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    Makai Kasai

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    Makai Kasai

    Post by Akumunoyami on Fri Jul 02, 2010 8:34 am

    ~General Information~

    Name: Makai Kasai

    Nickname/Alias: Diablo (Devil)
    Weight: 85 kg

    Height: 7'5 foot

    Age: 28

    Gender: Male

    Appearance:
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    Clothing:Regular Gear

    Makai Kasai is 7'2 foot tall with long black silk hair that reaches down to his knees. he holds it up in a black pony tail that reaches mid back. Makai kasai is dressed in black silk trousers and a long sleeved white shirt that is unbuttoned to show off his well developed athletic body. His skin is pale white and his eyes are dark gray. His pupils are black and slitted. His face is always in a nuetral position giving him an intimidating appearance. He carries a long Muramasa (Japanese cursed sword) on his back.

    He wears black sandals with white socks. Around his neck he wears a chained necklace with an emerald at the bottom. On his right hand an assortment of rings five rings one on each finger. On his thumb a ruby, index finger a sapphire, middle a topaz, ring a diamond and pinkie and amythyst. His entire body is covered back to front his hundreds of battle scars and burns.

    Additional Outfits: 3 belts around his waist for pouches and another belt aorund his waist containing nothing but scrolls. Four holsters on his right leg containing shuriken, kunai, senbon needles and more. Two back pouches and six hip pouches three on each side. A jounin Flask Jacket over top

    Personality: Makai Kasai is a very calm and collected individual. Makai's face is always in a nutreal position making it impossible to read his movements. He speaks in a monotone voice prefering not to show any sort of emotion. He enjoys being by himself and dislikes noise. makai can switch from his cold nature to a violent one when he is disturbed by loud noise. he dispises crowds and prefers to be by himself.

    Makai is a thinker he will think before he acts. He always calculates the situation before making a move. Makai will becareful of his opponent making every move percise and deadly. he will assess them and find their weakness before he strikes. When he does he will go for their vitals at the first sign striking quickly.


    ~Clan Information~

    (Is from two clans one non bloodline users and the other bloodline Canon Clan. Is in history why)

    Clan Name: Kasai Clan

    Kekei Genkai: - None uses a style of sword combat

    Clan Symbol: The symbol of the Kasai is a shield with the kanji for lightning, fire, earth, wind and water engraved around a sword in the middle.Going through the shield are two long blades forming an X shape. The symbol is tattoed on the right shoulder of each member or their left shoulder. The shield is black, the swords red and the kanji white

    Clan History: The Kasai clan is a group of Shinobi that specialise in the art of kenjutsu Sword Techniques. They came together from one man whom created a kenjutsu style known as the SHinpantouryuu or Judgement Sword Style a technique known as flawless and perfect. He passed his technique onto two pupils each once mastered his style were told to recreated it for their own purpose. The original created put his style down in a scroll as did his pupils.

    His pupils took up two of their own teaching them their style and their masters then telling them to recreate it to suit them. So this technique passed down through history like a family tree each with one master and two pupils each branching off creating different styles of it placing them down in scrolls so future generations could learn. Each adding a different technique to the style as it is passed down.

    Those that learnt the technique decided to create a clan the Kasai clan. They joined together intergrating those they taught into the clan. Until they came to Konoha and rested their apssing their techniques down onto their children and one outside student. The clan separated with each pupil taken in spreading over the world going to different villages. the main clan residing in konoha now only down to a few members. The current leader for the Konoha Kasai is Makai Kasai

    Ability Summary:

    Name: Shinpantouryuu
    Rank: A
    Element: Fire, Earth, Wind, Lightning, Water depending on users elements
    Description: The SHinpanyouryuu or Judgment Sword Style is a style of sword combat that is called Perfect and Flawless. It is known as the strongest or one of the strongest sword styles. it is passed down through generations of swordsman being taught. Each of those that are taught then go out and modify the style for themselves so know one style is the same. They then go out and teach their style, the original style and the style they were taught to a pupil whom then recreates it for themselves and does the same passing it down. Like a family tree gaining many branches. It is a style of Kenjutsu combining Nijutsu and Kenjutsu


    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Jounin

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Konoha

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Kenjutsu
    • Sub: Fuuinjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Wind
    • Main: Earth
    • Sub:

    Special Characteristics: Is incredibly tall for a human

    ~Jutsu~

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    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:

    Birth Ark

    Makai Kasai was born in Konohagakure the hidden leaf village. His parents were both Jounin class Shinobi. His father was from a clan of swordsmen while his mother was not. They met in Konoha when his clan was migrating to Konoha. The two fell in love at a young age falling for one another and later when they were in their twenties married and nine months later Makai was born.

    Academy Ark:

    Makai was trained by his parents from the tender age of 3 being taught how to wield a sword from a very young age. His parents made him read every night before going to bed. They taught him to read, write, walk and talk from a young age. Teaching him how to be a shinobi till he joined the academy at age 8. He joined bu tended to stay by himself never talking to anyone nor going near anyone. makai studied in class ignoring his teachers as most of what they were teaching him he had already learnt from his parents when he was 5. makai was always bored during his academy days so he often skipped to train by himself away from eyes as he trained himself in Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Kenjutsu.

    Genin Ark:

    Makai graduated early for his age at the age of 10. Makai joined a Jounin team under his father along with two other genin. Makai though continued to stick to himself ignoring his team-mates even against his fathers wishes as he trained by himself only ever joining his team on missions. Makai the only time he even talked to his team-mates was when he had to on missions or orders by his father

    Chunnin Ark:

    Makai became a Chunin at the age of 15. His father wanting him to wait till he was 15 before he became one. At that time Makai was two techniques away from from completeing the Shinpantouryuu and recreating it for himself like his father and every other Kasai before him. Makai flew through the CHunin exam acing the first two exams and heading onto the third exam. he decimated the competition. Makai rose through each battle defeating each foe making it to the finals. makai fought against his own team-mate and crushed his tea-mate without mercy. he did it with strategy and careful planing giving him the rank of a CHunin. From that day on he did missions by himself never going with a team. Completing C to A class missions by himself doing what ever it took to grow stronger. Fighting every battle regardless of the cost.

    Jounin Ark:


    At the age of 19 Makai took the Jounin exams by himself. At that time he had finished his training in the SHinpantouryuu and recreated it to suit his style of fighting and his elements. With this new style completely designed he raced through the exam defeating each of his opponents crushing them without mercy. Makai became a Jounin as he passed his test with flying colours and little difficulty. Makai quickly became known as the Diablo from his missions. he became the A class Ninja Diablo for his kills leaving no battle field un bloodied also becoming known as 'blood bath Makai'. he is known as the Diablo or devil Diablo or Devil thanks to his hellish skull mask he wears and swift kills. All Makai knows is the Shinobi life nothing more nothing else. He follows everything by the book.

    Roleplay Sample:

    (Rp Sample is a post from another Naruto site)

    Makai Kasai stood in the fields of Stage one. His long muramasa attached over his back. Numerous scrolls on his belt. He slowly bent to the ground and sat down on the earth. He took off one of the scrolls slowly unrolling it and began to read from it slowly. The males blood red eyes scanned over each text every last word carefully. He was learning to use his clan’s style of Kenjutsu the Shinpantouryuu judgement sword style. He had completed the fighting style now he was learning to master the techniques. He was starting from the top with an A class Technique the Shinpantouryuu Joushou ryuu or Rising Dragon Technique of the Judgement Sword.

    Slowly getting to his feet he unsheathed his long Muramasa. It gleamed in the sunlight shining brightly. His shirt fluttered open. He ignored the cold breeze on his chest. It was early morning the perfect time to train. Looking over the scroll he looked over each paragraph each detailed paragraph explaining how to use this technique. Makai hitched his muramasa onto his shoulder shutting his eyes slowly pushing his chakra inside of his blade. His muramasa glowed with blue chakra as he slowly raised the blade into the air.

    He turned towards a tree. Placing the blade at the ground he charged forward. His blade tearing through the ground as he charged the tree, 'Shinpantouryuu: Joushou Ryuu (Sword of Judgement: Rising Dragon)!” he leapt up into the air and swung his blade. But as he did his chakra exploded sending him flying through the air and crashing into the ground. He coughed as he landed in the dirt. He blinked in surprised coughing in annoyance.

    Makai slowly climbed to his feet and dusted himself off. He looked at his Muramasa and shook his head in annoyance. Raising it he pushed more chakra into it and thinned it out this was going to be more difficult then he thought. He crouched getting into position and charged the tree again. The blade tore through the ground as he charged the tree head on, ‘Shinpantouryuu: Joushoru Ryuu (Sword of Judgement: Rising Dragon)!” He leapt up into the air. The shun shining off his blade and he swung downwards. The chakra sliced right through the tree but nothing actually happened. He blinked again as he landed on the ground.

    Scoffing in annoyance he walked over to the scroll and picked it up. He began to read over it his eyes scanning the pages of the scroll looking over the technique grumbling as he tried to figure out what he was doing wrong. He needed to master this style if he ever thought on passing it onto a student. It would be shameful if the clan leader didn’t know how to use these techniques.

    Hitching the blade he pushed chakra once again into the tip of his blade. Chakra glowed brightly as he pushed more and more in. He condensed his chakra laying it across his blade as he readied himself, “Shinpantouryu: Joushou Ryuu (Sword of Judgement: Rising Dragon)!” He flew forward tearing his muramasa through the earth as he closed the distance between himself and yet another tree that would be destroyed soon. Leaping up into the air he swung his blade. Chakra erupted from his blade. A small dragon head erupted from the blade only to roar and explode in a violently explosion of chakra.

    Makai shouted out in pain as he was sent flying into a rock. The jounin hit the rock causing it to crumble debris falling around him, “damn that hurt.” Makai slowly climbed to his feet and dusted himself off. He looked at his chest a number of new cuts were in place. He shrugged his shoulders. Dusting himself off again he walked over to where his sword had fallen. He picked it up the muramasa blade gleamed as chakra was pushed into it, ‘This is harder than I thought.”

    Lifting his blade he raised it high in the air channelling chakra into the tip and swung downwards releasing an arc of chakra that sliced through a rock, ‘That’s easier to do than this.” Grumbling he walked back to the middle of the training field pushing chakra into his blade again ‘Alright let’s try this again Shinpantouryuu!” Makai charged chakra into his blade making it glow brightly. Strands of chakra erupted from the blade cloaking Makai’s entire body. He readied himself into the stance, “Joushou Ryuu (Rising Dragon)!”

    Makai charged forward tearing his blade through the ground. He pushed chakra into his feet pushing off the ground increasing his speed as he raced at the tree. His eyes narrowing as he pushed more chakra into his blade shaping it. Makai leapt into the air and swung his blade in a downward arc. A massive serpentine blue dragon of chakra erupted from the tip giving a loud roar. The beast flew through the air towards the forest of trees. It tore through them. Makai landed and shot straight through the beast his blade cleaving through it as chakra spiralled around him.

    Makai flew forward inside he beast and swung his blade downward. The chakra beast roared and ploughed through the forest destroying hundreds of trees turning them to saw dust as it ploughed through them. Makai was panting slightly as he planted his sword into the ground, ‘To much chakra I think.” He raised his blade and cut himself across his thumb drawing blood. Blood trickled down his blade before he flicked it off and sheathed it. Makai walked over to his scroll and gathered it up, ‘That’s enough for today I have a team to meet.” Makai ran off heading to his team.


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    Re: Makai Kasai

    Post by Echo on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:08 pm

    Your clan is your Kekkei Genkai. You cant have 2.


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    Re: Makai Kasai

    Post by Akumunoyami on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:09 pm

    My clan is my kekkai genkai? But he only has one Kekkai Genkai not two
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    Re: Makai Kasai

    Post by Echo on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:13 pm

    You edited the template and extended the length to partially fit a second clan in. On top, it says your a type of swordsmen known as the Kasei Clan. On bottom, it say's your a hyuuga. You need to choose one.


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    Post by Akumunoyami on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:13 pm

    So i can't have a character from two clans
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    Post by Echo on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:14 pm

    Nope. That would give you multiple abilities, or styles that only one specific clan would offer which isn't allowed.


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    Post by Akumunoyami on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:18 pm

    There edited. I think i removed most of the Hyuuga stuff
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    Re: Makai Kasai

    Post by Echo on Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:03 pm

    Name: Shinpantouryuu

    It say's it is a style that combines Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu, but you don't have ninjutsu. You also need to put more info into what they style does.

    Your sub element is a combination element only. you can only have 2 main elements, if your elements don't combine to make a sub element.


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