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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Thu Jul 01, 2010 11:17 pm

    ~General Information~

    Name: Juki, Kyoichi

    Nickname/Alias: None

    Weight: 232 lbs

    Height: 6'4" Feet

    Age: 28

    Gender: Male

    Appearance: Juki, Kyoichi (Finished) 82666708

    Clothing: Kyoichi wears a tan tunic, that covers most his upper body, along with a long sleeved brown shirt underneath. He wears a belt, that holds his katana, kunai, shuriken, and various other shinobi tools. Under that belt he wears blackish pants, along with black shinobi sandles.

    Additional Outfits: None

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    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Juki

    Kekkei Genkai: The Juki kekkei genkai is called the life eye, or Myoume. It has the power to show how much chakra a person has, where they are directing their chakra, and if there is any elemental damage along with it. It also has the ability see life force through walls, meaning that as long as someone has blood flowing through their body, as long as they are using chakra, and as long as they are sending messages to their body from the brain, he can see where they are. He, as well, can see when a person is giving messages to their body from their brain, but they have to be extremely close to him, as in about five feet. It is a dojutsu, and when it forms in the persons' eyes, stage one is completely black, stage two is completely white, stage three is black background with white pupils and stage four is half white, half black. The abilities follow the stages as directed below.

    Stage one-
    -Has the power to show how much chakra a person has, where they are directing their chakra, and if there is any elemental damage along with it.

    Stage two-
    -Has the power to show how much chakra a person has, where they are directing their chakra, and if there is any elemental damage along with it.

    -See life force through walls, meaning that as long as someone has blood flowing through their body, as long as they are using chakra, and as long as they are sending messages to their body from the brain, the user can see where they are.

    Stage three-
    -Has the power to show how much chakra a person has, where they are directing their chakra, and if there is any elemental damage along with it.

    -See life force through walls, meaning that as long as someone has blood flowing through their body, as long as they are using chakra, and as long as they are sending messages to their body from the brain, the user can see where they are.

    -See when a person is giving messages to their body from their brain, but they have to be extremely close to him, as in about five feet.

    Stage four-
    -Has the power to show how much chakra a person has, where they are directing their chakra, and if there is any elemental damage along with it.

    -See life force through walls, meaning that as long as someone has blood flowing through their body, as long as they are using chakra, and as long as they are sending messages to their body from the brain, the user can see where they are.

    -See when a person is giving messages to their body from their brain, but they have to be extremely close to him, as in about ten feet.

    -Ability to reject any type of genjutsu that is placed on the user, and the ability to nullify the effects of the genjutsu on the body or mind. This is because the eye becomes so advanced in seeing the enemies chakra, brain messages, that it can pick up when a genjutsu is actived.

    Other Special Powers: The traits of the clan is usually very high intelligence. With the Myoume having such special characteristics, the eye can't be removed from the eye socket of the original person without the eye completely destroying itself.


    Clan Symbol: N/A

    Clan History: After chakra was discovered, there was a group of people called
    Juki's. They were nicknamed this because they processed the Myoume and godlike power to predict what their enemy would do, and have perfect counters. Juki translates to demon in English. They were a very powerful group, for they would work for the highest bidder and basically have whatever they desired. They were unmatched, and had a very small empire around the world. They were known for their genius in science and knowledge, for they would capture any piece of information for any sum of money or for the life of any person. The Juki were also know to be genetically changing themselves so they would be able to carry down the Myoume easier and other traits, such as blue eyes and black hair. For unknown reasons the Juki soon retreated into hiding into the now known country as Amegakure. They have remained very well hidden, and they don't even exist in most ancient records. Juki are very, very rare and if one ever leaves the compound they usually die before reproducing. The leaders of the Juki clan in the past have been Kyoichi Juki the first, Kazuma Juki the first, Doushi Juki, Kazuma Juki the second, Kazuma Juki the third was killed, so Kazuma Juki the second replaced him. There is only two recorded leaving of the compound, one by the name of Kazuma Juki the second, and another by the name of Kyoichi Juki the second, his son. Kazuma Juki returned after a long period of training and recording the history of the outside world, taking in all the information he could possibly do so before returning to his home.

    If you go deeper into the Juki's history, you will find out that the founder of the clan was in fact Kyoichi Juki but not the one that is living to this day. He is believed to simply be his descendant and nothing more. He was originally thought to be dead but soon found to be outside of the Juki compound alive and becoming quite the criminal. Kazuma, the father and previous leader of the Juki clan was also thought to be dead but was just recently returned to the compound and seems to be leading the clan yet again


    Ability Summary: The bloodline is a vastly powerful tool, but only can become useful when in stage three or four. Used a correct way, this bloodline can be the reason you live, and the reason you die.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Missing ninja

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: None

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Ninjutsu
    • Sub: Taijutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Fire
    • Main: Earth
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    Special Characteristics: Kyoichi is a very intelligent foe, beyond all measures. His speed, execution of jutsu and simple, yet powerful jutsu could allow him to take down entire villages. His chakra pool is vast, much larger than any shinobi on his level, save for bijuu holders and those with the eight gates. Perhaps his most unique quality is his battle code. "Never retreat, Never surrender"

    ~Jutsu~

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    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:

    The Birth, The Aftermath

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    Realizing his shinobi blood

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    Only one man to cause a world of pain

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    Recovery

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    The faked fade to black

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    Look before you jump

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    The Unforgiven Vagabond


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    Hm. The day had been long for the man, trekking the distance from his current residence to the Akatsuki 'hideout' per say. He had only very recently joined, he had even yet to receive the infamous red and black cloak that was, for some reason, only shortly known about in the shinobi world. Information was half the battle, he always said, and if you have no information, then you cannot win. Considering the factor that the world knew little to nothing about them, Akatsuki had a major upper hand in the silent war that raged on. Every step that the six foot six inch man took, was as silent as night and it gave him an eerie feeling to him. As big as he was, he was still just as graceful and light as a kitten.

    His eyes, at the current moment, were an ocean sparkling blue and made them as innocent looking as possible. His skin, was lightly tanned, his black hair just seemed to be thrown together, and his body was well taken care of. All of this, to off set people. To deceive them long enough to trap them, like a Venus fly trap. His clothes, were casual enough to tell people that he wasn't a shinobi. The only thing that could let people know of his true intentions would be his offsetting smile or his odd personality. Then again, he thought back to why the Akatsuki wanted him to join in the first place. He wasn't very infamous, even if he was an A-rank missing ninja. Then again, why did he join? What was his goal? And how would it tie in with the Akatsuki?

    The time of day was late afternoon, in just an hour or two, the sun would be gone and the lovely maiden of night would sweep in. Kyoichi couldn't enjoy the night more than he currently did, even if he tried to. It was genetically programed into his brain to love it, to use it. He was bred for war, he was created for a purpose that he seeked to fulfill. He wouldn't accept failure, or death until he completed this goal. If only the world knew, if only they knew. He continued on the path, slowly, toward the meeting point where he was directed to. Kyoichi looked at the sky again, and thought he should make it there before the night settled in. Being early wasn't looked down upon, he hoped, as he quickened his pace from a simple walk to a jog, which would be an all out sprint to most jounin. His feet easily guided him on and off the terrain, expertly leading him through unknown territory as if it was his backyard.

    When he reached the location which he would meet the Akatsuki leader, and possibly, other Akatsuki members, he stopped almost suddenly. He, before, was just a black blur moving through the forest and small patches of treeless areas. Now, his every detail was visible and he seemed to arrive either barely early or on time, because he could sense another chakra source, one quite large as well, now that he focused on it. His eyes slowly scanned he surrounding area as he waited for someone, or something to show themselves to him and hopefully it was the Akatsuki, and not something he would have to either kill or massively injure. Maybe, he was just being paranoid. And maybe, a thought like that would get him killed.


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    Post by Echo Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:19 pm

    Speed is not a skill specialty.

    Add a real paragraph to Clothing.

    You need a letter rank, and "wandering ninja" is considered a missing nin.
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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:13 pm

    Missing-nin (抜け忍, nukenin; English TV "Rogue Ninja") are ninja who left their village without the intention of returning, often because they have committed criminal acts or to pursue other personal gains. The ninja village that they are from will often try to track them down and eliminate them. Kirigakure has a special hunter-nin task-force whose only objective is killing traitorous ninja. The ninja organization Akatsuki is composed mostly of S-class missing-nin, except for Nagato and Konan, who are the leaders of Amegakure. Most of the missing-nin throughout the series are antagonists.

    Obviously, Kyoichi is not a missing ninja because he never belonged to a shinobi village to begin with. And a letter rank is dealt to known shinobi by a kage, or higher up shinobi. Since nobody knows of Kyoichis' existence, yet, he cannot have a letter rank.
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    Post by Echo Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:28 pm

    Like i said, fix what is needed or you wont get approved. No need to link wiki crap to me because i already know what it is. This is a Naruto site, not a free naruto universe, so add the stuff.
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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:03 am

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    Post by Echo Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:06 am

    Your only allowed 2 S rank jutsu. Only kage rank ninja can have 4.
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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:07 am

    Modified
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    Post by Echo Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:15 am

    Name: Master Chakra Control

    Controlling another element would be something you couldn't do with simple raw chakra

    Also, i see Genjutsu in your Jutsu. Remove those.
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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:18 am

    Normally, I wouldn't, but it's not really controlling them, just moving them. It wouldn't work with fire, lightning, or wind, or any mixed elements such as wood or ice, but it would work with water, and earth because Kyoichi is literally simply wrapping chakra around it and moving it. Not actually controlling it.

    Also, is there a reason I am not allowed genjutsu?
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    Post by Echo Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:36 am

    Because your skill specialties are ninjutsu and Taijutsu..i also see some Kenjutsu techs in there that need to be removed.
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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:55 am

    I cannot have a certain type of jutsu because I don't specialize in it?

    Also, why are you nit-picking? These are extremely small details that I cannot even understand how it would majorly affect anything.
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    Post by Echo Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:57 am

    Because it's the rules here. Now make the changes or simply don't get approved.
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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:04 am

    Changed
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    Post by Echo Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:19 am

    For your Kekkei Genkai, it says your pretty much immune to Genjutsu because you know when a Genjutsu has been used...that wouldn't make you resist a Genjutsu at all. You would know your in one, but ould still have to break out of it yourself.
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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:41 am

    I didn't explain the process in which somebody with the Myoume would go through when a genjutsu attempted to activate, but I'll do that now.

    The Myoume recognizes that someone is attempting to activate a genjutsu on them. Here's a quick explaniation to how genjutsu are activated:

    instead of attacking the victim's body, genjutsu techniques manipulate the flow of chakra in the victim's brain, thus causing a disruption in their senses.

    The user knows that someone is trying to activate the genjutsu, so they can then block the chakra from entering their brain, and the genjutsu is never activated. They block the chakra from entering their brain by simply wrapping a shield of chakra around their brain.
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    Post by Echo Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:27 am

    Name: Numb stab

    Thats a Kenjutsu please remove it

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    Post by Kyoichi Juki Tue Jul 06, 2010 4:56 am

    I edited again.

    Small request: Can you find every problem you see with my profile and put it into one post, instead of drawing out the process and making it harder on everybody by posting up a problem, let me fix it, then find another one and repeat?

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