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    Post by Naizu Nimakee Mon Nov 19, 2012 2:45 am

    Name: Naizu Nimakee

    Nickname/Alias: The Storm of the Clouds , The Canine Sage

    Weight: 205 *

    Height: 6'1*
    Age: 24*

    Gender: Male
    Medium length straight hair, Blue Vest, Black T-shirt, Black pants, Black Boots, Black sleeveless trench coat with dark blue waves (from to dripping to bottom)

    Personality: Naizu is a calm,competetive, calulated and caring individual. His fierceness is instantly brought during battles whether sparring or life threating. He will interviene at the earliest convienience to protect one he cares for and out of battle he is easy to get along with.


    Clan Name: Nimakee Clan

    Kekei Genkai:Name: Oakegon
    Rank: Ranges from B-S depending on stage (awakening sight:B Piercing Mind:A Heavens Vision:S)
    Element:Water
    Description: Oakegan: genjutsu(3 stages have been noted in the clans history but there is a legend that 2 more exist. The possessors genjutsu is based on fear and elemental nature) 1st: Awakening Sight 2nd: Piercing Mind and 3rd: Heavens Vision


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    Clan History: The nimakees are a middle class clan with extrodanary ability. The Founder of the clan, Gero Nimakee was know for his ruthless Genjustsu and was the first to posses the Oakegan. The Nimakees were and typically are hired as hidden gaurds for their stealth.As the founder and leader, Gero held overwelming pride but a gentle heart. He and his wife Nikko were very competitive and were known to at times split the clan into two seprate groups for sparring sessions. But on the third annual event, something amazing transpired. was so fierce, it'd awakend and pushed nikko's Oakegon into the second stage or the "piercing mind". Amongst this revalation, the format of the session turned to tournament style and occured once every 6 mon. The 3rd stage revealed in the tenth annual event, exactly one week after gave birth to their first child, Neirai. Rouge ninja attacked the clan under orders of a fuedel lords orders whom had gotten word of the the extent of the extent of the clans extraordinary kekkei genkei. The nimakees defended their territory and defeated all of the enemy...except one. Unknown to any of them, one ninja thought to be defeated because of the motionless body struck. Taking a kunai from the ground he bolted toward the infinte. Nikko saw him and gave up her body as well as her life to save her child. Amongst seeing the first drop of blood, the third stage, Heavens vision was awakened in Gero. Not only did Gero kill the ninja, he took on the task of finding the man respondsible and destroyed him and the shinobi who tried to protect him. Gero never married again and after his passing some 18 years later, his Neirai, assumed leadership of the clan. Under him the Nimakees have stayed on a low profile but were known throughout the land for they're abilities and were rarely challenged. Neirai still reins as leader some 20 years after his fathers passing and had 2 sons,now age 21 morbokai and a prodigy son named naizu,now age 24.

    Rank Information:
    Rank: Mizukage

    Village: Hidden Mist

    Skill Information:Excels in stealth, uses steam style jutsu through his complete master over the water and fire elements. Often uses cainine forms for basis of jutsu.

    Skill Specialty: Main:Genjutsu Sub: Ninjutsu Sub:Tai

    Elemental Affinity: Main: Water Sub: Fire

    Special Characteristics:Excels at improvising, Mastery of Clones and uses some steam based jutsu.

    JUTSTU:

    FIRE
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    WATER

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    STEAM:

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    DOUJUTSU:

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    ELEMENTAL COMBINATION JUTSU'S


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    Genjutsu:

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    NON ELEMENTAL
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    History/Background Story:
    Naizu Nimakee was born to a mid class clan,
    Academy arc: Naizu was a high prospect amongst the overseers of the cloud village acacdamy. At age 11 he was able to use genjutsu and at an accellerated rate, so much so that after less than two weeks in the academy, the moved him to genin

    Genin arc: Naizu never had a problem getting along with fellow students...personally. During sparring session however, he constantly pushed the buttons of his teammates for the fact that he never thought they were close to his level. Constantly toying with them using his genjutsu, he sessions never lasted more than a couple minutes.The raikage knew he needed to do something about this and decided to place Naizu in the chunin exams personally. Upon knowlege of this Naizu grew extatic and excited. But his excitement quickly turned to disapointment throughout the course of the exam. He blazed through to the finals and was never in any danger even then. But something snapped inside him during his bout in the finals as his opponent pointed into the crowd and started slandering the name of his clan out of frustration of his in ability to land more than one punch in succession on Naizu. Angered and insulted,he walked calmly into the now charging opponent, with his eyes closed. Just prior to a clear shot landing on him, his eyes opened and only a sea of darkness could be seen, his Oakegan had been awakened and the awakening sight was his oponents last. The enemy stopped, dropped and didn't move, Naizu was declared the winner.

    Chunnin Arc: Although becoming a chunnin, Naizu wasn't satasfied and started reqesting sparring matches with jounin and only to prepare for the annuall Nimakee tournament at that. Naizu was the prize of the Nimakees and the cloud at the age of 11. Nimakee won all of the annuall tourneys he took part in and at the age of 14 became a jounin.

    Jounin Arc: At this point in time Naizu was growing weary of his village and started to contemplate. Missions he was sent on were childs play for him, and he sought no reason to stay. "I have nothing against being here, I just want to be the best he thought to himself". That night, he set off, not knowing what he would do or where he'd go, he just packed and left. The Raikage tried to keep this underwraps and set jounin and anbu out to search for him but to no avail. Eventually word got around and the villiage began to mutter about the stunning transpirings. Hours after hearing the news, morbokai set foot, promising his father he'd bring back his brother, regardless how long it took.

    Missing nin Arc: 3yrs had passed since naizu took off in search to better himself as a ninja, and as he'd wished he'd improved to a higher level than one could hope. But during a training excercise one day, he found himself looking in on two shinobi battling. The movements, the appearence, the eyes, one of the shinobi he knew. It was his brother morbokai, fighting for his life. Morbokai had also improved a lot sense the two last saw each other but he was no match for this jounin. As the younger sibling swung, he was kicked fiercly through two trees and slammed into a third. As the jounin approached the still dazed brother for a final atack, naizu appeared, right infront of him. As morbokai came to his senses, he saw the enemy literally being dug into without being touched. This man in front of him, he knew it was his brother, but how much stronger had he gotten to do this type of damage? As the shinobi fell to the ground the younger sibbling sprang up, embracing the elder tightly. For hours the two traded stories and naizu explained why he left. "So you'll come back to the cloud"? he asked afterward. "No, not yet, but soon. Now head back home and tell father I'm ok". After that, with out a goodbye, the air got warm and steamy, everything was fogged, and when it dissapated, Naizu was gone, again.1 year later, Naizu steps foot into a country that hadn't held his presence in 4 long yrs..."I'm here, I'm back....I'm home"


    Jonin Arc (Second stint)*: 3 years had past when Naizu finally returned to the Cloud and things had changed, but only to a minor extint for the Raikage was still the same man known as Saruno. The only means of change that were shown for the most part were peoples age, their maturity, and a few places that were built where others were torn down. The return was bitter sweet for the young man because though he was gone, the fact that his brother did Naizu asked helped keep his name brought up for future leaders of the clan when his father was to step down. After a brief welcome back, the clans higher ups pulled Naizu to the side to explain to him something that no person wants to hear, his father had passed. During Naizu's absense, Nerai had fallen ill from an unexplained illness and held private with the matter, telling nobody but his most trusted men. He had die about a half year prior to Naizu's return and wished his eldest to resume leadership should he return. Though sad and remorseful to his father for not being there prior to his passing, he held pride in knowing that he would be able to protect his brother and clan with confidence. During this period however, he felt the need to further his skill set and enhance his overall abilities before taking the position. One day he got a message from someone to obtain something from a said location and during the venture, he was confronted by a powerful jonin named Kidate and a battle insued. The man said his reasoning was because he wanted to test the abilities of shinobi from his former village and awoke his fourth stage of KKG, however a twist in the battle brought another into play. An enourmous Canine by the name of Zeidius interupted the battle and began to speak rudely to the feline natured foe, and the fierceness of the conversation was returned equally on the otherside. Eventually, it was revealed that the two knew each other quite well in some way or another, and knew of Nerai as well for they battle alongside him. The fellow shinobi and the large dog then unsealed a curse seal on the young man and unlocked the second legendary stage of Oakegan in the "Defined Apprehension". After that, a time of training with the canine family and became the canine sage after months of studying, training and massive effort overall with enhancing all of his senses. Finally, he felt at the point he needed to be and assumed leadership of the clan and eventually linked up with a couple of peolple that would be influential in his life from there on out. A man that went by the name of Ki Willow would become his sensei and teach him a secondary source of energy that would allow him to excert even less chakra with that option. He also met a man known as Kostas Walker, this was a relationship that proceeded in his next phase of his life in a major way, for he learned a third set means of energy that ironically was call Ki.

    Kusagakure Arc (Kusakage)*: A few years removed from his return to the Cloud and his clan, Naizu was presented with an opportunity of becoming a leader of a small village that blossomed drastically with his arrival. He, along with his clan, moved to the village hidden in the grass and surprisingly enough, he had another that took the journey along side him. Kostas came with Naizu and became a Sanin there as well as an advisor with about a a fourth of the buisnes decisons and about fifty percent of his attire as the men were both heavy on the way the presented themselves. Leadership of a clan presented a great enough porton of will power and mental toughness, but being the leader of a country as well was...well it was a challenge above anything that Naizu had ever done. This came in handy however as he learned a new means of calm and allowed him to merge those things with those of battle and brought the man to a new level. In this time, his country was never threatened and allowed him to run things thoroughly and rather smoothly for the most part. Another opportunity presented itself a little later in his role as Kusakage, for one of the 5 great nations in Kiragakure, sent a shinobi to him and asking of his leadership role to become the Mizukage. During this time, Kostas had been offered a role as the Kazekage and promptly accepted it and the Country was in good spirits and graces. Leaving one of his trusted clansmen in the Kage seat, he proceeded with his move to the Mist, bringing the rest of his clan along with him.

    Missing Nin Arc: (Underway)

    Rp Sample:The thing about when you compress earth is that it will begin to crumble as it becomes compact in order to be as tight as possible. This would be the problem with the jutsu of Genkou's choice because though when its being made it may be silent, the excess rubble that's removed incidentally will drop. This would allow further reason for Naizu and the clone to depart from the current location as quickly as possible. With water on the ground still at a good 5 foot depth, that which drops would make a splashing noise and produce warning. Being the Sage of Canines, Naizu's hearing is enhanced and with the jutsu so close, he was able to detect problem early. Other reason for him to take leave was the look of some sort of energy expelling jutsu of what ever nature. With Genkous mouth wide, that seemed to be bad news naturally, though nothing seemed to be forming.

    With these reasons in mind, Naizu and the clone branched off and shot in opposite directions quickly. Naizu heading east of the jinchuriki and the clone heading west of him, both with an astounding rate of speed. The fact was that he was still with his chain of speed unlocked, it simply didn't take hardly any chakra due to him not using the speed. The speed of the Canine Clone was actually faster due to its natural quickness and it being created when Naizu first unlocked the chain of speed. As they reached a 10 foot mark away from the ball of earth, it exploded, though not harming them. "Oh you sneaky little bastard you" said Nai as he and the clone halted at roughly 40 feet from him in the east and west directions of him respectively. Taking note of the point of the receding water, Naizu didn't want to lose his advantage of water removing away a lot of the jutsu options of the one-tail. Quickly, Naizu began to form hand seals in rapid succession.

    Placing his hand to the water, a tsunami sized wave arose quickly and creating a large shadow of the wall of water that would head to its target. Atop it was Naizu, arms folded and simply enjoying the ride as its massive body began its descent upon Genkou. This water was not like the previous jutsu, for it had a mass of heat to it to the point of overly scorching temperature. The jutsu's focus was to wipe away the option of sand or loose dirt that Gen would be able to utilize anytime soon. As the wave came down, another swipe of paw came toward the Kage forcing him once more into a predicament. The clone made its way to a liquid like stage and merged with the water, utilizing the same jutsu as Naizu had when the "Torrential Deposition" was used and upon the crashing of the wave, it would find itself behind were the jutsu began. Steam perfusely emitted itself from the water at this point and had now added an additional fifty to sixty feet of water to the surface now. "Where are you earth rodent" Naizu said in his head awaiting the outcome of his latest plan, arms folded and eyes searching.
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    Post by Nocturne Mon Nov 19, 2012 10:29 am

    This isn't finished, correct?
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    Post by Naizu Nimakee Tue Nov 20, 2012 1:46 am

    I can't find my summons, they're gone from NX in the revamped form. Opposite that, what else is needed?
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    Post by Nocturne Tue Nov 20, 2012 11:33 am

    Have you checked your summons thread? Though they are present in the other app you had. Anyway, you have to follow the new template and the guidelines.

    Plus your appearance and personality are far below that of a genin app.
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    Post by Naizu Nimakee Thu Nov 22, 2012 11:08 pm

    I honestly recall being told we could just transfer the apps, so I hadn't even gave second looks toward personality and what not. The fact of the matter is the app still isn't as I remember it but its the most recent that I can find. I'm missing arcs and I'm not able to go through and find all that I need to in order to do that. If I absolutely have to, whats the word minimum for missing nin or upper ranked shinobi?
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    Post by Nocturne Sat Nov 24, 2012 6:18 am

    There isn't an official minimum that we follow but the word count provided for personality and appearance is far below acceptable. For S-Rank, three paragraphs sounds good. Please note that Mizukage is not an available position as it is held by Revy.

    I'll search through NX for your beloved application. Shouldn't be too hard, I'm sure.

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