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    Arphee Cloud

    Posts : 22
    Ryō : 2457
    Join date : 2010-07-22
    Age : 26
    Location : Philadelphia

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    Village: Kirigakure
    Letter Rank: S
    Classification: Mizukage

    Arphee Cloud [Approved]

    Post by Arphee Cloud on Thu Jul 22, 2010 7:52 am

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    ~General Information~

    Name: Arphee Cloud

    Nickname/Alias: N/a

    Weight: 250 Lbs

    Height: 6’4

    Age: 23

    Gender: Male

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    A former Yuuen Tatsujin (Grand Master) of his clan, (Denkiteki Aoi Ken) the characteristics of his bloodline damaged by the plague around him, His pale skin now graying ever so slightly, his pitch black hair now a twisted midnight blue, and his turquoise eyes, now dark sapphires.

    Though his characteristics warped, his appearance in general hadn’t changed, despite the famine and disease known to ravage the black sands Arphee kept his bear like appearance, keeping meat on his bones, and plenty of muscle underneath it, His long straight hair always unkempt and sticking out in several places, His perfectly trimmed chin-strap beard still razor sharp, his thin eyebrows straight and mellow, and his eyelashes thick like a woman’s.


    Clothing:
    Even before the decimation of his clan Arphee had abandoned their customs swapping out the tight fit Blue and White scale armor for black and green loose fitting robes and shirts. It wasn’t until the start of the plague that he outfitted himself with proper clothing.

    Now wearing dark black loose fit cloth kimono pants, with a matching cloth sash and belt holding his 42” High Carbon katana on the left side, and his 3 Specially designed Kunai of the right, A lighter black torn cloth GI both with several secret pockets and pouches on the inside to conceal Scrolls, Weapons, and various other accessories. A black with dark green trim Kevlar half vest with high carbon plating on the inside, with a matching glove and arm guard set. (Kevlar material is 5x stronger than steel in weight comparison, it has no melting point (But disintegrates at 13k+ Fahrenheit), and doesn’t conduct electricity at all) a light green cloth scarf (For good luck), and a flashy grey cloth cape.

    Additional Outfits:
    It is not uncommon for Arphee to bring miscellaneous gear into battle, often dressing for occasions and planning ahead, in his outfits many pockets lay multiple scrolls all filled with various odds and ends, outfits and other gear. Arphee is well known to use these scrolls before performing his Gaidoku Gappe technique. Occasionally Arphee will wear a black and grey hat mocking the style of the “Kage” hats, with the character “Kuroi” (Black) painted in the center.

    Personality:

    Growing up Arphee had always been looked at as somewhat of an oddball, Though he had quick wits, was the best of his classes, and was the youngest person to ever achieve the rank of grandmaster, Though somewhat sullen at most times from fighting his own eccentric nature, always thinking before he talks and stop himself from engaging is his usual ticks like pulling on his beard, eyeing women, and impatiently tapping his feet/fingers.

    It’s because of this constant charade that people are often caught off guard by his mood swings- as soon as he starts loosing focus the crazy starts leaking from his mouth, hitting on women, making sarcastic remarks, pitching seemingly insane ideas, the complete opposite of what most people think of him.

    Despite his passive aggressive inner nature, loud mouth, and offensive thoughts, Arphee dislikes arguments and fighting, and almost always keeps his cool, However like all people, he has his rough spots, certain things just push his buttons- he’s known to have a strong sense of justice, and is quite over protective of his friends, betrayal plunges him into a berserk rage.

    He has a soft spot for kunoichi, taking them lightly, and avoiding fighting them at all costs, when attacked by females he has a tendency to attack less and attempt to use Bind-type jutsu, unless fearful for his own life, even in worst case scenarios, he will always avoid hitting kunoichi’s vitals.

    Arphee has a tendency toy with ninja who use water-type attacks, no one quite knows why, it is said once he took on the full blast of a Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu unscathed, then continued to heckle the combatant saying “Mommy can I have more milk” clearly showing his antipathy.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Legendary Blue Blades

    Kekkei Genkai: Denkiteki Aoi Ken (Legendary Blue Blade)

    Clan Symbol:
    Spoiler:

    Clan History:

    The clans’ history pre-dates the third great shinobi war. Though the clans’ origin is a bit fuzzy they are descendants of a now extinct Hidden mist clan destroyed during the water countries bloodline massacre, it is said that days before the attack on the former clans mountain stronghold several ninja escorted the clans women and children to safety in the land of whirlpools, the survivors lived in secrecy dropping their titles and abilities until the destruction of the whirlpool country, the few, now old shinobi took up arms to protect their new home.

    The youngest of the remaining was tasked with escorting civilians to the nearby fire country whom the whirlpool had deep ties with, the whirlpool country fell and many of the clans former members scattered across the continent few remaining in the fire country, the last remaining shinobi was said to have traveled to the earth country to seek refuge with his wife at the start of the third great war.

    It is said that this man, the last bloodline user of the former clan was the one who spread the bloodlines genealogy however it is unknown if any of the other children or women had the kekkei genkai, or partial genes to give birth to users.

    He settled down into a backwater-mountain town in the eastern outskirts. Many years after his death one of his three children Mizaku descended the mountain aspiring to become a ninja. The other two, Mizaku’s brother Roka and his sister Sumi both married and had several children. Mizaku never married, but also had quite a few children. After several years he returned to his home village to see how his family had been doing, he didn’t stay long, but in his stay he confided in his brother about his abilities, and even showed him how to turn water into ice. Mizaku returned to the hidden and was slain months after in a B rank mission.

    It is said that Roka began practicing and using his bloodline ability in the years after, its said that he had someone buy him a book about chakra and jutsu during one of the village traders trip to the land below which enabled him to further use his abilities.

    Roka taught himself, his sister, and their children how to use and manipulate the ice, and how to even do some water techniques, in time many of the villagers began to watch them use these techniques and even attempted to learn them too, however, no matter how hard they managed, they were unable to do it.. Like their father before them they taught their children and their children’s children, each generation perfecting their abilities more and more.

    It wasn’t until Naiya Cloud’s research and experimentation paid off that the now broad network of Ice users began using Jutsu. As the first person to teach and perform actual Jutsu she developed 12 Sword based jutsu, and deemed herself, and the others able to use ice “Denkiteki Aoi-Ken’s” Legendary Blue Blades, and began teaching many of the early clansman the abilities. Though unconfirmed there had always been rumors of her making a pact with Snow leopards she had done genealogical research on, because of her eccentric nature, constant babbling, and odd actions that this was shrugged off.

    Naiya was the first to discover the details of the bloodlines inner workings, people of her likeness had an unusual chakra than when cast from the body could freeze even air, though many outsiders assumed it to be simple element manipulation, It was much more.
    By using the special properties of their chakra the legendary Blue blades were able to create Snow and ice out of the moisture in air, the and the water composition of their own bodies, their enemies, animals, and even plants.

    After extracting water and turning it to ice or snow by binding their chakra with it they were able to manipulate it, this in conjunction with conventional hand seals made shape transformation much easier while drastically lessening the amount of chakra needed to perform jutsu, because of this chakra binding the users chakra stayed within the snow until it melts, and in cases where large amounts of chakra were used after melting, because of this Blue blades were known to re use ice and snow drastically cutting down chakra usage, as well as to absorb their chakra out of the snow they had created.

    It is said when Naiya attempted to ask the Yondaime Tsuchikage for the annexation of her clan, she barged into his office, and nearly killed his entire personal guard during the misunderstanding, despite the death of his guard he, dumbfounded by the sheer skill and odd abilities he had seen, accepted, he even agreed to give minimal aid to the small village, as well as bend the guidelines for many things in their favor, this is assumed to be because of Naiya’s womanly charm.

    Naiya lived a short life, dyeing at the age of 27 attempting to perfect a new jutsu, freezing herself into solid ice. It was because of this she was deemed the Touketsu Kami (Frozen God). Her workshop was cleared out and turned into a shrine, for people to remember her likeness and deeds.

    Despite her young death she accomplished a great many deeds developing nearly forty jutsu herself, Identifying and detailing the effects of her bloodline, Partially Allying the Hidden Rock, Hollowing out Mt. Kyuuijoi, Creating the Great Ice Elevator to the base of the mountain.

    Because of her feats her two children were treated with respect until they were older, many of the clans’ inhabitants were baffled by her children’s inability to use Ice jutsu. Despite going on to become decent water ninja, the Cloud name fell from notice.

    The partnership with the Hidden Rock paid off allowing the village to learn a great deal more jutsu, and adopt several of the systems other clans had used, over time they had developed a pseudo academy, adopted countless jutsu from other countries, and became a major player in the rock countries commerce.

    The clans ranking system differed from the hidden rocks standard Student-Kage system; however those who allied themselves as official rock ninja were cast from their clan rank and adopted their ranks.

    The Denkiteki Aoi Ken clans system was as follows: Tane, (Seed) Toukan, (Frost) Tenka (Snow) Koori (Ice) Yobigoe, (Hale) Hiyayaka Ikko, (Cold One) Tatsujin, (Master) Yuuen Tatsujin (Grand Master) and Touketsu Kami (Frozen God) (Will go into more detail in actual clan template)

    The title of “Frozen god” was only ever attained by two people Naiya Cloud, for her various endeavors, and Mizorea Osore, who single handedly repelled an invading fire country army using her lives work “Arbitrary Tundra”

    All clan members are taught a few techniques during training and upon graduation of the academy. The Jutsu tough to all students and graduates are as follows:

    Spoiler:
    Name: Ice Style : Reactive Freezing Armor
    Rank: B
    Element: Ice
    Description: While focusing on their own body the user performs the dog hand seal as the air directly above their body becomes crisp and cold though this manipulation the user creates a quick-reactant armor that can block attacks of up to B rank depending on the users rank. This jutsu wears off after being hit. Once as a Genin, Twice as a Jounin, and Three times at A rank and higher.

    Name: Ice Style: Ice walk
    Rank: D
    Element: Ice
    Description: The user concentrates chakra to their feet in a constant stream or in small burst anchoring them to the surface which they touch, due to the nature of the legendary blue blades chakra when running on trees and walls the user leaves a thin layer of ice that enemies may slip on, when standing on water blocks of ice may be created under the users feet, it is possible to use this technique to create ice to jump off of mid air.

    Name: Ice Style: Ice Creation
    Rank: E
    Element: Ice
    Description: The user injects their chakra into the air moisture, water, or already existing snow near and around them freezing it and warping the ices shape to their will.

    Name: Ice Style: Snow Creation
    Rank: E
    Element: Ice
    Description: The user injects their chakra into the air moisture, or water near and around them creating snow which is warped by their will, it is possible for the user to transform ice into snow by using their chakra to warp it.

    Other jutsu were taught depending on the students classes, Mt Kyuuijoi’s academy had several specialization classes, Kenjutsu, Advanced Kenjutsu, Water Style Ninjutsu, Wind Style Ninjutsu, Ice Style Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Advance Taijutsu, Poison Arts and Strategy were just a few.

    The clans Yuuen Tatsujin form main government of the town, each of the 12 grandmasters are tasked with one central governmental duty, each grandmaster had a large scale of people working under them, it was unusual for Masters to work under grandmasters however due to their constant missions.
    Up until the Fifth great shinobi war the clan had maintained minimal contact with the hidden rock, however when war came many of the village’s ninja took up arms in fear of being targeted anyway. Despite the combined force of Mt. Kyuuijoi and the Hidden Rock, the earth country fell.

    In the aftermath Mt. Kyuuijoi was seen as a distant extension of the hidden rock. The mountain was finally targeted and attacked by a large army of shinobi from the fire country. Despite their large size the army was decimated by the second frozen god Mizorea Osore’s final attack, in which she used every last bit of her chakra and life force performing her ultimate jutsu, “The Arbitrary Tundra” Upon the defeat of the army the Yuuen Tatsujin dispatched a team to declare Neutrality with the other villages, and to denounce their tie with the Earth country, becoming its own entity

    Ability Summary:

    The Legendary Blue Blades bloodline is unique in several characteristics, Their ice manipulation seemingly isn’t a combination elements, instead it is caused by their unusual chakra, Blue blades chakra if not controlled properly when in use can freeze the user into a solid Diamond hard blue ice.

    Despite this, clan members who were not born with Water and Wind based chakra usually didn’t posses this odd chakra, and further more, in some families the genes skipped several generations.

    A great majority of the clans ice techniques were developed by former clan scholars to harness the bloodlines abilities maximum potential.

    By using their odd chakra and infusing Air, Water, Snow, and any other water containing objects, the user can manipulate them using their chakra. Unlike conventional jutsu where the chakra is used as a medium to move, shape, and change the form / element, the clans chakra literally Binds with water giving them complete control.

    By implementing conventional jutsu technique to the mix a nearly limitless amount of options became available, eventually these possibilities were drawn upon and many scholars began attempting to discover ways to further take advantage of their chakras unique properties.

    Through this research several things were discovered, the infused chakra could be leached back out of snow and ice by putting more chakra near it acting as a magnet, literally sucking it in, when made unstable the chakra would freeze into an odd substance unidentifiable by conventional science, and that when Absorbed, sealed, or directly touched by someone lacking the genetic requirements to control it, it would begin freezing it into that substance.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Kuraikage

    Letter Rank: S

    Village: Kurogakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Kenjutsu
    • Sub: Ninjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Wind
    • Main: Water
    • Sub: Ice


    Special Characteristics:

    Extremely Large Chakra Pool
    Spoiler:
    Arphee has always had an Extremely Large Chakra pool for someone at each of his ranks and levels, as a Tenka (genin level) he was able to perform many B rank jutsu, this trend holds true even now.

    Master Strategist
    Spoiler:
    Arphee was born a strategist often predicting enemy movement and using several layer attacks to almost always ensure a hit. Because of his ability to predict movements, unskilled ninja often mistake his mental prowess for Esp.

    Quick Learner
    Spoiler:
    Arphee had always been thought of as a prodigy for his ability to learn and create new Jutsu, because of this he often will create variations of other jutsu he encounters and expand upon them, Arphee is always at work creating new jutsu, and is known to create new techniques during battles in the heat of the moment.

    Excellent Chakra Control
    Spoiler:
    Arphee has nearly flawless chakra control, said to be able to perform jutsu with the perfect amount of chakra, with none wasted 99.99% of the time, it is assumed he honed his control skills while developing elemental medical jutsu, however that is just a rumor.

    ~Jutsu~

    Ice Jutsu

    Spoiler:
    Name: Forbidden Art: Ice Style : Arbitrary Tundra
    Rank: S
    Element: Ice
    Description: The user creates two Ice Style: Shadow Clones, or in conjunction with two other Clan members perform three separate sets of hand signs, upon completion the earth shakes violently as the ground within a 50KM radius freeze over, the skies turn a bleak white color, and massive amounts of snow and needle like hail pour from the sky directly targeting the opponent(s).

    The air in the area becomes so crisp and cold that breathing becomes nearly impossible, and the temperature drops to arctic levels, slowly a wall of ice begins rising around the perimeter.

    The wind picks up gusting with the strength of B rank wind techniques throwing snow and hail in every direction, as the ground continues to rumble as spikes of ice begin to shoot at the enemy target(s) from the ground and rising walls almost blacking out the dark sky above.

    Anything that hits the user(s) turn to light wet snow and their chakra bound with the ice/snow seeps back into them

    Name: Ice Style : Dragon of the Tundra
    Rank: S
    Element: Ice Description: After performing the necessary hand signs the user converts the surrounding ice, snow, water, and air moisture into a large seemingly solid dragon, the large dragon speed at the opponent crashing into them or the ground, after hitting something the dragon will do one of two things 1, Successful hit, disburse into thousands of ice senbon striking the target, 2, Unsuccessful hit, Turn to snow forming several smaller faster dragons before solidifying and chasing the target again. If the small dragons miss they disburse into hundreds senbon each that shoot at the target for one last attack.

    Name: Ice Style: Final Coat, Diamond Glint
    Rank: A
    Element: Ice
    Description: The user performs the Dog hand seal while holding the grip of their sword before wiping the blade with incredible speed. The blade, water, and wind current quickly coats over with pure chakra which begins freezing into a deep blue diamond like substance. The Thick blue gaze shines and pulsates with such intensity that it leaves a blue motion blur effect in even broad daylight. It is rumored this Ice like glaze never melts, and is as sharp and hard as diamonds. This technique is used in conjunction with First Coat: Poisoned Glide, and Second Coat: Striking Gale

    Name: Ice Style : Flash Freeze Prison
    Rank: A
    Element: Ice
    Description: After completing the necessary seals the user performs an additional Dog seal pointed towards the enemy, transmitting large amounts of his chakra which lack onto the opponents arms legs and waist binding with their bodies water content instantly freezing over stopping them in their tracks. A small coat of ice begins to cover the rest of the boy until they are completely frosted over, if the target is already wet this jutsu is drastically amplified, and may accidentally kill a target.

    Name: Secret Art: Ice Style: Hardened Body, Armor Of Ice
    Rank: A
    Element: Ice
    Description: Using the unique properties of his bloodlines chakra Arphee Condenses his Body fat and muscles water content drastically hardening them into a metal like state. The water pulled from the muscle and fat content then coat his skin forming a thick layer of plate-like ice armor. The outer Ice layer can withstand the blast of a single A rank technique before shattering. The metal like Muscle and fat resist partial damage of all attacks B rank and lower. This jutsu can last several minutes depending on the temperature of the environment.

    Name: Ice Style: Trap of Eternal Rest, Frozen Nature Consumption Art
    Rank: A
    Element: Ice
    Description: Arphee Begins pumping out large amounts of chakra to every chakra point in his body preparing for an enemy attack, When then enemy attempts to Cut off chakra circulation, or absorb chakra he releases control of their chakra allowing it to begin freezing over into Deep blue diamond like ice, as the opponent begins absorbing or contacting his chakra it immediately begins violently rejecting and infecting the opponents chakra, slowly freezing over and damaging their Chakra circulatory system. Because of this Release it is possible for Arphee to damage his own chakra circulatory system in the process

    Name: Ice Style: Kage Bunshin
    Rank: B
    Element: Ice
    Description: Extremely Similar to the Kage Bunshin jutsu the users chakra is evenly distributed among the number of physical clones, due to the nature of Legendary Blue blades chakra the clones are ice natured, and are harder to destroy than normal shadow clones, Instead of the Tiger Ice style: kage bunshin uses the Dog seal..

    Name: Ice Style: Instantaneous Substitution Art
    Rank: B
    Element: Ice
    Description: This jutsu requires no hand seals, instead the user focuses on their chakra center before getting hit by an attack, almost instantaneously the Physical users chakra an already existing clone’s switch places instantly dispersing the original clone.

    Name: Ice Style : Reactive Freezing Armor
    Rank: B
    Element: Ice
    Description: While focusing on their own body the user performs the dog hand seal as the air directly above their body becomes crisp and cold though this manipulation the user creates a quick-reactant armor that can block attacks of up to B rank depending on the users rank. This jutsu wears off after being hit. Once as a genin, twice as a Jounin, and Three times at A rank and higher. It is said Legendary blue blades users would use this jutsu before they slept to ensure their safety while traveling.

    Name: Ice Style: Ice Wall
    Rank: C
    Element: Ice
    Description: After performing the necessary seals a wall/Walls of ice rise in a direction(s) of the users choice.

    Name: Ice Style: Ice walk
    Rank: D
    Element: Ice
    Description: The user concentrates chakra to their feet in a constant stream or in small burst anchoring them to the surface which they touch, due to the nature of the legendary blue blades chakra when running on trees and walls the user leaves a thin layer of ice that enemies may slip on, when standing on water blocks of ice may be created under the users feet, it is possible to use this technique to create ice to jump off of mid air.

    Name: Ice Style: Ice Creation
    Rank: E
    Element: Ice
    Description: The user injects their chakra into the air moisture, water, or already existing snow near and around them freezing it and warping the ices shape to their will.

    Name: Ice Style: Snow Creation
    Rank: E
    Element: Ice
    Description: The user injects their chakra into the air moisture, or water near and around them creating snow which is warped by their will, it is possible for the user to transform ice into snow by using their chakra to warp it.

    Wind Jutsu

    Spoiler:
    Name: Wind Style: Striking Gale
    Rank: A
    Element: Wind
    Description: Still gripping the sword the user performs the Ram hand seal gripping the blade between both sets of their middle and index fingers, the blade coats over with Wind chakra creating a tsunami like coat in conjunction with First Coat: Poisoned glide. Drastically increasing sharpness and range, gusts of wind twister around the blade and its users. This technique can only be used in conjunction with First Coat: Poisoned Glide.

    Water Jutsu

    Spoiler:
    Name: Water Style: First Coat: Poisoned Glide
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: The user performs the Ox hand seal before drawing their blade and smashing a black container against it, the blade coats over with a murky purple-grey like water infused with Venom-type poison, When slashing the opponent they receive the same effects of Poison Art: Venom.

    Other Jutsu

    Spoiler:
    Name: Poison Art: Neurotoxin
    Rank: E
    Element: N/a
    Description: The user thrusts a Yellow container into or onto snow water or ice seeping the poison into it, allowing their attacks to infect opponents. Neurotoxins are most effective when inhaled,, though in the bloodstream it will still shut down nerves and make target very numb. This type of poison has no effect upon skin contact.

    Name: Poison Art: Venom
    Rank: E
    Element: N/a
    Description: The user thrusts a Black container into or onto snow water or ice seeping the poison into it, allowing their attacks to infect opponents. Venom is most effective when injected into the blood stream causing the opponents internal organs to drastically deteriorate causing them to spit up blood, upon skin contact it will irritate the skin making it incredibly itchy and burning. Venom has no effect when inhaled.

    Name: Poison Art: Cytotoxin
    Rank: E
    Element: N/a
    Description: The user thrusts a Green container into or onto snow water or ice seeping the poison into it, allowing their attacks to infect opponents. Cytotoxins are most effective In skin contact, causing skin to die, large amounts of abrasions, boils, as well as bleeding from pores. Cytotoxins are also somewhat effective when inhaled, causing the throat to swell making it nearly impossible to breathe. Cytotoxins have no effect in the bloodstream.

    Name: Poison Art: Gaidoku Gappie
    Rank: C
    Element: N/a
    Description: The user thrusts multiple Green, Black, and Yellow containers into the ice snow and water around them, the combination of Cytotoxins neurotoxins, and venom are effective at all three injection types ravaging the opponents body when Injected, touched, or inhaled. Due to the unique reaction between the three poisons the user will have the same damage done to them when inhaling touching or having the poison injected into them, despite their built up resistance.

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:

    A former member of the aspiring Earth country Denkiteki Aoi Ken clan, Arphee was the youngest member to ever reach the rank of Yuuen Tatsujin, a head government and a powerful ninja, he was the first of the Cloud surname to have the Bloodline limit since his great grandmother Naiya, the first Touketsu Kami, despite being the descendant of one of the clans greatest ninja, he was never highly regarded until his later years in the academy.

    In his time at the academy he had always had perfect grades, took extra classes, and often would go out of his way to out-do everyone around him, he graduated at the age of 7 after only two years of school, attaining the clan rank of Tenka.

    After this he began his own ruthless training regiments based on many of the writings, scrolls, and scribbles of his great grand mother that had been In storage learning her various jutsu, and perfecting many of her unfinished works. It wasn’t long before he skipped up two ranks to Yobigoe for knowledge of jutsu and fighting prowess.

    After mastering 34 of his grandmother’s techniques, and discovering the secrets behind Mizorea Osore’s arbitrary tundra he began developing his own jutsu’s. By the time he attained the rank of Yuuen Tatsujin he had perfected nearly 100 of his own Jutsu, as well as learnt countless other jutsu.

    Arphee had replaced the eldest council member, who unfortunately died a gruesome death inflicted by the sorrow weavers, along with a considerable amount of the village, corpses piled as high as houses all buried across the mountains base and summer, a great majority of the village lost, almost instantly.

    Arphee maintained normal life even after the death of more than half the clan, performing his duties admirably and still working on creating new jutsu in his spare time, much of his time off went into trying to find his great grandmothers summoning contract with her genetically altered Snow Leopard pack, but to no avail, he never did.

    It was during a routine trade pick up, the usual shipments of Carbon, Scroll paper, various poisons, food rations, clothing material, and various other assortments when the village finally met its doom. Three of Mt. Kyuuijoi’s usual juvenile delinquents took advantage of Arphee’s schedule, and the now extremely shorthanded village stealing several of his Jutsu information scrolls. The three traveled to the mountain summit to attempt to perform the greatest jutsu known to the clan the “Arbitrary tundra”.

    The three Koori performed the jutsu, nowhere near as powerful as it could have been, but the mountain wasn’t strong enough to hold, ravaged by the diseased bodies buried within its soils, and the lack of structural support due to the Great Ice Elevator caused the inevitable collapse and destruction of Mt. Kyuuijoi within minutes the entire mountain had fallen into itself, the force creating a crater in the weak ground below as it collapsed, the entire village and its inhabitants crushed in seconds.

    Arphee witnessed this colossal event nearly ten miles from the mountain, and was even blown away by the extremely large gust of wind and tremendous shock force generated by the collapse. He awake to the battered corpse of the trader he had been dealing with, crushed by his own goods, seemingly un-phased by it Arphee immediately rushed to the former base of the mountain hoping to see survivors, people rebuilding the mountain, medical ninja healing the injured, but there was none.

    No screaming or aching sounds, no rustling or movement, no broken limbs anywhere, the tip of the mountain broke off slamming into the nearby Mt.Ashinari while the rest of the mountain crumbled and collapsed in on itself, the mountain had hit the ground so hard that the plague weakened ground shuddered and created a crater, a quarter of Mt.Ashinari broke off, and fell on top of the newly formed crater only making the problem worse, and surely killing any possible survivors.

    Arphee spoke no words, he slammed his eyes as tight as he could and grabbed his face with his left hand in a desperate attempt to calm himself, His entire village Gone, the only trader willing to venture into the now desolate earth country now dead, life as he knew it was over, and he was the sole surviving member of his clan.

    Knowing this Arphee wandered for three years further developing his techniques and eating whatever scrapes he could find, previously infected corpses, human and animal alike, rotten and withered vegetation, what ever it took to get by, his attempts to sow his seed so far ineffective, being nearly no women left In the earth country, by the second year he had ventured into the sand country which now lay cut in half, a large portion black and seemingly lifeless.

    Despite his goals and aspirations to restore the clan, something about this dark area lured him in, he felt a oneness with its natural feel, a deep connection to the land itself, and he began scouring these black sands, until one day he finally found a caravan of merchants building on these black sands he now inhabited.

    Arphee approached them to find out they were going to create a village in an attempt to rein habit the land. Arphee admiring their goal, and growing an even deeper bond with this Black land.

    Houses, a Shamble of a hospital, rusted recycled jail cells literally torn from their former buildings deep in the black sands territory. Several Hundred Wells and water systems Dug by the merchants, and filled by Arphee, the water extracted from the land corrupted landscape as black and harmless as the ground itself. Over time many shinobi and merchants came to inhabit the now deemed “Black Sand Country” feeling the same calling as Arphee, and the same unexplained deep connection.

    As the numerous shinobi were drawn to this new country and its only city, it gained many allies, and because of these powerful shinobi, this city gained the name Kurogakure, and Arphee the first ninja in the village, a co founder, and one of the most active builders during construction he was named the Shodai Kuraikage.

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    Blocking the missing-nins kunai with his right hand Arphee placed his left backhand to the blocking hand with enough pressure to knock someone back performing the Dog seal “Ice Style: Kage Bunshin”, “Pwoof” He created two Ice clones, One directly behind the use and one further behind the other clone.

    The clone behind the missing-nin quickly drew his sword doing an incredibly fast draw-slash, meanwhile the second clone threw 8 Kunai, 4 with his left hand, four with his right, aimed directly at the possible dodging areas then began performing rapidly performing hand seals “Ice Release: Flash freeze Prison” he prepared his next attack.


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    Re: Arphee Cloud [Approved]

    Post by Michishige on Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:27 am

    as far as i know, advanced poison techniques like that would require medical ninjutsu to create


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    Post by Echo on Fri Jul 23, 2010 8:44 am

    To create poison like that you would only really need to know how. But just know that you are very limited on it, and you don't control the spread of the poison. So only the area or attack coated in the poison will have the poisonous properties. You should add how many viles of poison you have to each jutsu.


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    Post by Echo on Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:00 am

    As for the problems i see...

    The extremely large chakra pools. Don't go overboard thinking you have limitless chakra, or so much that you can pretty much go on in a battle forever.

    For being the strategist, don't metagame with that.

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    Be sure to know that doing this will kill you. If not kill you, leave you with no chakra and unable to move, at the verge of death.

    Name: Secret Art: Ice Style: Hardened Body, Armor Of Ice

    I cant allow it to be any stronger when used with that other jutsu. Otherwise it would reach the defense of an S rank. Also, add how long it stays active for.

    Name: Ice Style : Reactive Freezing Armor

    That would be B rank



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    Post by Arphee Cloud on Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:34 pm

    Zodiark wrote:as far as i know, advanced poison techniques like that would require medical ninjutsu to create

    More like Apothecary skills, in my RP history section and clan history its clearly noted that this was one of the many skill sets taught at the clans academy, it was often used as an extra precaution against Fire users, in addition my character developed elemental medical jutsu during his research, Its all in there.

    Monica Raybrant wrote:To create poison like that you would only really need to know how. But just know that you are very limited on it, and you don't control the spread of the poison. So only the area or attack coated in the poison will have the poisonous properties. You should add how many vials of poison you have to each jutsu.

    See above post, to the note of creating it. as to how many containers of poison are used per. Jutsu, unless its an extremely large jutsu there should only be one, often the number will be included in RP posts, because making several different skills for the same things with higher numbers seems a bit redundant to me.

    Monica Raybrant wrote:As for the problems i see...

    The extremely large chakra pools. Don't go overboard thinking you have limitless chakra, or so much that you can pretty much go on in a battle forever.

    For being the strategist, don't metagame with that.

    Name: Forbidden Art: Ice Style : Arbitrary Tundra

    Be sure to know that doing this will kill you. If not kill you, leave you with no chakra and unable to move, at the verge of death.

    Name: Secret Art: Ice Style: Hardened Body, Armor Of Ice

    I cant allow it to be any stronger when used with that other jutsu. Otherwise it would reach the defense of an S rank. Also, add how long it stays active for.

    Name: Ice Style : Reactive Freezing Armor

    That would be B rank


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    Strategy: I don’t see how I could really metagame with this trait…if anything by me citing the potential dodge areas that I attack, anyone who battles me is more likely to metagame.

    For instance in real life since we cant do outstanding types of jumps, if someone were being attacked from the front and behind they would have to move either directly left or right, or any of the 4 adjacent’s available to them leaving a total of 6 possible places to go.

    Now If I were my character and I threw a handful of shuriken at the left quadrant, and originally that person was planning on going left, unlike real life they can easily look at where that attack was placed and go the opposite direction, meanwhile in the real world they’d be getting a face full of metal My Precious

    The best example I can use for how this would play out is to say look at any of the fights Shikamaru was in, in the naruto series.

    Arbitrary Tundra: This is meant to be a be-all-ends-all technique capable of destroying a large village with great ease, of course its either going to kill him or leave him Derping on the floor.

    Frozen Body Armor: Fixed, and removed the “In conjunction with” status between it and reactive armor.

    Reactive Armor: Fixed
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    Re: Arphee Cloud [Approved]

    Post by Echo on Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:58 pm

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