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    Classification: Legendary Swordsmen of the Mist

    Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Sengoku on Tue Nov 27, 2012 12:24 pm


    Retrieving Ninja Profile.....


    Who... Am I?

      Name: Sengoku Shichiyou

      Nickname/Alias: Rance/Blizzard of Kirigakure

      Age: 14

      Gender: Male

      Is that really me?

      Appearance: Hair & Face : Sengoku has a pointed chin. His face is rather tanned due to his hard & extreme training since he was young. He has a natural black and spiky hair which usually tend to lean to his left. Lots of people has complimented his hair. The reason for such silkiness is through expensive shampoo his parents got him, or maybe gifted by some shampoo company, since his parents owns a shipping company. His hair is rather long; his hair reaches his lower neck. He hasn’t cut his hair ever since he was 9. He loves his hair and doesn’t want any blade to touch it. Sengoku has blue eyes which he inherited from his father. This is rather rare for a Japanese like him. His nose is very small, just like his mum’s. His teeth are very white. It can literally sparkle when he smiles.
      His looks:
      His upper body : His upper body is somewhat muscular for a 14 year old. He has a leaned ratio of toned muscle that isn’t bulging like those “all brawns and no brains”. The triceps and biceps of his arms are those that stand out the most. This is because of his training. He used to train with a super heavy katana, which is considered more like weights than a sword. His chest’s muscles are rather big for someone his age too. He has a huge tattoo of his clan’s symbol on his back that he placed there using his tattoo bending ability.

      His lower body : His legs are kinda long, which contributes a lot to his height, 5 feet and 6 inches. Having long legs helps him to move faster than average shinobis. The sole of his feet are rather strong, since he has been walking barefooted while training in his rocky backyard. The muscles of his legs are rather developed, however the size of his legs are thin.

      Clothing: As the Seven Swordsmen : If he were to be called by the Mizukage or if he attends a mission, he would usually wear a Shihakusho, most black in color. He would wear the normal shinobi shoes. He would also wear a bandage-liked scarf over his neck. He would have two katanas on his right belt, and his special sword on his back. He would have this headband crooked on his forehead.

      As a normal shinobi : If he was free, or when he does not feel like wearing his Seven Swordsmen “uniform”, he would just wear some rather random shirt with his favorite blue hoodie jacket on. He would be wearing his favorite necklace, a heirloom passed down to every leader of the Shichiyou clan.

      Heirloom Necklace:

      Weight:

      Height: 5 feet 6 inches

      Ethnicity: 56 kg.

      Voice: Rather smooth as soft, like an aristocrat

        Likes:
      • Pranks-Sengoku loves playing pranks on people. His pranks varies from placing a fart-balloon on the teacher's chair to setting the science lab on fire. Without his parents' high position, he would've been kicked out of school long time ago.
      • Girls
      • Training Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu and Genjutsu
      • Ramen
      • Tea, especially Oolong

        Dislikes:
      • Coffee
      • Evil
      • Bullies
      • People who hurt girls
      • Akatsuki


      Personality: Normal days : During his lazy, normal days, Sengoku would just act like a happy-go-lucky kid. He’ll try his best to mix with others. He also attends shinobi school, like normal, a school that teaches boring history. After school, he would either study in the library, or go home to his dojo and train. If his training goes well, he would end early and go to the academy school and teach. At night, he would go to the bar and meet up with some other Jounins, or maybe even with his fellow seven swordsmen too. Of course, he would either get a mocktail, some orange juice, tea, or his favorite; milk.

      Battle : During a battle, Sengoku would always analyze his surroundings, his team mates, and his enemy. He would never let his guard down. He would always prepare 3 steps ahead before diving to the enemy. He would also put his friend’s lives as the to priority. Also, Sengoku has a weakness; it’s hard for him to kill. No matter who it is, even a mass murderer, his heart would ALWAYS hesitate. Plus, in battle, he’ll be totally serious and no joke. He knows when to be serious and when to joke.

      My...Family?

      Clan: Shichiyou

      Unique Clan Features: Sengoku has the ability to change his tattoo. He can change the position and size of his tattoo. He can also change it's design, such as changing his tattoo from his clan symbol, to a pink fluffy unicorn riding on a tank.

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: Legendary Swordsmen Of The Mist

      Letter Rank: A

      Village: Kirigakure

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points: 10


      • 1. Kenjutsu Expert
      • 2. Ninjutsu Artisan
      • 3. Genjutsu Expert


      -Elements-


      • 1. Wind
      • 2. Lightning
      • 3.
      • Comb. Ice (KKG)


      -Jutsu-

      E: 4
      D: 4
      C: 5
      B: 2
      A: 0
      S: 0
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      E rank:

      Name: Ha [Edge of a Sword]
      Rank: E
      Type: Supplementary
      Hand Seals: Nope
      Element: N/A
      Description: This is a skill in which a bladed weapon is swung in a special manner. This skill allows for a sword swing to be seen in an blare of light. The angle of the blade is held so that the light bounces off the blade during the swing. This is mostly for blinding an enemy.

      Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Yes
      Element: N/A
      Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance and thus this clone can do absolutely no damage at all in any way. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse. The number of clones able to be produced is determined by the user's rank as follows. D Rank; 2 Clones. C Rank; 3 Clones. B Rank; 4 Clones. A Rank; 5 Clones. S/SS Rank; 6 Clones. 4 round cool down.

      Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Nope
      Element: N/A
      Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object, this object must be something like a log or stone roughly the same size as the user. The size doesn't have to be exactly the same as the user but what this means is a person can't replace themselves with a leaf or a twig, nor could they replace themselves with a giant boulder, if questions arise over uses of this technique contact an admin but any decision they make is final. In addition this can not be another person unless that person is willing. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. These objects or other people must be within 50 feet of the user when the technique is performed. There is a 5 round cool down between uses of this technique.

      b]Name:[/b] Henge no Jutsu
      Rank: E
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Nope
      Element: N/A
      Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, while transformed only the user's shape and appearance changes. Meaning that if say the host turns themselves into a sword they won't be able to cut anything unless their body could do so naturally. This technique lasts for 4 posts with a cool down of 2.


      D rank:

      Name: Vibration Sensor
      Rank: D
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: No
      Element: N/A
      Description: Using the vibrations in the air, the user can map the shape and size of his surrounding. This works by projecting the user’s chakra around him. Whenever the user’s chakra sense another chakra, it maps out the chakra size to the user. This works a little like a bat's supersonic. This jutsu has a flaw. It can only map out the shape and size. However, it cannot match every single details, such as color. Therefore, this jutsu would map out only the shape of the person, and not the exact details. So, the user may not be able to tell the difference between the enemy and his friend, if the body and shape of them are exactly the same. This jutsu can be used especially in the dark, or when their vision cannot be relied on. This ability can be used up to 20 meter radius.
      Name: Mist Servant Technique
      Rank: D
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: No
      Element: N/A
      Description: This genjutsu starts after the opponent hears the clap after the handseals. The user can creates clones of themselves much like bunshin no jutsu. However, when hit by an attack, rather then puffing away, they act as if they were made of a blackish oil-like liquid, repairing themselves even if fully destroyed. They are able to imitate attacks, though they are only illusions and can’t actually affect their surroundings, and are often used to hide projectiles of the user amongst their own. The user can create far more clones with this then using bunshin no jutsu, able to create over a dozen clones at once even as an Academy Student, and the average Chuunin can create hundreds at once, filling up an entire battlefield with them.


      Name: Temporary Paralysis Technique
      Rank: D
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Yes
      Element: N/A
      Description: A technique that physically restrains an opponent, as if the opponent had been tied in invisible steel ropes. It debilitates the victim for a short period of time, which allows the user to either strike again, or take the target into custody. This is a D-rank ninjutsu where the intensity will vary greatly according to the user's level of skill. The technique can also be cast on every target at once, depending on the user's skill, and won't fail a shinobi during his missions.

      Name: Hydra Clone
      Rank: D
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: No
      Element: N/A
      Description: The genjutsu is created by looking in the victim's eyes. This genjutsu is extremely similar to Shadow Clones, but at the beginning only creates two other ones. When a Hydra clone is "destroyed" two more pop up in it's place, up to a grand total of 10. This is only usable as a distraction or to wear the enemy out as it is only a mental trick, and in reality there's only one physical one that can cause damage(The real person). The sight, smell, touch and hearing is altered in this. However, the taste isn't so if the victim bites a clone, they taste nought but air. Damages caused by these clones will not have any marks, although the victim will still feel the pain.


      C rank:

      Name: Everything is not what it seems
      Rank: C
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: Handseals.
      Element: N/A
      Description: This jutsu require handseals. After eye contact with the target, the user will leave a "clone illusion", which means he can freely move, while the target will see a clone standing at where the user was. He wouldn't even know he's in a Genjutsu. He'll think the user is still there(the user can control this optical clone, of course.) This genjutsu is broken through pain, or Genjutsu Kai(But the target doesn't even know he's in a Genjutsu, so why would he use Kai?)

      Name: Lag
      Rank: C
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: Yes
      Element: N/A
      Description: After handseals and eye contact, the opponent's senses would all "lag". Meaning, he would see, hear, sense, smell, taste, and feel 2 seconds late. That means, the user would be able to move , and the opponent would still see the user standing there, and move 2 seconds later. This genjutsu can be broken through Kai(highly unlikely if the user don't even know he's in a Genjutsu) and pain(though it'll lag for 2 seconds.) 4 post cooldown.

      Name: Counter Stance
      Rank: C
      Type: Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: Nope
      Element: N/A
      Description: The user places his weapon above him and spins it around for one post. The user focuses his chakra on the tip of the blade. He then focuses on the opponent's movements. This allows him to dodge the next attack of the opponent. This is how it works. As the user places all his concentration on the opponent, he can predict the opponent's incoming attack. He'll then dodge the attack by using the blade's momentum to dodge it. After that, the user can then attack the opponent as a counter attack. It's jsut to predict the sword's movement, dodge it, and maybe counter, if possible.

      Name: Memory Lurker
      Rank: C
      Type: Genjutsu
      Hand Seals: Concentration
      Element: N/A
      Description: This genjutsu allows the user to view the target’s memory. As he lurks in the target’s memory, both him and the target can view this memory. The caster can also alter the memory, although not in a big scale. Lasts for 3 posts.

      Name: Wind Projectile
      Rank: C
      Type: Kenjutsu
      Hand Seals: /
      Element: N/A
      Description: This technique allows the user to imbue his weapon with wind chakra. When the user slashes his weapon, a wind slash projectile would appear and travel towards the direction it is slashed towards. This lasts for 5 slashes.


      B rank:

      Name: Kage Bunshin
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Yes
      Element: N/A
      Description: The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added.
      How many clones can be made per rank:
      D-1
      C-2
      B-3
      A-4
      S-5

      Name: Ice shard Blizzard
      Rank: B
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Hand Seals: Yes
      Element: Ice
      Description: After the handseals, the user molds 10 ice shards the size of a baseball. The ice shards will then revolve around the user. Anyone who gets hit by this ice shards may get fractures. The user can then control the ice shards by throwing them towards any direction they want.







      This is my Story

      History/Background Story:
      His birth -
      There was once a legend. The Savior of the world would appear at the time of distress. This Savior would defeat all the "demons" of the world, rid the world of evil, and regain peace for the world. Well, to Sengoku, he believes that he is the Savior. Sengoku was born in Kirigakure in a luxurious mansion. His dad named him Sengoku, due to the period of war. What war, you may ask? When Sengoku was born, his father was fighting with Sengoku's uncles to see who would be the head of the family. His family then decided to settle this dispute in a spar, kendo style. His father fought through the spars victorious until he reached the finals. In the finals, his dad, Nozuki Shichiyou, was fighting against his uncle, Azrael. They were fighting, and Sengoku's dad was about to lose. Nozuki was on the ground, and as Azrael was about to land the finishing blow, baby Sengoku started crying. Everyone, including Azrael, turned to look at Sengoku. Taking advantage of the situation, Nozuki striked a blow at the unsuspecting Azrael. Turning the tides, Nozuki striked rapidly at Azrael. As you know it, Nozuki won the title of the head of the family, and Sengoku became the proud child of Nozuki.

      When Sengoku was 4, his dad realized that Sengoku had a talent for Genjutsu, NInjutsu, and Kenjutsu. His dad found out his talent for Genjutsu when he could manipulate the maids to give him candy. For Ninjutsu, he turned water into ice just to cross the river to get his ball. As for Kenjutsu, his dad just forced it to him, and through sheer luck, Sengoku ended up being a great swordsmen. Without further delay, his dad hired the best teachers to teach young Sengoku.

      Genin life-
      While other 6 years old were in academy school, Sengoku was in Team 5, as a genin. His dad managed to convince the old Kage to allow Sengoku to become a genin after seeing Sengoku’s talent. His life as a genin was fine. He attended his team meetings and mission in the morning till 3 pm. After that, he had private training at home.

      One of his favorite mission was to deliver a message to Konohagakure. His dad sponsored the trip, so that means more ryo as reward. As they were on their way there(through a carriage), they were stopped by 5 bandits. Their sensei went against two bandits, he and his teammates each took one. The bandit Sengoku went against was a strong one. Sengoku pulled out his katana and aimed at the bandit’s left leg. The bandit blocked the hit with ease and striked Sengoku in the guts. Sengoku was pushed back a bit. Sengoku analyzed the enemy and smiled. Throwing a smoke bomb, he performed some handseals and whisper, ”Bunshin no jutsu!”. His clone charged towards the bandit through the smoke. His clone was aiming at the bandit’s right leg this time. The bandit snickered and was about to block the clone before Sengoku whacked the bandit’s neck with the blunt side of the sword. This blow made the bandit lose balance. Sengoku then attacked the bandit non-stop till the bandit blacked out. When he was done with the bandit, his sensei gave him a pat on the head and congratulate him. They tied the bandits and brought them to the police station. They delivered the message and returned home, without any action. This was Sengoku’s first time in a real battle.
      After knowing his weakness in real battle, Sengoku decided to train extra hard. He started to stay up late to train. By the time he was 9, he became a skilled Chunin who passed the Chuunin exams without any trouble.

      Chuunin-Jounin -
      When he became a Chuunin, his teachers has taught him all they could. Sengoku was on his own now, he has to train with his own skills and knowledge. He started to on missions, since experience is the best way to train. He would usually train for only 2 hours a day, and go on missions all day long. Soon enough, when he turned 10, he was promoted to Special Jounin, and due to lack of shinobi, he had to pick up some students and go on missions with them. This gave him the opportunity to train on his basics with people around his age. He went on missions with them, trained them, and watched them become skilled shinobis. They were like his best friends, whom he spend all day long with them. He watched them pass the Chunin exam with ease, and he decided not to pick up a team and just go solo for a while.
      When he was 12, he was promoted to Jounin and joined the ANBU. He was paired up with a guy called Takeshi. This is due to him not being able to finish off his enemies. Takeshi became his big brother, caring for him and listening to all his problems. However, this happiness does not last forever. Soon after he turned 13, tragedies after tragedies afflicted his life. One is the death of his best friend, Takeshi. He and Takeshi was sent to hunt down a missing nin. Takeshi who was a tracker, found out the missing nin’s location. As they reached the destination, they were ambushed by a group of infamous people. Some were mass murderers, and some were missing nins. They fought their hardest against the gang. They managed to annihilate half of the gang members.
      However, Sengoku got careless and did not see an incoming fire projectile being shot towards him. Takeshi, who saw it coming, pushed Sengoku away, but he was hit by the jutsu. The jutsu did a huge blow to him. Taking the advantage of this moment, 3 of the gang members charged and attacked the defenseless Takeshi, hence destroying Takeshi’s body. Sengoku, who saw all this happen, could not hold his emotion back. For the first time, his heart was filled with killing intents. As he allowed his emotion to take over him, he unleashed all his power on one jutsu, “Subzero”. This jutsu annihilated the gang members, and not a single trace of them were found. As he returned to the village, he reported to the kage and decided to take a break.
      Right after he recovered from the trauma, he found out that his father had given-in to a deadly disease and died. After a month of mourning, his clan appointed Sengoku as the next clan leader. His life became busier, due to his clan matters and because of his feat of destroying the whole infamous gang. And like everyone expected, he was appointed as one of the Legendary Swordsmen of the Mist at the age of 14.

      Roleplay Sample: It was one in the afternoon, and most of the students would be changing for P.E. Well, except for Sengoku. Sengoku was outside in the hallway. Turning left and right, he sighed and thought, "Good, no one's here. This is a mission where if I succeed, I'll be considered a real man. It's a mission that decides my fate. It's a mission that will make my goal to be the best swordsmen in the world closer!" As he opened his eyes, he crept to a door opposite of him. As he peered into the crack through a wall, he saw a breath-taking view. He saw a heavenly sight of girls changing. Some of them were already changed, and some of them were still changing. Some of those who already changed were groping other girl's breast. " Damn....If only I'm a girl....." As he sighed, his eyes sparkled. As he performed some handseals, he then said, "Henge no jutsu!". As he muttered those words, a puff of smoke appeared and Sengoku turned into a girl. He then opened the door, and charged in. He began to grope ALL the girl's breast and started flipping skirts. As he was nose-bleeding, he did not realize he turned back into a guy. The next thing he knew, he was being slapped and punched by all the girls in the room. He then blacked out and he was found half-dead by his classmates in the storeroom the next day.




    Last edited by Sengoku on Sun Dec 02, 2012 9:52 am; edited 5 times in total
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    Shinobi ID
    Village: Kirigakure
    Letter Rank: S
    Classification: Legendary Swordsmen of the Mist

    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Sengoku on Wed Nov 28, 2012 5:33 am

    Done. There might be a few mistakes here and there, since I rushed through everything. My new feat, completing this whole thing in 3 hours.
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Nocturne on Wed Nov 28, 2012 8:16 am


    • You can start as a SSM (Seven Swordsmen of the Mist) but you will have to earn S-Rank later on.
    • The only jutsu I have issue with is the White Sabre Technique. It is much like the canon sword Hiramekarei, in technique form.
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Sengoku on Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:45 am

    1. Gee, Thanks! Changed to A rank :)
    2. About the white Sabre technique.. I spelled it wrong. It's SAMURAI sabre technique. And it is a canon technique. :)

    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Samurai_Sabre_Technique
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Nocturne on Thu Nov 29, 2012 11:13 am

    The technique is unique to samurai and appears untouched by ninja. However, you can edit out the shape transformation or replace it if you wish to keep the skill. With wind chakra, of course, the deadliness of the technique is boosted.


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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Sengoku on Thu Nov 29, 2012 11:28 am

    Any idea on what to edit to keep the shape shifting skill?
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Sengoku on Fri Nov 30, 2012 10:55 am

    Well, since you have not reply about the Samurai Sabre technique, I'll just go on and add a tiny bit more jutsu:

    C rank:


    Name: Everything is not what it seems
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: Nope
    Element: N/A
    Description: This jutsu does not require handseals. After eye contact with the target, the user will leave a "clone illusion", which means he can freely move, while the target will see a clone standing at where the user was. He wouldn't even know he's in a Genjutsu. He'll think the user is still there(the user can control this optical clone, of course.) This genjutsu is broken through pain, or Genjutsu Kai(But the target doesn't even know he's in a Genjutsu, so why would he use Kai?)

    Name: Lag
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: No
    Element: N/A
    Description: After eye contact, the opponent's senses would all "lag". Meaning, he would see, hear, sense, smell, taste, and feel 3 seconds late. That means, the user would be able to move , and the opponent would still see the user standing there, and move 3 seconds later. This genjutsu can be broken through Kai(highly unlikely if the user don't even know he's in a Genjutsu) and pain(though it'll lag for 3 seconds.)

    Name: Counter Stance
    Rank: C
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Hand Seals: Nope
    Element: N/A
    Description: The user places his weapon above him and spins it around for one post. The user focuses his chakra on the tip of the blade. He then focuses on the opponent's movements. This allows him to dodge the next attack of the opponent. This is how it works. As the user places all his concentration on the opponent, he can predict the opponent's incoming attack. He'll then dodge the attack by using the blade's momentum to dodge it. After that, the user can then attack the opponent as a counter attack.
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Nocturne on Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:34 am

    Sorry, it appears my reply did not go through when I sent it from my phone. No, there is not a way for you to keep the shape manipulation as there will then be no point in making a custom version. You have not made a custom SSM sword and the possibility to add a degree of manipulation exists but the idea would be to keep it...um, unique.

    As for your jutsu:

    Everything is not what it seems
    This jutsu will actually need a seal(s), considering that you lack a doujutsu capable of casting through simple eye contact. Based off description alone, it appears limited to affecting sight.

    Lag
    Bring it down to two seconds, considering the multiple possibilities one more second could give you. And it needs a post count limit.

    Counter Stance
    Limit to prediction of a possible sword movement but if you're aiming for capabilities similar to what the sharingan grants, such a skill is impossible.
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Sengoku on Sat Dec 01, 2012 9:17 am

    Ah, ok....Removed the Samurai Sabre Technique. Done with lag and Counter stance.

    Added handseals to "Everything is not what it seems"
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Nocturne on Sat Dec 01, 2012 11:53 am

    "Lag" also needs a seal for activation. I meant for my post to cover genjutsu in general, sorry.


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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Sengoku on Sun Dec 02, 2012 2:58 am

    Added. Although, I thought Genjutsu doesn't usually need handseals?
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Nocturne on Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:59 am

    I stated the reason in my first post. Where are your edits to the techniques? The description appears the same as before.


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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Sengoku on Sun Dec 02, 2012 9:53 am

    I placed "Yes" in the handseals section. Changed the description too. If there's anything else, or if that's not what you mean, can you please explain more?
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    Re: Shichiyou, Sengoku

    Post by Nocturne on Tue Dec 04, 2012 9:23 am

    I'm sorry. I did not think to look at your jutsu list, as I had looked at the post that included just those three techniques.

    Anyway, you are approved.

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