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    Shun Yakuzai [Done]

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    Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Shun on Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:22 pm


    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name: Shun, Yakuzai

      Nickname/Alias: White Wolf

      Age: 16

      Gender: Male

      Is that really me?

      Appearance:

      Shun is a fit and relatively tall shinobi who is fair-skinned and tall, with spiky white hair, and dark eyes with the left one having a small scar vertically over it. He wears his forehead protector tilted to the left to cover his scarred eye, and a mask which obscures the lower-half of his face. Mostly shun would be wearing his ANBU outfit.

      Clothing: On special occasions he would wear his jounin outfit when he has to watch over genins.

      Weight: 67.5kg

      Height: 5 ft 9

      Ethnicity: White, Japanese

      Voice: Relaxed voice

        Likes:
      • Reading Books
      • Training
      • Early Mornings
      • Being Alone
      • Graveyards

        Dislikes:
      • War
      • Trouble
      • Loud Kids
      • Weaker Ninjas
      • Ugly girls


      Personality: Shun has a rather solitary and matter-of-fact attitude. His calm and detached demeanor has been called cold, but truthful many times by his higher ups. Despite his increasingly growing reputation and prowess as a ninja, Shun has shown no signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities, as shown when he readily praises others for leaps in their combat abilities and stating on more than one occasion that certain ninjas has surpassed him in power. His naturally calm attitude is used to his advantage in battle, as it becomes easier for him to maintain his composure and stay focused on the situation at hand, and notice everything around him. As a result, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents. Shun is a great fan of a romantic/perverted series of novels by a famous writer, revealing a slightly perverted side. He is typically seen reading one of the books in his spare time, Despite his fondness for the books, Shun is uncomfortable about reading passages to others, presumably embarrassed by the adult content.

      My...Family?

      Clan: None

      Unique Clan Features: None

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: ANBU Black-Ops

      Letter Rank: A

      Village: Konoha

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points:


      • 1. Ninjutsu (Master)
      • 2. Taijutsu (Expert)
      • 3. Genjutsu (Adept)


      -Elements-


      • 1. Lightning
      • 2. Fire
      • 3. Earth
      • Comb.


      -Jutsu-

      E:
      D:3
      C:13
      B:6
      A:7
      S:3
      _____________

      Fire Jutsus:
      Spoiler:
      Katon • Gouka Senpuu no Jutsu [Fire Release • Hellfire Whirlwind Skill]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: C
      Effect: A skill which can be used in order to protect the user. Gathering their chakra into the air and having it spin around them, a flaming whirlwind emerges around the user forming somewhat of a protective barrier. Normally it is used to deter the opponent from continuing their taijutsu attack, but can be used offensively to send an opponent whom prefers close range a good distance away because of its spinning force.

      Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu [Fire Release • Grand Fireball Skill]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: C
      Effect: A skill that was requires great concentration. This jutsu gathering chakra expanding the chest and refining it to a higher level of chakra. Bringing the hand forth and breathing out that chakra, in which is blow out through the hand. Once leaving the hand it expands outward to a great fireball which covers an area with a radius of fifteen feet.

      Katon • Horou no Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Prison]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: C
      Effect: A skill in which generates a circular flame upon the ground, raising up bars of flame and a covering over top. This intense flame heats all within it, preventing water from being created from the inside with the dryness of the air. Touching the sides results in various burns, and while this jutsu is used it can be linked to any other fire jutsu and the jutsu will be fired at the person inside the prison. The prison can be made 0-5 meters away from the user.

      Katon • Housenka no Jutsu [Fire Release • Mythical Phoenix Fire Skill]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: C
      Effect: A skill that is a very widespread jutsu which is most effective when dealing with multiple enemies. Fired off from the body, the user sends off a spiraling set of fireballs towards the opponent. This attack able to cover a larger area, can also be combined with objects such as shuriken and any other spinning projectile, and have them disguised within the flame.

      Katon • Kanatsu [Fire Release • Ember]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: B
      Effect: A skill in which is often considered the beefed up version of the Grand Fireball skill. Taking in a lot of chakra into their chest cavity, and thrusting their hand before their mouth. The user breathes forth the flame, and upon flowing out of their hand it expands outwards creating a powerful burst of flames. The jutsu range travels 10 meters and fans out 3 meters.

      Katon • Baku Ho Bunshin No Jutsu [Fire Release • Explosive Fire Clone]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: A
      Effect:A skill in which creates a tangible clone of flame. With this skill, the tangible clone of flame acts freely and upon its own will. It will attack the opponent as best it can, trying to prompt the opponent to attack it from close range. When the clone is struck, its body turns into its true form being a mass of flame. When the opponent hits this mass of flame, it causes damage along with some terrible burns. The user gathering their chakra into a Fire Clone, can now make that same clone imbued with an effect that will cause them to explode. Normally the normal fire clone would just burst into flames when struck, this clone explodes outwards in a powerful blast of flame.

      Katon • Shouten Kaen Tama no Jutsu [Fire Release • Focus Flame Shot]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: A
      Effect: A skill in which, has the key ability for one to focus their chakra to the level of B rank. Performing the first hand seal, and holding the second one for as long as they focus their fire chakra. Streams of heat will flow off the hands, as the user pushes their hands forward. Releasing a powerful fast flying bullet shot of fire that is the same size of a tennis ball, so powerful that it is capable of leveling an entire house when it impacts and explodes.

      Katon • Nanatsu Kyuuten [Fire Release • Seven Heavens]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: A
      Effect: A skill in which the user taking their chakra and imbue it with their flame chakra. The user will then spit out the flames towards the opponent, at first taking the form of a large burst but then splitting off into seven distinct fire spears. These spears capable of even breaking through many high level shield jutsu. Each spear is 10 feet in length.

      Katon • Yuutename no Jutsu [Fire Release • Melting Rain Skill]
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: A
      Effect: A skill in which is one of the most difficult fire based jutsu to master. The user would perform the handseals and shoot a huge fireball into the sky. When it gets high enough the fireball explodes and it begins to rain down a series of burning embers. Encompassing the nearby area or a potentially long range target in a rainfall of fiery embers. This skill can also be dangerous to the user.
      Note: Begins 3 posts after it is used

      Normal Jutsus:
      Spoiler:
      Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
      Origin: Canon
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: B
      Type: Supplementary
      Class: Ninjutsu
      Range: All
      Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.

      Name: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu - Camouflage Concealment Technique
      Origin: Canon
      Handseals: Yes
      Rank: A
      Type: Supplementary
      Class: Ninjutsu
      Range: All
      Description: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja can grant themself near invisibility. So far only the Sharingan eye and its revelation abilities has been shown to pierce the veil and see the hidden ninja. It is unknown if the Byakugan can penetrate the jutsu and see the user's chakra circulatory system.

      Kyoukan - Assassin Jutsus:
      Spoiler:
      Name: Tejina [Sleight of Hand]
      Type: Taijutsu
      Sub-type: Kyoukan
      Rank: D
      Orientation: Offensive
      Effects: A trick-technique utilized to surprise unwary foes, the Shinobi utilized a variety of visually illusions to jab at a foe seemingly unarmed, only for a small weapon (Such as a Kunai), to suddenly flicker into their hands. Because of the sudden shift in the attack style, it attempts to catch the unwary foe off-guard and strike an easy blow.

      Name: Kyokugi [Acrobatic Feet]
      Type: Taijutsu
      Sub-type: Kyokan
      Rank: D
      Orientation: Supplementary
      Effects: A technique whose basis is the "Walking" Technique, Kyokugi is a technique practiced by those wishing to deftly cross the battlefield in a erratic and unpredictable manner. The user takes a familiar concept, drawing chakra into their feet. In this variation, however, rather then becoming adheisive or merely standing upon a surface, this form of the jutsu creates chakra "Springs" upon the soles, which project a user forward. This essentially allows the user to bounce across the battlefield in a rapid manner, either distracting a foe or merely getting across tedious obstacles.

      Name: Tsukire [Moon Slice]
      Type: Taijutsu
      Sub-type: Kyoukan
      Rank: D
      Orientation: Offensive
      Effects: An attack where an enemy will rush an opponent, apparently trying to stab a foe, only to launch themselves over an enemy, jumping in a path similar to a crescent moon while slashing at a foe's shoulder/neck/head. This allows the user to simultaneously surprise a foe, move behind them, and strike them from above.

      Name: Kagekamen [Shadow Mask]
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Sub-type: Kyoukan
      Rank: C
      Orientation: Supplementary
      Effects: This technique utilizes a cloak, robe, or some other form of clothing that is capable of covering the majority of the body. The user will cover the garment will chakra, utilizing it to alter the color to fit the landscape, much like a chameleon in order to hide themselves. Weapons, body parts outside of the garment, are not effected by this. This technique does not provide true invisibility, but merely camouflage. An object striking the altered garment will disrupt the technique, ending it.

      Name: Ryuuchou no waza [Art of Flowing]
      Type: Taijutsu
      Sub-type: Kyoukan
      Rank: B
      Orientation: Supplementary
      Effects: This technique is a jutsu that relaxes the body, the chakra soothing the muscle and relieving the stress and pain of the body. This causes the body to become lithe, responsive, and literately "Flow" around an opponent. It is not an increase in muscle force nor actually speed as much as it allows the user to remain calm and allow them to become precise, lessening by far-chance possible mistakes. As such this technique allows a shinobi to become closer to "Perfection", moving around a foes assault with the least amount of effort and striking with grace. Thus, their accuracy of blows and ability to dodge an enemies attacks are increased noticeably, ignoring weariness and wounds. [Immune to C-Rank jutsus pain for 3 posts]

      Genjutsu:
      Spoiler:
      Mastered Reality
      Rank: C-S
      Range: Close (within eye contact range)
      Type: Genjutsu
      Elemental Affinity: -
      Clan: –
      Description: With this Jutsu and a brief moment of eye contact, the Shinobi is able to completely affect 1 sense of his opponent(s) at C ranked level. Depending on the sense he chooses she can either have his target(s) see, hear, smell, feel or taste a single illusion of his choice that will be so real to his target(s) that they will not question it. If by some chance they somehow come to realize that it is an illusion then the effect disappears immediately. (Example having his target smell smoke, See a nonexistent wall, hear a loud maddening sound, etc…)
      At B rank, the Shinobi can affect three simultaneous senses, (adding sound and smell to sight for example). At A rank He can affect 4 senses, and all 5 senses simultaneously at S rank, effectively controlling what his target experiences as “reality”.

      S ranked variant

      For a Chunnin, at S Rank this jutsu controls 4 senses, not achieving it’s fullest potential till Jonnin, At Jonnin this Genjutsu takes on a whole new level, Consider this technique at Jonnin S rank to be practically the same as “Ukataka – Ephemiral” but with more rigid limits

      The below applies for the S ranked version controlling all Senses.

      At S rank this Genjutsu is nearly impossible to break out of by any below Jonnin in Rank, At this level of Genjutsu, all a person’s senses, are being controlled and dictated to by the caster, the target usually stops moving at this point seemingly in daze, reality as they see and feel it is only happening in their mind, meaning that that knife they think their cutting themselves with to cause themselves pain to break out of the Genjutsu Is actually not real, they’re not actually moving, the pain one feels isn’t real either meaning it won’t free you from the genjutsu. One can never know if what they are seeing or doing is real, making it very difficult to break out of on one’s own, even if they know they’re trapped in a Genjutsu. Again, this only applies to the A ranked variant when all senses are controlled, not to the lower ranked variants.

      This jutsu is a battle of will, a mental attack, if wielded by a skilled user, this jutsu can “beat down” an opponents will to the point of leaving them knocked out, and reduced to a sedated state. One is using their will to attack the opponent, literally defeating them in their mind. This alsmo makes it dangerous to use against someone much stronger then oneself as their will might overpower the casters, using this technique on someone 2 ranks higher then oneself is very dangerous and can backfire if the target realizes it’s just a Genjutsu. A chunnin using this technique on a Sannin would be running a big risk.

      Against the S ranked variant, advanced Chakra control skill come in handy if trying to break free, those skilled in controlling their chakra will have an easier time breaking free, focusing their chakra to break the trap, thought it will still be very difficult to do so. A Shinobi skilled with Chakra control and of equal rank to the caster might be able to break out if they realize that they are trapped in a Genjutsu. Andare able to concentrate easier said than done.

      For those without greater Chakra control to break free they must be one rank higher than the caster herself, this is unless of course they are aided from external forces, or caused “real” pain, in which case the Genjutsu is broken. If the target if of lower rank then the caster then they are in serious trouble and are unlikely to break free or resist succumbing to the caster’s will

      For all its power, this jutsu at S rank has rather set limits, the major drawback of this Jutsu is that it requires quite a bit of concentration when using the S ranked variants and can be difficult to maintain for less trained individuals. Meaning it can’t be maintained for too long other than by a Sannin or Kage.

      At Genin the Shinobi can maintain control 1 post.
      At Chuunin the Shinobi can maintain control 3 posts.
      At Jonnin the Shinobi can maintain control 5 posts.
      At Sannin it can be maintained for 8 posts.
      And at Kage one can maintain it for 10 posts.

      So, even if the target does fall into the Genjutsu and can’t break free the caster still has limited time to overwhelm their opponents will if they intend to beat them, they might try to attack physically but any attempts too strenuous would break the jutsu, so any real physical attack would have to be carefully done unless of course one is operating with support or is intending to deceive the opponent rather then beat them.

      Also a 3 Tomo Sharingan or Byakugan of an equally ranked or higher opponent would allow them to see through the visual aspect of this Genjutsu, meaning they could not fall to the S ranked variant, but only to at most 4 senses, this would better allow them to break free since they are still able to see the truth of reality.

      A 2 Tomo Sharingan or Byakugan wielder of 1 rank lower than the caster can break through the Genjutsu’s visual aspect if they come to realize that they are under a Genjutsu, if this happens then they will no longer be under the A level of this Jutsu.

      It’s important to note that just because someone learns this jutsu does not mean they will learn to apply it to its fullest capabilities, Some Jonnin known to have learned this jutsu never learned to use it on more than 3 or 4 senses at a time.

      Earth Jutsu:
      Spoiler:
      Earth Release • Quicksand Skill [Doton • Hakabashi Suna no Jutsu]
      - A technique using Earth Chakra
      - Handseals: Ox, Boar, Dragon
      - Rank: C
      - Effect: A skill where chakra is sent through the ground, as it is diffused it weakens the ground below the opponent. Creating a sinking whirlpool of sand to pull down the opponent into the ground. Enabling the user to use another jutsu during this hectic state.

      Earth Release • Earth slide Wall [Doton • Doryuu Heki]
      - A technique using Earth Chakra
      - Handseals: Ox, Dog, Hare, Dog
      - Rank: B
      - Effect: A skill where the user can create a large stone wall from the ground, sending them high up into the air and capable of protecting one against high level ninjutsu [A-Rank] that are sent flowing towards them. The strength of this wall is great, and is very hard to destroy even with the most powerful of focused ninjutsu. Can withstand jutus of lower rank or 1 A Rank jutsu.

      Earth Release • Spike Burst [Doton • Gosunkungi Heki no Jutsu]
      - A technique utilizing Earth Chakra and Focus
      - Handseals: Boar, Dog, Ox, Dragon
      - Rank: B
      - Effect: A technique where the user channels their chakra into the ground they are standing upon, tempting the opponent to attack. If taking the bait the user jumps back and as the opponent steps onto that spot the opponent is greeted with a burst of spikes emerging from the ground. Criss crossing in various directions, to immobilize and impale the opponent.

      Earth Release • Mud Rush Wave [Doton • Deido Sattou Nami no Jutsu]
      - A technique utilizing Earth Chakra, and High level of Focus
      - Handseals: Dog, Ox
      - Rank: A
      - Effect: A technique where the user gathers an incredible amount of chakra within their chest, expanding out their chest far out then it normally can be expanded. The user opens up their mouth and releases a rushing wave of Mud from their mouths. This incredible mass of mud is devastatingly powerful and can merely push over many individuals and drown them in mud. After the jutsu is used, the mud hardens to trap anything within it. The jutsu radius around the user is 30 meters, as for the height of the jutsu stands at 5 meters.

      Name: Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu
      Classification: Ninjutsu
      Rank: C-rank
      Class: Supplementary
      Handseals: Yes
      Range: All
      Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channelling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. This effect goes around the body (not just the hands), making it just large enough for a person to move through. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy.One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.

      Name: Doton: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō
      Classification: Ninjutsu
      Rank: C-rank
      Class: Supplementary
      Handseals: Yes
      Range: All
      Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to the area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

      Lightning Jutsus:
      Spoiler:
      Lightning Release • Lightning Dragon Tornado] [Raiton • Rairyuu No Tatsumaki]
      - A lightning technique that gathers lightning and causes it to circle around the user and begin creating a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will then take the form of a dragon and will lash out at the opponent. Even if the dragon does not hit, electricity flies off from the dragon and shocks nearby objects.
      - Handseals: Yes
      - Rank: A
      - Effect: Lightning emerges from the user and swirls about as a large tornado shaped like a dragon, capable of shocking an opponent even if it passes by and discharges.

      Raiton • Ribon Tegotae no Jutsu [Lightning Release • Ribbon Effect Skill]
      - A technique utilizing Lightning Chakra, Diffusion, Burst, and Infuse
      - Handseals: Yes
      - Rank: B
      - Effect: A skill that is normally used during the midst of a rain storm. The user will send forth a lightning bolt from their hands that will be channelled through falling rain drops. When hitting the rain drops, the lightning will separate and scatter, turning into many smaller lightning bolts. Which all are concentrated towards the opponent, to shock them from multiple directions.

      Raiton • Myaku Touei no Jutsu [Lightning Release • Pulse Reflection]
      - A technique utilizing Lightning Chakra, Diffusion, and Focus
      - Handseals: Yes
      - Rank: B
      - Effect: A skill where the user concentrates a great deal of Electrical Chakra within their hands, shoving it forward in order to halt oncoming projectiles. Another effect of this jutsu is its ability to halt jutsu that are weaker then it. This jutsu does not have an actual chakra cost, but in turn has one that changes depending upon the situation. The more chakra focused, the greater the effect of halting an opposing force.

      Raikou Shunshin no Jutsu [Lightning Body Flicker Skill]
      - A technique utilizing Lightning Chakra, Double Infuse, and Diffuse
      - Handseals: Yes
      - Rank: B
      - Effect: A technique where the user performing the necessary handseals thrusts their hand foreword and fire off a bolt of lightning. This bolt of lightning is actually not meant to hit the opponent, as where the lightning bolt strikes is where the user will transport.

      Lightning Clone [Raikou Bunshin No Jutsu]
      - A technique where a clone is made of electricity
      - Handseals: Yes
      - Rank: A
      - Effect: Creates a tangible clone out of electricity, that when struck delivers a massive shock to the system.

      Taijutsu:
      Spoiler:
      Name: ShiShi Rendan
      Rank: C-Rank
      Type: Taijutsu
      Description: ShiShi Rendan is a Taijutsu technique developed by Shun after he used his Sharingan to copy the movements of fellow Leaf ninja. Shun first uses the Konoha Kage Buyou to manuever his opponent in a vulnerable aerial position. While shadowing his opponent, Shun will attempt to strike them from a vulnerable angle. If he is unable to make a clean strike, he will strike anyway as a feint, to draw his target's attention and defense to one area. He can then strike the undefended area and begin knocking them downwards towards the ground. As the enemy falls back to the earth, Shun will deftly rotate his body around to deliver a full force kick to their chest.

      Name: Konoha Kage Buyou
      Rank: C-Rank
      Type: Taijutsu
      Description: A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching his or her body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique is usually preceded by a swift upper kick that will launch the target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful techniques.

      ANBU Jutsus:
      Spoiler:
      Yuukai [Ghost]
      Rank: C
      Requirements: None
      Description: The most important aspect of an ANBU is stealth and the ability to assassinate. This jutsu works to that end and, by lacing the clothing of an individual with chakra the clothing emits no noise, be it from wind or movements. This technique does not require handseals.

      Kanashibari no Jutsu [Temporary Paralysis Technique]
      Rank: B (Kinjutsu)
      Requirements: Eye contact.
      Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja stares down their opponent and causes their opponent to become completely frozen in their tracks. This is a perfect technique for escaping a dire situation, or for stalling a target in an assassination. This is normally a jutsu known by ANBU members.
      Post duration: 1 post

      Mayakashimeimu [Fake Illusion]
      Rank: A
      Requirements: Hunter-Nin or Black Ops
      Description: For two posts, the user's solid mass is taken away. If something strikes the user, it will just go through them. Likewise, they cannot launch any offensive attacks while in this form. This jutsu has a three post cool-down period.

      S-Rank Jutsus:
      Spoiler:
      Name:Raiton- Kyoumou Doragon Kami Jutsu (Lightning- Fierce Dragon God Jutsu)
      Rank: S
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Element: Raiton-Lightning
      Description: The user forms a very long string of handsigns and focuses a huge amount of chakra in their right hand and converted to lightning chakra. This chakra is then launched at the opponent. Once fired the chakra takes on the form of a huge dragon made of swirling electricity. It will then surround the enemy and coil around them attempting to block all escape, then will smash its head into the area inside its coil where the enemy will probably be. If the attack hits the opponent their corpse will be almost indistinguishable from the electricity burns. The downsides to this jutsu are that it takes a massive amount of chakra and exhausts the user.The jutsu makes the user numb in their right hand [3 Posts duration] and the user also takes mild electrical burns. This dragon moves at around 80-90 mph and only a well placed shunnshin could escape or an S ranked Wind jutsu will nullify it.

      Name: Grand Giga Fireball Jutsu
      Classification: Ninjutsu
      Rank: S
      Type: Offensive
      Handseals: Yes
      Range: Long
      Description: A much larger and more powerful technique which was made specifically to combat bijuu as this powerful technique is about equal in size to a large summon being smaller but not by that much. The set up for the technique is the same however it can only be released as a massive orb. This technique creates a giant crater and an explosion which is set ablaze with white flames and engulfs the target in the signature flames.

      Earth Release:Rise of the Mighty Pillars [Kigen za Tsuyoi Chuuseki]
      Type: Attack
      Rank: S rank
      Range:Short- Long
      Description: The user performs six handseals, he then stomps the Earth, releasing a very large amount of his doton chakra, as it circulates throughout the Earth, while maintaining the chakra and using chakra and nature manipulation, The user then clasps his hands together, as this is done, at the users Will, up to nine giant pillars can be risen from the earth, large in size and mass, These pillars can lock around the tails of any tailed beast, if this is successful, the pillars can keep the tails locked onto the ground for one full turn of the opponent. At he end of this turn, the pillars will crumble. The amount of pillars can be increased or reduced. If this technique is used on a human, the pillar will tightly restrict the opponent from all movement [with exception of the head].
      -The pillers can withstand jutsus below its rank.
      -If used on a tailed beast, The pillars only restrict the tails by pinning them down onto the ground, any other part such as the arms and legs can still remain with motion, the pillars only restrict the Creature from running, dodging, jumping etc. While this is in place, the beast still has power to perform jutsu.
      -No Earth Jutsu for the following turn
      -No S rank and above jutsu for the next two turns.

      This is my Story

      History:
      Spoiler:

      Birth Arc: Cloud was born on January 23rd, to Kenta and Kaori. 'Shun' was his name since he was always interested in the clouds in the sky and his thoughts. His parents didn't want people to know of his powers and shun or mock his abnormal abilites, and it would shock his opponent if he randomly started using his trainee katana . He grew up, and Shun showed extraordinary abilities, even at a young age and even through his toddler years.

      Pre-Academy Arc: Shun continued to acell in everything he was taught--especially Ninjutsu. This was his favorite art to practice, and since he was known for his improvements, this made Shun even more strong. His father spent most of his time (when he wasn't working as merchant) training with Shun, teaching him the Ninjutsu techniques. When most kids were out playing, Shun was hitting the training dummy, and was being lectured by his father about how he should live, by the way of the ninja. Everyday (even now) Shun can hear his father drilling the words into his head, over and over again. He also lectured him not to tell others of his last name, though he didn't even know his own first name. He trained throughout his younger years, hard everyday with his father until he reached double digits--the age 10.

      Academy Arc: Shun and his father and continued to train hard, constantly, but actually not as much because Shun entered the academy at the age of 10. Even now, surrounded by ninja-in-training that were a bit older than him, he still excelled passed all the ninja. He was sometimes mocked, but always remembered what his father said--Live by the shinobi code. He wanted to cry so bad one day, but he had the lectures drilled in his head. He got jumped by three older boys by the age of 13. He was scared, they circled him, but he quickly ignored his emotions and turned the fracas around. He didn't do that much damage, the most was stabbing one of the boys in the leg with a kunai, the other two he just knocked out. Once word about the fight leaked to the ninja academy, the teachers decided that he was to dangerous for any of the genin's at this point, so promoted him to genin half way through the year. He was promoted to genin at the same age as he entered, becoming one of the quickest to graduate that early.

      Genin Arc: Being as young as he was, he wasn't placed in a cell and the village barely let him go on missions. Though they had promoted him early, they still figured he was to young to observe the brutality of the shinobi world. Shun's father thought differently and complained to the konoha council members. They were to give Shun one chance, and if he failed they would not allow him to be a ninja--ever. They sent Shun on a B-Rank mission. He left a child, and came back an assassin. He had took three lives during the mission, and this seemed to 'sculpt' his feelings and point of view on life. He realized, that shinobi like himself were just pawns for their village leaders. He knew he would be forced to be the blockade for the village, and he figured that he might as well live his life the way he thought he was meant to--following orders. Secretly ,under all his thoughts, he strives to become strong , strong enough not to take orders and find peace to his troubled heart.

      Chuunin Arc: 3 years later shun turned 13, his skills was great and he was a changed boy. He made a couple friends in his spare time but not a lot because he always had a passion to read. One day he got called by the hokage to search for a missing ninja who hailed from the uchiha clan, shun was assigned to his team and they left the following morning. When they collided with the ninja, the battle broke out and it was a fight to stay alive. Shuns rage was easily shown when his comrades died off slowly. In his blind rage he lost his left eye by a shuriken, but the uchiha was at his limit as well. Having retreated and set traps everywhere, the uchiha followed to his doom and was soon bombarded with attacks from all angles that ended his life. As a trophy shun gladly replaced his lost eye with the uchiha one before passing out unconscious.

      ANBU Arc: 3 years later from that mission and he was 16. He was lucky to be found and healed, because he lost alot of blood. Shun is now back on his duty and was promoted from chuunin to ANBU by the hokage. Since having the sharingan his skills have amplified alot. He has been on many missions and top class training of the elite and of course being young he has much to learn. Time progressed as he was chosen to be one of the hand picked body guards of the hokage, thats when he got his title the white wolf of konoha.

      Roleplay Sample: As he walked down the street, the atmosphere was very calm. He wore his normal attire along with his anbu mask that was strapped to his side of his head. He needed to learn more about the sharingan and its powers, and what place was better then the library, none. Shun stopped walking as he fixed his mask back with his 2 finger, it was going to be a long day for the young anbu. A small grin appeared on his face as he continued to walk, the fellow citizens of the leaf village were up to there normal activities, a few of them greeting shun as he walked by and he to them as well, like he really cared about them replying back. As he entered he walked to the reception, he adjusted his mask before he spoke to the lady behind the desk.




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    Re: Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Eki Gisou on Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:04 pm

    Heya Shun, looks like I'll be your moderator today.

    Everything right up until the Jutsu list looks good, so we'll start there. Couple Minor fixed before we get into detail:

    • I count 36 Jutsu, one over your maximum starting limit as ANBU.
    • Chidori and it's variations, including the Lightning Cutter, aren't available to start with. Luckily this'll bring your jutsu total down.
    • Your Katon Jutsus, Normal Jutsus, Sharingan Techniques and a few of your Kyoukan techniques need to specify whether or not they use hand seals.


    Now onto to some of the actual techniques.

    Spoiler:
    Katon • Horou no Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Prison]
    Rank: C
    Effect: A skill in which generates a circular flame upon the ground, raising up bars of flame and a covering over top. This intense flame heats all within it, preventing water from being created from the inside with the dryness of the air. Touching the sides results in various burns, and while this jutsu is used it can be linked to any other fire jutsu and the jutsu will be fired at the person inside the prison.

    How far away can you create this cage from yourself? It needs a range.

    Fire Release • Katon Bunshin no Jutsu (Fire Release • Fire Clone Skill)
    Rank: B
    Effect: A skill in which creates a tangible clone of flame. With this skill, the tangible clone of flame acts freely and upon its own will. It will attack the opponent as best it can, trying to prompt the opponent to attack it from close range. When the clone is struck, its body turns into its true form being a mass of flame. When the opponent hits this mass of flame, it causes damage along with some terrible burns.

    Clones that deal elemental damage upon dispersal warrant an A rank.

    Katon • Kanatsu [Fire Release • Ember]
    Rank: B
    Effect: A skill in which is often considered the beefed up version of the Grand Fireball skill. Taking in a lot of chakra into their chest cavity, and thrusting their hand before their mouth. The user breathes forth the flame, and upon flowing out of their hand it expands outwards creating a powerful burst of flames.

    How beefed up? It just needs a size and range more than anything.

    Katon • Baku Ho Bunshin No Jutsu [Fire Release • Explosive Fire Clone]
    Rank: B
    Effect: A skill where the user gathering their chakra into a Fire Clone, can now make that same clone imbued with an effect that will cause them to explode. Normally the normal fire clone would just burst into flames when struck, this clone explodes outwards in a powerful blast of flame.

    Still A rank worthy, but why have this as well as the regular Fire Clone? Combine the descriptions, and save yourself a technique.

    Katon • Shouten Kaen Tama no Jutsu [Fire Release • Focus Flame Shot]
    Rank: A
    Effect: A skill in which, has the key ability for one to focus their chakra to the level of B rank. Performing the first hand seal, and holding the second one for as long as they focus their fire chakra. Streams of heat will flow off the hands, as the user pushes their hands forward. Releasing a powerful fast flying shot of flame, so powerful that it is capable of leveling an entire house.

    A little more description please. It seems like a small bullet by description, and I *assume* it explodes upon impact, given it's ability to level a house. This needs to be clear though, otherwise it could be interpreted quite differently.

    [quote]Katon • Yuutename no Jutsu [Fire Release • Melting Rain Skill]
    Rank: A
    Effect: A skill in which is one of the most difficult fire based jutsu to master. Within the sky fire chakra is imbued into the clouds from the user. From these clouds, it begins to rain down a series of burning embers. Encompassing the nearby area or a potentially long range target in a rainfall of fiery embers. This skill can also be dangerous to the user.
    Note: Begins 3 posts after it is used[/qoute]

    I went over this technique with another member, you need a better medium for attempting to get that much chakra so far above you. Chakra transmission isn't exactly easy, and this amount would be difficult. Try something like spitting a fireball in the air or what not. Take the idea, run with it, otherwise, this is ok.

    Name: Tsukire [Moon Slice]
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Sub-type: Kyoukan
    Rank: D
    Orientation: Offensive
    Effects: An attack where an enemy will rush an opponent, apparently trying to stab a foe, only to launch themselves over an enemy, jumping in a path similar to a crescent moon while slashing at a foe's shoulder/neck/head. This allows the user to simultaneously surprise a foe, move behind them, and strike them from above.

    Because this could potentially use a kunai or other sharp object, it doesn't necessarily have to be Kenjutsu. You'll need to change it to Taijutsu if you'd like to keep it, given you don't have Kenjutsu as a specialty.

    Name: Shinjutsu [Acupuncture]
    Type: Taijutsu
    Sub-type: Kyokan
    Rank: C
    Orientation: Offensive
    Effects: This technique is utilized by a Shinobi to improve their ability to strike at the specific points of an enemy's body, aiming at the nervous system in order to cut off the connection of the body part to the brain. Thus, disabling an enemy by striking at specific points. Utilizing projectiles or blades, the shinobi will coat it with chakra, aiming at an opponent's body in order to strike it in such a way, spreading the chakra into the body to cut off it's connection for a short time-period.

    This should be Medical, which you don't have. Remove it please.

    Name: Bakuken [Bomb Fist]
    Type: Taijutsu
    Sub-type: Kyoukan
    Rank: B
    Orientation: Offensive
    Effects: The shinobi shall secretly place an explosive tag upon their hand, typically upon their palm in order to hide it when making a fist. Upon nearing a foe they will ignite the tag and strike an enemy, attacking them seconds before the explosion. They will cover they hand with chakra and push the energy forward, thus directing the majority of the explosion towards an enemy. They will take damage from their proximity to the blast but reduced, the majority of the force being projected towards an enemy.

    Unless you've got a time/space ability that'll allow objects to pass through you, you may want to alter the description. Even though you can use chakra to guide the explosion, having that tag grasped IN your fist, will most certainly cause you to lose a finger or two, no matter where you direct that explosion.

    Name: Ryuuchou no waza [Art of Flowing]
    Type: Taijutsu
    Sub-type: Kyoukan
    Rank: B
    Orientation: Supplementary
    Effects: This technique is a jutsu that relaxes the body, the chakra soothing the muscle and relieving the stress and pain of the body. This causes the body to become lithe, responsive, and literately "Flow" around an opponent. It is not an increase in muscle force nor actually speed as much as it allows the user to remain calm and allow them to become precise, lessening by far-chance possible mistakes. As such this technique allows a shinobi to become closer to "Perfection", moving around a foes assault with the least amount of effort and striking with grace. Thus, their accuracy of blows and ability to dodge an enemies attacks are increased noticeably, ignoring weariness and wounds. [Can fight without pain for 3 posts]

    I get the idea, but fighting with no pain is far greater than just relaxing and trying not to let minor wounds bother you. There needs to be a limit on the pain tolerance, rather than just the ability to fight without any at all.

    Body Freeze
    - A genjutsu, that makes a feeling of an intense cold passing over their body, causing a freezing sensation as if their body was being effected by 1st degree frostbite.
    - Rank: C
    - Effect: Along with making the opponents entire body feel like it is being subjected to 1st degree frostbite, it will hamper their movements slightly in their attacks. Making them less fluid-like and concentrated, making it harder to use taijutsu styles.

    Echo [Hibiki No Jutsu]
    - An audio genjutsu that causes the opponent to hear constant echoeing within their mind comming from all sides. This disrupts the opponents sense of hearing so they cannot rely on sound to help them
    - Rank: C
    - Effect: A rather disruptive technique, making them unable truly rely on their hearing so that they can use it to aide them within battle.

    These two genjutsu need what's known as a Medium; a way for the opponent to fall into them. I understand your second one there says it's an audible jutsu, in that it affects what the victim audibly perceives. However, it doesn't say whether they fall into the genjutsu by hearing a specific tune you whistle, looking at something you're doing, etc. Both need a medium, and that medium has to be one of the five senses. I recommend Sight, Smell and Hearing... Given touch and taste are a little harder to work with :)

    Earth Release • Earth slide Wall [Doton • Doryuu Heki]
    - A technique using Earth Chakra
    - Handseals: Ox, Dog, Hare, Dog
    - Rank: B
    - Effect: A skill where the user can create a large stone wall from the ground, sending them high up into the air and capable of protecting one against high level ninjutsu that are sent flowing towards them. The strength of this wall is great, and is very hard to destroy even with the most powerful of focused ninjutsu.

    Give a letter rank to "the most powerful of ninjutsu", because this is Doton, and defense is kind of doton's go to, I'd suggest nothing higher than A.

    Earth Release • Spike Burst [Doton • Gosunkungi Heki no Jutsu]
    - A technique utilizing Earth Chakra and Focus
    - Handseals: Boar, Dog, Ox, Dragon
    - Rank: B
    - Effect: A technique where the user channels their chakra into the ground they are standing upon, tempting the opponent to attack. If taking the bait the user jumps back and as the opponent steps onto that spot the opponent is greeted with a burst of spikes emerging from the ground. Criss crossing in various directions, to immobilize the opponent while inflicting damage.

    What kind of damage, will they pierce of just pin? Can this impale a person? Add it into the description please.

    Earth Release • Mud Rush Wave [Doton • Deido Sattou Nami no Jutsu]
    - A technique utilizing Earth Chakra, and High level of Focus
    - Handseals: Dog, Ox
    - Rank: A
    - Effect: A technique where the user gathers an incredible amount of chakra within their chest, expanding out their chest far out then it normally can be expanded. The user opens up their mouth and releases a rushing wave of Mud from their mouths. This incredible mass of mud is devastatingly powerful and can merely push over many individuals and drown them in mud. After the jutsu is used, the mud hardens to trap anything within it.

    How tall and wide is this wave? Are we talking something similar to what Kisame can do with water? Or more along the lines of what Sarutobi could do with mud, and just not solidify it? Add it in to the description please.

    Lightning Clone [Raikou Bunshin No Jutsu]
    - A technique where a clone is made of electricity
    - Handseals: Yes
    - Rank: B
    - Effect: Creates a tangible clone out of electricity, that when struck delivers a massive shock to the system.

    A rank, just like the fire clone. Kakashi's version of this is A rank, to give you some perspective.

    Lastly, if you could add a tad more to the tail end of your History, just to give a little mroe back story into his time in ANBU, that'd be great. It'd definitely show me the drive you have to be one of Konoha's finest.

    Let me know when you get that done, and you should be significantly closer to RPing. Thanks for your time Shun!



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    Re: Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Shun on Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:56 pm

    All Edited.
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    Re: Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Eki Gisou on Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:13 pm

    Approved and Moved.

    Name colour and Ryo soon to come.

    A word of caution though, while your RP Sample was a little shy, I did let it slide. For your rank, I expect a minimum of two paragraphs a post. Push yourself. Cool.


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    Re: Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Echo on Sat Oct 27, 2012 8:58 am

    Unapproved for a moment.

    If you want a transplanted Sharingan, you'll have to obtain the eye in RP somehow.


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    Re: Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Nocturne on Sun Oct 28, 2012 3:03 am

    Topic unlocked. No way he can fix the issue if the topic is locked. To make sure he doesn't anything extra I made a copy of his app.


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    Re: Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Shun on Sun Oct 28, 2012 6:14 pm

    Theres no implants rules but its been edited. Anything more now i have to change with this char............
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    Re: Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Echo on Mon Oct 29, 2012 12:34 pm

    You're only allowed 2 main elements.

    Mastered Reality

    Would count as an S rank since it can reach S rank.


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    Re: Shun Yakuzai [Done]

    Post by Echo on Wed Oct 31, 2012 7:31 pm

    Sorry about that, i don't know why this got moved.


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