ability to manipulate water through a bloodline then no one else would be able to manipulate water unless you allow them in your clan. On the other hand if you leave it out of a bloodline then anyone could copy it. Nevertheless you wouldn't be able to have both Sharingan and water manipulation. You don't see Gaara with a Dojutsu and sand manipulation.

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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Sergiy Monomyth on Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:40 pm

    Kenji wrote:That's actually contradictory, if you claim the ability to manipulate water through a bloodline then no one else would be able to manipulate water unless you allow them in your clan. On the other hand if you leave it out of a bloodline then anyone could copy it. Nevertheless you wouldn't be able to have both Sharingan and water manipulation. You don't see Gaara with a Dojutsu and sand manipulation.

    No Water Mani is not an Bloodline nore can it be copied it can be learned through mastery of Water Element. Not copied. Gaara could have gotten Sharingan through transplantation.
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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Kenji on Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:52 pm

    Not visually copied in RP but copied during character creation. If it's through mastery of water any Water Release master could used it, and yes he could get one through transplantation, however currently transplantations have to be admin approved and gained in RP. The way I see it your water manipulation is basically the same as Gaara's sand manipulation, if you look at our elemental chart we have sand manipulation as a Kekkei Genkai so why wouldn't water manipulation be considered one?

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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Sergiy Monomyth on Sat Oct 27, 2012 11:34 pm

    That's just Idiotic, it should not be as a Bloodline trait. It's Stupid and idiotic.
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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Nocturne on Sun Oct 28, 2012 2:22 am

    I cannot compute your reasoning that manipulation of water is not a KKG. To be capable of moving water around (controlling it at will) is not simple Water release and is NOT proven something only masters of the element are capable of doing. Stupidity only lies in your failure to support your claims properly.

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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Sergiy Monomyth on Sun Oct 28, 2012 2:29 am

    Water Manipulation should only be used for certain people. Because Like Sand Mani. If Used to a full and potent extent. Can be Very Oped, More oped then Sand Mani. If you want me to take it out I will. I will when I return from moving.
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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Nocturne on Sun Oct 28, 2012 2:39 am

    By limiting it to certain people it is a KKG, like sand manipulation and the many other forms out there. We are not saying it is OP. You just can't have two "natural" KKGs.
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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Laufey on Sun Oct 28, 2012 4:42 am

    A JUTSU, unless it requires a particular mutation (kkg) or a secret clan technique, is something anyone can use. It's simply a technique which utilizes hand seals and manipulation of chakra (in most cases) to perform. In essence, it's something that can be achieved through training, the intensity of which would depend upon the difficulty and power of the jutsu itself.

    A bloodline trait is a mutation, a deviation from the norm and if you've studied the theory of natural selection then it's simply a genetic variation, which allows you to use certain abilities. For example, the Sharingan is a mutation. It is limited to those of the Uchiha and thus it's part of their bloodline.

    An elemental release is based on the affinity your chakra has towards a particular element, that is to say the elements that can be controlled by a shinobi through the use of ninjutsu.

    You with me so far?

    Water is one of the five basic chakra natures. The release for which is called Suiton (translating to water release). What you define as water manipulation is simply suiton without the use of handsigns. For those of us familiar with the world of 'Avatar: The Last Airbender' and it's horrendous sequel that I refuse to name, that is simply water bending.

    In the show the only people who had the ability to use water in that manner were Mangetsu and Suigetsu. The only difference between you and them is that you have a sharingan and you can't morph yourself into a liquid state, which as we saw in the show was their greatest weakness because it made them vulnerable to lightning release.

    Comparing your release to Gaara is idiotic because he used a Bijuu, the one tailed beast, in order to use sand as a weapon. That was a power limited only to the hosts of the bijuu and it can be easily assumed that because he had a Bijuu inside of him since his birth, his chakra was influenced by the Bijuu's chakra thus enabling him to control sand even after it's removal.

    To attempt to emulate that power, that too with water and without making it your bloodline, removing the only weakness it could have and combining it with the sharingan is downright ignorant. What part of your cognitive function failed you to make you think that this would fly?

    What the staff is trying to tell you is either get rid of the Sharingan or get rid of the water manipulation because there is no way, even under the unlikely circumstance of hell freezing over and breaking loose at the same time while the devil anal fists himself wearing a spiked metal gauntlet laced with acid, that you will get approved with both of them.

    Is this clear enough for you?

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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Sergiy Monomyth on Sun Oct 28, 2012 4:47 am

    Laufey wrote:A JUTSU, unless it requires a particular mutation (kkg) or a secret clan technique, is something anyone can use. It's simply a technique which utilizes hand seals and manipulation of chakra (in most cases) to perform. In essence, it's something that can be achieved through training, the intensity of which would depend upon the difficulty and power of the jutsu itself.

    A bloodline trait is a mutation, a deviation from the norm and if you've studied the theory of natural selection then it's simply a genetic variation, which allows you to use certain abilities. For example, the Sharingan is a mutation. It is limited to those of the Uchiha and thus it's part of their bloodline.

    An elemental release is based on the affinity your chakra has towards a particular element, that is to say the elements that can be controlled by a shinobi through the use of ninjutsu.

    You with me so far?

    Water is one of the five basic chakra natures. The release for which is called Suiton (translating to water release). What you define as water manipulation is simply suiton without the use of handsigns. For those of us familiar with the world of 'Avatar: The Last Airbender' and it's horrendous sequel that I refuse to name, that is simply water bending.

    In the show the only people who had the ability to use water in that manner were Mangetsu and Suigetsu. The only difference between you and them is that you have a sharingan and you can't morph yourself into a liquid state, which as we saw in the show was their greatest weakness because it made them vulnerable to lightning release.

    Comparing your release to Gaara is idiotic because he used a Bijuu, the one tailed beast, in order to use sand as a weapon. That was a power limited only to the hosts of the bijuu and it can be easily assumed that because he had a Bijuu inside of him since his birth, his chakra was influenced by the Bijuu's chakra thus enabling him to control sand even after it's removal.

    To attempt to emulate that power, that too with water and without making it your bloodline, removing the only weakness it could have and combining it with the sharingan is downright ignorant. What part of your cognitive function failed you to make you think that this would fly?

    What the staff is trying to tell you is either get rid of the Sharingan or get rid of the water manipulation because there is no way, even under the unlikely circumstance of hell freezing over and breaking loose at the same time while the devil anal fists himself wearing a spiked metal gauntlet laced with acid, that you will get approved with both of them.

    Is this clear enough for you?

    No you do not make yourself clear. I've stated what I stated above. Now all you have too do is wait till I return to my new house, so I can make the edits.
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    Re: Uchiha Makaze Akuma(Done)

    Post by Echo on Sun Oct 28, 2012 8:39 am

    Hi, lets keep this app clean please. If you're not a staff member, please refrain from posting on peoples creations, especially if you're just going to argue with someone. If you have something to tell someone, either PM it to a staff member to put on the thread, or speak to the member directly through a PM or the chatbox.

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