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    Shun Yakuzai [Done]

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    Post by Shun Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:22 pm


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    Who... Am I?

      Name: Shun, Yakuzai

      Nickname/Alias: White Wolf

      Age: 16

      Gender: Male

      Is that really me?

      Appearance:Shun Yakuzai [Done] ANBU_Kakashi_by_Hujisaki_Yamato

      Shun is a fit and relatively tall shinobi who is fair-skinned and tall, with spiky white hair, and dark eyes with the left one having a small scar vertically over it. He wears his forehead protector tilted to the left to cover his scarred eye, and a mask which obscures the lower-half of his face. Mostly shun would be wearing his ANBU outfit.

      Clothing: On special occasions he would wear his jounin outfit when he has to watch over genins.

      Weight: 67.5kg

      Height: 5 ft 9

      Ethnicity: White, Japanese

      Voice: Relaxed voice

        Likes:
      • Reading Books
      • Training
      • Early Mornings
      • Being Alone
      • Graveyards

        Dislikes:
      • War
      • Trouble
      • Loud Kids
      • Weaker Ninjas
      • Ugly girls


      Personality: Shun has a rather solitary and matter-of-fact attitude. His calm and detached demeanor has been called cold, but truthful many times by his higher ups. Despite his increasingly growing reputation and prowess as a ninja, Shun has shown no signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities, as shown when he readily praises others for leaps in their combat abilities and stating on more than one occasion that certain ninjas has surpassed him in power. His naturally calm attitude is used to his advantage in battle, as it becomes easier for him to maintain his composure and stay focused on the situation at hand, and notice everything around him. As a result, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents. Shun is a great fan of a romantic/perverted series of novels by a famous writer, revealing a slightly perverted side. He is typically seen reading one of the books in his spare time, Despite his fondness for the books, Shun is uncomfortable about reading passages to others, presumably embarrassed by the adult content.

      My...Family?

      Clan: None

      Unique Clan Features: None

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: ANBU Black-Ops

      Letter Rank: A

      Village: Konoha

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points:


      • 1. Ninjutsu (Master)
      • 2. Taijutsu (Expert)
      • 3. Genjutsu (Adept)


      -Elements-


      • 1. Lightning
      • 2. Fire
      • 3. Earth
      • Comb.


      -Jutsu-

      E:
      D:3
      C:13
      B:6
      A:7
      S:3
      _____________

      Fire Jutsus:
      Spoiler:

      Normal Jutsus:
      Spoiler:

      Kyoukan - Assassin Jutsus:
      Spoiler:

      Genjutsu:
      Spoiler:

      Earth Jutsu:
      Spoiler:

      Lightning Jutsus:
      Spoiler:

      Taijutsu:
      Spoiler:

      ANBU Jutsus:
      Spoiler:

      S-Rank Jutsus:
      Spoiler:

      This is my Story

      History:
      Spoiler:

      Roleplay Sample: As he walked down the street, the atmosphere was very calm. He wore his normal attire along with his anbu mask that was strapped to his side of his head. He needed to learn more about the sharingan and its powers, and what place was better then the library, none. Shun stopped walking as he fixed his mask back with his 2 finger, it was going to be a long day for the young anbu. A small grin appeared on his face as he continued to walk, the fellow citizens of the leaf village were up to there normal activities, a few of them greeting shun as he walked by and he to them as well, like he really cared about them replying back. As he entered he walked to the reception, he adjusted his mask before he spoke to the lady behind the desk.




    Last edited by Shun on Sun Oct 28, 2012 6:10 pm; edited 2 times in total
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    Post by Eki Gisou Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:04 pm

    Heya Shun, looks like I'll be your moderator today.

    Everything right up until the Jutsu list looks good, so we'll start there. Couple Minor fixed before we get into detail:

    • I count 36 Jutsu, one over your maximum starting limit as ANBU.
    • Chidori and it's variations, including the Lightning Cutter, aren't available to start with. Luckily this'll bring your jutsu total down.
    • Your Katon Jutsus, Normal Jutsus, Sharingan Techniques and a few of your Kyoukan techniques need to specify whether or not they use hand seals.


    Now onto to some of the actual techniques.

    Spoiler:

    Lastly, if you could add a tad more to the tail end of your History, just to give a little mroe back story into his time in ANBU, that'd be great. It'd definitely show me the drive you have to be one of Konoha's finest.

    Let me know when you get that done, and you should be significantly closer to RPing. Thanks for your time Shun!

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    Post by Shun Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:56 pm

    All Edited.
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    Post by Eki Gisou Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:13 pm

    Approved and Moved.

    Name colour and Ryo soon to come.

    A word of caution though, while your RP Sample was a little shy, I did let it slide. For your rank, I expect a minimum of two paragraphs a post. Push yourself. Cool.
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    Post by Echo Sat Oct 27, 2012 8:58 am

    Unapproved for a moment.

    If you want a transplanted Sharingan, you'll have to obtain the eye in RP somehow.
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    Post by Nocturne Sun Oct 28, 2012 3:03 am

    Topic unlocked. No way he can fix the issue if the topic is locked. To make sure he doesn't anything extra I made a copy of his app.
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    Post by Shun Sun Oct 28, 2012 6:14 pm

    Theres no implants rules but its been edited. Anything more now i have to change with this char............
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    Post by Echo Mon Oct 29, 2012 12:34 pm

    You're only allowed 2 main elements.

    Mastered Reality

    Would count as an S rank since it can reach S rank.
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    Post by Echo Wed Oct 31, 2012 7:31 pm

    Sorry about that, i don't know why this got moved.

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